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* Fauxreigner: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it's too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it's only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
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* Fauxreigner: {{Fauxreigner}}: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it's too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it's only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Creator/ShadePenn is an AU and Crossover with ''Anime/{{Naruto}}'' and ''Franchise/{{Transformers}} Anime/UnicronTrilogy'' with Rad White as the central character.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Creator/ShadePenn and hosted on Website/FanFictionDotNet. It is an AU and Crossover with ''Anime/{{Naruto}}'' and ''Franchise/{{Transformers}} Anime/UnicronTrilogy'' with Rad White as the central character.
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* AnIcePerson: Naruto/Rad when Kyuubi teaches him to combine his water and wind elemental chakras.
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* BadassTeacher: [[spoiler:Anko-sensei]] in Kira's journal entry.
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* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Males variants in Naruto/Rad, Kira, and Kyuubi.
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* BrainyBrunette: Atticus, Kira and arguably Alexis.
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* FirstLove: Alexis likes Kira…''a lot''.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn Creator/ShadePenn is an AU and Crossover with ''Anime/{{Naruto}}'' and ''Franchise/{{Transformers}} Anime/UnicronTrilogy'' with Rad White as the central character.
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* EveryoneIsGay: ''Mostly''. Then again, most of the characters as of now are robot males and there are a significantly low number of females. Heck, the only established hetero couple are Machiko and Atticus.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn is an AU and Crossover with ''{{Anime/Naruto}}'' and Transformers Unicron Trilogy with Rad White as the central character.
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
It mixes in the G1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
It mixes in the G1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn is an AU and Crossover with ''{{Anime/Naruto}}'' ''Anime/{{Naruto}}'' and Transformers Unicron Trilogy ''Franchise/{{Transformers}} Anime/UnicronTrilogy'' with Rad White as the central character.
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
character.
It mixes in theG1 ''Franchise/TransformersGeneration1'' continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. on.
It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of fourOC’s OC's who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s Rad's life. The Naruto ''Naruto'' dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real 'real world.’'
Unfortunately, it hasn't been updated since 2013.
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
It mixes in the
It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four
Unfortunately, it hasn't been updated since 2013.
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* AndIMustScream: Though glossed over a bit, you don’t really read too much into the fact the Kira had been in a coma until you realize he said he was conscious through it. Couples into [[FridgeHorror fridge territory]] when you also realize that he couldn’t do anything and spent four years essentially trapped in a hospital bed. He does state he didn’t go insane because he already had lost it a long time ago, and hearing his brother’s voice kept him clinging to that last shred of sanity he had.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kira doesn’t think Naruto/Rad is annoying; it’s his brother’s friends he doesn’t like.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kira doesn’t think Naruto/Rad is annoying; it’s his brother’s friends he doesn’t like.
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* AndIMustScream: Though glossed over a bit, you don’t don't really read too much into the fact the Kira had been in a coma until you realize he said he was conscious through it. Couples into [[FridgeHorror fridge territory]] when you also realize that he couldn’t couldn't do anything and spent four years essentially trapped in a hospital bed. He does state he didn’t didn't go insane because he already had lost it a long time ago, and hearing his brother’s brother's voice kept him clinging to that last shred of sanity he had.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kiradoesn’t doesn't think Naruto/Rad is annoying; it’s it's his brother’s brother's friends he doesn’t doesn't like.
* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kira
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* BadassTeacher: [[spoiler:Anko-sensei]] in Kira’s journal entry.
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* BadassTeacher: [[spoiler:Anko-sensei]] in Kira’s Kira's journal entry.
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* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t love him in ''that'' way; even though they aren’t really related.
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* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t doesn't love him in ''that'' way; even though they aren’t aren't really related.
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* BlowYouAway: Both of Naruto/Rad’s and Kira’s third elemental chakra is wind.
* BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker doesn’t know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
* BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker doesn’t know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
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* BlowYouAway: Both of Naruto/Rad’s Naruto/Rad's and Kira’s Kira's third elemental chakra is wind.
* BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreakerdoesn’t doesn't know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s it's said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
* BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker
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* BreakTheCutie: Naruto/Rad, though he doesn’t really ‘break’ until [[spoiler:Kira gets put into a coma]], and even then he’s still optimistic since [[spoiler:he knows Kira is going to wake up later on]]. Arguably Kira, [[DeliberatelyCuteChild when he was still 'cute']].
