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* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two Gals]]: [[spoiler: Rexy and Blue]] seem to love partnering up a lot.
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* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two Gals]]: [[spoiler: Gals]]:
**[[spoiler: Rexy and Blue]] seem to love partnering up alot.lot.
** Echo and Delta are seen together quite often throughout the story.
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** Echo and Delta are seen together quite often throughout the story.
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* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Elise's human donor is John Hammond, thus making him her genetic father. Her T-Rex DNA comes from Rexy, her Velociraptor DNA from Big One and her Spinosaurus DNA from Sobek.]]
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* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Elise's human donor is John Hammond, thus making him her genetic father. Her T-Rex DNA comes from Rexy, her Velociraptor DNA from the Big One and her Spinosaurus DNA from Sobek.]]
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** Sleeker profile, instincts and claws are from ''Velociraptor''.
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** Sleeker profile, instincts instincts, intellect, and claws are from ''Velociraptor''.
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** So, in conclusion, Elise is essentially a teenage human girl with the body and instincts of a dinosaur.
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* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Elise's human donor is John Hammond, thus making him her genetic father.]]
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* LukeIAmYourFather: [[spoiler: Elise's human donor is John Hammond, thus making him her genetic father. Her T-Rex DNA comes from Rexy, her Velociraptor DNA from Big One and her Spinosaurus DNA from Sobek.]]
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** [[spoiler: Ability to [[NoJustNoReaction copulate with]] ''[[NoJustNoReaction Spinosaurus]]'' comes from ''Spinosaurus''.]]
** Sapience, brain and hands with opposable thumbs come from ''Homo sapiens''. [[spoiler: Specifically, John Hammond.]]
** Sapience, brain and hands with opposable thumbs come from ''Homo sapiens''. [[spoiler: Specifically, John Hammond.]]
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** [[spoiler: Ability Abitity to [[NoJustNoReaction copulate with]] ''[[NoJustNoReaction Spinosaurus]]'' change color comes from ''Spinosaurus''.]]
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** Sapience, brain and hands with opposable thumbs come from ''Homo sapiens''. [[spoiler: Specifically, John Hammond.]]
** Sapience, brain and hands with opposable thumbs come from ''Homo sapiens''.
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* TheTalk: Owen delivers some pretty poor, over-the-top PapaWolf 'advice' to Elise upon finding out [[spoiler: she can breed with ''Spinosaurus''.]] Claire gently tells them that she will explain 'girls and boys' later to Elise.
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* TheTalk: Owen delivers some pretty poor, over-the-top PapaWolf 'advice' to Elise upon finding out [[spoiler: she can breed with ''Spinosaurus''.]] ''Spinosaurus''. Claire gently tells them that she will explain 'girls and boys' later to Elise.Elise. Owen then later learns that [[spoiler:Wu mixed Elise and Tacet's records, and Tacet can breed with Spinosaurus while Elise can breed with T-Rex.]]
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That trope is for deaths that advanced cloning can't reverse.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Poor Blake.]]
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** Rosie got sick of having to watch ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' all the time, and thus doesn't think it's a good movie to show Elise.
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** Rosie got sick of having to watch ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Frozen|2013}}'' all the time, and thus doesn't think it's a good movie to show Elise.
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** On the human side we have the lawyer representing the public in Tacet's case, Carlos Fernandez. The man lost a hand and a foot to a cartel he was prosecuting years ago as a warning to back off and still boast about sending their boss to jail anyway. The guy also shows a borderline insane lack of fear in the face of massive creatures such as Elise and Tacet.
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** On the human side we have the lawyer [[spoiler:lawyer representing the public in Tacet's case, Carlos Fernandez. The man lost a hand and a foot to a cartel he was prosecuting years ago as a warning to back off and still boast about sending their boss to jail anyway. The guy also shows a borderline insane lack of fear in the face of massive creatures such as Elise and Tacet.Tacet]].
