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* ADayInTheLimeLight: While Kaede is the protagonist for the majority of the story, other members of the cast get their own spotlight during the 'Encore Epilogues' that separate the various arcs of the story. Additionally, during the instances of exploring the academy with the mysterious objects, if Kaede isn't with the group, the point-of-view changes to someone else, for instance Kaito, when he was exploring the third floor with Ryoma and Maki in chapter 3.
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* AdaptationalProtagonist: ''An Encore from my Crying Heart'' is a fanfic based on VisualNovel/DanganronpaV3KillingHarmony that averts the FirstEpisodeTwist of DecoyProtagonist Kaede Akamatsu being killed as the first culprit. This is due to Shuichi Saihara, the canonical true protagonist, taking advantage of the First Blood rule which allows the first culprit to leave without consequences. He claims to have killed Rantaro, wanting to save Kaede from being executed. This action causes Shuichi to leave the DeadlyGame alive while allowing Kaede to remain as the protagonist for the entire story.
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* ADayInTheLimeLight: While Kaede is the protagonist for the majority of the story, other members of the cast get their own spotlight during the 'Encore Epilogues' that separate the various arcs of the story. Additionally, during the instances of exploring the academy with the mysterious objects, if Kaede isn't with the group, the point-of-view changes to someone else, for instance Kaito, when he was exploring the third floor with Ryoma and Maki in chapter 3.
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* CryCute:
** Kaede, in chapter 1 after Shuichi 'graduates'.
** Kaede again in chapter 3 outside [[LoveHotel Hotel Kumasutra]].
** Both Kaede and [[spoiler:Himiko]] in chapter 11 during [[spoiler:the execution of Tenko]].
** [[spoiler:Himiko again]], in chapter 22 after [[spoiler:the execution of Angie]].
** Kaede, in chapter 1 after Shuichi 'graduates'.
** Kaede again in chapter 3 outside [[LoveHotel Hotel Kumasutra]].
** Both Kaede and [[spoiler:Himiko]] in chapter 11 during [[spoiler:the execution of Tenko]].
** [[spoiler:Himiko again]], in chapter 22 after [[spoiler:the execution of Angie]].
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** For Chapter 4, along with the virtual world and Flashback Light motive, we also got the return of [[spoiler:the NG Codes from Danganronpa 3]].
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** For Chapter 4, IV, along with the virtual world and Flashback Light motive, we also got the return of [[spoiler:the NG Codes from Danganronpa 3]].
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* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler:In Chapter 4, Korekiyo and Ryoma had one because the former was going to die no matter what due to his NG Code and the latter was planning a murder with Rantaro.]]
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* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler:In Chapter 4, IV, Korekiyo and Ryoma had one because the former was going to die no matter what due to his NG Code and the latter was planning a murder with Rantaro.]]
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** For Chapter 4, along with the virtual world and Flashback Light motive, we also got the return of [[spoiler:the NG Codes from Danganronpa 3]].
* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler:In Chapter 4, Korekiyo and Ryoma had one because the former was going to die no matter what due to his NG Code and the latter was planning a murder with Rantaro.]]
** In chapter 33, we learn that [[spoiler:Korekiyo took Rantaro's place as the potential victim for Ryoma because the former knew he was going to die no matter what due to his NG Code.]]
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15. Also, [[spoiler: the reveal that the mastermind murdered Kirumi, and set Angie up to be executed so that the killing game can continue]].
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15. Also, [[spoiler: the reveal that the mastermind murdered Kirumi, and set Angie up to be executed so that the killing game can continue]].continue]].
** Chapter IV: At the end of chapter 28, [[spoiler:Kaede found out that the NG Code of a dead Korekiyo is that he will die unless he kills someone before leaving the Neo World Program]]. And at the end of chapter 33, [[spoiler:Kokichi calls Himiko the "traitor"]].
** Chapter IV: At the end of chapter 28, [[spoiler:Kaede found out that the NG Code of a dead Korekiyo is that he will die unless he kills someone before leaving the Neo World Program]]. And at the end of chapter 33, [[spoiler:Kokichi calls Himiko the "traitor"]].
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* TheConfidant: In Chapter 2's arc, Kaede end up becoming this for Miu. Later on, Miu also became this for Kaede.
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* TheConfidant: In Chapter 2's arc, Kaede end up becoming this for Miu. Later on, Miu also became this for Kaede.
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* WhamLine: From [[spoiler:Kokichi]] after the fourth class trial.
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* WhamLine: From [[spoiler:Kokichi]] Kokichi after the fourth class trial.
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* WhamLine: From [[spoiler:Kokichi]] after the fourth class trial.
-->'''Kokichi''': [[spoiler:Alrighty then! Have a good night, Himiko! Or should I say... '''''traitor''''']].
-->'''Kokichi''': [[spoiler:Alrighty then! Have a good night, Himiko! Or should I say... '''''traitor''''']].