* BullyingADragon: Kira and Naruto/Rad of course. These two are the epitome of it in this fic. One’s a half-demon, and the other contains the Demon King Kyuubi. And those Konoha villagers think it’s a good idea to actually hunt them down?
* BullyingADragon: Kira and Naruto/Rad of course. These two are the epitome of it in this fic. One’s a half-demon, and the other contains the Demon King Kyuubi. And those Konoha villagers think it’s a good idea to actually hunt them down?
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* BreakTheCutie: Naruto/Rad, though he doesn’t doesn't really ‘break’ 'break' until [[spoiler:Kira gets put into a coma]], and even then he’s he's still optimistic since [[spoiler:he knows Kira is going to wake up later on]]. Arguably Kira, [[DeliberatelyCuteChild when he was still 'cute']].
* BullyingADragon: Kira andNaruto/Rad of course.Naruto/Rad. These two are the epitome of it in this fic. One’s One's a half-demon, and the other contains the Demon King Kyuubi. And those Konoha villagers think it’s it's a good idea to actually hunt them down?
* BullyingADragon: Kira and
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Kira is a jerk, that’s a given; and even though it’s implied he’s done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. Also Kira’s unnamed mother. This could also be a subversion in the fact while Naruto/Rad clearly can’t remember them, Kira can; it is hinted though he finds remembering them to be too painful.
* DeathGlare: This is pretty much Kira’s default expression. Made even more terrifying by the fact that [[spoiler:Kira’s bloodline is this all but confirmed to be this]].
* DefrostingIceQueen{{King}}/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
* DishingOutDirt: One of Naruto/Rad’s elemental chakras is earth. His most crazy awesome moment using the chakra was when he used an earth jutsu to nearly crush Megatron.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. Also Kira’s unnamed mother. This could also be a subversion in the fact while Naruto/Rad clearly can’t remember them, Kira can; it is hinted though he finds remembering them to be too painful.
* DeathGlare: This is pretty much Kira’s default expression. Made even more terrifying by the fact that [[spoiler:Kira’s bloodline is this all but confirmed to be this]].
* DefrostingIceQueen{{King}}/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
* DishingOutDirt: One of Naruto/Rad’s elemental chakras is earth. His most crazy awesome moment using the chakra was when he used an earth jutsu to nearly crush Megatron.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Kira is a jerk, that’s that's a given; and even though it’s it's implied he’s he's done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. AlsoKira’s Kira's unnamed mother. This could also be a subversion in the fact while Naruto/Rad clearly can’t can't remember them, Kira can; it is hinted though he finds remembering them to be too painful.
* DeathGlare: This is pretty muchKira’s Kira's default expression. Made even more terrifying by the fact that [[spoiler:Kira’s [[spoiler:Kira's bloodline is this all but confirmed to be this]].
* DefrostingIceQueen{{King}}/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* DishingOutDirt: One ofNaruto/Rad’s Naruto/Rad's elemental chakras is earth. His most crazy awesome moment using the chakra was when he used an earth jutsu to nearly crush Megatron.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. Also
* DeathGlare: This is pretty much
* DefrostingIceQueen{{King}}/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
* DishingOutDirt: One of
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* DramaticIrony: As of Chapter 21, Skywarp admits to wanting to pursue Kira. The “best” part? [[spoiler:Kira has no idea and finds Skywarp to be rather annoying]].
* EmbarrassingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: It’s an interesting case with Kira. [[spoiler:Kyuubi]] really doesn’t seem to care how Kira acts so long as it doesn’t reflect badly on him.
* EvilRedhead: Kyuubi’s human form has red hair and he’s more of bastard/mentor than straight out evil. Incredibly sadistic? Yes. Evil? Maybe.
* EmbarrassingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
* EvilParentsWantGoodKids: It’s an interesting case with Kira. [[spoiler:Kyuubi]] really doesn’t seem to care how Kira acts so long as it doesn’t reflect badly on him.
* EvilRedhead: Kyuubi’s human form has red hair and he’s more of bastard/mentor than straight out evil. Incredibly sadistic? Yes. Evil? Maybe.
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* DramaticIrony: As of Chapter 21, Skywarp admits to wanting to pursue Kira. The “best” "best" part? [[spoiler:Kira has no idea and finds Skywarp to be rather annoying]].
* EmbarrassingFirstName: Rad findsKira’s Kira's to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
* EvilParentsWantGoodKids:It’s It's an interesting case with Kira. [[spoiler:Kyuubi]] really doesn’t doesn't seem to care how Kira acts so long as it doesn’t doesn't reflect badly on him.
