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* DoorStopper: 1,186,409 words of text. For comparison, the ''LordOfTheRings'' trilogy is around 525,000.
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* DoorStopper: 1,186,409 words of text. For comparison, the ''LordOfTheRings'' ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'' trilogy is around 525,000.
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* AnimalTalk: WordOfGod says "For convenience's sake all Pokéspeak will be written in English. Just pretend the humans can't hear them, though."
** And then subverted when [[TheDitz Chimecho's]] dialogue is translated...identically to his PokemonSpeak.
--->'''Chimecho''': CHIIIIIIIIIIII!
** And then subverted when [[TheDitz Chimecho's]] dialogue is translated...identically to his PokemonSpeak.
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* HandWave:
** When readers pointed out that "Phanpy" and "Adan" were spelled wrong, the author responded that he liked his own spellings better.
** When someone pointed out that Ciphers can only have one Shadow Pokemon on their team per trainer, the author said he was just going to ignore it in Jessie's case.
** When readers pointed out that "Phanpy" and "Adan" were spelled wrong, the author responded that he liked his own spellings better.
** When someone pointed out that Ciphers can only have one Shadow Pokemon on their team per trainer, the author said he was just going to ignore it in Jessie's case.
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* TranslationConvention: WordOfGod says "For convenience's sake all Pokéspeak will be written in English. Just pretend the humans can't hear them, though."
** And then subverted when [[TheDitz Chimecho's]] dialogue is translated...identically to his PokemonSpeak.
--->'''Chimecho''': CHIIIIIIIIIIII!
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* AfterTheEnd: ''Several'' times. [[spoiler:When the Mother arrived on Earth, civilization had already been wiped out by a nuclear war. The current Pokemon world takes place after the cataclysmic battle between the Mother and the Beast. The end of the story takes place after the Beast has been destroyed, but took a good chunk of the universe with it.]]
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* AfterTheEnd: ''Several'' times. [[spoiler:When the Mother arrived on Earth, civilization had already been wiped out by a nuclear war. The current Pokemon world takes place after the cataclysmic battle between the Mother and the Beast. The end of the story Birth Island arc takes place after the Beast has been destroyed, but took a good chunk of Mother was defeated by Deoxys, the universe with it.getting destroyed immediately after.]]
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** Implied to have happened to Shedinja in Chapter 26. He tries to run away from the [[AbhorrentAdmirer wild Misdreavus]], but she manages to catch him, cover him in {{Forceful Kiss}}es, and then drag him off to her "living quarters." All of it was against his will.
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** Implied to have happened to Shedinja in Chapter 26. He tries to run away from the [[AbhorrentAdmirer wild Misdreavus]], but she manages to catch him, cover him in {{Forceful Kiss}}es, and then drag him off to her "living quarters." All of it was against his will."
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* CerebusRollercoaster: The fanfic started out serious, then became humorous around Chapter 11. It then goes back and forth between being serious and humorous depending on the situation. Special note goes to Chapters 43 - 50, which go back and forth between Ash's wacky hijinks at the championships and the serious strikes by the villains.
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* CerebusRollercoaster: The fanfic started out serious, then became humorous around Chapter 11. It then goes back and forth between being serious and humorous depending on the situation. Special note goes to Chapters 43 - 50, which go back and forth between Ash's wacky hijinks at the championships and the serious incredibly violent strikes by the villains.
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* TheChosenMany: There's ''twenty-eight'' Chosen Ones.
* ContemplateOurNavels: [[GainaxEnding The entire first epilogue.]] [[spoiler: The second epilogue, written a good deal after the fact when the author had a good deal more experience, tries to blame it all on Mewgle being pretentious.]]
* ContemplateOurNavels: [[GainaxEnding The entire first epilogue.]] [[spoiler: The second epilogue, written a good deal after the fact when the author had a good deal more experience, tries to blame it all on Mewgle being pretentious.]]
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* TheChosenMany: There's ''twenty-eight'' Chosen Ones.
Ones. [[spoiler:During the climax, more are added.]]
* ContemplateOurNavels: [[GainaxEnding Theentire first epilogue.Birth Island arc.]] [[spoiler: [[spoiler:It's largely full of infodumps about the island and Rayquaza undergoing a long test of character in order to purify Dark Latias. The second epilogue, final chapter, written a good deal after the fact when the author had a good deal more experience, fact, tries to blame it all on Mewgle being pretentious.]]
* ContemplateOurNavels: [[GainaxEnding The
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** About 99% of Earth's population are [[spoiler: turned into undead monsters.]]
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** About 99% of Earth's population are [[spoiler: turned [[spoiler:turned into undead monsters.monsters by Deoxys' plague.]]
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** Just before the final battle, [[spoiler:Deoxys gathers up all the world leaders in all categories, crams into a giant crystal crusher, and kills them all.]]
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** Just before the final battle, [[spoiler:Deoxys gathers up almost all the world leaders in all categories, crams into a giant crystal crusher, and kills them all.]]
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* {{Cyberpunk}}: The region of Silica.
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* {{Cyberpunk}}: The region of Silica.Silica is described as this.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Pokemon, being essentially animals, tend to be pretty [[NoSocialSkills direct]] about [[CarnivoreConfusion certain]] [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex things]], and it often weirds out their human trainers and those Pokemon that have spent more time among humans.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Pokemon, being essentially animals, Some Pokemon tend to be pretty [[NoSocialSkills direct]] about [[CarnivoreConfusion certain]] [[EverybodyHasLotsOfSex things]], and it often weirds out their human trainers and those or species Pokemon that have spent more time among humans.with different customs.
