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Hurting Hero is a disambiguation


* HurtingHero: Shepard. In addition to the very hard choices and grinding losses of canon, he also has to deal with [[spoiler: being indoctrinated]], which does a number on his mental health. As the story goes on it becomes a race to defeat the Reapers before Shepard falls apart.
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** At Hock's party, Kasumi changes a password to [[StarWars Dagobah]].

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** At Hock's party, Kasumi changes a password to [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Dagobah]].



** When Joker blasts a pair of torpedoes into the geth base pit, he comments that it's [[StarWars "Easier than shooting womp rats]]!"

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** When Joker blasts a pair of torpedoes into the geth base pit, he comments that it's [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars "Easier than shooting womp rats]]!"
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* ShipTease: For Garrus and Kasumi. Though by the time of ''Requiem'', it's become less "WillTheyOrWontThey", and more "[[UpToEleven What does a human-turian baby look like?]]"

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* ShipTease: For Garrus and Kasumi. Though by the time of ''Requiem'', it's become less "WillTheyOrWontThey", and more "[[UpToEleven What "What does a human-turian baby look like?]]" like?"

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** Also the Rachni have a FAR larger part during ''Requiem'' than in the canon game.

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** Also the Rachni have a FAR larger part during ''Requiem'' than in the canon game. [[spoiler: The Queen saves Shepard's life during his attempted LastStand on Utukku and helps him overcome his indoctrination before lending her armada to the alliance against the Reapers. Two Rachni foot-soldiers also become regular members of the Normandy Crew]].



* CuteLittleFangs: Tali is noted to have these under her suit.



* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'', as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').

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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
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Everything that occurred during the events of ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'', as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').
** In Requiem, at point Tali briefly goes on about several pranks Garrus had pulled on her during their time on the original Normandy such as swapping her nutrient paste with one labelled [[BlazingInfernoHellfireSauce extra-spicy]].
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* NotSoDifferent: Shepard's cybernetics, Renegade tendencies, Spectre status and [[spoiler: indoctrination]] remind him of Saren.

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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Shepard's cybernetics, Renegade tendencies, Spectre status and [[spoiler: indoctrination]] remind him of Saren.
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*** In Shepard’s defence, it’s implied [[spoiler: the indoctrination was keeping him from telling anybody.]]

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*** In Shepard’s Shepard's defence, it’s it's implied [[spoiler: the indoctrination was keeping him from telling anybody.]]
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* BadDreams: Shepard, as he has the SoleSurvivor background ([[spoiler: and is later indoctrinated]].)
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''Razor's Edge'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic trilogy by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2399641/Tairis-Deamhan Tairis Deamhan]].

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''Razor's Edge'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect'' fanfic trilogy by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2399641/Tairis-Deamhan Tairis Deamhan]].
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For tropes relating to the original go to ''Franchise/MassEffect''.



For tropes relating to the original go here: Franchise/MassEffect



--> '''Garrus''': "Sooo... You forgot to mention the AI, huh?"
--> '''Tali''': "The WHAT?"

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--> '''Garrus''': "Sooo... You forgot to mention the AI, huh?"
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'''Tali''': "The WHAT?"



* CasualDangerDialogue: All over the place from Shepard and Garrus but Tali and Hanah Shepard have a great moment in ''Dark Witness,'' discussing Shepard's stubbornness while hunkered down behind a table exchanging shots with some thugs.

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* CasualDangerDialogue: CasualDangerDialogue:
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All over the place from Shepard and Garrus but Tali and Hanah Shepard have a great moment in ''Dark Witness,'' discussing Shepard's stubbornness while hunkered down behind a table exchanging shots with some thugs.



--> '''Liara''': "Shepard! Get out of there!"
--> '''Shepard''': "I've got nowhere to go, Liara. Armor is good, though. Thanks."

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--> '''Liara''': --->'''Liara''': "Shepard! Get out of there!"
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'''Shepard''': "I've got nowhere to go, Liara. Armor is good, though. Thanks."



--> '''Shepard''': "Someone better be dead."
--> (cut to next scene)
--> '''Miranda''': "No one is dead, Commander."
--> '''Shepard''': "That can be fixed."

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--> '''Shepard''': --->'''Shepard''': "Someone better be dead."
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'''Miranda''': "No one is dead, Commander."
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'''Shepard''': "That can be fixed."



--> '''Garrus''': "Boss, why is it that you say ''I've got a plan''... the same way a terrorist says ''I've got a bomb''?"
--> (cut to next scene)
--> '''Garrus''': "This is a terrible, '''terrible''' plan!

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--> ---> '''Garrus''': "Boss, why is it that you say ''I've got a plan''... the same way a terrorist says ''I've got a bomb''?"
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'''Garrus''': "This is a terrible, '''terrible''' plan!



--> '''Shepard''': "Ready to see your homeworld?"
--> (cut to next scene)
--> '''Tali''': (while evading heavy AntiAir fire) ''"This is not what I had in mind!"''