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter III, [[spoiler:Angie tries to stop a key from working via covering it in paint, so that the layer of paint would change the key’s shape]]. The author outright states that she got the idea from a puzzle in VisualNovel/YourTurnToDie.
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* ArgumentofContradictions: Himiko and Kokichi have the following one in chapter 3:
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* ArgumentofContradictions: ArgumentOfContradictions: Himiko and Kokichi have the following one in chapter 3:
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* '''Chapter IV: (title to be decided)''' (24-33)
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* '''Chapter IV: (title to be decided)''' The Inmates' Ensemble''' (24-33)
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* HeroicBSOD: Kaede has one of these after the events of chapter 1, and just as it starts to dissipate, [[spoiler:Tenko's death]] pulls her back down into another.
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* HeroicBSOD: Kaede has one of these after the events of chapter 1, and just as it starts to dissipate, [[spoiler:Tenko's death]] pulls her back down into another. Happens again after [[spoiler:Rantaro returns in chapter 15]].
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* CatapultNightmare: Kaede does this at the start of chapter 2, and again in chapter 7.
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Every Chapter, including the title contains a Musical Reference:
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* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Every Chapter, Chapter of the fic, including the title contains a Musical Reference:
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** Chapter I: Shuichi taking the First Blood Perk and legitimately graduating [[spoiler:but not before getting shot]].
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** Chapter I: Shuichi taking the First Blood Perk and legitimately graduating [[spoiler:but not before getting shot]].shot by an exisal]].
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Korekiyo; he [[spoiler: admits to being a serial killer in chapter 14, but despite initially considering some of the girls as 'candidates' for his sister, he ultimately decides against it, saying he'll have plenty of chances to continue his murder spree when they're on the outside and will help everyone escape in the meantime]].
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** In chapter 18, when [[spoiler: they discover Kirumi's body,]] it's lying in the center of the [[spoiler: art room, again just like Angie's corpse was]].
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** In chapter 18, [[spoiler:Angie]] says that she wants to [[spoiler:pray for Kiibo, as she feels like he'd have done the same for her. In the canon Chapter III, he did indeed pray for her when her body was found]].
** Also in chapter 18, when [[spoiler: they discover Kirumi's body,]] it's lying in the center of the [[spoiler: art room, again just like Angie's corpse was]].
** Also in chapter 18, when [[spoiler: they discover Kirumi's body,]] it's lying in the center of the [[spoiler: art room, again just like Angie's corpse was]].
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* BadBadActing: Miu in chapter 5, whilst trying to maintain her composure while talking to Kirumi.
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** In chapter 4, Kaito says to Kaede that he'd never go as far as to kill Kokichi whilst looking at the red exisal. In the canon fifth chapter, Kaito not only kills Kokichi, but hides inside the red exisal for the majority of the class trial.
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** In chapter 4, Kaito says to Kaede that he'd never go as far as to kill Kokichi whilst while looking at the red exisal. In the canon fifth chapter, Kaito not only kills Kokichi, but hides inside the red exisal for the majority of the class trial.
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* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler: Shuichi does exactly this near the end of the first chapter]].
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** In chapter 11, [[spoiler:Tenko]]'s execution mirrors the [[spoiler: second game's second execution, where Himiko is forced into the execution, much like Fuyuhiko was in Peko's]].
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** In chapter 11, [[spoiler:Tenko]]'s execution mirrors the [[spoiler: second game's second execution, where Himiko is forced into reaches out to Tenko in the execution, much like Fuyuhiko was does in Peko's]].
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15. Also, [[spoiler: the reveal that the mastermind murdered Kirumi, and set Angie up to be executed for it]].
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15. Also, [[spoiler: the reveal that the mastermind murdered Kirumi, and set Angie up to be executed for it]].so that the killing game can continue]].
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15.
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** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene]] at the very end of chapter 15. Also, [[spoiler: the reveal that the mastermind murdered Kirumi, and set Angie up to be executed for it]].
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** Chapter II: [[spoiler:Tenko, who the author sets up to be one of Kaede's [[Sidekick closest friends]] ends up getting killed off after just 11 chapters]]. Also, [[spoiler:Korekiyo's SerialKiller reveal]] at the very end of chapter 11.
** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene in Chapter 3]].
** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead scene in Chapter 3]].
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** Chapter II: [[spoiler:Tenko, who the author sets up to be one of Kaede's [[Sidekick closest friends]] sidekicks/closest friends ends up getting killed off after just 11 chapters]]. Also, [[spoiler:Korekiyo's SerialKiller reveal]] at the very end of chapter 11.
** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDeadscene in Chapter 3]].scene]] at the very end of chapter 15.
** Chapter III: [[spoiler:Rantaro's BackFromTheDead
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** Chapter II: [[spoiler:Tenko, who the author sets up to be one of Kaede's [[Sidekick closest friends ends up getting killed off after just 11 chapters]]. Also, [[spoiler:Korekiyo's SerialKiller reveal]] at the very end of chapter 11.
