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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood1973''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Franchise/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), (''Franchise/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood1973''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Franchise/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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* {{Suburbia}}: Chapter 84, which takes place in the ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'' universe.
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* {{Suburbia}}: Chapter 84, which takes place in the ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'' ''Franchise/ToyStory'' universe.
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood1973''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood1973''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), (''Franchise/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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''[[http://community.livejournal.com/tpbod The Renegades]]'' is a 104-chapter Franchise/KingdomHearts fanfiction written by the users abby_sarajane, chigrima and silvestris, under the alias 'The PlotBunny of Doom'.
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''[[http://community.livejournal.com/tpbod The Renegades]]'' is a 104-chapter Franchise/KingdomHearts fanfiction ''Franchise/KingdomHearts'' fanfic written by the users abby_sarajane, chigrima and silvestris, under the alias 'The PlotBunny of Doom'.
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood''), (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood1973''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').(''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'').
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* SeekingSanctuary: The last chapter takes place in ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
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* SeekingSanctuary: The last chapter takes place in ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' ''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'s'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
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* MistakenIdentity: The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
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* MistakenIdentity: The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
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* SurvivalMantra: Saïx has "I have work to do".
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* SurvivalMantra: Saïx has "I have work to do".
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* MistakenIdentity: The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
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* MistakenIdentity: The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
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* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doing this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losing side.
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* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doing this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re you're technically also part of the losing side.
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* SurvivalMantra: Saïx has "I have work to do".
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* SurvivalMantra: Saïx has "I have work to do".
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-->'''Larxene:''' “Yeah? Don’t think you can call all the shots just because you’re bigger and badder than everyone else! You keep saying how we’re supposed to be a team now, and-... wait, what?”
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-->'''Larxene:''' “Yeah? Don’t "Yeah? Don't think you can call all the shots just because you’re you're bigger and badder than everyone else! You keep saying how we’re we're supposed to be a team now, and-... wait, what?”what?"
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* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doing this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.
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* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doing this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.losing side.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: The camera in the London arc, resolved by the FAQ:
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: WhatHappenedToTheMouse:
** The camera in the London arc, resolved by the FAQ:
** The camera in the London arc, resolved by the FAQ:
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* BerserkButton: Zexion's is tea, of all things.
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Zexion's is tea, of all things.
** Zexion's is tea, of all things.
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* BolivianArmyEnding: [[spoiler:They're found, they're captured, and all we see afterward is an image of their Absent Silhouettes.]]
** [[WordOfGod silvestris]] gave this explaination:
** [[spoiler:"They were all dragged back for some serious questioning and a period of... gentle re-education, each assigned their own keeper to make sure they readjusted in a proper manner...In time for KHII they were 'reinstated into the Organization' on probation and sent into a bunch of worlds with the important mission of 'delaying the Keybearer while we strive to complete Kingdom Hearts' - aka made canon-fodder. If you've played Final Mix, you are familiar with the Absent Silhouettes - this is our interpretation of how they came to be. Not spirits, just semi-imprisoned dishonored Nobodies on a kamikaze mission...As for what happened next of course depends on if you think Sora just killed them all of, or whether they somehow managed to wriggle their way out of dying - again.:) ...Axel got of easier due to that half-hearted trail of clues he left behind, and also because they need him to keep Roxas in line."]]
** [[WordOfGod silvestris]] gave this explaination:
** [[spoiler:"They were all dragged back for some serious questioning and a period of... gentle re-education, each assigned their own keeper to make sure they readjusted in a proper manner...In time for KHII they were 'reinstated into the Organization' on probation and sent into a bunch of worlds with the important mission of 'delaying the Keybearer while we strive to complete Kingdom Hearts' - aka made canon-fodder. If you've played Final Mix, you are familiar with the Absent Silhouettes - this is our interpretation of how they came to be. Not spirits, just semi-imprisoned dishonored Nobodies on a kamikaze mission...As for what happened next of course depends on if you think Sora just killed them all of, or whether they somehow managed to wriggle their way out of dying - again.:) ...Axel got of easier due to that half-hearted trail of clues he left behind, and also because they need him to keep Roxas in line."]]
