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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: As the Parisians began to fight back the Null Warriors, the massive surge of positivity allows Marinette to undergo [[{{Pun}} metamorphosis]] cashing in on the little bits of magic she left in everyone. She emerges with wings and the ability to fly as part of an EquipmentUpgrade. She also gets the PowerUp ability to send out multiple butterflies, which promptly go to the other heroes.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: As the Parisians began to fight back the Null Warriors, the massive surge of positivity allows Marinette to undergo [[{{Pun}} metamorphosis]] metamorphosis]], cashing in on the little bits of magic she left in everyone. She emerges with wings and the ability to fly as part of an EquipmentUpgrade. She also gets the PowerUp ability to send out multiple butterflies, which promptly go to the other heroes.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: As the Parisians began to fight back the Null Warriors, the massive surge of positivity allows Marinette to undergo [[Pun [[{{Pun}} metamorphosis]] cashing in on the little bits of magic she left in everyone. She emerges with wings and the ability to fly as part of an EquipmentUpgrade. She also gets the PowerUp ability to send out multiple butterflies, which promptly go to the other heroes.]]
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* CrazyPrepared: Marinette carries a spare [=tiānshǐ=] in her Miraculous in case Catastrophe attacks while she's on the go.
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* CoverBlowingSuperpower: Marinette, due to being wheelchair bound, finds herself in several such situations throughout the story.
* CrazyPrepared: Marinette carries a spare[=tiānshǐ=] [=
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** In Chapter 33, [[spoiler: Marinette is forced to transform in a front of a school child, being inadvertently trapped in a storage shed due to the ongoing battle. Luckily, Daniel is an honorable kid.]]
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* 11thHourSuperPower: [[spoiler: As the Parisians began to fight back the Null Warriors, the massive surge of positivity allows Marinette to undergo [[Pun metamorphosis]], cashing in on the little bits of magic she left in everyone. She emerges with wings and the ability to fly in an Equipment Upgrade. She also gets the PowerUp ability to send out multiple butterflies.]]
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* 11thHourSuperPower: EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler: As the Parisians began to fight back the Null Warriors, the massive surge of positivity allows Marinette to undergo [[Pun metamorphosis]], cashing in on the little bits of magic she left in everyone. She emerges with wings and the ability to fly in an Equipment Upgrade. She also gets the PowerUp ability to send out multiple butterflies.]]
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** Adrien still gets the Cat Miraculous, albeit corrupted this time.
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** Adrien still gets the Cat Miraculous, albeit corrupted this time. [[spoiler:Despite this, once the corruption is purged, he still becomes the hero Chat Noir.]]
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* DeducingTheSecretIdentity: When Marinette is turned into a champion, her friends can easily figure out it's her because A) her hairstyle remained the same; B) the champion's outfit had French and Chinese elements much like Marinette has French and Chinese heritage; C) Marinette can't walk, and the champion never used their legs the whole fight.
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* ConceptArt: "[[https://dreamvixen2511.deviantart.com/art/Lady-Wi-Fi-as-a-Champion-742537587 Lady Wi-Fi as a Champion]]" by [[https://dreamvixen2511.deviantart.com/ DreamVixen2511]], who is the fic's writer.
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** The Zodiac Miraculous are not in this story. The fic was started before they were revealed in canon, and the premise of the fic, that the villain stole the ''entire'' Miraculous box, means retconning them in would have made her ''far'' too powerful.
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** The Zodiac Miraculous are not in this story. The fic was started before they were revealed in canon, and the premise of the fic, that the villain stole the ''entire'' Miraculous box, means retconning them in would have made her ''far'' too powerful. The author's HandWave here is that they were all destroyed.
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* GoodWeaponEvilWeapon: Due to his character alignment, Catastrophe trades the SimpleStaff normally used by wielders of the cat miraculous in favor of AbsurdlySharpClaws.
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* AbsurdlySharpClaws: Adrien's weapon as Catastrophe, instead of the SimpleStaff he uses in canon.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Marinette's classmates are easily able to determine that she was the thread wielding champion due to them sharing hairstyles, wearing a costume that mixed French and Chinese design much like Marinette is half French and half Chinese, and most obviously the champion didn't use their legs the whole fight.
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* AdultFear:
** After Tom and Sabine find out that the reason Marinette [[UnexpectedInheritance inherited]] Sanctuaire de la Dame was because she was friends with the previous owner, they ground her for [[StrangerDanger interacting with a stranger without telling them]].
