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** Ron has become this, since he feels he has nothing left to lose since losing Kim.
** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most.
** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most.
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** Ron has become this, since after Kim's death, he feels he has nothing left to lose since losing Kim.
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** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most. Jim would always try to get him out of his funk.
** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most. Jim would always try to get him out of his funk.
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only helplessly watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge. The words in italic and between parenthesis are her dialogue.]]
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only helplessly watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge. The words Her single-word dialogues are in italic and between parenthesis are her dialogue.parenthesis.]]
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* DeathSeeker:
** Ron has become this, since he feels he has nothing left to lose since losing Kim.
** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most.
** Ron has become this, since he feels he has nothing left to lose since losing Kim.
** Tim, since losing his big sister also affected him the most.
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* FrightInducedBunkmate: [[spoiler:After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her daughter Jenny joins her and Ron on their bed.]]
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* FrightInducedBunkmate: [[spoiler:After Kim wakes [[spoiler:Inverted. After waking up from her nightmare, Kim finds her daughter Jenny joins in the room noticing she was crying in her sleep. So Kim allowed Jenny to sleep with her and Ron on their bed.Ron.]]
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* OffWithHerHead:
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
** [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
** [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
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* OffWithHerHead:
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
**OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
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* {{Revenge}}: Ron is going to avenge the death of Kim.
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* {{Revenge}}: Ron is going to avenge the death of Kim. Even if it kills him. [[spoiler:Which it does.]]
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only helplessly watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only helplessly watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge. The words in italic and between parenthesis are her dialogue.]]
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* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
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* OffWithHerHead: OffWithHerHead:
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
** [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a"tribute"."tribute".
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them via recordings. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
** The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls.
** [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a
* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them via recordings. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
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* AdultFear: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them via recordings. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
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* EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler:What happens to Lorwardia, at the end of Kim's dream.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Ron.]]
* FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Ron.]]
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler:Ron.]]
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* AdultFear: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
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* AdultFear: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them.them via recordings. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Kim. Which Ron sees her as, since she didn't deserve to be taken away too soon, especially not the she did.
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Kim. Which Ron sees her as, since she didn't deserve to be taken away too soon, especially not the way she did.
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge helplessly.]]
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* UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only helplessly watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge helplessly.RoaringRampageOfRevenge.]]
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* PosthumousCharacter: By the time the story starts, Kim and Shego are long gone.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: The human traitors who work for the Lorwardians rape the girls before shipping them to Lorwardia. The Lowardians themselves rape the teenage girls before beheading them.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: The human traitors who work for the Lorwardians rape the girls before shipping them to Lorwardia. The Lowardians themselves also rape the teenage girls before beheading them.
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: Kim. Which Ron sees her as, since she didn't deserve to be taken away too soon, especially not the she did.
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* HonoraryUncle:[[spoiler: Monique and Tara are like "aunts" to Jenny, likewise Josh is an "uncle" to her. While they weren't acknowledged at the end of the fic, Felix, Bonnie, and Brick could be this to Jenny too.]]
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* HonoraryUncle:[[spoiler: HonoraryUncle: [[spoiler: Monique and Tara are like "aunts" to Jenny, likewise Josh is an "uncle" to her. While they weren't acknowledged at the end of the fic, Felix, Bonnie, and Brick could be this to Jenny too.]]
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: The human traitors who work for the Lorwardians rape the girls before shipping them to Lorwardia. The Lowardians rape the teenage girls before beheading them.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: The human traitors who work for the Lorwardians rape the girls before shipping them to Lorwardia. The Lowardians themselves rape the teenage girls before beheading them.
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* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: It's all been Kim's nightmare.]]
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* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: It's AllJustADream: [[spoiler:It's all been Kim's nightmare.]]
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* [[spoiler:DecapitationPresentation: Warmonga holds up Ron's severed head.]]
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* [[spoiler:FaceDeathWithDignity: Ron.]]
* [[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her daughter Jenny joins her and Ron on their bed.]]
* [[spoiler:GoOutWithASmile: Ron.]]
* [[spoiler:FaceDeathWithDignity: Ron.]]
* [[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her daughter Jenny joins her and Ron on their bed.]]
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* [[spoiler:EarthShatteringKaboom: What EarthShatteringKaboom: [[spoiler:What happens to Lorwardia, at the end of Kim's dream.]]
*[[spoiler:FaceDeathWithDignity: Ron.FaceDeathWithDignity: [[spoiler:Ron.]]
*[[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After FrightInducedBunkmate: [[spoiler:After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her daughter Jenny joins her and Ron on their bed.]]