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* BolivianArmyEnding: [[spoiler:They're found, they're captured, and all we see afterward is an image of their Absent Silhouettes.]]
**]] [[WordOfGod silvestris]] gave this explaination:
**explanation: [[spoiler:"They were all dragged back for some serious questioning and a period of... gentle re-education, each assigned their own keeper to make sure they readjusted in a proper manner...In time for KHII they were 'reinstated into the Organization' on probation and sent into a bunch of worlds with the important mission of 'delaying the Keybearer while we strive to complete Kingdom Hearts' - aka made canon-fodder. If you've played Final Mix, you are familiar with the Absent Silhouettes - this is our interpretation of how they came to be. Not spirits, just semi-imprisoned dishonored Nobodies on a kamikaze mission...As for what happened next of course depends on if you think Sora just killed them all of, or whether they somehow managed to wriggle their way out of dying - again.:) ...Axel got of easier due to that half-hearted trail of clues he left behind, and also because they need him to keep Roxas in line."]]
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* AbortedArc - "The Renagades" is only one of several arcs in the fanfic's canon; it's just the only one written down.
* AnimalMotifs - The Nobodies are given animal-shaped rocks representing each of them by a woman in the ''Brother Bear'' world.
* BedTrick - Larxene does this to a drunk [[spoiler: Lexaeus by claiming to be a disguised Zexion]].
* BerserkButton - Zexion's is tea, of all things.
* AnimalMotifs - The Nobodies are given animal-shaped rocks representing each of them by a woman in the ''Brother Bear'' world.
* BedTrick - Larxene does this to a drunk [[spoiler: Lexaeus by claiming to be a disguised Zexion]].
* BerserkButton - Zexion's is tea, of all things.
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* AbortedArc - AbortedArc: "The Renagades" is only one of several arcs in the fanfic's canon; it's just the only one written down.
*AnimalMotifs - AnimalMotifs: The Nobodies are given animal-shaped rocks representing each of them by a woman in the ''Brother Bear'' world.
*BedTrick - BedTrick: Larxene does this to a drunk [[spoiler: Lexaeus by claiming to be a disguised Zexion]].
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* BigApplesauce
* BitterAlmonds - Zexion convinced the druggist to sell Larxene almond oil and assure her that it's cyanide. The morning after the group is kicked out of the hotel, the other hotel guests enjoy porridge with a pleasant almond aftertaste.
* [[spoiler:BolivianArmyEnding - They're found, they're captured, and all we see afterward is an image of their Absent Silhouettes.]]
* BitterAlmonds - Zexion convinced the druggist to sell Larxene almond oil and assure her that it's cyanide. The morning after the group is kicked out of the hotel, the other hotel guests enjoy porridge with a pleasant almond aftertaste.
* [[spoiler:BolivianArmyEnding - They're found, they're captured, and all we see afterward is an image of their Absent Silhouettes.]]
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* ButtMonkey - Marluxia, early on, but that changes throughout the fic.
* CannotSpitItOut - Vexen and Marluxia have this kind of relationship.
* CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem - Vexen's behavior toward Marluxia.
* CharacterDevelopment - Marluxia, in particular, has grown to be much, much less of a JerkAss than how he was in the beginning.
* CodeName - In London, the Nobodies use the names [[MeaningfulName Mr. Read, Mr. Stone, Mr. Frost, Mr. Bracken, Mr. Fox and Miss Kink]].
* DisguisedInDrag - Vexen, oh, Vexen...
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything - Several of the Nobodies spend a chapter using tea sets as a metaphor for sex.
* CannotSpitItOut - Vexen and Marluxia have this kind of relationship.
* CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem - Vexen's behavior toward Marluxia.
* CharacterDevelopment - Marluxia, in particular, has grown to be much, much less of a JerkAss than how he was in the beginning.
* CodeName - In London, the Nobodies use the names [[MeaningfulName Mr. Read, Mr. Stone, Mr. Frost, Mr. Bracken, Mr. Fox and Miss Kink]].
* DisguisedInDrag - Vexen, oh, Vexen...
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything - Several of the Nobodies spend a chapter using tea sets as a metaphor for sex.
