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* BrickJoke: That book of Twilight's the Doctor accidentally teleported into the sun.
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** And a MythologyGag when Zeitgeist Stardust first hears the Tardis: 'It's kind of like ... scraping one's front door keys on piano wire ... '
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* [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotSymbolic What Do You Mean, It's Not Symbolic?]]: [[spoiler: Parental sacrifice of the most goodhearted of a damned species, that is to say, Hydia's slaying of Draggle, brings forth resurrection for both the world at hand and the sacrificed child. This is in fact a hard subversion of the [[TheMessiah messianic]] trope, as Hydia had evil intentions and resurrection was not at all part of the plan.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Zecora. [[UnexplainedRecovery She gets better]].]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Zecora. [[UnexplainedRecovery [[BackFromTheDead She gets better]].]]
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* PsychicNosebleed: Twilight [[spoiler: while defeating the S’Müz]].
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* EurekaMoment: In the penultimate chapter, both the Doctor and Twilight (albeit at separate times) realize how to defeat the S'Müz (using the Sonic Screwdriver to reverse the polarity of the Elements of Harmony). With the Doctor, it's when Rainbow mentions how life is being ''pulled'' out of everything around them. For Twilight, it's when the same pony mentions how the current situation ''sucks''.
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** See SummoningArtifact.
** A ''bizarre'' one in the penultimate chapter, when Twilight is working out how to defeat the S'Müz, one of her thought processes is... ''[[spoiler: [[InsaneClownPosse "F***in’ magnets/how do they work?"]]]]''
** A ''bizarre'' one in the penultimate chapter, when Twilight is working out how to defeat the S'Müz, one of her thought processes is... ''[[spoiler: [[InsaneClownPosse "F***in’ magnets/how do they work?"]]]]''
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* HopeSpot: The Doctor [[EurekaMoment suddenly realizes]] how to defeat the S'Müz! All they need to do is-[[spoiler: and down goes the Doctor]].
** To elaborate, in mid-sentence, [[spoiler: the S'Müz impales the Doctor with a tentacle, and kills him]].
** To elaborate, in mid-sentence, [[spoiler: the S'Müz impales the Doctor with a tentacle, and kills him]].
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Thanks to the Elements of Harmony destroying the S'Müz, the ponies that were killed through out the story get resurrected, including Zecora and ''the Doctor''.]]
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: When explaining her plan to defeat The S'Muz, Twilight uses the Doctor's trademark of speaking at rapid-fire, and tops the speech with "Allons-y!" It helps that at this point, [[spoiler: the Doctor is temporarily dead.]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: Zeitgeist Stardust, introduced in this story as just a potentially big client for Rarity, would go on to play a central role in ''FanFic/MinesOfDragonMountain''.
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[[caption-width-right:117: Regeneration can sometimes be a... dodgy process]]
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* TheOphelia: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Rarity. When her friends show up out of nowhere in a strange blue box with an even stranger stallion to drag her away from the business proposition of a lifetime because Equestria is in terrible danger, her first reaction is to assume that she's simply going insane.
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* [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld Really Nine Hundred And Five...ish Years Old]]: The Doctor naturally, much to Twilight's [[FlatWhat surprise]].
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* SequelHook[=/=]AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After the S’Müz is vanquished and everything's back to something approaching normal, the Doctor offers to take the girls on further adventures in the TARDIS... which they gladly accept once they realize the implications of having access to a time machine.]]
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* SequelHook[=/=]AndTheAdventureContinues: [[spoiler: After the S’Müz is vanquished and everything's back to something approaching normal, the Doctor offers to take the girls on further adventures in the TARDIS... which they gladly accept once they realize the implications of having access to a time machine.]] ]]
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--> "I'm The Doctor, and these *MLP (''MLP Mane Cast...[[AndZoidberg and Zecora]]* Zecora]]'') Are my friends. And we are going to stop you. Understood?"
