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* SerenadeYourLover: Alex sings for Margo in Chapter 7, appropriately titled "Serenades for Margo".
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* ThirteenIsUnlucky: Kyle has admitted that Chapter 13 is not his favorite chapter. The author's note at the end explains why.
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As if that wasn't enough, Alex falls in love with Margo and makes it his sworn duty to win over her heart, awakening Gru's OverprotectiveDad instincts. Even worse, the infamous supervillain Hypno-Joe escapes from prison and, believing Gru's repentance is a cover too, wants to persuade him into taking over the world with him--with Susan as his mindless puppet wife.

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As if that wasn't enough, Alex falls in love with Margo and makes it his sworn duty to win over her heart, awakening Gru's OverprotectiveDad BoyfriendBlockingDad instincts. Even worse, the infamous supervillain Hypno-Joe escapes from prison and, believing Gru's repentance is a cover too, wants to persuade him into taking over the world with him--with Susan as his mindless puppet wife.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Which is worse? Gru's villainous past coming back to haunt him, or [[OverprotectiveDad his eldest daughter finding love?]]]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:Which is worse? Gru's villainous past coming back to haunt him, or [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad his eldest daughter finding love?]]]]



*** Margo is still a little sore about Antonio breaking up with her. She also hasn't forgotten about the OverprotectiveDad side of Gru.

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*** Margo is still a little sore about Antonio breaking up with her. She also hasn't forgotten about the OverprotectiveDad BoyfriendBlockingDad side of Gru.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13402767/1/Despicable-Vs-Devoted Despicable vs. Devoted]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/DespicableMe'' fanfiction created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12785595/Kyle-Wilson Kyle Wilson]].

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13402767/1/Despicable-Vs-Devoted Despicable vs. Devoted]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/DespicableMe'' ''Franchise/DespicableMe'' fanfiction created by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12785595/Kyle-Wilson Kyle Wilson]].



* CallBack: Because this is a ''WesternAnimation/DespicableMe'' fanfic, expect a lot of references from previous movies to show up for this story.
** From the [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe first movie]]:

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* CallBack: Because this is a ''WesternAnimation/DespicableMe'' ''Despicable Me'' fanfic, expect a lot of references from previous movies to show up for this story.
** From the [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe [[WesternAnimation/DespicableMe1 first movie]]:
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* ProductionForeshadowing: Continuing [[Creator/IlluminationEntertainment Illumination's]] tradition of putting characters from future movies onto Margo's shirt, this story has [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]] on her shirt as a reference to the upcoming ''Super Mario Bros.'' movie. [[spoiler: When she's hypnotized to think she's a supervillain, it changes to Bowser.]]

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* ProductionForeshadowing: Continuing [[Creator/IlluminationEntertainment Illumination's]] tradition of putting characters from future movies onto Margo's shirt, this story has [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]] on her shirt as a reference to ''WesternAnimation/TheSuperMarioBrosMovie'', which was in development at the upcoming ''Super Mario Bros.'' movie.time the story was written. [[spoiler: When she's hypnotized to think she's a supervillain, it changes to Bowser.]]
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--> "Of course [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax they]] [[WesternAnimation/TheGrinch2018 are]]."

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--> "Of course [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax2012 they]] [[WesternAnimation/TheGrinch2018 are]]."



** To [[Creator/IlluminationEntertainment Illumination's]] other movies. There are brief mentions of [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax both]] Creator/DrSeuss [[WesternAnimation/TheGrinch2018 movies]] in Chapter 4, ''Film/{{Hop}}'' in Chapter 5, and the ''Franchise/{{Shrek}}'' reboot in Chapter 18. Also, in Chapter 11, Margo wins a plush of [[WesternAnimation/TheSecretLifeOfPets2 Captain Snowball]] in a crane game, and the girls watch ''{{WesternAnimation/Sing}}'' in Chapter 15.