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* ButtMonkey - ButtMonkey: Marluxia, early on, but that changes throughout the fic.
*CannotSpitItOut - CannotSpitItOut: Vexen and Marluxia have this kind of relationship.
*CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem - CantStandThemCantLiveWithoutThem: Vexen's behavior toward Marluxia.
*CharacterDevelopment - CharacterDevelopment: Marluxia, in particular, has grown to be much, much less of a JerkAss than how he was in the beginning.
*CodeName - CodeName: In London, the Nobodies use the names [[MeaningfulName Mr. Read, Mr. Stone, Mr. Frost, Mr. Bracken, Mr. Fox and Miss Kink]].
*DisguisedInDrag - DisguisedInDrag: Vexen, oh, Vexen...
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* DoubleAgent - [[spoiler: Axel, half-heartedly]]
* DrowningMySorrows - Multiple times by Marluxia, Vexen, and in the later chapters, everyone.
* ExternalRetcon - Or at least it is by the end, when Axel rejoins the Organization (on probation).
* FauxAffablyEvil - Done in a very creepy way with Xemnas.
* DrowningMySorrows - Multiple times by Marluxia, Vexen, and in the later chapters, everyone.
* ExternalRetcon - Or at least it is by the end, when Axel rejoins the Organization (on probation).
* FauxAffablyEvil - Done in a very creepy way with Xemnas.
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* DoubleAgent - DoubleAgent: [[spoiler: Axel, half-heartedly]]
*DrowningMySorrows - DrowningMySorrows: Multiple times by Marluxia, Vexen, and in the later chapters, everyone.
*ExternalRetcon - ExternalRetcon: Or at least it is by the end, when Axel rejoins the Organization (on probation).
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* ICanExplain - During the London arc, [[spoiler: Lexaeus and Zexion try this with the cleaning lady who catches them having sex.]]
* IntoxicationEnsues - Implied with Xigbar. "I just ate this rad mushroom and now I'm having all these ''brilliant'' ideas!"
* IntoxicationEnsues - Implied with Xigbar. "I just ate this rad mushroom and now I'm having all these ''brilliant'' ideas!"
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* ICanExplain - ICanExplain: During the London arc, [[spoiler: Lexaeus and Zexion try this with the cleaning lady who catches them having sex.]]
*IntoxicationEnsues - IntoxicationEnsues: Implied with Xigbar. "I just ate this rad mushroom and now I'm having all these ''brilliant'' ideas!"
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* ManipulativeBastard - Marluxia tries this early in the fic, but Lexaeus [[RapeAsDrama swiftly puts a stop to that.]]
* MistakenIdentity - The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash - Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MuggingTheMonster - As [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to ''Film/CrocodileDundee'', Vexen ends up in Dundee's role in New York while earlier Larxene was in a similar in London [[spoiler: complete with her comparing her knives to Jack the Ripper's scalpel right before killing him]].
* OminousLatinChanting - Somehow done in ''written'' form.
* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doung this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.
* RoundRobin - The writing style of the Fan Fic.
* SeekingSanctuary - The last chapter takes place in ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
* ShoutOut - To many members of the Franchise/DisneyAnimatedCanon.
* MistakenIdentity - The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
* MoodWhiplash - Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
* MuggingTheMonster - As [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to ''Film/CrocodileDundee'', Vexen ends up in Dundee's role in New York while earlier Larxene was in a similar in London [[spoiler: complete with her comparing her knives to Jack the Ripper's scalpel right before killing him]].
* OminousLatinChanting - Somehow done in ''written'' form.
* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doung this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.
* RoundRobin - The writing style of the Fan Fic.
* SeekingSanctuary - The last chapter takes place in ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
* ShoutOut - To many members of the Franchise/DisneyAnimatedCanon.
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* ManipulativeBastard - ManipulativeBastard: Marluxia tries this early in the fic, but Lexaeus [[RapeAsDrama swiftly puts a stop to that.]]
*MistakenIdentity - MistakenIdentity: The renegades leave [[BigApplesauce New York]] because of mistaking the similar sounding names of Mr. Sykes for Saïx.
