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* TheChainsOfCommanding: Part of the reason for Shepard's slow breakdown over the course of ''Requiem'' is due to the sheer pressure he is under and the increasing responsibilities. The other part is [[spoiler:the Indoctrination attempts by the Reapers]].

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* TheChainsOfCommanding: Part of the reason for Shepard's slow breakdown over the course of ''Requiem'' is due how he stats to the sheer pressure he is crack under and the increasing responsibilities.pressure. The other part is [[spoiler:the Indoctrination attempts by the Reapers]].
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* TheChainsOfCommanding: Part of the reason for Shepard's slow breakdown over the course of ''Requiem'' is due to the sheer pressure he is under and the increasing responsibilities. The other part is [[spoiler:the Indoctrination attempts by the Reapers]].
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** Vega: Sings-Strength
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** Miranda Lawson looks set to have a larger role in ''Requiem'' than in the vanilla Mass Effect 3, what with Shepard having hand-picked her to lead the operation to liberate Omega from Oleg Petrovsky.

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** Miranda Lawson looks set to have has a much larger role in ''Requiem'' than in the vanilla Mass ''Mass Effect 3, what 3'', with Shepard having hand-picked hand-picking her to lead the operation to liberate Omega from Oleg Petrovsky.
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* DeathByAdaptation: While AnyoneCanDie in the ''Franchise/MassEffect'' ganes, one very notable death in this fic is [[spoiler: Miranda killing Aria after it is clear she will not allow anyone to stop her from murdering Petrovsky after his surrender.]] Notable because this is one of the few major characters in the games that cannot die outside of the "Refuse" ending.


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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Unlike canon, Nyreen survives the assault on Omega thanks to [[spoiler: Zaeed's HeroicSacrifice clearing out all the Adjutants in front of Afterlife]], and then later being ordered to HoldTheLine instead of joining the assault into the club.
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** Jack: Caged-Singer
** Zaeed: Sings-of-Endless-Fire
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* HesBack: [[spoiler: Shepard, after Utukku. And an awesome comeback it is!]]
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** The entire sequence of [[spoiler: Shepard clawing his way out of the caves of Utukku]] is one long shout out to Bruce Wayne's rise from the Pit in ''Film/TheDarkKnightRises.'' According to comments by the author from the talizorah.org fansite, the scene had been planned out well in advance of the movie's release, but after watching the film, he couldn't [[SureWhyNot resist making it more similar.]]

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** The entire sequence of [[spoiler: Shepard clawing his way out of the caves of Utukku]] is one long shout out to Bruce Wayne's rise from the Pit in ''Film/TheDarkKnightRises.'' According to comments by the author from the talizorah.org fansite, the scene had been planned out well in advance of the movie's release, but after watching the film, he couldn't [[SureWhyNot [[AscendedFanon resist making it more similar.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard over the edge. It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in Mass Effect 1).

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* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge. edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in Mass Effect 1).
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** Not to mention the Shadow Broker. Using his information network to find out every secret and weakness of the Normandy's crew and then ruthlessly exploiting it.

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** Not to mention the Shadow Broker. Using his information network to find out every secret and weakness of the Normandy's crew and then [[ManipulativeBastard ruthlessly exploiting it.]]



* GenreSavvy: Anderson is well aware that [[BerserkButton harming Shepard's crew]] is a BAD idea. When Vega and a group of marines were going to take Shepard into custody Anderson personally told Vega that any threats against the crew would go badly, that it went double for Garrus, and that 'god help your stupid grunt soul if the quarian on that crew manifest gets caught in the line of fire.'

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* GenreSavvy: Anderson is well aware that [[BerserkButton harming Shepard's crew]] is a [[TooDumbToLive BAD idea.idea]]. When Vega and a group of marines were going to take Shepard into custody Anderson personally told Vega that any threats against the crew would go badly, that it went double for Garrus, and that 'god help your stupid grunt soul if the quarian on that crew manifest gets caught in the line of fire.'

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* MythologyGag: The bomb that explodes on the Citadel and [[spoiler: critically injures Kasumi is pretty much how she dies in ''Mass Effect 3'' if she is not loyal while doing the hanar ambassador sidequest.]]



* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: During one of Shepard's bad dreams, [[spoiler: Ghost!Saren shows Shepard the destruction of the Migrant Fleet that would have occurred had peace not been brokered between the quarians and the geth.]]

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* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: During one of Shepard's bad dreams, [[spoiler: Ghost!Saren shows Shepard the destruction of the Migrant Fleet [[ItsAWonderfulPlot that would have occurred had peace not been brokered brokered]] between the quarians and the geth.]]
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* WordAssociationTest: Tali pulls one of these on Garrus to force him to confront what he really feels for Kasumi. She also mentions [[HollywoodPsych she learned it from Kelly.]]
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* TemptingFate: During the assault on Rannoch:
--> '''Shepard''': "I'm starting to think this is too easy."
--> (cut to next scene under fire from dozens of geth)
--> '''Garrus''': "Dammit Shepard, [[GenreSavvy next time you think the mission is 'too easy' keep your mouth shut!]]"

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* DescriptionCut: Shepard begins to form a plan as to how the squad handles Kalros, the Mother of all Thresher-Maws.
--> '''Garrus''': "Boss, why is it that you say ''I've got a plan''... the same way a terrorist says ''I've got a bomb''?"

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* DescriptionCut: Shepard begins to form a plan as to how the squad handles Kalros, the Mother of all Thresher-Maws.
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** After being interrupted (again) for some early morning alone time with Tali...
--> '''Garrus''': "Boss, why is it that you say ''I've got a plan''... the same way a terrorist says ''I've got a bomb''?"'''Shepard''': "Someone better be dead."