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* EldritchAbomination: Our line-up of villains are essentially this, all transformed into such monstrosities by Deoxys. The rogues gallery includes [[BigBad Deoxys]] himself, who is the alien personification of ChaoticEvil; [[TheGMIsACheatingBastard Mewgle]], a reality warping KillerGameMaster; [[MasterSwordsman Omega]], the fused form of Giovanni and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Mr. Ford]] the [[WellIntentionedExtremist Shining Ranger]]; [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Meowth]] (yes, really!); [[PsychoRangers Alpha Ranger]], Ash's evil, soulless alter ego; [[{{Hellhound}} Cerberus]], the undead fusion of Entei, Suicune, and Raikou; Lugia's corrupted wife and child; Leviathan, an enormous Ghost Pokemon-devouring serpent who is actually [[spoiler: Latias' undead mother]]; and Deoxys' "son" [[spoiler: Dark Latios]].
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* EldritchAbomination: Our line-up of villains are essentially this, all transformed into such monstrosities by Deoxys. The rogues gallery includes [[BigBad Deoxys]] himself, who is the alien personification of ChaoticEvil; [[TheGMIsACheatingBastard Mewgle]], a reality warping KillerGameMaster; [[MasterSwordsman Omega]], the fused form of Giovanni and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Mr. Ford]] the [[WellIntentionedExtremist Shining Ranger]]; [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Meowth]] (yes, really!); [[PsychoRangers Alpha Ranger]], Ash's evil, soulless alter ego; [[{{Hellhound}} Cerberus]], the undead fusion of Entei, Suicune, and Raikou; Lugia's corrupted wife and child; Leviathan, an enormous Ghost Pokemon-devouring serpent who is actually [[spoiler: Latias' [[spoiler:Latias' undead mother]]; and Deoxys' "son" [[spoiler: Dark [[spoiler:Dark Latios]].
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:''The entire cast'' at the end of the last battle.]]
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: [[spoiler:''The [[spoiler:The Mother gives this to ''the entire cast'' at before the end second half of the last final battle.]]
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** Pikachu [[HeroesPreferSwords draws his sword]] and [[MomentOfAwesome defeats his opponent in a straight battle]].
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** Pikachu [[HeroesPreferSwords draws his sword]] and [[MomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome defeats his opponent in a straight battle]].
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* SubvertedRhymeEveryOccasion: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crawdaunt's 'Assumption]],' which he uses to coordinate his extremely dirty fighting in order to defeat an EldritchAbomination.
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* SubvertedRhymeEveryOccasion: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Crawdaunt's 'Assumption]],' which he uses to coordinate his extremely dirty fighting in order to defeat an EldritchAbomination.
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** Ash's encounters with Mariah Susanson and friends is one big ol' "Take That" against [[MarySue Mary Sues]] in general.
** As is Latias' encounter with the first MarySue early on, who captures ''most of the legendaries in the world''.[[invoked]]
** As is Latias' encounter with the first MarySue early on, who captures ''most of the legendaries in the world''.[[invoked]]
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** Ash's encounters with Mariah Susanson and friends is one big ol' "Take That" against [[MarySue Mary Sues]] Sues in general.
** As is Latias' encounter with the firstMarySue such character early on, who captures ''most of the legendaries in the world''.[[invoked]]
** As is Latias' encounter with the first
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* ThirtySuePileup: In-universe example: Berry Stoo and his friends.
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** Even key story arcs like Latias and Rayquaza's questionble ReincarnationRomance are mostly told through exposition, while the more gruesome elements of the story, like the BodyHorror, {[Squick}}, and repeated used of rape are described in excrutiating detail.
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** Even key story arcs like Latias and Rayquaza's questionble ReincarnationRomance are mostly told through exposition, while the more gruesome elements of the story, like the BodyHorror, {[Squick}}, {{Squick}}, and repeated used of rape are described in excrutiating detail.
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* EldritchAbomination: Our line-up of villains are essentially this, all transformed into such monstrosities by Deoxys. The rogues gallery includes [[BigBad Deoxys]] himself, who is the alien personification of ChaoticEvil; [[TheGMIsACheatingBastard Mewgle]], a reality warping KillerGameMaster; [[MasterSwordsman Omega]], the fused form of Giovanni and [[CorruptCorporateExecutive Mr. Ford]] the [[WellIntentionedExtremist Shining Ranger]]; [[IneffectualSympatheticVillain Meowth]] (yes, really!); [[PsychoRangers Alpha Ranger]], Ash's evil, soulless alter ego; [[{{Hellhound}} Cerberus]], the undead fusion of Entei, Suicune, and Raikou; Lugia's corrupted wife and child; Leviathan, an enormous Ghost Pokemon-devouring serpent who is actually [[spoiler: Latias' undead mother]]; and Deoxys' "son" [[spoiler: Dark Latios]].
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** Even key story arcs like Latias and Rayquaza's questionble ReincarnationRomance are mostly told through exposition, while the more gruesome elements of the story, like the BodyHorror, {[Squick}}, and repeated used of rape are described in excrutiating detail.
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* PairTheSpares: Ri2 gleefully sticks characters together throughout the book. During the epilogue, an OverlyLongGag recaps all the pairings he's made. It lasts over two pages and has a RunningGag ''within itself.''
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* PairTheSpares: Ri2 Creator/Ri2 gleefully sticks characters together throughout the book. During the epilogue, an OverlyLongGag recaps all the pairings he's made. It lasts over two pages and has a RunningGag ''within itself.''
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* RetCon: The fic originally ended on a huge cliffhanger [[spoiler:with the majority of the cast dead and ''the entire universe annihilated'', and the remaining people set up for a last stand on a flying island]]. Two years later, Ri2 added a sequel that undid the entire last chunk of the story. A good quarter of the way into the sequel, he added a second epilogue that revealed [[spoiler:the entire ending sequence was just Mewgle screwing with everyone, ''including the two gods duking it out'', in a [[TheStarscream Starscream]] gambit. He gets his ass handed to him by [[CoolShades Squirtle]], who [[DeusExMachina comes out of absolutely nowhere]] and earns everyone's happy ending.]]