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* [[spoiler:HonoraryUncle: HonoraryUncle:[[spoiler: Monique and Tara are like "aunts" to Jenny, likewise Josh is an "uncle" to her. While they weren't acknowledged at the end of the fic, Felix, Bonnie, and Brick could be this to Jenny too.]]
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* [[spoiler:UndeadAuthor]]: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge helplessly.]]
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* [[spoiler:UndeadAuthor]]: UndeadAuthor: A variation. [[spoiler: Kim is dead in her own nightmare and can only watch Ron's RoaringRampageOfRevenge helplessly.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: Kim was beheaded, while stripped nude, and being watched by a crowd of Lorwardians. This also happened to Shego and the rest of the teenage girls. Ron, the Possibles, Drakken, and the girls’ loved ones were forced to watch their horrible executions via recordings.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Jessica and Liz forgotten about Ron, and thought his last name was Dumpable.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Former cheerleaders Jessica and Liz have forgotten about Ron, and thought his last name was Dumpable.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Jessica and Liz forgotten about Ron, and Dumpable.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Jessica and Liz forgotten about Ron, and thought his last name was Dumpable.
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* CallBack: [[spoiler: Shego apparently retired from villainy and became a teacher for real. Jenny is in her class.]]
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* CallBack: [[spoiler: Shego apparently retired from villainy and became a teacher for real. Kim and Ron's daughter Jenny is in her class.]]
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* [[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her and Ron's daughter Jenny joins them her and Ron on their bed.]]
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* ImAHumanitarian: After the Lorwardians behead 15 teenage girls each year, they feast on their headless bodies.
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* WouldHurtAChild: After they taken Kim to be tortured, stripped and beheaded, the Lorwardians begin an annual tribute which 15 teenage girls are taken to be executed the same way. WordOfGod says the girls' severed heads were given to Lorwardia's elites as [[HumanHeadOnTheWall trophies]], and [[IAmAHumanitarian develop a taste for human flesh]]. And this has been going on for 20 years before the start of the fic.
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* WouldHurtAChild: After they taken Kim to be tortured, stripped and beheaded, the Lorwardians begin an annual tribute which 15 teenage girls are taken to be executed the same way. WordOfGod says the girls' severed heads were given to Lorwardia's elites as [[HumanHeadOnTheWall trophies]], trophies, and [[IAmAHumanitarian develop a taste for human flesh]].flesh. And this has been going on for 20 years before the start of the fic.
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* PublicExecution: The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls. [[spoiler: And Ron, who becomes the last human.]]
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* PublicExecution: The fate of Kim, Shego, and the teenage girls. [[spoiler: And Ron, who becomes the Lorwardians' last human.human to execute.]]
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Jessica and Liz forgotten about Ron, and Dumpable.
* AdultFear: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
* AdultFear: Parents having to deal with their daughters being kidnapped and taken to Lorwardia to be executed, and being forced to watch them. Former cheerleader Liz mentioned that's what happened to her niece.
* ChildhoodMemoryDemolitionTeam: The Lorwardians apparently chopped down the tree near pre-K where Kim and Ron first meet.
-->'''Ron:''' It's all gone now. She's gone, soon I'll be gone too. Nothing that we stood for will be left. Maybe that's for the best...it was too good to be true.
-->'''Ron:''' It's all gone now. She's gone, soon I'll be gone too. Nothing that we stood for will be left. Maybe that's for the best...it was too good to be true.
* HeelFaceTurn: Drakken and Dementor. Especially for Drakken, when Shego was executed by the Lorwardians.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Former cheerleaders Jessica and Liz's last names are Simmons and Bancock, respectively. After being married, they're now Mrs. Roland and Mrs. Whelply.
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* TheQuisling: The humans willingly working for the Lorwardians. They kidnap teenage girls, rape them, and ship them to Lorwardia.
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* TheQuisling: The humans willingly working for the Lorwardians.Lorwardians, especially former bullies Vinnie and Junior. They kidnap teenage girls, rape them, and ship them to Lorwardia.
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* CallBack: [[spoiler: Shego apparently retired from villainy and became a teacher for real. Jenny is in her class.]]
* [[spoiler:HonoraryUncle: Monique and Tara are like "aunts" to Jenny, likewise Josh is an "uncle" to her. While they weren't acknowledged at the end of the fic, Felix, Bonnie, and Brick could be this to Jenny too.]]
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* [[spoiler:DecapitationPresentation: Warmonga holds up Ron's severed head.]]
-->'''Warmonga:''' [[spoiler: Make no mistake! All enemies of the Empire will come to this end if they do not end their foolish attempts to distrupt the Lowardian way of life...]]