* EvilRedhead:Kyuubi’s Kyuubi's human form has red hair and he’s he's more of bastard/mentor than straight out evil. Incredibly sadistic? Yes. Evil? Maybe.
* EmbarrassingFirstName: Rad finds
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* Fauxreigner: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it’s too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it’s only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
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* Fauxreigner: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it’s it's too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it’s it's only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
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* FridgeLogic:
* No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
** Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another language when they were young, but considering they were seven at the time, she might have just assumed he was making it up.
* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
* No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
** Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another language when they were young, but considering they were seven at the time, she might have just assumed he was making it up.
* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
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* No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or notSugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he was adopted doesn't like people, doesn't get along with them, and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he's the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
** Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another languagebegun to 'melt' when they were young, but considering they were seven at the time, she might have just assumed he was making it up.
* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].Minicons get involved]].
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** Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another language
* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
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A FanFiction work found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn is an AU and Crossover with Naruto and Transformers Unicron Trilogy with Rad White as the central character.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6795346/1/Eye-Of-The-Fox A FanFiction work fanfic]] found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn is an AU and Crossover with Naruto ''{{Anime/Naruto}}'' and Transformers Unicron Trilogy with Rad White as the central character.
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* FridgeLogic: No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
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* FridgeLogic: FridgeLogic:
* No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
* No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
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* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
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* FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].him]].
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* BlueEyes: Naruto/Rad, and Machiko both possess blue eyes. In Chapter 5, Fred described that Rad/Naruto’s eyes held a “hard edge in them,” and that he was scowling at him. Most of the Autobots have blue optics.
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It mixes in the G 1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
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It mixes in the G 1 G1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
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* DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality: DefrostingIceQueen{{King}}/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* EmbarrasingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
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* EmbarrasingFirstName: EmbarrassingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
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* FantasticRacism: The people in Konoha hated Kira so much they almost [[spoiler:accomplished murdering him]].
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* FantasticRacism: The people in Konoha hated Kira so much they almost [[spoiler:accomplished murdering him]].
*Fauxreigner: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it’s too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it’s only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
*FirstLove: Alexis likes Kira…''a lot''.
*FirstSnow: Kira reveals he has no idea what snow is when he sees it outside his window and flatly replies that it never snowed in Fire Country and that he spent four years in a coma when Naruto/Rad calls him out on this.
*FridgeLogic: No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
**Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another language when they were young, but considering they were seven at the time, she might have just assumed he was making it up.
*FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
*Fauxreigner: Subverted. Machiko and Naruto/Rad are both from Japan, but it’s too the point where no one even knew they were Japanese, if the fact it’s only questioned if Kira is adopted and not Rad/ Naruto.
*FirstLove: Alexis likes Kira…''a lot''.
*FirstSnow: Kira reveals he has no idea what snow is when he sees it outside his window and flatly replies that it never snowed in Fire Country and that he spent four years in a coma when Naruto/Rad calls him out on this.
*FridgeLogic: No one ''ever'' asked Rad/Naruto whether or not he was adopted and it leads to some UnfortunateImplications because he has blonde hair and blue eyes, while Kira being adopted is much more 'acceptable.'
**Also take into account that Alexis heard Rad/Naruto talking another language when they were young, but considering they were seven at the time, she might have just assumed he was making it up.
*FridgeHorror: Kira spent ''years'' suffering abuse from the villages and even stated himself that he'd rather they always found ''him'' than his brother. It gets even more terrifying when his previous thought had been on how [[spoiler:the Konoha vilagers had almost suceeding in ''murdering'' him]].
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* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t love him in that way; even though they aren’t really related.
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* BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t love him in that ''that'' way; even though they aren’t really related.
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* DefrostingIceKing//SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* DefrostingIceKing//SugarAndIcePersonality: DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* Don’tYouDarePityMe: Kira absolutely hates pity or sympathy. He finds them more degrading than an insult.
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* Don’tYouDarePityMe: DontYouDarePityMe: Kira absolutely hates pity or sympathy. He finds them more degrading than an insult.
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*EvilRedhead: Kyuubi’s human form has red hair and he’s more of bastard/mentor than straight out evil. Incredibly sadistic? Yes. Evil? Maybe.
*EveryoneIsGay: ''Mostly''. Then again, most of the characters as of now are robot males and there are a significantly low number of females. Heck, the only established hetero couple are Machiko and Atticus.