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* RetCon: The fic originally ended on a huge cliffhanger [[spoiler:with the majority of the cast dead and ''the entire universe annihilated'', and the remaining people set up for a last stand on a flying island]]. Two years later, Ri2 Creator/Ri2 added a sequel that undid the entire last chunk of the story. A good quarter of the way into the sequel, he added a second epilogue that revealed [[spoiler:the entire ending sequence was just Mewgle screwing with everyone, ''including the two gods duking it out'', in a [[TheStarscream Starscream]] gambit. He gets his ass handed to him by [[CoolShades Squirtle]], who [[DeusExMachina comes out of absolutely nowhere]] and earns everyone's happy ending.]]
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* {{Troperiffic}}: By the time the sequel rolls around, Ri2 is a confirmed [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife troper]].
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* {{Troperiffic}}: By the time the sequel rolls around, Ri2 Creator/Ri2 is a confirmed [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife troper]].
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moved to YMMV subpage as it's a subjective, Just For Fun wick
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* XMeetsY:
** Franchise/{{Pokemon}}: The ExploitationFilm
** The last arc is ''Pokemon'' meets ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' meets ''Film/EventHorizon''.
** In-universe example. The Battle Palace's rules are amended for the Hoenn League Championships so the roles are reversed. The end result is something like mixed martial arts meets Pokémon battling.
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** Franchise/{{Pokemon}}: The ExploitationFilm
** The last arc is ''Pokemon'' meets ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' meets ''Film/EventHorizon''.
** In-universe example. The Battle Palace's rules are amended for the Hoenn League Championships so the roles are reversed. The end result is something like mixed martial arts meets Pokémon battling.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by Creator/{{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words Franchise/{{Pokemon}} fan fiction.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by Creator/{{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words Franchise/{{Pokemon}} ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' fan fiction.
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* {{Brainwashed}}: Tate and Liza do this to Latias. [[spoiler:It is actually a test to see how strong the bonds between Ash and his Pokémon are]].
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* {{Brainwashed}}: Tate and Liza do this to Latias. [[spoiler:It is actually [[SecretTestOfCharacter a test test]] to see how strong the bonds between Ash and his Pokémon are]].
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: Tate and Liza's sadism, {{jerkass}} behavior and illusions are [[spoiler: a test to see how strong the bonds between a trainer and their pokémon are.]]
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[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Obviously]], the star is [[OlympusMons Latias]]. When the Ghost King destroys her home city of Alto Mare and kills all of her friends after she spurns his advances, she is forced to embark on a long journey that takes her across the Franchise/{{Pokemon}} world. There, she meets up with Ash and the other Chosen. Together, the Chosen are forced to embark on many adventures across the land.
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[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Obviously]], the star is [[OlympusMons Latias]]. When the Ghost King destroys her home city of Alto Mare and kills all of her friends after she spurns his advances, she is forced to embark on a long journey that takes her across the Franchise/{{Pokemon}} world. There, she meets up with world, at first to find Ash Ketchum and protect him from the other Chosen. Together, King's wrath, aided by Mewtwo. However, the Chosen story soon turns into an epic, where the [[ChooserOfTheChosenOne Unown]] gather a number of characters including Latias, revealing they are forced to embark on many adventures across the land.
[[ChosenOne Chosen]], destined to save the world from the Beast, the embodiment of chaos, and it is only a matter of time before the end of the world comes.
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* ReferenceOverdosed: This story has {{Shout Out}}s to everything from [[Franchise/PowerRangers PokeRangers]] to [[CthulhuMythos Tentacthulhu]].
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* ReferenceOverdosed: This story has {{Shout Out}}s to everything from [[Franchise/PowerRangers PokeRangers]] to [[CthulhuMythos [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos Tentacthulhu]].
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* VirginSacrifice: Team Aqua brings in a naked woman to sacrifice to Kyogre. For Groudon, Team Magma brings in a fat, nerdy, unattractive man who is [[AManIsNotAVirgin far more embarrassed about his status]] than worried about being chucked into a lava pit.
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* VirginSacrifice: Team Aqua brings in a naked woman to sacrifice to Kyogre. For Groudon, Team Magma brings in a fat, nerdy, unattractive man who is [[AManIsNotAVirgin [[VirginShaming far more embarrassed about his status]] than worried about being chucked into a lava pit.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by Creator/{{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words {{Pokemon}} fan fiction.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by Creator/{{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words {{Pokemon}} Franchise/{{Pokemon}} fan fiction.
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* XMeetsY: {{Pokemon}}: The ExploitationFilm
** The last arc is ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' meets ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' meets ''Film/EventHorizon''.
** The last arc is ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' meets ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' meets ''Film/EventHorizon''.
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* XMeetsY: {{Pokemon}}: XMeetsY:
** Franchise/{{Pokemon}}: The ExploitationFilm
** The last arc is''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' ''Pokemon'' meets ''Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann'' meets ''Film/EventHorizon''.
** Franchise/{{Pokemon}}: The ExploitationFilm
** The last arc is
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* FetishFuel: Jigglypuff's Gigabot CombiningMecha is powered by her bodyguards on treadmills. To motivate them, she gives them all magazines featuring a [[AmazonianBeauty female Machoke supermodel.]][[invoked]]
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[[{{ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin}} Obviously]], the star is [[OlympusMons Latias]]. When the Ghost King destroys her home city of Alto Mare and kills all of her friends after she spurns his advances, she is forced to embark on a long journey that takes her across the {{Pokemon}} world. There, she meets up with Ash and the other Chosen. Together, the Chosen are forced to embark on many adventures across the land.
It's [[DoorStopper absurdly long]], surreal and bizarre to extremes, interspersed with plenty of lightheartedness, and plenty of fight sequences. And sometimes it's really, ''really'' [[DarkFic dark]], [[{{Squick}} squicky]], [[LudicrousGibs messy]], and all kinds of disturbing.