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** Chapter II: [[spoiler:Tenko, who the author sets up to be one of Kaede's [[Sidekick closest friends friends]] ends up getting killed off after just 11 chapters]]. Also, [[spoiler:Korekiyo's SerialKiller reveal]] at the very end of chapter 11.
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** Miu and Kaede have loads of scenes together, as do Kaede and Kaito, and Kaede and Tenko.
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* OddFriendship: [[BigGuyLittleGuyGonta and Ryoma]], in this fic's case. Also Korekiyo and Angie, to an extent.
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* OddFriendship: [[BigGuyLittleGuyGonta [[BigGuyLittleGuy Gonta and Ryoma]], in this fic's case. Also Korekiyo and Angie, to an extent.
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** In chapter 14, Kaede, Ryoma, Korekiyo, and Maki have a conversation in the Ultimate Prisoner's lab. Ryoma mentions how similar he and Korekiyo are, as they both [[spoiler:became serial killers for the women they loved]]
** Chapter 23 highlights how similar [[spoiler:Korekiyo and Angie]] actually are. Both [[spoiler:obey the voices in their heads, and consider said voice to be above them in terms of importance]].
* OddFriendship: [[BigGuyLittleGuyGonta and Ryoma]], in this fic's case.
** Chapter 23 highlights how similar [[spoiler:Korekiyo and Angie]] actually are. Both [[spoiler:obey the voices in their heads, and consider said voice to be above them in terms of importance]].
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** In chapter 14, Kaede, Ryoma, Korekiyo, and Maki have a conversation in the Ultimate Prisoner's lab. Ryoma mentions how similar he and Korekiyo are, as they both [[spoiler:became became serial killers for the women they loved]]
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** Chapter 23 highlights how similar[[spoiler:Korekiyo Korekiyo and Angie]] Angie actually are. Both [[spoiler:obey obey the voices in their heads, and consider said voice to be above them in terms of importance]].
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* OddFriendship: [[BigGuyLittleGuyGonta and Ryoma]], in this fic's case. Also Korekiyo and Angie, to an extent.
** Chapter 23 highlights how similar
* OddFriendship: [[BigGuyLittleGuyGonta and Ryoma]], in this fic's case. Also Korekiyo and Angie, to an extent.
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** In chapter 2, Miu accuses Tsumugi of being the mastermind, based solely on the fact that she wears glasses.
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** In chapter 2, Miu accuses Tsumugi of being the mastermind, based solely on the fact that she wears glasses. This is quickly shut down when Kokichi points out that Gonta also wears glasses.
-->'''Miu''': "Tch, I dunno about a traitor. But I'm pretty fuckin' sure the mastermind's Tsumugi!"
-->'''Tsumugi''': "W-what!? Why am I suddenly being accused of being the mastermind?"
-->'''Miu''': "It's pretty fuckin' obvious when you think about it. All the big bosses on TV and shit wear glasses! Which makes you, four-eyes, automatically suspicious!"
-->'''Kiibo''': "Please wait, Miu, your logic does not make any sense whatsoever!"
-->'''Kokichi''': "Kii-boy's right for once! If that was the case, wouldn't Gonta be as equally suspicious?"
-->'''Gonta''': *jumping out of his chair* "Wh-what!? Gonta can assure you that he not mastermind! Gentlemen NEVER make killing games!"
-->'''Miu''': "Tch, I dunno about a traitor. But I'm pretty fuckin' sure the mastermind's Tsumugi!"
-->'''Tsumugi''': "W-what!? Why am I suddenly being accused of being the mastermind?"
-->'''Miu''': "It's pretty fuckin' obvious when you think about it. All the big bosses on TV and shit wear glasses! Which makes you, four-eyes, automatically suspicious!"
-->'''Kiibo''': "Please wait, Miu, your logic does not make any sense whatsoever!"
-->'''Kokichi''': "Kii-boy's right for once! If that was the case, wouldn't Gonta be as equally suspicious?"
-->'''Gonta''': *jumping out of his chair* "Wh-what!? Gonta can assure you that he not mastermind! Gentlemen NEVER make killing games!"
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** In chapter 23, Korekiyo briefly [[spoiler:tries to 'send' Angie to his Sister]] Angie says that she knows Korekiyo would never do that to her, despite that literally being the case in the canon timeline. [[spoiler:Her insistence and unwavering smile unnerves Korekiyo to the point that he stops choking her]].
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** In chapter 23, Korekiyo briefly [[spoiler:tries to 'send' Angie to his Sister]] Sister]]. Angie says that she knows Korekiyo would never do that to her, despite that literally being the case in the canon timeline. [[spoiler:Her insistence and unwavering smile unnerves Korekiyo to the point that he stops choking her]].