*EveryoneLovesBlondes: Naruto/Rad. Not only do human males find him attractive, but so some of the Autobots.
*FantasticRacism: The people in Konoha hated Kira so much they almost [[spoiler:accomplished murdering him]].
*EveryoneIsGay: ''Mostly''. Then again, most of the characters as of now are robot males and there are a significantly low number of females. Heck, the only established hetero couple are Machiko and Atticus.
*EveryoneLovesBlondes: Naruto/Rad. Not only do human males find him attractive, but so some of the Autobots.
*FantasticRacism: The people in Konoha hated Kira so much they almost [[spoiler:accomplished murdering him]].
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* BerserkButton: In a flashback, Kushina also got angry when Chibi!Kira asked her if all women were scary, straight to her face after she got done beating up Minato for thinking she was fat. It was subverted though as she merely picked Kira up and advised [[HypocriticalHumor him to never say that to a woman unless he wanted to get beaten up
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* BerserkButton: In a flashback, Kushina also got angry when Chibi!Kira asked her if all women were scary, straight to her face after she got done beating up Minato for thinking she was fat. It was subverted though as she merely picked Kira up and advised [[HypocriticalHumor him to never say that to a woman unless he wanted to get beaten upup]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Kira to Naruto/Rad. You mess with his little brother, and he will send you to the "ICU". Perhaps [[spoiler:Kira to the Minicons as well]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Kira to Naruto/Rad. You mess with his little brother, and he will send you to the "ICU".''ICU''. Perhaps [[spoiler:Kira to the Minicons as well]].
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* DarkIsNotEvil=]: Kira is a jerk, that’s a given; and even though it’s implied he’s done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
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* DarkIsNotEvil=]: DarkIsNotEvil: Kira is a jerk, that’s a given; and even though it’s implied he’s done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
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* DefrostingIceQueen DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality=]: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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* DefrostingIceQueen DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality=]: DefrostingIceKing//SugarAndIcePersonality: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
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*Don’tYouDarePityMe: Kira absolutely hates pity or sympathy. He finds them more degrading than an insult.
*DownerBeginning: The story starts by recalling the events that led to Kira being in a coma, but it gets better.
*DramaticIrony: As of Chapter 21, Skywarp admits to wanting to pursue Kira. The “best” part? [[spoiler:Kira has no idea and finds Skywarp to be rather annoying]].
*EmbarrasingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
*EvilParentsWantGoodKids: It’s an interesting case with Kira. [[spoiler:Kyuubi]] really doesn’t seem to care how Kira acts so long as it doesn’t reflect badly on him.
*DownerBeginning: The story starts by recalling the events that led to Kira being in a coma, but it gets better.
*DramaticIrony: As of Chapter 21, Skywarp admits to wanting to pursue Kira. The “best” part? [[spoiler:Kira has no idea and finds Skywarp to be rather annoying]].
*EmbarrasingFirstName: Rad finds Kira’s to be this as the meaning of the name is different out of Japan.
*EvilParentsWantGoodKids: It’s an interesting case with Kira. [[spoiler:Kyuubi]] really doesn’t seem to care how Kira acts so long as it doesn’t reflect badly on him.
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* BreakTheCutie: Naruto/Rad, though he doesn’t really ‘break’ until [[spoiler:Kira gets put into a coma]], and even then he’s still optimistic since [[spoiler:he knows Kira is going to wake up later on]]. Arguably Kira, [[DeliberatelyCuteChild when he was still 'cute']]]].
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* BreakTheCutie: Naruto/Rad, though he doesn’t really ‘break’ until [[spoiler:Kira gets put into a coma]], and even then he’s still optimistic since [[spoiler:he knows Kira is going to wake up later on]]. Arguably Kira, [[DeliberatelyCuteChild when he was still 'cute']]]].'cute']].
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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious=]: Rad/Naruto does this frequently when Kira is in a coma. Billy does this to [[spoiler:confess his crush on Rad]] to the latter after following the former.
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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious=]: ConverseWithTheUnconscious: Rad/Naruto does this frequently when Kira is in a coma. Billy does this to [[spoiler:confess his crush on Rad]] to the latter after following the former.former.
*CuddleBug: Naruto/Rad is often seen hugging Kira, though woe befall anyone else who tries this.