It's [[DoorStopper absurdly long]], surreal and bizarre to extremes, interspersed with plenty of lightheartedness, and plenty of fight sequences. And sometimes it's really, ''really'' [[DarkFic dark]], [[{{Squick}} squicky]], [[LudicrousGibs messy]], and all kinds of disturbing.
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* BoundAndGagged: During the Pokemon Tournament ball, Max and Jirachi are told to stay behind at the hotel so that they don't cause trouble. In order to make sure that they stay put, they're both tied to chairs and Max's mouth is taped shut so that he can't make a wish. Absol stays behind to make sure they won't get loose.
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* LoopholeAbuse: One half of Ash's strategy against Berry, confusing both him and his team.
** Phanpy challenges an Oliphan to stand on his beloved ball. Oliphan, however, is too heavy and winds up popping the ball, causing Phanphy to cry and the audience to [[ProducePelting throw food at Oliphan]].
** Bayleef fires a Solar Beam into a cloud of Sweet Scent. The combination gives her opponent a seizure.
** Charizard was hypnotised back to his childhood. His opponent tries to copy this, but ends up [[LogicBomb crashing its own brain]] since it did not have a childhood.
** Corphish distracts his opponent with a BawdySong and repeatedly punches him [[GroinAttack in the privates]].
** Latias and the Pokerockers sing [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX a death metal song]] to keep her opponent from [[LoudOfWar hearing Berry's Commands]].
** Pikachu [[HeroesPreferSwords draws his sword]] and [[MomentOfAwesome defeats his opponent in a straight battle]].
** Phanpy challenges an Oliphan to stand on his beloved ball. Oliphan, however, is too heavy and winds up popping the ball, causing Phanphy to cry and the audience to [[ProducePelting throw food at Oliphan]].
** Bayleef fires a Solar Beam into a cloud of Sweet Scent. The combination gives her opponent a seizure.
** Charizard was hypnotised back to his childhood. His opponent tries to copy this, but ends up [[LogicBomb crashing its own brain]] since it did not have a childhood.
** Corphish distracts his opponent with a BawdySong and repeatedly punches him [[GroinAttack in the privates]].
** Latias and the Pokerockers sing [[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX a death metal song]] to keep her opponent from [[LoudOfWar hearing Berry's Commands]].
** Pikachu [[HeroesPreferSwords draws his sword]] and [[MomentOfAwesome defeats his opponent in a straight battle]].
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* MindRape: A few times. A most heinous example is by [[spoiler:Latias, in probably the {{Squick}}iest part of the book.]]
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* MindRape: A few times. A most heinous example is by [[spoiler:Latias, in probably the {{Squick}}iest part of the book.fanfic.]]
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** ''Jigglypuff'' and the Pokerockers defeating Team Snagem with Breaking Benjamin's "Blow Me Away."
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* ReincarnationRomance: Most notably [[spoiler: Latias and Rayquaza,]] but this is also hinted at for other couples.
* ResetButton: The Unown offer this to the good guys if they can stop the upcoming cataclysm, [[spoiler: though they had no intention of actually following through with it, as they expected the universe to end no matter who won. Fortunately, thanks to Mewgle's botched attempt at a universal takeover, the universe is intact at the end. The local deities at this point basically shrug and implement the ResetButton anyway.]]
* ResetButton: The Unown offer this to the good guys if they can stop the upcoming cataclysm, [[spoiler: though they had no intention of actually following through with it, as they expected the universe to end no matter who won. Fortunately, thanks to Mewgle's botched attempt at a universal takeover, the universe is intact at the end. The local deities at this point basically shrug and implement the ResetButton anyway.]]
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* ReincarnationRomance: Most notably [[spoiler: Latias [[spoiler:Latias and Rayquaza,]] but this is also hinted at for other couples.
* ResetButton: The Unown offer this to the good guys if they can stop the upcoming cataclysm,[[spoiler: though [[spoiler:though they had no intention of actually following through with it, as they expected the universe to end no matter who won. Fortunately, thanks to Mewgle's botched attempt at a universal takeover, the universe is intact at the end. The local deities at this point basically shrug and implement the ResetButton anyway.]]
* ResetButton: The Unown offer this to the good guys if they can stop the upcoming cataclysm,
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** As is Latias' encounter with the first MarySue early on, who captures ''most of the legendaries in the world''.
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** As is Latias' encounter with the first MarySue early on, who captures ''most of the legendaries in the world''.[[invoked]]
* TeamRocketWins: Being a Pokemon fanfic, this trope is literal sometimes.
** With their new Shadow Pokeon, Jessie and James capture Ash's Grovyle and almost take down Ash himself in Chapter 15.
** At the end of Chapter 36, Jessie and James successfully steal the Lord Wobakku statue from Mirage Isle, which takes down its cloaking shield.
** With their new Shadow Pokeon, Jessie and James capture Ash's Grovyle and almost take down Ash himself in Chapter 15.
** At the end of Chapter 36, Jessie and James successfully steal the Lord Wobakku statue from Mirage Isle, which takes down its cloaking shield.
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* TrainingFromHell: Lance and Drake force Ash and Latias to journey through an ice cavern with no winter clothing to toughen them up for the Hoenn League Championships. [[spoiler:A bunch of Glalie nearly kill them.]].
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* TrainingFromHell: Lance and Drake force Ash and Latias to journey through an ice cavern with no winter clothing to toughen them up for the Hoenn League Championships. [[spoiler:A bunch of hungry Glalie nearly kill them.]].