** When Gabriel finds out that Adrien gave his book to a strange woman Gabriel has never heard of, he decides to call the police on the woman as his first reaction.
** After Tom and Sabine find out that the reason Marinette [[UnexpectedInheritance inherited]] Sanctuaire de la Dame was because she was friends with the previous owner, they ground her for [[StrangerDanger interacting with a stranger without telling them]].
** When Gabriel finds out that Adrien gave his book to a strange woman Gabriel has never heard of, he decides to call the police on the woman as his first reaction.
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* BrutalHonesty: Whereas Canon!Chloé was insensitive to the point of malice, this incarnation of Chloé (due to Marinette's positive influence) uses her blunt, in-your-face personality for good, helping Alya get out of her funk after she was beaten by Catastrophe and pushing Nathaniel to act on his crush and ask Marinette out.
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* BrutalHonesty: Whereas Canon!Chloé In canon, Chloé was insensitive to the point of malice, this malice. This incarnation of Chloé (due to Marinette's positive influence) uses her blunt, in-your-face personality for good, helping Alya get out of her funk after she was beaten by Catastrophe and pushing Nathaniel to act on his crush and ask Marinette out.
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* TheEmpath: Much like Canon!Hawk Moth, Nymph is able to sense the emotions of others to find a suitable candidate to bestow powers onto. When Catastrophe is able to [[spoiler:destroy Lady [=WiFi=]'s tiānshǐ]], the severed connection affects both Alya and Marinette emotionally, Nooroo flat-out calling it a "trauma."
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* TheEmpath: Much like Canon!Hawk Moth, Hawk Moth in canon, Nymph is able to sense the emotions of others to find a suitable candidate to bestow powers onto. When Catastrophe is able to [[spoiler:destroy Lady [=WiFi=]'s tiānshǐ]], the severed connection affects both Alya and Marinette emotionally, Nooroo flat-out calling it a "trauma."
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* HiddenDepths: While Canon!Chloé [[SpoiledBrat wouldn't notice the misery of others if it shouted in her ear]], the Chloé here noticed just how hard a time a combination of failing at being Lady [=WiFi=] and the negative feedback she has online has really affected Alya in-spite of her protests, even using her InnocentlyInsensitive personality to give her a pep-talk based on BrutalHonesty.
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* HiddenDepths: While Canon!Chloé Chloé in canon [[SpoiledBrat wouldn't notice the misery of others if it shouted in her ear]], the Chloé here noticed just how hard a time a combination of failing at being Lady [=WiFi=] and the negative feedback she has online has really affected Alya in-spite of her protests, even using her InnocentlyInsensitive personality to give her a pep-talk based on BrutalHonesty.
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* HiddenDepths: While Canon!Chloé [[SpoiledBrat wouldn't notice the misery of others if it shouted in her ear]], the Chloé here noticed just how hard a time a combination of failing at being Lady [=WiFi=] and the negative feedback she has online has really affected her in-spite of her protests, even using her InnocentlyInsensitive personality to give her a pep-talk based on BrutalHonesty.
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* HiddenDepths: While Canon!Chloé [[SpoiledBrat wouldn't notice the misery of others if it shouted in her ear]], the Chloé here noticed just how hard a time a combination of failing at being Lady [=WiFi=] and the negative feedback she has online has really affected her Alya in-spite of her protests, even using her InnocentlyInsensitive personality to give her a pep-talk based on BrutalHonesty.
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* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: When the monks forbade Xue Ying from joining their order, she believed it was because she was discovered to be [[HeirClubForMen a girl]]. The masters claimed they knew the whole time she was female, and the reason she was kicked out was that they could see her lust for the power of the miraculous; Master Fu admits that he doesn't know if they were telling the truth or trying to save face.]]
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** Even when directly called out by Marinette over his abuse and neglect, Gabriel refuses to consider the idea that he had anything do to with Adrien becoming Catastrophe. [[spoiler:It's only after the villains are fully defeated that Gabriel accepts his responsibility over Adrien's downfall.]]
** [[spoiler: When the monks forbade Xue Ying from joining their order, she believed it was because she was discovered to be [[HeirClubForMen a girl]]. The masters claimed they knew the whole time she was female, and the reason she was kicked out was that they could see her lust for the power of the miraculous; Master Fu admits that he doesn't know if they were telling the truth or trying to save face.]]