*MoodWhiplash - MoodWhiplash: Drastic example of drama to humor and back: [[spoiler:Xaldin's attack on the Nobodies]] leads to their drunken recovery, right before they [[spoiler:meet up with Saïx in the darkness]].
*MuggingTheMonster - MuggingTheMonster: As [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to ''Film/CrocodileDundee'', Vexen ends up in Dundee's role in New York while earlier Larxene was in a similar in London [[spoiler: complete with her comparing her knives to Jack the Ripper's scalpel right before killing him]].
*OminousLatinChanting - OminousLatinChanting: Somehow done in ''written'' form.
* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great ideadoung doing this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.
*RoundRobin - RoundRobin: The writing style of the Fan Fic.
*SeekingSanctuary - SeekingSanctuary: The last chapter takes place in ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
*ShoutOut - ShoutOut: To many members of the Franchise/DisneyAnimatedCanon.
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* ShownTheirWork - All of the worlds travelled to match directly with the Disney film it originated from.
* SternChase - The main plot.
* {{Suburbia}} - Chapter 84, which takes place in the ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'' universe.
* SurvivalMantra - Saïx has "I have work to do".
* SternChase - The main plot.
* {{Suburbia}} - Chapter 84, which takes place in the ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'' universe.
* SurvivalMantra - Saïx has "I have work to do".
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* ShownTheirWork - ShownTheirWork: All of the worlds travelled to match directly with the Disney film it originated from.
*SternChase - SternChase: The main plot.
*{{Suburbia}} - {{Suburbia}}: Chapter 84, which takes place in the ''WesternAnimation/ToyStory'' universe.
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* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Three Lines No Waiting]] - Following a [[LetsSplitUpGang three-way split]] dividing the six between Vexen and Larxene, Lexaeus and Axel, and Zexion and Marluxia, each of the duos gets their own plotline which converge when they meet up again.
* VictorianLondon
* VillainsOutShopping - Quite literally at times.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse - The camera in the London arc, resolved by the FAQ:
* VictorianLondon
* VillainsOutShopping - Quite literally at times.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse - The camera in the London arc, resolved by the FAQ:
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* [[TwoLinesNoWaiting Three Lines No Waiting]] - Waiting]]: Following a [[LetsSplitUpGang three-way split]] dividing the six between Vexen and Larxene, Lexaeus and Axel, and Zexion and Marluxia, each of the duos gets their own plotline which converge when they meet up again.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes - [[spoiler: Zexion]]'s phobia of [[FunnyAnimal anthropomorphic mice]].
* WontTakeYesForAnAnswer - Larxene in Chapter 17.
* WontTakeYesForAnAnswer - Larxene in Chapter 17.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes - WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: [[spoiler: Zexion]]'s phobia of [[FunnyAnimal anthropomorphic mice]].
*WontTakeYesForAnAnswer - WontTakeYesForAnAnswer: Larxene in Chapter 17.
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** Chapter 30 has a shout-out to ''Discworld/{{Jingo}}'' when Beti amuses the local women with stories.
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** Chapter 30 has a shout-out to ''Discworld/{{Jingo}}'' ''Literature/{{Jingo}}'' when Beti amuses the local women with stories.
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* CannotSpitItOut - Vexen and Marluxia have this kind of relationship.
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* CannotSpitItOut - Vexen and Marluxia have TheFriendNobodyLikes: Axel is VERY aware he's this kind of relationship.in the group. Justified considering [[ChronicBackstabbingDisorder what he pulled at Castle Oblivion.]]
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* PlayingBothSides: Deconstructed as Axel comes to the realization that while it ''seems'' like a great idea doung this, no matter who comes out on top, you’re technically also part of the losers.
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), (''WesternAnimation/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), (''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', ''WesternAnimation/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), (''WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), (''WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' (''WesternAnimation/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), (''WesternAnimation/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), (''WesternAnimation/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', (''WesternAnimation/{{Bolt}}'', Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', ''WesternAnimation/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), (''WesternAnimation/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), (''WesternAnimation/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), (''WesternAnimation/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), (''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), (''WesternAnimation/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').(''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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* SeekingSanctuary - The last chapter takes place in ''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame's'' cathedral... [[spoiler: where the remaining members of the Organization capture the Nobodies.]]