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* AscendedGlitch: [[spoiler: Missingno, the glitch-er, Darklord Pokemon]]
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* AscendedGlitch: [[spoiler: Missingno, [[spoiler:Missingno, the glitch-er, Darklord Pokemon]]
* BattleOfTheBands:
** The Pokerockers have one against Miror B in Chapter 44, in which they win pretty easily.
** They later have one with him again during the final battle arc that's a bit trickier, as Miror B has brainwashed a bunch of innocent people. Lombre has to fight his way to the stage and destroy the mind control device, and the Pokerockers wake everybody up by singing a song. They then hunt Miror B down and beat the crap out of him.
** The Pokerockers have one against Miror B in Chapter 44, in which they win pretty easily.
** They later have one with him again during the final battle arc that's a bit trickier, as Miror B has brainwashed a bunch of innocent people. Lombre has to fight his way to the stage and destroy the mind control device, and the Pokerockers wake everybody up by singing a song. They then hunt Miror B down and beat the crap out of him.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Full force. Keep in mind what the Unown are offering the good guys if they win is basically a ResetButton. The hope of this may at times be [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy the only reason you can keep bearing to read]].
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Full force. Keep Our heroes have to fight an army of demons and their EldritchAbomination masters. They get brutalized, tortured, or flat out killed at every turn in an attempt to save the world, or what's left of it. And keep in mind what the "happy ending" Unown are offering the good guys if they win is basically a ResetButton. The hope of this may at times be [[DarknessInducedAudienceApathy the only reason you can keep bearing to read]].
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* {{Gorn}}: The torture and "fatal battle" scenes are ''quite'' gory. Taken UpToEleven in the final arc.
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* {{Gorn}}: The torture and "fatal battle" scenes and final battle chapters are ''quite'' gory. Taken UpToEleven in the final arc.
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** [[spoiler:Ash, Misty and May during the final story arcs, via EleventhHourSuperpower.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ash, Misty [[spoiler:Misty becomes a [[Creator/HPLovecraft Deep One-like]] mermaid and May becomes a sphinx during the final story arcs, via EleventhHourSuperpower.]]
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* SubvertedRhymeEveryOccasion: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crawdaunt's 'Assumption]],' which is successfully used as a BrownNote to defeat an EldritchAbomination.
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* SubvertedRhymeEveryOccasion: [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Crawdaunt's 'Assumption]],' which is successfully used as a BrownNote he uses to coordinate his extremely dirty fighting in order to defeat an EldritchAbomination.
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* TakeThat: Ash's encounter with Mariah Susanson is one big ol' "Take That" against [[MarySue Mary Sues]] in general.
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* TakeThat: TakeThat:
** Ash'sencounter encounters with Mariah Susanson and friends is one big ol' "Take That" against [[MarySue Mary Sues]] in general.
** Ash's
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* ShowDontTell: The natural consequences of the {{Infodump}}s. There's a lot of background information that characters tells us about, but we never see. Some examples include Lady Ho-Oh's StartOfDarkness and Mewtwo's first encounter with Deoxys - thanks to the {{Infodump}}s, they're reduced to OffstageVillainy.
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* ShowDontTell: The natural consequences of the {{Infodump}}s. There's a lot of background information that characters tells us about, but we never see. Some examples include see.
** Both Lady Ho-Oh's StartOfDarkness and Mewtwo's first encounter with Deoxys - thanks to the {{Infodump}}s, they're reduced toOffstageVillainy.OffstageVillainy.
** An extremely infuriating example deals with an important plot point: how the Ghost King's minions manage to track down Ash. They searched Alto Mare's rubble and manage to find one of Latias' notebooks that has Ash's name written in it. This was all explained ''in an author's note!''
** How the Ghost King's minions manage to find Registeel, awaken him, and convince him to awaken the weather trio is never told. All we get is a "Good thing we found Registeel!" at the end of Chapter 42.
** Shalor's conquest of Wynaut Island was only vaguely hinted at in Chapter 47, then explained in a conversation in Chapter 55.
** Both Lady Ho-Oh's StartOfDarkness and Mewtwo's first encounter with Deoxys - thanks to the {{Infodump}}s, they're reduced to
** An extremely infuriating example deals with an important plot point: how the Ghost King's minions manage to track down Ash. They searched Alto Mare's rubble and manage to find one of Latias' notebooks that has Ash's name written in it. This was all explained ''in an author's note!''
** How the Ghost King's minions manage to find Registeel, awaken him, and convince him to awaken the weather trio is never told. All we get is a "Good thing we found Registeel!" at the end of Chapter 42.
** Shalor's conquest of Wynaut Island was only vaguely hinted at in Chapter 47, then explained in a conversation in Chapter 55.
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* ContractualImmortality: Jessie and James have a contract with the show's producers which guarantees their survival. [[spoiler:In order to get around it, Deoxys has their souls transferred to his name.]]
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* ContractualImmortality: Jessie and James have a contract with the show's producers which guarantees their survival. [[spoiler:In order to get around it, Deoxys has their souls transferred to his name.]] ]][[invoked]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by {{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words {{Pokemon}} fan fiction.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053520/1/Latias_Journey/ Latias' Journey]]'' by {{Ri2}} Creator/{{Ri2}} is a 67 chapter, 1,000,000+ words {{Pokemon}} fan fiction.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: After Crawdaunt blocks Gyarados' Bite attack with Harden, Phanphy shouts that he's the "hardest one of all." The older Pokemon just stare at him awkwardly.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: After Crawdaunt blocks Gyarados' Bite attack with Harden, Phanphy shouts that he's the "hardest one of all." The older Pokemon just stare at him awkwardly.[[invoked]]
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** HilariousInHindsight: Now look at Black City in [[VideoGame/PokemonBlackAndWhite Pokemon Black]]...
* InstantAwesomeJustAddMecha: The story throws in a bunch of HumongousMecha due to RuleOfCool.
** Team Cipher/Rocket's Tyranitron, a giant robot Tyranitar equipped with a [[{{Magitek}} magic shield generator]], mass snag devices, and the Induced Evolution Wave. It was [[NighInvulnerability nigh invulnerable]] and had to be destroyed from the inside.