* [[spoiler:EarthShatteringKaboom: What happens to Lorwardia, at the end of Kim's dream.]]
* [[spoiler:FaceDeathWithDignity: Ron.]]
* [[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her and Ron's daughter Jenny joins them on their bed.]]
* [[spoiler:GoOutWithASmile: Ron.]]
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Ron cut off Warhok's balls.]]
-->'''Ron:''' [[spoiler: Looks like you won't be ''entertaining'' human girls, anymore...right ''capon''?]]
-->'''Warmonga:''' [[spoiler: Make no mistake! All enemies of the Empire will come to this end if they do not end their foolish attempts to distrupt the Lowardian way of life...]]
* [[spoiler:EarthShatteringKaboom: What happens to Lorwardia, at the end of Kim's dream.]]
* [[spoiler:FaceDeathWithDignity: Ron.]]
* [[spoiler:FrightInducedBunkmate: After Kim wakes up from her nightmare, her and Ron's daughter Jenny joins them on their bed.]]
* [[spoiler:GoOutWithASmile: Ron.]]
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Ron cut off Warhok's balls.]]
-->'''Ron:''' [[spoiler: Looks like you won't be ''entertaining'' human girls, anymore...right ''capon''?]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler: Brick Flagg]]
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* HumanHeadOnTheWall: Warmonga shows Ron the severed head of Kim that's mounted on the wall. She taunts Ron further by patting Kim's head in front of him. They also mount the heads of the 15 girls taken to Lorwardia every year.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12763003/1/Dead-Man-Switch Dead Man Switch]]'' by [=Sentinel103=] is a ''WesternAnimation/KimPossible'' fanfic. It's been 20 years since the Lorwardian invasion, Ron is about to have his vengeance.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: It's all been Kim's nightmare.]]
* [[spoiler:HappilyMarried: In reality, Kim and Ron are married, and have a daughter named Jenny.]]
* LotteryOfDoom: Something called a "Dragon's Lottery" was used to chose 15 teenage girls to be taken to Lorwardia to be beheaded, as part of their annual tribute to the [[TheEmpire Lorwardian Empire]].
* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
* PublicExecution
* {{Revenge}}: Ron is going to avenge the death of Kim.
* WouldHitAGirl: After the Lorwardians beheaded Kim, they threaten Earth to send 15 teenage girls to their homeworld every year to be beheaded as well, as a "tribute" to them. Near the end, after beheading the latest batch, the Lorwardians consider adding more girls next time.
* WouldHurtAChild: After they taken Kim to be tortured, stripped and beheaded, the Lorwardians begin an annual tribute which 15 teenage girls are taken to be executed the same way. WordOfGod says the girls' severed heads were given to Lorwardia's elites as [[HumanHeadOnTheWall trophies]], and [[IAmAHumanitarian develop a taste for human flesh]]. And this has been going on for 20 years before the start of the fic.
* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Tim blames Ron for Kim's death. Ron doesn't exactly argue against him.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* [[spoiler:AllJustADream: It's all been Kim's nightmare.]]
* [[spoiler:HappilyMarried: In reality, Kim and Ron are married, and have a daughter named Jenny.]]
* LotteryOfDoom: Something called a "Dragon's Lottery" was used to chose 15 teenage girls to be taken to Lorwardia to be beheaded, as part of their annual tribute to the [[TheEmpire Lorwardian Empire]].
* OffWithHerHead: [[spoiler: In the end, Ron Stoppable gets beheaded in Lorwardia, which sets off a weapon to destroy the Lorwardian Star System]] as revenge for beheading Kim and forcing Earth to send them 15 teenage girls each year to be beheaded as a "tribute".
* PublicExecution
* {{Revenge}}: Ron is going to avenge the death of Kim.
* WouldHitAGirl: After the Lorwardians beheaded Kim, they threaten Earth to send 15 teenage girls to their homeworld every year to be beheaded as well, as a "tribute" to them. Near the end, after beheading the latest batch, the Lorwardians consider adding more girls next time.
* WouldHurtAChild: After they taken Kim to be tortured, stripped and beheaded, the Lorwardians begin an annual tribute which 15 teenage girls are taken to be executed the same way. WordOfGod says the girls' severed heads were given to Lorwardia's elites as [[HumanHeadOnTheWall trophies]], and [[IAmAHumanitarian develop a taste for human flesh]]. And this has been going on for 20 years before the start of the fic.
* YouShouldHaveDiedInstead: Tim blames Ron for Kim's death. Ron doesn't exactly argue against him.
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