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** In New York, other media are referenced as well, to stuff like ''Disney/OliverAndCompany'', ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'', ''WesternAnimation/JemAndTheHolograms'', and ''Franchise/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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** In New York, other media are referenced as well, to stuff like ''Disney/OliverAndCompany'', ''WesternAnimation/OliverAndCompany'', ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'', ''WesternAnimation/JemAndTheHolograms'', and ''Franchise/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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* MuggingTheMonster - As [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to CrocodileDundee, Vexen ends up in Dundee's role in New York while earlier Larxene was in a similar in London [[spoiler: complete with her comparing her knives to Jack the Ripper's scalpel right before killing him]].
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* MuggingTheMonster - As [[ShoutOut shout outs]] to CrocodileDundee, ''Film/CrocodileDundee'', Vexen ends up in Dundee's role in New York while earlier Larxene was in a similar in London [[spoiler: complete with her comparing her knives to Jack the Ripper's scalpel right before killing him]].
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', {{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', {{Pixar}} Creator/{{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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''[[http://community.livejournal.com/tpbod The Renegades]]'' is a Franchise/KingdomHearts fanfiction written by the users abby_sarajane, chigrima and silvestris, under the alias 'The PlotBunny of Doom'.
The story begins shortly after the events of ''Chain of Memories''. Vexen, brought back from the dead by his [[GameplayAndStorySegregation enemy]] [[AutoRevive card,]] revives the other Organization members in an attempt to have them punished by Xemnas for their failure. This plan is quickly derailed when the other Nobodies point out how ''he'' is just as guilty as they are.
The story begins shortly after the events of ''Chain of Memories''. Vexen, brought back from the dead by his [[GameplayAndStorySegregation enemy]] [[AutoRevive card,]] revives the other Organization members in an attempt to have them punished by Xemnas for their failure. This plan is quickly derailed when the other Nobodies point out how ''he'' is just as guilty as they are.
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''[[http://community.livejournal.com/tpbod The Renegades]]'' is a 104-chapter Franchise/KingdomHearts fanfiction written by the users abby_sarajane, chigrima and silvestris, under the alias 'The PlotBunny of Doom'.
The story begins shortly after the events of ''Chain of Memories''. Vexen, brought back from the dead by his[[GameplayAndStorySegregation [[GameplayAndStoryIntegration enemy]] [[AutoRevive card,]] revives the other Organization members in an attempt to have them punished by Xemnas for their failure. This plan is quickly derailed when the other Nobodies point out how ''he'' is just as guilty as they are.
The story begins shortly after the events of ''Chain of Memories''. Vexen, brought back from the dead by his
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Realizing that they have utterly screwed up, they run. [[AnIcePerson Vexen]], [[GreenThumb Marluxia]], [[KillItWithFire Axel]], [[PsychoElectro Larxene]], [[DishingOutDirt Lexaeus]] and [[MasterOfIllusion Zexion]] band together in a mad rush from world to world, trying to survive while hoping that their former comrades don't catch them. They face swamps, deserts, forests, malaria, snakes, forests, sinking ships and more forests. Every time they think they're getting comfortable, they're forced to jump to another world. Making things worse is that the Organization eventually notices their presence and tries to hunt them down.
Much of the fic focuses on the relationships and motivations of the characters. and how they deal with each other. Alliances are made, relationships form and dissolve, and gratuitous amounts of bickering and fighting occur. The two pairings featured are Vexen/Marluxia and Zexion/Lexaeus, but the authors occasionally ShipTease with Larxene/Lexaeus, Xaldin/Xigbar and others. All of these combine to form a potent mixture of comedy, drama, suspense and yaoi (though work-safe versions of chapters with more explicit content are provided).
Much of the fic focuses on the relationships and motivations of the characters. and how they deal with each other. Alliances are made, relationships form and dissolve, and gratuitous amounts of bickering and fighting occur. The two pairings featured are Vexen/Marluxia and Zexion/Lexaeus, but the authors occasionally ShipTease with Larxene/Lexaeus, Xaldin/Xigbar and others. All of these combine to form a potent mixture of comedy, drama, suspense and yaoi (though work-safe versions of chapters with more explicit content are provided).