** The Pokerangers' [[UnfortunateNames A.S.S. Megaloid]].
** Drew - er, Tuxedo Masquerain's Senshibot
** Jirachi himself turns into one when Max wishes that they had something to fight the Tyranitron with.
** Jigglypuff has two {{Humongous Mecha}}s, the Exploudrematic (an upgraded version of a mech she stole from Jessie and James), and Garuda (a Yanma-shaped TransformingMecha). These two can [[CombiningMecha combine together]] to form the Gigabot.
** Team Cipher/Rocket's Tyranitron, a giant robot Tyranitar equipped with a [[{{Magitek}} magic shield generator]], mass snag devices, and the Induced Evolution Wave. It was [[NighInvulnerability nigh invulnerable]] and had to be destroyed from the inside.
** The Pokerangers' [[UnfortunateNames A.S.S. Megaloid]].
** Drew - er, Tuxedo Masquerain's Senshibot
** Jirachi himself turns into one when Max wishes that they had something to fight the Tyranitron with.
** Jigglypuff has two {{Humongous Mecha}}s, the Exploudrematic (an upgraded version of a mech she stole from Jessie and James), and Garuda (a Yanma-shaped TransformingMecha). These two can [[CombiningMecha combine together]] to form the Gigabot.
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** And Delia Ketchum's fiancée at one point is [[spoiler: Mr. Mime. She may or may not be even paired up with him at the end.]]
* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Lance and Drake are killed by the Glalie that they sent Ash and Latias to earlier.]]
* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Lance and Drake are killed by the Glalie that they sent Ash and Latias to earlier.]]
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** And Delia Ketchum's fiancée at one point is [[spoiler: Mr.[[spoiler:Mr. Mime. She may or may not be even paired up with him at the end.]]
* KarmicDeath:[[spoiler: Lance [[spoiler:Lance and Drake are killed by the Glalie that live in the ice tunnel that they sent Ash and Latias to through earlier.]]]]
* LegionOfDoom:
** After Giovanni's death, Team Rocket is merged with Team Cipher to become one evil syndicate.
** [[spoiler:Deoxys]] slowly builds one over the course of the story.
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* LegionOfDoom:
** After Giovanni's death, Team Rocket is merged with Team Cipher to become one evil syndicate.
** [[spoiler:Deoxys]] slowly builds one over the course of the story.
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* LooseLips: The elder Wynaut reveals everything about what the Lord Wobbaku statue does, and what would happen if it were ever moved. And how to move it. Right in front of Jessie and James.
* LostWorld
** Mirage Island, which is protected by a barrier that shields it from invaders as well as keeps it invisible.
** Birth Island, which will only appear to those who have certain ancient artifacts, or know of its existence ahead of time.
* LostWorld
** Mirage Island, which is protected by a barrier that shields it from invaders as well as keeps it invisible.
** Birth Island, which will only appear to those who have certain ancient artifacts, or know of its existence ahead of time.
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* NotInFrontOfTheKid: Ash's party takes great care not to curse in front of Phanphy.
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* PowerCrystal: The purple crystal shards found throughout the story. [[spoiler:They are all part of the meteor that caused the MysticalPlague and later became the Beast. They are also a part of Deoxys' core.]]
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* SneezeCut:
** Crawdaunt demands to know what kind of idiot would install a giant, obvious self-destruct button on the back of a giant robot. Cue Robotnik sneezing.
** Later, May berates Mariah for [[RealityWarper screwing around with the natural laws]]. Cue Molly sneezing.
** Crawdaunt demands to know what kind of idiot would install a giant, obvious self-destruct button on the back of a giant robot. Cue Robotnik sneezing.
** Later, May berates Mariah for [[RealityWarper screwing around with the natural laws]]. Cue Molly sneezing.
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It's [[DoorStopper absurdly long]], surreal and bizzare to extremes, interspersed with plenty of lightheartedness, and plenty of fight sequences. And sometimes it's really, ''really'' [[DarkFic dark]], [[{{Squick}} squicky]], [[LudicrousGibs messy]], and all kinds of disturbing.
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It's [[DoorStopper absurdly long]], surreal and bizzare bizarre to extremes, interspersed with plenty of lightheartedness, and plenty of fight sequences. And sometimes it's really, ''really'' [[DarkFic dark]], [[{{Squick}} squicky]], [[LudicrousGibs messy]], and all kinds of disturbing.
* AccidentalInnuendo: After Crawdaunt blocks Gyarados' Bite attack with Harden, Phanphy shouts that he's the "hardest one of all." The older Pokemon just stare at him awkwardly.
* AfterTheEnd: ''Several'' times. [[spoiler:When the Mother arrived on Earth, civilization had already been wiped out by a nuclear war. The current Pokemon world takes place after the cataclysmic battle between the Mother and the Beast. The end of the story takes place after the Beast has been destroyed, but took a good chunk of the universe with it.]]
* TheAlcatraz: The Hoenn Region Maximum Security Penitentiary, which most of Team Rocket crashes into.
** LockedInTheDungeon: [[spoiler:After Mewgle corrupts it, it becomes a combination of this and the DarkWorld.]]
* AliensAreBastards: Besides Deoxys, a random group of travelling aliens are used as a RunningGag mid-story. They like to [[AlienAbduction abduct people]] and give them [[AnalProbing anal probes]]. They also had an [[MonsterMisogyny unhealthy interest in Bayleef and Latias]].
* AfterTheEnd: ''Several'' times. [[spoiler:When the Mother arrived on Earth, civilization had already been wiped out by a nuclear war. The current Pokemon world takes place after the cataclysmic battle between the Mother and the Beast. The end of the story takes place after the Beast has been destroyed, but took a good chunk of the universe with it.]]