** Even when directly called out by Marinette over his abuse and neglect, Gabriel refuses to consider the idea that he had anything do to with Adrien becoming Catastrophe. [[spoiler:It's only after the villains are fully defeated that Gabriel accepts his responsibility over Adrien's downfall.]]
** [[spoiler: When the monks forbade Xue Ying from joining their order, she believed it was because she was discovered to be [[HeirClubForMen a girl]]. The masters claimed they knew the whole time she was female, and the reason she was kicked out was that they could see her lust for the power of the miraculous; Master Fu admits that he doesn't know if they were telling the truth or trying to save face.]]
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Marc, implied to be a cis boy in canon, is genderfluid in this fic.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone assumes Marc and Nathaniel are dating just from their interactions. They do end up [[RelationshipUpgrade actually starting a relationship]], though it's not made clear exactly when it started.
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* RunningGag: Various characters assume that Marc is Nathaniel's boyfriend when he isn't [[spoiler:at least until [[RelationshipUpgrade they actually get together]].]]
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* ArtisticLicenseLaw: Marinette is allowed to inherit the entirety of [[spoiler: Jenny Ridge]]’s estate, due to it being given to her in the latter’s will. In reality, French law includes “forced heirship,” which automatically reserves a certain portion of the deceased’s estate for their children.
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* ArtisticLicenseLaw: Marinette is allowed to inherit the entirety of [[spoiler: Jenny Ridge]]’s estate, due to it being given to her in the latter’s will. In reality, French law includes “forced heirship,” which automatically reserves a certain portion of the deceased’s estate for their children.children, and excluding them would lead to the will being declared invalid.
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* BigGood: Marinette/Lady Nymph becomes this to the entire miraculous team as a whole. She starts out as the first and only hero, acting as a symbol of hope and guardian of the city, even gaining the title of "Mother of Paris". When more heroes begin to emerge, she acts as MissionControl through her champions, leading them and the other miraculous heroes from afar, the Sanctuaire de la Dame (which is technically her property) acting as their base of operations. As Marinette, she acts as a positive influence in the lives of the people around her, giving good advice to people who need it and turning Chloé from an AlphaBitch HateSink into [[spoiler:a woman worthy of wielding the ladybug Miraculous]].
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* BigGood: Marinette/Lady Nymph becomes this to the entire miraculous team as a whole. She starts out as the first and only hero, acting as a symbol of hope and guardian of the city, even gaining the title of "Mother of Paris". When more heroes begin to emerge, she acts as MissionControl through her champions, leading them and the other miraculous heroes from afar, with the Sanctuaire de la Dame (which is technically her property) acting as their base of operations. As Marinette, she acts as a positive influence in the lives of the people around her, giving good advice to people who need it and turning Chloé from an AlphaBitch HateSink into [[spoiler:a woman worthy of wielding the ladybug Miraculous]].
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* ArtisticLicenseLaw: Marinette is allowed to inherit the entirety of [[spoiler: Jenny Ridge]]’s estate, due to it being given to her in the latter’s will. In reality, French law includes “forced heirship,” which automatically reserves a certain portion of the deceased’s estate for their children.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Besides the TookALevelInKindness mentioned below, Chloé, as of chapter 7, has had a HeelRealization and is working towards changing with Marinette's help. [[spoiler:She's also the wielder of the Ladybug Miraculous as Belle Aube, making her a case of AdaptationalHeroism.]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Besides the TookALevelInKindness mentioned below, Chloé, as of chapter 7, has had a HeelRealization and is working towards changing with Marinette's help. [[spoiler:She's [[spoiler: She's also the wielder of the Ladybug Miraculous as Belle Aube, making her a case of AdaptationalHeroism.]]
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* AndThenWhat: Trixx asks Lila what she's planning to do after she gets the Ladybug and Butterfly Miraculouses. She has no answer.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:After being purified of his corruption, Adrien joins the heroes as Chat Noir to redeem himself and defeat Xue Ying.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: How [[ArtifactOfDoom the corrupted Black Cat ring]] drives Adrien to do a FaceMonsterTurn. Think of the One Ring being a slightly watered down version of it as instead of tempting him, it simply [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him [[DrivenToMadness into insanity]] by a horrific torture that isn't outright shown, but leaves Marinette and Nooro in agony just from the second hand echoes they get due to being TheEmpath. Having your Miraculous corrupted is an even worse experience for its Kwami.