--> '''Garrus''': "This is a terrible, '''terrible''' plan!
** and After being interrupted (again) for some early morning alone time with Tali...
--> '''Shepard''': "Someone better be dead."
--> (cut to next scene)


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** Shepard begins to form a plan as to how the squad should handle Kalros, the Mother of all Thresher-Maws...
--> '''Garrus''': "Boss, why is it that you say ''I've got a plan''... the same way a terrorist says ''I've got a bomb''?"
--> (cut to next scene)
--> '''Garrus''': "This is a terrible, '''terrible''' plan!
** Shepard and Tali in a shuttle, about to launch the assault on Rannoch...
--> '''Shepard''': "Ready to see your homeworld?"
--> (cut to next scene)
--> '''Tali''': (while evading heavy AntiAir fire) ''"This is not what I had in mind!"''

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** Considering that she was nothing more than a very minor, unnamed sidequest character in the second game, everything about Quin'Sala a.k.a. [[FanNickname Slave Girl Quarian]] on Ilium. She's appeared in every ''Razor's Edge'' installment.

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** Considering that she was nothing more than a very minor, unnamed sidequest character in the second game, everything about Quin'Sala a.k.a. [[FanNickname Slave Girl Quarian]] Quarian on Ilium. She's appeared in every ''Razor's Edge'' installment.



* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: After a plan is made to officially unite the galaxy under a single banner, an Alliance devoted to destroying the Reapers, [[spoiler: the Commander is unanimously voted by all the races into "Praetor" Shepard.]]


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* AwesomeButImpractical: Shortly before the battle of Rannoch, Kasumi enlists the aid of Legion and the rachni to upgrade Shepard, Garrus, and Tali's armor with miniaturized quantum entanglement communications devices. Shepard is the first to ask if it would be possible to distribute these across the entire war effort. Legion's answer is no, since a single one of the devices costs the equivalent of 168.3 million credits. Or enough to build an entire frigate.
* AwesomeMomentOfCrowning: After a plan is made to officially unite the galaxy under a single banner, an Alliance devoted to destroying the Reapers, [[spoiler: the Commander is unanimously voted by all the races into "Praetor" Shepard.]]
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Unlike in canon, in ''Requiem'' Udina is killed by Kai Leng right before he could launch into a MotiveRant on why he chose to work with Cerberus.


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* HeelFaceTurn: Quite unexpectedly in ''Requiem'', [[spoiler: the ghost of Saren undergoes a dramatic change after Shepard rejects his existence as a Reaper puppet.]] Unlike most examples of this trope, though, he does not become purely helpful, but rather goes from being outright antagonistic to simply being pessimistic about their chances of success.


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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: In ''Requiem'', [[spoiler: it's quite difficult to say whether Saren is a genuine ghost or if he may be nothing more than a [[BrainUploading personality fragment of the original]] preserved by Reaper cybernetics. [[MindScrew Even Saren does not know.]]]]


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* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: During one of Shepard's bad dreams, [[spoiler: Ghost!Saren shows Shepard the destruction of the Migrant Fleet that would have occurred had peace not been brokered between the quarians and the geth.]]
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** Banshees don't sing. They scream.
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** [[AdamBaldwin Kal']][[{{Firefly}} Reegar]] and his squad are BigDamnHeroes.
** When Joker blasts a pair of torpedoes into the geth base pit, he comments that it's [[StarWars "Easier than shooting womp rats]]!"
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* HeroicRROD: Thane takes a drug to re-oxygenate his blood and allow him to function at his peak for a short time, but it will severely worsen his already critical condition once it wears off.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Quin'Sala, the quarian Shepard rescues from indentured servitude in ''Razor's Edge'', learns how to handle a shotgun from Matriarch Aethyta. By ''Requiem'', she helps repel the Cerberus assault on the Citadel.
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* OneHeadTaller: Garrus is a good foot taller than Kasumi, with whom he frequently trades banter [[spoiler:and eventually romances]].
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* NeckLift: Shepard does this to Han'Gerrel after Gerrel tries to blow up the geth dreadnaught Shepard and his team were still on.
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* HurtingHero: Shepard. In addition to the very hard choices and grinding losses of canon, he also has to deal with [[spoiler: being indoctrinated]], which does a number on his mental health. As the story goes on it becomes a race to defeat the Reapers before Shepard falls apart.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Garrus reads Shepard the riot act after the Tuchanka missions, where [[spoiler: Shepard nearly decides to kill Mordin, and didn't fill Garrus in until afterwards]]. Shepard justifies his actions as IDidWhatIHadToDo.
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** There's also this exchange when Shepard (wearing armor Liara got him) is being thrown around the battlefield by a brute:
--> '''Liara''': "Shepard! Get out of there!"
--> '''Shepard''': "I've got nowhere to go, Liara. Armor is good, though. Thanks."
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* CowboyCop: Bailey, more so than in canon. He captures a group of assassins that he doesn't have the authority to arrest, and even if he did, [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney they'd be out in a few days]]. So, he looks the other way as Thane kills them all.
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The old Big Damn Heroes entry said \"Too many to count.\" I think we can count them.


* BigDamnHeroes: Too many to count.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Too many A group of krogan show up in time to count. save [[Miranda, Jacob, Mordin, and Kasumi]] from the Shadow Broker's soldiers.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: The video file the Shadow Broker sends to [[spoiler:Tali]] is designed to cast Shepard in the worst possible light.
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* DestinationDefenestration: Shepard does this to an assassin in ''Dark Witness''.
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* HeadTiltinglyKinky: When Shepard's team watches Fleet and Flotilla, the... interactions between the stars are never described, but plenty can be inferred from the reactions of the viewers.

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