* TheAlcatraz: The Hoenn Region Maximum Security Penitentiary, which most of Team Rocket crashes into.
** LockedInTheDungeon: [[spoiler:After Mewgle corrupts it, it becomes a combination of this and the DarkWorld.]]
* AliensAreBastards: Besides Deoxys, a random group of travelling aliens are used as a RunningGag mid-story. They like to [[AlienAbduction abduct people]] and give them [[AnalProbing anal probes]]. They also had an [[MonsterMisogyny unhealthy interest in Bayleef and Latias]].
* BlackComedyRape:
** Implied to have happened to Shedinja in Chapter 26. He tries to run away from the [[AbhorrentAdmirer wild Misdreavus]], but she manages to catch him, cover him in {{Forceful Kiss}}es, and then drag him off to her "living quarters." All of it was against his will.
** At the end of Chapter 53, Sadic wants to "race" Pikachu back to the hotel...and by "race" she means stalk him until she catches him and either eats or mates with him. She also tells him he doesn't have a choice.
** Implied to have happened to Shedinja in Chapter 26. He tries to run away from the [[AbhorrentAdmirer wild Misdreavus]], but she manages to catch him, cover him in {{Forceful Kiss}}es, and then drag him off to her "living quarters." All of it was against his will.
** At the end of Chapter 53, Sadic wants to "race" Pikachu back to the hotel...and by "race" she means stalk him until she catches him and either eats or mates with him. She also tells him he doesn't have a choice.
* CerebusRollercoaster: The fanfic started out serious, then became humorous around Chapter 11. It then goes back and forth between being serious and humorous depending on the situation. Special note goes to Chapters 43 - 50, which go back and forth between Ash's wacky hijinks at the championships and the serious strikes by the villains.
* ChekhovsNews: During the Pokemon League arc, the evening news keeps reporting about dreadful things happening in other parts of the world. [[spoiler:The vast majority of them are Deoxys and his crew building an army for the FinalBattle.]]
* TheChosenMany: There's ''twenty-eight'' Chosen Ones.
* ChekhovsNews: During the Pokemon League arc, the evening news keeps reporting about dreadful things happening in other parts of the world. [[spoiler:The vast majority of them are Deoxys and his crew building an army for the FinalBattle.]]
* TheChosenMany: There's ''twenty-eight'' Chosen Ones.
* ContractualImmortality: Jessie and James have a contract with the show's producers which guarantees their survival. [[spoiler:In order to get around it, Deoxys has their souls transferred to his name.]]
* ContrivedCoincidence:
** PlayedForLaughs when a random Murkrow swoops down and steals Latias' Dragon Flute. Even Crawdaunt comments on what a cheap plot convenience that was.
** Just before the Chosen enter [[spoiler:Deoxys']] lair, Papa, Mama, and Oniisan pop out of nowhere to tell them that [[spoiler:there are a few more additional Chosen that the Unown kept a secret. And they all happen to be right with them!]]
* TheCorruption: The plague released by [[spoiler:the dark meteor, the Beast, and later, Deoxys]] turn living things into (usually undead) mutant monsters, and dead bodies into zombies.
* ContrivedCoincidence:
** PlayedForLaughs when a random Murkrow swoops down and steals Latias' Dragon Flute. Even Crawdaunt comments on what a cheap plot convenience that was.
** Just before the Chosen enter [[spoiler:Deoxys']] lair, Papa, Mama, and Oniisan pop out of nowhere to tell them that [[spoiler:there are a few more additional Chosen that the Unown kept a secret. And they all happen to be right with them!]]
* TheCorruption: The plague released by [[spoiler:the dark meteor, the Beast, and later, Deoxys]] turn living things into (usually undead) mutant monsters, and dead bodies into zombies.
* CreationStory: Regice and Regirock tell the story of how the Pokemon World was created by the Mother [[spoiler:and how it was almost destroyed several times by the Beast.]]
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** Most members of [[spoiler: Team Rocket]] get grizzly ends.
** The world leaders in all categories are crammed into a giant crusher.
** [[spoiler: May and her Pokemon.]]
** The world leaders in all categories are crammed into a giant crusher.
** [[spoiler: May and her Pokemon.]]
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** Most members of [[spoiler: Team [[spoiler:Team Rocket]] get grizzly ends.
**The Just before the final battle, [[spoiler:Deoxys gathers up all the world leaders in all categories are crammed categories, crams into a giant crusher.
crystal crusher, and kills them all.]]
**[[spoiler: May [[spoiler:May and her Pokemon.]]]]
* CurbStompBattle: No shortage of these.
** Deoxys easily kills the Pichu brothers, dragging out beating one of them to death ForTheEvulz
** Regirock and Regice effortlessly wipe out Team Magma and Aqua
** Berry Stoo and Mariah do this to anybody who gets in a Pokemon battle with them. They can only be defeated via LoopholeAbuse.
** [[spoiler:All of Team Rocket except for Jessie and James are curb-stomped by either Deoxys, Mewgle, or their minions.]]
** The Pokerockers win pretty easily against Miror B and his goons.
** The Shining Ranger, the Alpha Ranger, and Phoenetrice are all curbstomped (offscreen) by Mewtwo, the Ever Grande police, and the survivors of Alpha's last battle.
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* CurbStompBattle: No shortage of these.
** Deoxys easily kills the Pichu brothers, dragging out beating one of them to death ForTheEvulz
** Regirock and Regice effortlessly wipe out Team Magma and Aqua
** Berry Stoo and Mariah do this to anybody who gets in a Pokemon battle with them. They can only be defeated via LoopholeAbuse.
** [[spoiler:All of Team Rocket except for Jessie and James are curb-stomped by either Deoxys, Mewgle, or their minions.]]