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** There's also one directed at the annoyingly guttural [[Film/TheDarkKnight Bat-Voice.]
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** There's also one directed at the annoyingly guttural [[Film/TheDarkKnight Bat-Voice.]]]
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** There's also one directed at the annoyingly guttural [[Film/TheDarkKnight Bat-Voice.]]
** The poacher he feeds to Carnifex is a not-too-subtle caricature of the hunter who killed Cecil the Lion less than two months before Chapter 52 was published.
** The poacher he feeds to Carnifex is a not-too-subtle caricature of the hunter who killed Cecil the Lion less than two months before Chapter 52 was published.
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** There's also one directed at the annoyingly guttural [[Film/TheDarkKnight Bat-Voice.]]
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** The poacherhe Bridges feeds to Carnifex is a not-too-subtle caricature of the hunter Walter Palmer, who killed Cecil the Lion less than two months before Chapter 52 was published.
** The poacher
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* TearsOfJoy: Elise sheds these when Lowery gives her the Swamp Chestnut Oak acorn with American soil, allowing her to truly put [[spoiler: Small One]] to rest. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments It heals the ache in her chest that has been plaguing her whole life.]]
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* TearsOfJoy: Elise sheds these when Lowery gives her the Swamp Chestnut Oak acorn with American soil, allowing her to truly put [[spoiler: Small One]] to rest. [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments It heals the ache in her chest that has been plaguing her whole life.]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elise does genuinely feel guilty for killing all the dinosaurs and doing what she did during her rampage. Which is what makes her interaction with Love the baby Apatosaurus just that more SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}}.
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elise does genuinely feel guilty for killing all the dinosaurs and doing what she did during her rampage. Which is what makes her interaction with Love the baby Apatosaurus just that more SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}}.heartwarming.
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* RootingForTheEmpire: InUniverse; Elise becomes a big fan of [[Film/TheDarkKnightSaga the Joker]] and [[Film/{{Godzilla 2014}} Godzilla]] (Joker because of his chaotic nature and declaring himself a freak, and Godzilla because of his status as a PersonOfMassDestruction while also being a protector of innocents)
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* RootingForTheEmpire: InUniverse; Elise becomes a big fan of [[Film/TheDarkKnightSaga [[Film/TheDarkKnightTrilogy the Joker]] and [[Film/{{Godzilla 2014}} Godzilla]] (Joker because of his chaotic nature and declaring himself a freak, and Godzilla because of his status as a PersonOfMassDestruction while also being a protector of innocents)
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Quite famed for updating very frequently (though real life constraints have caused that to slip) as well as having tight character development, and relationship building between the characters.
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Quite famed for updating very frequently (though real life constraints have caused that to slip) (until the updates stopped February of 2017 leaving the fic at 89 chapters) as well as having tight character development, and relationship building between the characters.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: the fic never shy's away from discribing several animals vomiting, which is unfortunate for Owen cause he's a sympathetic puker
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* On the human side we have the lawyer representing the public in Tacet's case, Carlos Fernandez, the man lost a hand and a foot to a cartel he was prosecuting years ago as a warning to back off and still boast about sending their boss to jail anyway. The guy shows a borderline insane lack of fear in the face of massive creatures such as Elise and Tacet.
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* On the human side we have the lawyer representing the public in Tacet's case, Carlos Fernandez, the man lost a hand and a foot to a cartel he was prosecuting years ago as a warning to back off and still boast about sending their boss to jail anyway. The guy shows a borderline insane lack of fear in the face of massive creatures such as Elise and Tacet.
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* ApocalypticLog: [[spoiler: Dr. Wu is currently making one to hopefully answer all of Elise's questions.]]
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* ApocalypticLog: [[spoiler: Dr. Wu is currently making makes one to hopefully answer all of Elise's questions.]]