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Hydia is the first victim of The S’Müz. [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel And it's horrible.]] Also, [[spoiler: the S’Müz is defeated when the ponies use their Elements of Harmony to absorb both the PKE it stole and the PKE that makes up its body and disperse it into Equestria.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Hydia is the first victim of The S’Müz. [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel And it's horrible.]] Also, [[spoiler: the S’Müz is defeated when the ponies use their Elements of Harmony to absorb both the PKE it stole and the PKE that makes up its body and disperse it into Equestria.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel horrific one]] to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes The Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel horrific one]] one to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes The Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
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* ArcWords: ''Méchant Loup'' [[spoiler: {{GratuitousFrench French}} for Bad Wolf]].
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*** Not to mention a smaller one when learning (through here or the fan fic itself) that [[spoiler: the S’Müz is in simpliest terms a [[EldritchAbomination Cthulu-Smooze]].]]
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* TheOphelia: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Rarity. When her friends show up out of nowhere in a strange blue box with an even stranger stallion to drag her away from the business proposition of a lifetime because Equestria is in terrible danger, her first reaction is to assume that she's simply going insane.
--> "I always thought losing my mind would be a little more... dramatic."
* TheOphelia: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] by Rarity. When her friends show up out of nowhere in a strange blue box with an even stranger stallion to drag her away from the business proposition of a lifetime because Equestria is in terrible danger, her first reaction is to assume that she's simply going insane.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Twilight gives a [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel horrific one]] to [[spoiler: Draggle]], ignoring her frantic pleas to stop. It takes The Doctor's intervention to keep Twilight from killing her.
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*** Draggle frantically pleads with Twilight to stop [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown pummeling her to near death]]. When The Doctor steps in and saves her, Twilight is ''horrified'' at [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone what she almost did.]]
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* ContinuityNod: When the Doctor wakes up in chapter two, he comments that his situation (he tastes embalming fluid, he's in a random, unknown hospital, and has no idea where he is) is just like his eighth regeneration. When he regenerated into his eighth form, he had just died from a botched operation to save his life and was presumed dead, and was placed in the hospital Morgue.
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*** The Hervoken are an even more obscure reference. They and their war with the Carrionites originate in the Tenth Doctor novel ''Forever Autumn''.
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* HumansAreUgly / IWasQuiteALooker: While not technically human, The Doctor insists he was fairly good-looking as [[CallAHumanAMeatbag a bald ape]].
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* ReversePolarity: Name-dropped, [[ContinuityNod natch]]. [[spoiler:Later used to destroy the LifeEnergy-gobbling S’Müz by pulling the energy ''back out'' through the Elements of Harmony]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Each of the Mane 6, [[spoiler:after The Doctor steps in on Twilight's PunctuatedPounding on Draggle]]. He doesn't want any of them [[BeAllMySinsRemembered to become like him]].
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Draggle is about a century old, but is practically a newborn by Carrionite standards. [[spoiler: This is only relevant when she is transformed into a unicorn foal after having her body and mind destroyed by The S’Müz possessing her.]]
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-->'''The Doctor:''' "Not magic instead of technology, but magic ''as'' technology. [[CatchPhrase Brilliant!]]"
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** Anyone else get a [[{{Cracked}} Popsicle Pete]] vibe from the S’Müz? Murderous? Check. Madness inducingly hideous? Check. Red text denoting a dissonant Eldritch voice? Double check!
*** WordOfGod states that this incarnation of the S’Müz is based off [[MassEffect Sovereign]]. Compare the speech pattern of the S’Müz to Sovereign [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvrIFIjTGt0 here]].
*** WordOfGod states that this incarnation of the S’Müz is based off [[MassEffect Sovereign]]. Compare the speech pattern of the S’Müz to Sovereign [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JvrIFIjTGt0 here]].
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** Anyone else get a [[{{Cracked}} Popsicle Pete]] vibe from the S’Müz? Murderous? Check. Madness inducingly hideous? Check. Red text denoting a dissonant Eldritch voice? Double check!
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