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Realizing that they have utterly screwed up, they run. [[AnIcePerson Vexen]], [[GreenThumb Marluxia]], [[KillItWithFire Axel]], [[PsychoElectro Larxene]], [[DishingOutDirt Lexaeus]] and [[MasterOfIllusion Zexion]] band together in a mad rush from world to world, trying to survive while hoping that their former comrades don't catch them. They What they face includes swamps, deserts, forests, malaria, snakes, forests, the Big Apple, laudanum-induced hallucinations and sinking ships and more forests.ships. Every time they think they're getting comfortable, they're forced to jump to another world. Making things worse is that the Organization eventually notices their presence and tries to hunt them down.
Much of While the fic focuses contains comedy, drama, horror and (in optional chapters) yaoi, it is mostly a character study on characters who got little development within the relationships and motivations of the characters. and how they deal with each other. main games. Alliances are made, relationships form and dissolve, and gratuitous amounts of there's the bickering and fighting occur.you'd expect from a group of bad guys who hate each other's guts. The two pairings featured are Vexen/Marluxia and Zexion/Lexaeus, but the authors occasionally ShipTease with Larxene/Lexaeus, Xaldin/Xigbar and others. All of these combine to form a potent mixture of comedy, drama, suspense and yaoi (though work-safe versions of chapters with more explicit content are provided).
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Instant Awesome Just Add Ninja is now Gratuitous Ninja. Shoehorning, Zero Context Examples and examples not fitting "unexpected, gratuitous ninja" are being deleted.
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* InstantAwesomeJustAddNinja - Marluxia takes a similar role when he has to infiltrate Maison de Lune to retrieve Zexion.
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', {{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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In total, the runaways have traveled through the Dark Forest (''Disney/SnowWhiteAndTheSevenDwarfs''), London, Agrabah (''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''), The Mountain where the Lights touch the Earth (''Disney/BrotherBear''), Twilight Town, New York City, the ruins from ''Disney/TheJungleBook'', Havfruehavn (''Disney/TheLittleMermaid''), Riverbend (''Disney/{{Pocahontas}}''), Reunion Inn (''Disney/TheSwordInTheStone''), Land of Dragons (''Disney/{{Mulan}}''), Tremaine Mansion (''Disney/{{Cinderella}}''), The Wild West (''Disney/HomeOnTheRange'' and the non-Disney ''WesternAnimation/SpiritStallionOfTheCimarron''), Wonderland (''Disney/AliceInWonderland''), Tortuga (''PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), (''Franchise/PiratesOfTheCaribbean''), Saber Manor (''Film/GForce''), Kingdom of Kuzco (''Disney/TheEmperorsNewGroove''), Suburbia (''Disney/{{Bolt}}'', {{Pixar}} movies), Hinterlands (''WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas''), the circus from ''Disney/{{Dumbo}}'', Sherwood Forest (''Disney/RobinHood''), Beast's Castle (''Disney/BeautyAndTheBeast''), Foxes' Forest (''Disney/TheFoxAndTheHound''), Isle of Idra (''Disney/{{Hercules}}''), Pride Land (''Disney/TheLionKing''), Mesozoica (''Disney/{{Dinosaur}}''), and Notre Dame (''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'').
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** In New York, other media are referenced as well, to stuff like ''Disney/OliverAndCompany'', ''TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'', ''JemAndTheHolograms'', and ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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** In New York, other media are referenced as well, to stuff like ''Disney/OliverAndCompany'', ''TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'', ''JemAndTheHolograms'', ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles'', ''WesternAnimation/JemAndTheHolograms'', and ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}''.''Franchise/{{Ghostbusters}}''.
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Everythings Nuttier With Squirrels is a redirect to Nutty Squirrel, which is being cut per TRS decision
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* EverythingsNuttierWithSquirrels - Chapter 013: The Triumph of Mr. Squirrel
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* ShoutOut - To many members of the DisneyAnimatedCanon.
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* ShoutOut - To many members of the DisneyAnimatedCanon.Franchise/DisneyAnimatedCanon.