** The Pokerockers win pretty easily against Miror B and his goons.
** The Shining Ranger, the Alpha Ranger, and Phoenetrice are all curbstomped (offscreen) by Mewtwo, the Ever Grande police, and the survivors of Alpha's last battle.
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* DoNotAdjustYourSet: [[spoiler: Deoxys announces his horrific plans to the entire world by taking over its television and radio signals.]]
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* DoNotAdjustYourSet: [[spoiler: Deoxys [[spoiler:Deoxys announces his horrific plans to the entire world by taking over its all television and radio signals.]]
* DrillSergeantNasty: Lucy, the Frontier Brain of the Battle Pike. She later turns out to be a JerkWithAHeartOfGold
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* {{Expy}}: A lot of people, if they don't outright {{Cameo}}.
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* {{Expy}}: A lot EccentricMillionaire: [[OverlyLongName Horatio Nimsy-Porpington De-Mented XXIII]] in Chapter 26. He hears voices and makes his contestants have Pokemon battles in silly costumes.
* EldritchLocation: [[spoiler:Deoxys']] lair is entirely made ofpeople, if they don't outright {{Cameo}}.dark purple crystals that branch out in AlienGeometries. These crystals can absorb spilled body fluids.
* EldritchLocation: [[spoiler:Deoxys']] lair is entirely made of
* EvilMakesYouUgly: Anyone and anything that goes over to TheDarkSide, whether by choice or by force[[note]]And it usually IS by force[[/note]] suffers generally a ''lot'' of BodyHorror.
* {{Expy}}: A lot of people, if they don't outright {{Cameo}}.
* {{Expy}}: A lot of people, if they don't outright {{Cameo}}.
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* FetishFuel: In-universe - there are repeated references to a [[AmazonianBeauty female Machoke supermodel]]
* FromBadToWorse: Goes from Latias trying to hide from the Ghost King's forces to [[spoiler: having to fight armies of the undead, which are controlled by utterly heinous abominations.]]
* FromBadToWorse: Goes from Latias trying to hide from the Ghost King's forces to [[spoiler: having to fight armies of the undead, which are controlled by utterly heinous abominations.]]
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* FetishFuel: In-universe - there are repeated references to Jigglypuff's Gigabot CombiningMecha is powered by her bodyguards on treadmills. To motivate them, she gives them all magazines featuring a [[AmazonianBeauty female Machoke supermodel]]
supermodel.]][[invoked]]
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: Missingno's realm looks a lot like this.
* FromBadToWorse: Goes from Latias trying to hide from the Ghost King's forces to[[spoiler: having [[spoiler:having to fight armies of the undead, which are controlled by utterly heinous abominations.]]
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: Missingno's realm looks a lot like this.
* FromBadToWorse: Goes from Latias trying to hide from the Ghost King's forces to
* GirlOnGirlIsHot:
** In Chapter 43, a mutant watchman [[SexualExtortion orders Annie and Oakley to make out]], or else he'll force them to fight a bunch of {{Mirror Boss}}es. They comply, and he starts recording it on the video camera embedded in his head.
** In Chapter 53, the Shining Ranger summons all his minions who went through the HERO system - this includes the two Soldier Scouts, who were busy having sex at the time. They accidentally induce quite a few nosebleeds.
** In Chapter 43, a mutant watchman [[SexualExtortion orders Annie and Oakley to make out]], or else he'll force them to fight a bunch of {{Mirror Boss}}es. They comply, and he starts recording it on the video camera embedded in his head.
** In Chapter 53, the Shining Ranger summons all his minions who went through the HERO system - this includes the two Soldier Scouts, who were busy having sex at the time. They accidentally induce quite a few nosebleeds.
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* HandWave: See FridgeLogic.
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* HandWave: See FridgeLogic.HandWave:
** When readers pointed out that "Phanpy" and "Adan" were spelled wrong, the author responded that he liked his own spellings better.
** When someone pointed out that Ciphers can only have one Shadow Pokemon on their team per trainer, the author said he was just going to ignore it in Jessie's case.
** When readers pointed out that "Phanpy" and "Adan" were spelled wrong, the author responded that he liked his own spellings better.
** When someone pointed out that Ciphers can only have one Shadow Pokemon on their team per trainer, the author said he was just going to ignore it in Jessie's case.
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** Various inhabitants on [[spoiler: Mewgle's fake version of]] Birth Island, including [[spoiler: "Raiki," Ash and Pikachu's fake father]].
** [[spoiler: Ash, Misty and May during the final story arcs, via EleventhHourSuperpower.]]
** [[spoiler: Ash, Misty and May during the final story arcs, via EleventhHourSuperpower.]]
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** Various inhabitants on [[spoiler: Mewgle's [[spoiler:Mewgle's fake version of]] Birth Island, including [[spoiler: "Raiki," [[spoiler:"Raiki," Ash and Pikachu's fake father]].
**[[spoiler: Ash, [[spoiler:Ash, Misty and May during the final story arcs, via EleventhHourSuperpower.]]]]
* HateSink: Almost all of the minor villains are this.
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* HateSink: Almost all of the minor villains are this.
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The much shorter prequel is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1969593/1/Your_Secret_Admirer here]]. It has a sequel of similar length called ''FanFic/BraveNewWorld''
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The much shorter prequel is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1969593/1/Your_Secret_Admirer here]]. It has a sequel of similar length called ''FanFic/BraveNewWorld''
''FanFic/BraveNewWorld''.
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** Latias bringing down an EldritchAbomination while singing "[[FinalFantasyX Otherworld]]" -- not the kind of song you'd expect her to be singing.
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** Latias bringing down an EldritchAbomination while singing "[[FinalFantasyX "[[VideoGame/FinalFantasyX Otherworld]]" -- not the kind of song you'd expect her to be singing.
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* DoNotAdjustYourSet: [[spoiler: Deoxys announces his horrific plans to the entire world by taking over its television and radio signals.]]