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* [[ScrewPolitenessImASenior Screw Politeness, I'm a Senior!]]:
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* [[ScrewPolitenessImASenior Screw Politeness, I'm a Senior!]]: ScrewPolitenessImASenior:
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* TearsOfJoy: Elise sheds these when Lowery gives her the Swamp Chestnut Oak acorn with American soil, allowing her to truly put [[spoiler: Small One]] to rest. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming It heals the ache in her chest that has been plaguing her whole life.]]
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* TearsOfJoy: Elise sheds these when Lowery gives her the Swamp Chestnut Oak acorn with American soil, allowing her to truly put [[spoiler: Small One]] to rest. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming [[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments It heals the ache in her chest that has been plaguing her whole life.]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elise does genuinely feel guilty for killing all the dinosaurs and doing what she did during her rampage. Which is what makes her interaction with Love the baby Apatosaurus just that more [[{{Heartwarming}} heartwarming.]]
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* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Elise does genuinely feel guilty for killing all the dinosaurs and doing what she did during her rampage. Which is what makes her interaction with Love the baby Apatosaurus just that more [[{{Heartwarming}} heartwarming.]]SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming|Moments}}.
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Must be acknowledged in-work.
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** With all they've done and what they appear to be at this point, [=InGen=] is really no better than the ''[[BiggerBad Biosyn Corporation]]'' now. Hammond would be ''devastated'' to see the lows his beloved company has fallen to.
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** Elise ''loves'' honey. She licks it off her claws [[WesternAnimation/WinnieThePooh Pooh Bear-style!]]
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** Elise ''loves'' honey. She licks it off her claws [[WesternAnimation/WinnieThePooh [[Franchise/WinnieThePooh Pooh Bear-style!]]
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dewicking. I have no iea what this is supposed to be.
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* HeelFaceTurn: The entire premise of the story.
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* HeelFaceTurn: The entire premise of the story.Elise's switch from ruthless predator to empathy capable intelligent being.
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* HotScoop: The nosy reporters who make their way into the park to have an interview with Owen and Elise. They do raise some valid points...although the video of Elise sneezing on her is far more popular than that.
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** [[NoodleIncident Many years ago,]] an extremely aggressive, borderline AxCrazy female Spinosaurus named [[AwesomeMcCoolname Madre del Diablo]] was set to be a new attraction at Jurassic World. On her first day there, she broke into [[BadassGrandma Rexy's]] paddock, and needless to say, [[ForegoneConclusion Rexy was not pleased.]] It was a good thing the park was closed that day.
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** [[NoodleIncident Many years ago,]] an extremely aggressive, borderline AxCrazy female Spinosaurus named [[AwesomeMcCoolname Madre del Diablo]] was set to be a new attraction at Jurassic World. On her first day there, she broke into [[BadassGrandma Rexy's]] Rexy's paddock, and needless to say, [[ForegoneConclusion Rexy was not pleased.]] It was a good thing the park was closed that day.
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-->''Her hateful gaze was all too familiar, almost a mirror when he saw past the crimson color, and slit pupils. Because we all know the scientists of Jurassic World had proven themselves incapable of exercising discipline when it came to temptations. Why would it be any different with creating the Indominus?''
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and Her Beetle]]: Elise used to have a companion of sorts in the form of a beetle called Friend. Friend disappearing after [[DroppedABridgeOnHim getting knocked into a stream by a butterfly.]]
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* [[ABoyAndHisX A Girl and Her Beetle]]: Elise used to have a companion of sorts in the form of a beetle called Friend. Friend ended up disappearing after [[DroppedABridgeOnHim getting knocked into a stream by a butterfly.]]
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: One of the main conflicts in the story are the people who question whether or not it was right to forgive Elise despite her causing the deaths of countless people. She openly admits to her atrocities, and is trying to be better. In turn, there are humans and dinosaurs who stick up for her, and point out her traumatic treatment went into screwing her up. Her critics, however, are correct about how dangerous she is, and the deaths she caused. But their motivations and desires aren't always pure, with some people desiring to put her down, while others question her basic humanity.