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** To [[Creator/IlluminationEntertainment Illumination's]] other movies. There are brief mentions of [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax [[WesternAnimation/TheLorax2012 both]] Creator/DrSeuss [[WesternAnimation/TheGrinch2018 movies]] in Chapter 4, ''Film/{{Hop}}'' in Chapter 5, and the ''Franchise/{{Shrek}}'' reboot in Chapter 18. Also, in Chapter 11, Margo wins a plush of [[WesternAnimation/TheSecretLifeOfPets2 Captain Snowball]] in a crane game, and the girls watch ''{{WesternAnimation/Sing}}'' in Chapter 15.
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--->[[Series/TheOfficeUS "NOOO GOD! NO GOD PLEASE NO!!!"]]

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--->[[Series/TheOfficeUS "NOOO "NOOOOOO, GOD! NO GOD PLEASE NO!!!"]]NO, GOD, PLEASE, NO!"]]
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* BreakTheCutie: The girls burst into tears when they see [[spoiler:Gru about to fall to his death]] in Chapter 14. Then later, in the ending, they felt guilty about [[spoiler:the destruction they caused as hypnotized supervillains]].
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* QuicksandSucks: [[spoiler:What almost kills Alex in Chapter 19.]]

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* QuicksandSucks: [[spoiler:What almost kills Alex in [[spoiler:In Chapter 19.19, Margo, as the only girl still under Hypno-Joe's trance, drops Alex into a pit of quicksand to kill him. He's only saved when Susan and the others suck up all of it and resuscitate him.]]
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* MemorialForTheAntagonist: At the end of the story, [[spoiler:Hypno-Joe visits Scarlet Overkill's grave]].
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* MemorialForTheAntagonist: At the end of the story, [[spoiler:Hypno-Joe visits Scarlet Overkill's grave]].
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* AdultFear: Gru's daughters are put in danger in the third act, as usual. [[spoiler:Except this time, rather than being put into a life-threatening situation, they are brainwashed by Hypno-Joe into thinking they're supervillains so they would pick up from where Gru left off.]]

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Hypnotize The Princess has been renamed to Hypnotize The Captive. Misuse and Administrivia.Zero Context Examples will be deleted. This trope is about a villain hypnotizing their captive in order to make them submit to them.


* HypnotizeThePrincess: Hypno-Joe makes Susan fall in love with him very early on, and the story suggests that this is far from the first time.



* LovePotion: Love Potion #10, a love serum that Dr. Nefario invented for Gru during his villain days. It's empty as of this story's events, but that doesn't stop Devan from assuming that was what Gru used to make Lucy marry him.

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Love Potion #10, a love serum that Dr. Nefario invented for Gru during his villain days. It's empty as of this story's events, but that doesn't stop Devan from assuming that was what Gru used to make Lucy marry him.him.
** Hypno-Joe makes Susan fall in love with him very early on, and the story suggests that this is far from the first time.
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* LovePotion: Love Potion #10, a love serum that Dr. Nefario invented for Gru during his villain days. It's empty as of these story's events, but that doesn't stop Devan from assuming that was what Gru used to make Lucy marry him.

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* LovePotion: Love Potion #10, a love serum that Dr. Nefario invented for Gru during his villain days. It's empty as of these this story's events, but that doesn't stop Devan from assuming that was what Gru used to make Lucy marry him.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Of course a superhero that Gru has battled with so many times is not going to immediately believe he's changed.
** Devan tries to file a police report against Gru in Chapter 5. But with no clear evidence to convict him on, the police doesn't have a case.
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* LegacySeeker: Dru starts off the story wanting to carry on the VillainousLegacy that Gru left behind. Hypno-Joe is also one, but goes into much more desperate measures to accomplish this.
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* MovingAngst: Alex was shown to not be too thrilled about moving to an all-new city, though the time he spends with Margo helps him quickly get over it.
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-->'''Gru:''' Me, too,. I mean, someone's gotta pay for the damages. Those people who think it's "cool" have been watching too many superhero movies.

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-->'''Gru:''' Me, too,.too. I mean, someone's gotta pay for the damages. Those people who think it's "cool" have been watching too many superhero movies.

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