*DarkIsNotEvil=]: Kira is a jerk, that’s a given; and even though it’s implied he’s done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
*DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. Also Kira’s unnamed mother. This could also be a subversion in the fact while Naruto/Rad clearly can’t remember them, Kira can; it is hinted though he finds remembering them to be too painful.
*DeathGlare: This is pretty much Kira’s default expression. Made even more terrifying by the fact that [[spoiler:Kira’s bloodline is this all but confirmed to be this]].
*DefrostingIceQueen DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality=]: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
*DishingOutDirt: One of Naruto/Rad’s elemental chakras is earth. His most crazy awesome moment using the chakra was when he used an earth jutsu to nearly crush Megatron.
*CuddleBug: Naruto/Rad is often seen hugging Kira, though woe befall anyone else who tries this.
*DarkIsNotEvil=]: Kira is a jerk, that’s a given; and even though it’s implied he’s done some pretty bad stuff, he is not considered evil by his brother who justified it by thinking Kira only did those things to protect him.
*DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kushina and Minato to Naruto/Rad and Kira. Also Kira’s unnamed mother. This could also be a subversion in the fact while Naruto/Rad clearly can’t remember them, Kira can; it is hinted though he finds remembering them to be too painful.
*DeathGlare: This is pretty much Kira’s default expression. Made even more terrifying by the fact that [[spoiler:Kira’s bloodline is this all but confirmed to be this]].
*DefrostingIceQueen DefrostingIceKing/SugarAndIcePersonality=]: Kira. He admits in a journal entry that he doesn’t like people, doesn’t get along with them, and loves inflicting mental torture on them. But he’s the best person in the world if your name is Naruto/or Rad. [[spoiler:Though he has begun to ‘melt’ when the Minicons get involved]].
*DishingOutDirt: One of Naruto/Rad’s elemental chakras is earth. His most crazy awesome moment using the chakra was when he used an earth jutsu to nearly crush Megatron.
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* BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker doesn’t know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
* BrainyBrunette: Atticus, Kira and arguably Alexis.
* BrainyBrunette: Atticus, Kira and arguably Alexis.
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*BreakTheCutie: Naruto/Rad, though he doesn’t really ‘break’ until [[spoiler:Kira gets put into a coma]], and even then he’s still optimistic since [[spoiler:he knows Kira is going to wake up later on]]. Arguably Kira, [[DeliberatelyCuteChild when he was still 'cute']]]].
*BullyingADragon: Kira and Naruto/Rad of course. These two are the epitome of it in this fic. One’s a half-demon, and the other contains the Demon King Kyuubi. And those Konoha villagers think it’s a good idea to actually hunt them down?
*ConverseWithTheUnconscious=]: Rad/Naruto does this frequently when Kira is in a coma. Billy does this to [[spoiler:confess his crush on Rad]] to the latter after following the former.
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*BerserkButton: In a flashback, Kushina also got angry when Chibi!Kira asked her if all women were scary, straight to her face after she got done beating up Minato for thinking she was fat. It was subverted though as she merely picked Kira up and advised [[HypocriticalHumor him to never say that to a woman unless he wanted to get beaten up
*BewareTheNiceOnes: Naruto/Rad when he nearly crushes [[spoiler:Megatron]] with one of his earth jutsus.
*BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t love him in that way; even though they aren’t really related.
*BigBrotherInstinct: Kira to Naruto/Rad. You mess with his little brother, and he will send you to the "ICU". Perhaps [[spoiler:Kira to the Minicons as well]].
*BigBrotherWorship: Naruto/Rad to Kira. Naruto/Rad loves his big brother more than anyone else; the guy did raise him from [[spoiler:infancy until he was seven]].
*BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Males variants in Naruto/Rad, Kira, and Kyuubi.
*BlowYouAway: Both of Naruto/Rad’s and Kira’s third elemental chakra is wind.
*BlueEyes: Naruto/Rad, and Machiko both possess blue eyes. In Chapter 5, Fred described that Rad/Naruto’s eyes held a “hard edge in them,” and that he was scowling at him. Most of the Autobots have blue optics.
*BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker doesn’t know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
*BrainyBrunette: Atticus, Kira and arguably Alexis.
*BewareTheNiceOnes: Naruto/Rad when he nearly crushes [[spoiler:Megatron]] with one of his earth jutsus.
*BigBrotherAttraction: Averted. While Naruto/Rad clearly worships Kira, he doesn’t love him in that way; even though they aren’t really related.