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** Blue has since added a flock of sheep to her collection. She loves how soft they are.
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** Elise names a [[spoiler:baby ''Ankylosaurus'' that she rescued [[DeadGuyJunior Henry]], after the late Dr. Wu.]]
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** Lowery attempts this to distract an anxious Fuego from opening a door. Vivaldi does nothing, Mozart makes him vomit, and Eminem only pisses him off. He finally strikes gold with [[spoiler:Shakira, to the point that Fuego completely tires himself out from dancing to her songs]].
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* HeelFaceDoorslam: Blake is getting help for his SurvivorsGuilt and feels he's ready to come back to work at Jurassic World, [[spoiler: just before Jack, Bridges' assistant, shoots him dead in the old Visitor's Center]].
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* HeelFaceDoorslam: HeelFaceDoorSlam: Blake is getting help for his SurvivorsGuilt and feels he's ready to come back to work at Jurassic World, [[spoiler: just before Jack, Bridges' assistant, shoots him dead in the old Visitor's Center]].
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* {{Badass}}:
** Owen communicates for the first time with Elise by ''standing in front of her and screaming stop.'' In fact, the video that is used to save Elise from being euthanized is hashtagged 'badassery'.
** Elise has also earned her badassness by [[spoiler:taking on Lilly the Mosasaurus and ''surviving.'']]
** Dr. Grant is this to the Control Room when he ''pets'', a fully awake and therefore incredibly dangerous, Rexy. The only others to have done so have been Elise and the Raptors.
** Flower the Boer buck. Managed to escape Rexy, headbutted Blue, evaded the Raptor Squad for ''weeks'' and now lives next to Sobek in his pen. When Sobek roared at him, Flower ''screamed back,'' managing to startle the magnitudes-larger Spinosaurus. Sobek then decides to leave Flower alone, as he's clearly not worth killing. Flower now happily eats grass in a paddock the raptors don't enter.
** Owen communicates for the first time with Elise by ''standing in front of her and screaming stop.'' In fact, the video that is used to save Elise from being euthanized is hashtagged 'badassery'.
** Elise has also earned her badassness by [[spoiler:taking on Lilly the Mosasaurus and ''surviving.'']]
** Dr. Grant is this to the Control Room when he ''pets'', a fully awake and therefore incredibly dangerous, Rexy. The only others to have done so have been Elise and the Raptors.
** Flower the Boer buck. Managed to escape Rexy, headbutted Blue, evaded the Raptor Squad for ''weeks'' and now lives next to Sobek in his pen. When Sobek roared at him, Flower ''screamed back,'' managing to startle the magnitudes-larger Spinosaurus. Sobek then decides to leave Flower alone, as he's clearly not worth killing. Flower now happily eats grass in a paddock the raptors don't enter.
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** [[spoiler:Wu later reveals that four notable beings' DNA went into Elise: [[{{Badass}} Rexy]], [[BloodKnight Sobek]], [[Film/JurassicPark Big]] [[HeroKiller One]], and ''John Hammond''.]]
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** [[spoiler:Wu later reveals that four notable beings' DNA went into Elise: [[{{Badass}} Rexy]], Rexy, [[BloodKnight Sobek]], [[Film/JurassicPark Big]] [[HeroKiller One]], and ''John Hammond''.]]
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* ActionGirl: The Raptor Squad, naturally. Rexy also gets to kick some ass when [[spoiler:a rogue ''Triceratops'' attacks Elise.]]
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** The Raptor Squad,naturally. naturally.
** Rexy also gets to kick some ass when [[spoiler:a rogue ''Triceratops'' attacks Elise.]]
** The Raptor Squad,
** Rexy also gets to kick some ass when [[spoiler:a rogue ''Triceratops'' attacks Elise.]]