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''Spike's Gambit'' was a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet. While it is no longer available on Fimfiction, it can be found [[https://fimfetch.net/story/415330/spikes-gambit here]] on Fimfetch.
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''Spike's Gambit'' was a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet.Platform/FimfictionDotNet. While it is no longer available on Fimfiction, it can be found [[https://fimfetch.net/story/415330/spikes-gambit here]] on Fimfetch.
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will]], [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will]], [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: On one end, there's the power hungry Impossibly Rich. On the other, there's Flim and Flam, the protagonists' [[CorruptCorporateExecutive sleazy]] and [[ConMan crooked]] [[BadBoss bosses]]. That is until Impossibly took over the brothers' assets and becomes the main BigBad overall.
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* BigBadEnsemble: On one end, there's the power hungry Impossibly Rich. On the other, there's Flim and Flam, the protagonists' [[CorruptCorporateExecutive sleazy]] and [[ConMan crooked]] [[BadBoss bosses]]. That is until Impossibly took over the brothers' business and assets and becomes the main BigBad overall.
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* StockholmSyndrome: Discussed. Rainbow Dash has spoken to enough torture survivors (former Wonderbolts) to know that becoming attached to one's captors is a risk.
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* BigBadEnsemble: On one end, there's the power hungry Impossibly Rich. On the other, there's Flim and flam, the protagonists' sleazy and crooked bosses. That is until Impossibly took over the brothers' assets and becomes the main BigBad overall.
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* BigBadEnsemble: On one end, there's the power hungry Impossibly Rich. On the other, there's Flim and flam, Flam, the protagonists' sleazy [[CorruptCorporateExecutive sleazy]] and crooked bosses.[[ConMan crooked]] [[BadBoss bosses]]. That is until Impossibly took over the brothers' assets and becomes the main BigBad overall.
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], Suri Polomare, Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], Will]], [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare, Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Polomare, Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest, and [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], [[CreaqteYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest[[spoiler:, and [[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will], [[CreaqteYourOwnVillain [[CreateYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest[[spoiler:, Zest, and [[TheMole [[spoiler:[[TheMole Twilight Sparkle]].]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: [[BigBad Impossibly Rich]], [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[CoDragons Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will]].
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* BigBadEnsemble: [[BigBad On one end, there's the power hungry Impossibly Rich]], [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[CoDragons Garble]], Rich. On the other, there's Flim and [[TheBrute Iron Will]].flam, the protagonists' sleazy and crooked bosses. That is until Impossibly took over the brothers' assets and becomes the main BigBad overall.
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: Impossibly has quite the entourage of colorful characters under her belt: [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich, Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled Rich, Abacus Cinch, Garble, Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[TheRival Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will, Will], [[CreaqteYourOwnVillain Suri Polomare, Polomare]], Indigo Zap, Sour Sweet, Sunny Flare, Sugarcoat Lemon Zest[[spoiler:, and [[TheMole Twilight Sparkle.Sparkle]].]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: [[BigBad Impossibly Rich]], [[DragonInChief Filthy Rich]], [[TheStarscream Spoiled]] [[TheDarkChick Spoiled Rich]], [[CoDragons Abacus]] [[TheEvilGenius Cinch]], [[CoDragons Garble]], and [[TheBrute Iron Will]].
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* HulaAndLuaus: "A M.I.L.F. and A Luau" comes complete with hula, a roasted pig and Spike doing a torch dance.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Sunset Shimmer gives one to Spike when he gets a peek up her skirt when they are stuck in a gondola at the top of a Ferris wheel. She apologizes to him shortly after.
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* AbsurdlyHighStakesGame: The Las Pegasus Poker Tournament.
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* BarelyThereSwimwear: Celestia, Chrysalis, Fleur, Stellar Flare and Sunset's bikinis, and Applejack's two-piece lifeguard uniform.
* BestServedCold: It's been almost 20 years since Spike's mother was killed. It was well worth the wait.
* BettyAndVeronica: For Spike, Applejack (the Betty) and Sunset Shimmer (the Veronica).
* BigBad: Impossibly Rich, Filthy Rich's mother.
* BestServedCold: It's been almost 20 years since Spike's mother was killed. It was well worth the wait.
* BettyAndVeronica: For Spike, Applejack (the Betty) and Sunset Shimmer (the Veronica).
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* BigStormEpisode: The "Nightmares" chapter.
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* TheCaper: "Drake's Nineteen... And Then Some".
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: For Filthy Rich and Diamond Tiara.
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* FanConvention: ''Ogres & Oubliettes''.
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* FemmeFatale: Several, including Chrysalis, Fleur de Lis, Sassy Saddles, and Lyra and Bon Bon.
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* FormerFriendsPhoto: See Ivy League for Everyone below.
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* ImpossiblyLowNeckline: Most, if not all, of the women's dresses.
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* NothingButHits: The songs used in the story.
* OriginalCharacter: Midnight Radiance.
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* WorldHealingWave: Once Spike becomes the MVCD, his Roll Ruler power is augmented by the 13 Gates and he creates a global wave of good fortune to the point of granting many peoples wishes (one man's thinning hair becomes a massive shock of hair that headbangers would envy, the comatose waking up, a 30 year civil war ends peacefully, [[spoiler:and bringing Twilight back from the dead]]).
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* WorldHealingWave: Once Spike becomes the MVCD, his Roll Ruler power is augmented by the 13 Gates and he creates a global wave of good fortune to the point of granting many peoples wishes (one man's thinning hair becomes a massive shock of hair that headbangers would envy, the comatose waking up, a 30 year civil war ends peacefully, [[spoiler:and bringing Twilight back from the dead]]).dead]]).
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* DorkAge: InUniverse. Las Pegasus seemed to be going through this when the story began.
--> '''Rarity:''' Last fall, the Mayor of Las Pegasus decided to rebrand the city as a ''family vacation destination'' and make all the casino-hotels more [[AirQuotes "family friendly."]] He also had a variety of new resorts with theme-park style rides built, and ''voilà'': every true gambler's worst nightmare!
--> '''Rarity:''' Last fall, the Mayor of Las Pegasus decided to rebrand the city as a ''family vacation destination'' and make all the casino-hotels more [[AirQuotes "family friendly."]] He also had a variety of new resorts with theme-park style rides built, and ''voilà'': every true gambler's worst nightmare!
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: First of all, there is Spike Drake (Spike the Dragon), every member of the Mane/Human Six, plus Sunset Shimmer '''and''' Starlight Glimmer, Celestia Soleil and Luna St. Selena (Princess Celestia and Princess Luna), Discord, Flim and Flam, and almost the entire Rich Family, as well as many other popular MLP characters.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Sunset Shimmer gives one to Spike when he gets [[PantyShot a peek up her skirt]] when they are stuck in a gondola at the top of a Ferris wheel. She apologizes to him shortly after.
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* TransplantedCharacterFic: Aside from the names and a few careers, this has nothing to do with "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic".
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''Spike's Gambit'' was a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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''Spike's Gambit'' was a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet.
Website/FimfictionDotNet. While it is no longer available on Fimfiction, it can be found [[https://fimfetch.net/story/415330/spikes-gambit here]] on Fimfetch.
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''Spike's Gambit'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet, found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415330/spikes-gambit here]].
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''Spike's Gambit'' is was a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/282768/Commissioner-Y Commissioner-Y]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet, found [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415330/spikes-gambit here]].
Website/FimfictionDotNet.
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* TarotTroubles: Trixie has a deck of tarot cards and her predictions for Twilight are dead-on.
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