*BigBrotherInstinct: Kira to Naruto/Rad. You mess with his little brother, and he will send you to the "ICU". Perhaps [[spoiler:Kira to the Minicons as well]].
*BigBrotherWorship: Naruto/Rad to Kira. Naruto/Rad loves his big brother more than anyone else; the guy did raise him from [[spoiler:infancy until he was seven]].
*BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Males variants in Naruto/Rad, Kira, and Kyuubi.
*BlowYouAway: Both of Naruto/Rad’s and Kira’s third elemental chakra is wind.
*BlueEyes: Naruto/Rad, and Machiko both possess blue eyes. In Chapter 5, Fred described that Rad/Naruto’s eyes held a “hard edge in them,” and that he was scowling at him. Most of the Autobots have blue optics.
*BilingualBackfire: Naruto/Rad insults Sunstreaker by calling him an idiot in Japanese. And while Sunstreaker doesn’t know what he said, he does know what type of tone it’s said in and clearly takes offense to it anyway.
*BrainyBrunette: Atticus, Kira and arguably Alexis.
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A FanFiction work found on fanfiction.net by Shade Penn is an AU and Crossover with Naruto and Transformers Unicron Trilogy with Rad White as the central character.
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
It mixes in the G 1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
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!! This show provides examples of:
*AnIcePerson: Naruto/Rad when Kyuubi teaches him to combine his water and wind elemental chakras.
*AlmostKiss: Subverted. Billy really does kiss [[spoiler:Rad/Naruto]] in Chapter 16. For a few seconds before [[spoiler:Kira]] pulls the overprotective card.
*AndIMustScream: Though glossed over a bit, you don’t really read too much into the fact the Kira had been in a coma until you realize he said he was conscious through it. Couples into [[FridgeHorror fridge territory]] when you also realize that he couldn’t do anything and spent four years essentially trapped in a hospital bed. He does state he didn’t go insane because he already had lost it a long time ago, and hearing his brother’s voice kept him clinging to that last shred of sanity he had.
*AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kira doesn’t think Naruto/Rad is annoying; it’s his brother’s friends he doesn’t like.
*AsianSpeekeeEngrish: Subverted with Machiko and Naruto/Rad as they both have no hint of an Asian accent. Though Kira is shown to slip back into Japanese, he has a lightly accented Japanese accent and keeps his speech as clear as possible.
*BadassTeacher: [[spoiler:Anko-sensei]] in Kira’s journal entry.
*BalanceOfPower: Naruto/Rad reveals early on in the story that Kira has managed to harmonize his human and demonic chakras. This is also the reason he was in his coma in the first place; [[spoiler:his demon chakra was almost gone]].
This fic follows the cartoon series loosely and is currently on chapter 27.
It mixes in the G 1 continuity with some characters and humans appearing later on. It also has, by counting on one hand, a total of four OC’s who, three out of four, play a big part in Rad’s life. The Naruto dose comes in the fact that Rad is Naruto in this fic; leading the way for jutsu and chakra to be known in the ‘real world.’
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!! This show provides examples of:
*AnIcePerson: Naruto/Rad when Kyuubi teaches him to combine his water and wind elemental chakras.
*AlmostKiss: Subverted. Billy really does kiss [[spoiler:Rad/Naruto]] in Chapter 16. For a few seconds before [[spoiler:Kira]] pulls the overprotective card.
*AndIMustScream: Though glossed over a bit, you don’t really read too much into the fact the Kira had been in a coma until you realize he said he was conscious through it. Couples into [[FridgeHorror fridge territory]] when you also realize that he couldn’t do anything and spent four years essentially trapped in a hospital bed. He does state he didn’t go insane because he already had lost it a long time ago, and hearing his brother’s voice kept him clinging to that last shred of sanity he had.
*AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Subverted. Kira doesn’t think Naruto/Rad is annoying; it’s his brother’s friends he doesn’t like.
*AsianSpeekeeEngrish: Subverted with Machiko and Naruto/Rad as they both have no hint of an Asian accent. Though Kira is shown to slip back into Japanese, he has a lightly accented Japanese accent and keeps his speech as clear as possible.
*BadassTeacher: [[spoiler:Anko-sensei]] in Kira’s journal entry.
*BalanceOfPower: Naruto/Rad reveals early on in the story that Kira has managed to harmonize his human and demonic chakras. This is also the reason he was in his coma in the first place; [[spoiler:his demon chakra was almost gone]].