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: How [[ArtifactOfDoom the corrupted Black Cat ring]] drives Adrien to do a FaceMonsterTurn. Think of the One Ring being a slightly watered down watered-down version of it as instead of tempting him, it simply [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him [[DrivenToMadness into insanity]] by a horrific torture that isn't outright shown, but leaves Marinette and Nooro in agony just from the second hand echoes they get due to being TheEmpath. Having your Miraculous corrupted is an even worse experience for its Kwami.
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* EpicFail: [[spoiler:In his very first outing as Red Brush, Nathaniel accidentally reveals his secret identity to his boyfriend Marc.]]
* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler:Belle Aube, Nino, and Lady Nymph do ''not'' take Adrien being revealed as Catastrophe well.]]
* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler:Belle Aube, Nino, and Lady Nymph do ''not'' take Adrien being revealed as Catastrophe well.]]
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* EpicFail: [[spoiler:In [[spoiler: In his very first outing as Red Brush, Nathaniel accidentally reveals his secret identity to his boyfriend Marc.]]
* EtTuBrute:[[spoiler:Belle [[spoiler: Belle Aube, Nino, and Lady Nymph do ''not'' take Adrien being revealed as Catastrophe well.]]
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* HeroWithBadPublicity: [[spoiler:As Chat Noir, Adrien is TheAtoner, yet his public reception is mixed due to (correct, but still) speculation that he was once Catastrophe.]]
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** [[spoiler:Nino still gets the Turtle Miraculous and wields it as the superhero Carapace.]]
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** Chapter 37 has [[spoiler:Nathaniel accidentally reveals his secret identity to his boyfriend Marc [[EpicFail on his first mission as Red Brush]]]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Chloé [[AdaptationalNiceGuy is definitely far nicer here than she is in canon]]. While she's still ''very'' sharp-tongued and has as high of an opinion of herself as ever, she's unambiguously on the side of good, not only attempting to encourage people out of their funks more than once (though her poor wording does hobble these attempts somewhat), but also [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalHeroism being this fic's wielder of the Ladybug Miraculous as Belle Aube, working alongside Nymph and her champions]]]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Chloé [[AdaptationalNiceGuy is definitely far nicer here than she is in canon]]. While she's still ''very'' sharp-tongued and has as high of an opinion of herself as ever, she's unambiguously on the side of good, not only attempting to encourage people out of their funks more than once (though her poor wording does hobble these attempts somewhat), somewhat) but also [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalHeroism being this fic's wielder of the Ladybug Miraculous as Belle Aube, working alongside Nymph and her champions]]]].
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: [[spoiler:Lila avoids immediate punishment after she's caught by pretending she was brainwashed like Adrien and Sabrina. Since nobody had any idea that she wasn't doing evil things of her own accord while everyone else working for the villain was, it works. However, the ending states that she is being forced to return to Italy, possibly to face juvie.]]
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: [[spoiler:Lila [[spoiler: Lila avoids immediate punishment after she's caught by pretending she was brainwashed like Adrien and Sabrina. Since nobody had any idea that she wasn't doing evil things of her own accord while everyone else working for the villain was, it works. However, the ending states that she is being forced to return to Italy, possibly to face juvie.]]
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* VillainKiller: In Chapter 27, [[spoiler:Nino/Freewaver has the honor of finally unmasking Catastrophe as Adrien]].
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Chloé [[AdaptationalNiceGuy is definitely far nicer here than she is in canon]] ([[spoiler:eventual traitor status notwithstanding]]). While she's still ''very'' sharp-tongued and has as high of an opinion of herself as ever, she's unambiguously on the side of good, not only attempting to encourage people out of their funks more than once (though her poor wording does hobble these attempts somewhat), but also [[spoiler:[[AdaptationalHeroism being this fic's wielder of the Ladybug Miraculous as Belle Aube, working alongside Nymph and her champions]]]].
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misuse; Killed Off For Real only applies in contexts where "killed off for fake" is a plausible alternative
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Catastrophe kills off Lady Wifi's [=tiānshǐ=] with Cataclysm.]]
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* GenreSavvy: After Theo has his feelings for Nymph mocked by the villains, he pulls out his picture of Belle Aube and declares his hope that he'll be able to fight by her side. Nathaniel and Marc immediately watch the sky for a [=tiānshǐ=] in response.
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* HeroKiller: In Chapter 27, [[spoiler:this is inverted. Nino/Freewaver has the honor of finally unmasking Catastrophe as Adrien.]]
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