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* ElementalHair: Bajin is a redhead with fire powers.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 15 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 15 chapters. fanfic.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 15 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 15 chapters.
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* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Purple Hair]]: Kawaiilyn's hair is purple.
* YourCheatingHeart: Not only does Russia say that he plans to sleep with his fiancée's sister ''right in front of her'', he also promises his [[IncestSubtext own sister]] that he will marry her if she kills Japan and Kawaiilyn. It's a miracle that he got engaged to someone in the first place.
* YourCheatingHeart: Not only does Russia say that he plans to sleep with his fiancée's sister ''right in front of her'', he also promises his [[IncestSubtext own sister]] that he will marry her if she kills Japan and Kawaiilyn. It's a miracle that he got engaged to someone in the first place.
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* [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Purple Hair]]: Kawaiilyn's hair is purple.
* YourCheatingHeart: Not only does Russia say that he plans to sleep with his fiancée's sister ''right in front of her'', he also promises his [[IncestSubtext own sister]] that he will marry her if she kills Japan and Kawaiilyn. It's a miracle that he got engaged to someone in the first place.purple.
* YourCheatingHeart: Not only does Russia say that he plans to sleep with his fiancée's sister ''right in front of her'', he also promises his [[IncestSubtext own sister]] that he will marry her if she kills Japan and Kawaiilyn. It's a miracle that he got engaged to someone in the first place.
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'' "jak gdy", Polish, ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' "(her sister could assist)she would represent(be/act as)a good leader" and ''"ranke"'' "France".
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', "'' "jak gdy", Polish, ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' "(her sister could assist)she would represent(be/act as)a good leader" and ''"ranke"'' "France".
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' "(her sister could assist)she would represent(be/act as)a good leader" and ''"ranke"'' "tendril"."France".
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** Several words and phrases in the fic are completely unintelligible, such as ''"ja d gke."'', ''[[AccidentalInnuendo "prostitute e gud ladder"]]'' "(her sister could assist)she would represent(be/act as)a good leader" and ''"ranke"''.''"ranke"'' "tendril".
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* SdrawkcabName: "Snoteleks" is obviously "skeletons" backwards.
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---> '''Kawaiilyn''': he sint moss cow to kil mwh, hurt meh frinds n maryied neh coosin.
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coousin.
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The spelling of the fanfic is notoriously poor, despite the alleged help of the author's "fren bey". It has progressively worsened as the fic has continued, with only a few unintelligible words in the first chapter compared to a large part of the 13th chapter becoming unreadable. Perhaps the only existing critique of this fic, updated with every new chapter, can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/7857155/The-Big-Book-of-Mary-Sues-II here]]. It is confirmed by the author to be a "satirical fiction".
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The spelling of the fanfic is notoriously poor, despite the alleged help of the author's "fren bey". It has progressively worsened as the fic has continued, with only a few unintelligible words in the first chapter compared to a large part of the 13th chapter becoming unreadable. Perhaps the only existing critique of this fic, updated with every new chapter, can be found [[https://www.quotev.com/story/7857155/The-Big-Book-of-Mary-Sues-II here]]. It is confirmed by the author to be a [[TrollFic "satirical fiction".
fiction"]].
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 14 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 14 15 chapters.
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* ShapedLikeItself: Kawaiilyn describes Tokyo as wearing ''"a dress tht woz the came color as tje dres she wore"''.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 13 chapters.
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Mi Tru Lov is an Webcomic/{{Axis Powers Hetalia}} fanfic created on Quotev by user スノーフレーク チャン はかわいいです. It can be viewed [[https://www.quotev.com/story/8828286/Mi-tru-lov-hetalia-x-mi-oc here]]. It is ongoing at the time of writing, and currently has 13 14 chapters.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: England is the worst example of this, having his name misspelt as ''"pengland"'' , ''"etnalgand"'', ''"englnad"'', ''"Englejn"'', ''"ngla"'', ''"nglen"'', and ''"ngland"''. There is only one instance of it being spelled correctly.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Pretty much the entire fic.
** England is the worst example ofthis, this when it comes to names, having his name misspelt as ''"pengland"'' , ''"etnalgand"'', ''"englnad"'', ''"Englejn"'', ''"ngla"'', ''"nglen"'', and ''"ngland"''. There is only one instance of it being spelled correctly.
** England is the worst example of
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Chapter 14.
---> '''Kawaiilyn''': he sint moss cow to kil mwh, hurt meh frinds n maryied neh coosin.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Kawaiilyn discovers that she can control [[spoiler:air, earth, fire, water and lightning]] in chapter 13, just so she can break herself free from the earth Moscow has used to pin her to a tree.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Kawaiilyn discovers that she can control [[spoiler:air, earth, fire, water and lightning]] in chapter 13, just so she can break herself free from the earth Moscow has used to pin her to a tree.
tree. There is absolutely no {{foreshadowing}} whatsoever.
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