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[[FanFic/CoruscantNoir Coruscant Noir]] is a trilogy of FanFiction stories set in the ''Franchise/StarWars'' universe about ten years prior to the events of ''Film/ThePhantomMenace''. It's a DetectiveDrama centred around former cop turned PrivateDetective Jali Dawler and his dealings with a [[TheSyndicate criminal organisation]] called the Silver Ring.
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''Coruscant Noir'' is a trilogy of FanFiction stories set in the ''Franchise/StarWars'' universe about ten years prior to the events of ''Film/ThePhantomMenace''. It's a DetectiveDrama centred around former cop turned PrivateDetective Jali Dawler and his dealings with a [[TheSyndicate criminal organisation]] called the Silver Ring.
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The third story, set to be titled ''The Silver Ring'' has yet to be completed but is said to be the final part with no further stories about the characters.
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* ActionGirl: Antiene Laras, but she is a Jedi.
* ArchEnemy: Nuada Vekstar to Jali. A ClassicVillain with an EyelessFace (though he is a Miraluka). However, in ''The White Twi'lek'' it's implied that he's just TheDragon and the [[HiddenVillain real villain]] is someone named [[OnlyKnownByTheirNickname Aurek]].
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* DropDeadGorgeous: Nami Kotour
* FairPlayWhodunnit
* FemmeFatale: Jali's girlfriend Tira Sengel and to some extent Kura.
* FriendOnTheForce: Tollan, until he dies.
* GasChamber: Tollan Antilles is sealed in inside a tank filled with carbon dioxide by [[spoiler:Tira]] and dies of asphixiation.
* HoneyTrap
* KnowledgeBroker: Balor Gidderra but Guren is a more reliable one.
* FairPlayWhodunnit
* FemmeFatale: Jali's girlfriend Tira Sengel and to some extent Kura.
* FriendOnTheForce: Tollan, until he dies.
* GasChamber: Tollan Antilles is sealed in inside a tank filled with carbon dioxide by [[spoiler:Tira]] and dies of asphixiation.
* HoneyTrap
* KnowledgeBroker: Balor Gidderra but Guren is a more reliable one.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: This is what happens to [[spoiler:Tollan Antilles]].
* TheMistress: Nami Kotour.
* MysteriousInformant
* PrivateDetective: Jali Dawler, and to some extent his assistant Xhen Rinner.
* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[Creator/DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon1941 Blackbirds]].
* TheMistress: Nami Kotour.
* MysteriousInformant
* PrivateDetective: Jali Dawler, and to some extent his assistant Xhen Rinner.
* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[Creator/DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon1941 Blackbirds]].
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* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[Creator/DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon Blackbirds]].
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* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[Creator/DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon1941 Blackbirds]].
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[[FanFic/CoruscantNoir Coruscant Noir]] is a trilogy of FanFiction stories set in the ''StarWars'' universe about ten years prior to the events of ''ThePhantomMenace''. It's a DetectiveDrama centred around former cop turned PrivateDetective Jali Dawler and his dealings with a [[TheSyndicate criminal organisation]] called the Silver Ring.
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[[FanFic/CoruscantNoir Coruscant Noir]] is a trilogy of FanFiction stories set in the ''StarWars'' ''Franchise/StarWars'' universe about ten years prior to the events of ''ThePhantomMenace''.''Film/ThePhantomMenace''. It's a DetectiveDrama centred around former cop turned PrivateDetective Jali Dawler and his dealings with a [[TheSyndicate criminal organisation]] called the Silver Ring.
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Cop Boyfriend is now Sleuth Dates Cop. Bad examples and ZCE are being removed; if you disagree, please feel free to readd them with proper context.
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* [[CopBoyfriend Cop Girlfriend]]: Pallavi Dashiell.
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* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon Blackbirds]].
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* ShoutOut: Quite a number to the genre, [[DashiellHammett [[Creator/DashiellHammett Pallavi ''Dashiel'']], the restaurant [[Film/TheMalteseFalcon Blackbirds]].
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* ActionGirl: Antiene Laras, but she is a Jedi. This also makes her a HotChickWithASword.
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* ActionGirl: Antiene Laras, but she is a Jedi. This also makes her a HotChickWithASword.
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The sequel, ''The White Twi'lek'' is around five years later and Jali is now a provate detective. A woman comes to Jali's office to ask him to locate her husband. Jali and his new associate find the husband, dead.
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The sequel, ''The White Twi'lek'' is around five years later and Jali is now a provate private detective. A woman comes to Jali's office to ask him to locate her husband. Jali and his new associate find the husband, dead.