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--> '''Shepard''': --->'''Shepard''': "Ready to see your homeworld?"
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'''Tali''': (while evading heavy AntiAir fire) ''"This is not what I had in mind!"''



* DirtyBusiness: Shepard feels this way about destroying Purgatory, and makes sure that the responsibility is his alone.

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* DirtyBusiness: DirtyBusiness:
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Shepard feels this way about destroying Purgatory, and makes sure that the responsibility is his alone.



--> '''Shepard''': "Might want to secure yourselves, ladies and gentlemen."
--> '''Jack''': "Hey!"
--> '''Shepard''': "And Jack."

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--> '''Shepard''': -->'''Shepard''': "Might want to secure yourselves, ladies and gentlemen."
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'''Jack''': "Hey!"
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'''Shepard''': "And Jack."



--> '''Harbinger''': "You cannot harm me. We bring your salvation."
--> '''Shepard''': "Yeah? Well I bring a really big gun." ([[TorsoWithAView Blows a hole in the drone's chest]])

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--> '''Harbinger''': -->'''Harbinger''': "You cannot harm me. We bring your salvation."
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'''Shepard''': "Yeah? Well I bring a really big gun." ([[TorsoWithAView Blows a hole in the drone's chest]])



--> '''Shepard''': "I'm starting to think this is too easy."
--> (cut to next scene under fire from dozens of geth)
--> '''Garrus''': "Dammit Shepard, next time you think the mission is 'too easy' keep your mouth shut!"

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--> '''Shepard''': "I'm starting to think this is too easy."
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'''Garrus''': "Dammit Shepard, next time you think the mission is 'too easy' keep your mouth shut!"



--> '''Tali''': "You're just being nice because I'm on to your plan to lure me back to fix your engines so you don't have to get dirty.
--> '''Shepard''': "With all the upgrades we're talking about, chances are I'll be down there helping you, so my cunning plan must not be working too well. Besides, if I'm going to get dirty, I figure might as well be with a friend. That... came out sounding very different than it did in my head. Let's just pretend I didn't say that."

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--> '''Tali''': -->'''Tali''': "You're just being nice because I'm on to your plan to lure me back to fix your engines so you don't have to get dirty.
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'''Shepard''': "With all the upgrades we're talking about, chances are I'll be down there helping you, so my cunning plan must not be working too well. Besides, if I'm going to get dirty, I figure might as well be with a friend. That... came out sounding very different than it did in my head. Let's just pretend I didn't say that."
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*** In Shepard’s defence, it’s implied [[spoiler: the indoctrination was keeping him from telling anybody.]]
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* WorkingWithTheEx: Shepard was with Liara during the hunt for Saren, so... [[CaptainObvious yeah.]]

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* WorkingWithTheEx: Shepard was with Liara during the hunt for Saren, so... [[CaptainObvious yeah.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').

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* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'', as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in ''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').
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* BigDamnHeroes: A group of krogan show up in time to save [[Miranda, Jacob, Mordin, and Kasumi]] from the Shadow Broker's soldiers.

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* BigDamnHeroes: A group of krogan show up in time to save [[Miranda, Miranda, Jacob, Mordin, and Kasumi]] Kasumi from the Shadow Broker's soldiers.



* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in Mass Effect 1).

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* NoodleIncident: Everything that occurred during the events of VideoGame/MassEffect1, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] in ''Requiem'' when Vega presses Garrus for more details. In particular, though, is an event referenced by Tali in ''Razor's Edge'' she calls the "Tartarus incident" when Shepard [[NotSoStoic lost his cool]] against a gang of pirates who were apparently [[BerserkButton torturing kidnapped colonist children]]. The fact that the pirates then threatened to [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil rape and kill Tali]] really pushed Shepard [[UnstoppableRage over the edge.]] It should be noted that the incident in question is nowhere to be found in the game (there aren't even any locations called Tartarus in Mass Effect 1).''VideoGame/MassEffect1'').

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* AdaptationalVillainy: It is indirectly confirmed [[spoiler: by a fully-indoctrinated Kai Leng that The Illusive Man is not indoctrinated by the Reapers, and he is pursuing an agenda to take control of the Reaper fleet on his own.]]

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* AdaptationalVillainy: It is indirectly confirmed [[spoiler: by a fully-indoctrinated Kai Leng that The Illusive Man is not indoctrinated by the Reapers, and he is pursuing an agenda to take control of the Reaper fleet on his own. Although again, [[SubvertedTrope subverted]], as by the time Anderson and Shepard confront him on the Citadel, he has become fully indoctrinated and events play out much like they did in the canon game.]]



* DentedIron: [[spoiler: Shepard is permanently handicapped in the ending, as his cybernetics were of Reaper origin and were shut down by the Crucible's abort command. He has lost all vision in one eye and must use a cane to walk.]]



* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The ending of ''Requiem'' takes five years after the final battle at Earth and updates us briefly on exactly where most of the ''Normandy's'' crew are in their lives now.



* YouAreInCommandNow: The mantle of leadership (as well as Spectre status) unexpectedly falls onto Garrus's shoulders after the events of [[WhamEpisode Utukku]].

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* YouAreInCommandNow: The mantle of leadership (as well as Spectre status) unexpectedly falls onto Garrus's shoulders after the events of [[WhamEpisode Utukku]].Utukku]].
* YourDaysAreNumbered: [[spoiler: In the ending, nobody really knows how long Shepard has left to live what with his Cerberus cybernetic implants becoming nonfunctional, and he's fully aware any day could be his last.]]
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* NotHisSled: The finale reveals that, in the Razor's Edge timeline, [[spoiler:Harbinger wasn't the first Reaper; Sovereign was]].

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* GenreSavvy: Anderson is well aware that [[BerserkButton harming Shepard's crew]] is a [[TooDumbToLive BAD idea]]. When Vega and a group of marines were going to take Shepard into custody Anderson personally told Vega that any threats against the crew would go badly, that it went double for Garrus, and that 'god help your stupid grunt soul if the quarian on that crew manifest gets caught in the line of fire.'



--> '''Garrus''': "Dammit Shepard, [[GenreSavvy next time you think the mission is 'too easy' keep your mouth shut!]]"

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--> '''Garrus''': "Dammit Shepard, [[GenreSavvy next time you think the mission is 'too easy' keep your mouth shut!]]"shut!"
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The trilogy focuses strongly on a Shepard/Tali pairing, with much [[AdaptationExpansion expansion]] to the canon plot as well as copious helpings of CharacterDevelopment, AwesomeMoments, and HeartwarmingMoments.

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The trilogy focuses strongly on a Shepard/Tali pairing, with much [[AdaptationExpansion expansion]] to the canon plot as well as copious helpings of CharacterDevelopment, AwesomeMoments, and HeartwarmingMoments.
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** Come ''Requiem'', and Mordin precedes to blow this trope to hell and back with three simple words [[spoiler: ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny "Do not ingest."]]'']]

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** Come ''Requiem'', and Mordin precedes to blow this trope to hell and back with three simple words [[spoiler: ''[[CrowningMomentOfFunny "Do ''"Do not ingest."]]'']]"'']]



* ThanatosGambit: The Rachni queen offers to pull one of these if Shepard [[ShootTheDog kills her.]] See the [[Awesome/RazorsEdge awesome moments]] page for details.

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* %%* ThanatosGambit: The Rachni queen offers to pull one of these if Shepard [[ShootTheDog kills her.]] See the [[Awesome/RazorsEdge awesome moments]] page for details.]]

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** Shepard and his team never go to Sanctuary in ''Requiem.'' Instead, they discover Cronos Station thanks to the fact that some of the Leviathans' thralls were Cerberus sleeper agents and Leviathan was able to extract the location of the station by putting together bits of information from various agents. Because of that, the plot-important events of Sanctuary take place on Cronos, although [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome we don't see how Miranda dealt with her father.]]

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** Shepard and his team never go to Sanctuary in ''Requiem.'' Instead, they discover Cronos Station thanks to the fact that some of the Leviathans' thralls were Cerberus sleeper agents and Leviathan was able to extract the location of the station by putting together bits of information from various agents. Because of that, the plot-important events of Sanctuary take place on Cronos, although [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome we don't see how Miranda dealt with her father.]] In addition to that, there are very few Cerberus troops on Cronos so it's more or less a straight shot from the hangar to the control center. Shepard attributes that last part to Kai Leng losing his mind and becoming obsessed with [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou killing Shepard personally.]]


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* GenderRestrictedAbility: According to Kai Leng, Phantoms can only be created from human females that are between the ages of seventeen and thirty.


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* OrcusOnHisThrone: In the assault on Cronos Station, [[spoiler: Kai Leng is more than content to sit in The Illusive Man's chair and just watch Shepard and friends fight off his Phantoms, all the while spewing out insults at Shepard as well as [[InfoDump exposition]] on the Phantoms and where TIM is. It isn't until the Phantoms are defeated does he get up to fight.]]

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* ManipulativeEditing: In ''Dark Witness'', the video file the Shadow Broker sends to [[spoiler: Tali]] is [[NotWhatItLooksLike designed to cast Shepard in the worst possible light.]] Also, in ''Requiem'', [[spoiler: a fully indoctrinated Kai Leng is convinced he can beat Shepard because the Reapers have shown to Leng in his dreams all the traumas and fears Shepard has. As Shepard points out to Leng, the Reapers only showed Leng what they ''wanted'' him to see: they conveniently ignored all the times Shepard has defeated the Reapers and their mind games.]]



* NotWhatItLooksLike: The video file the Shadow Broker sends to [[spoiler:Tali]] is designed to cast Shepard in the worst possible light.

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** Shepard and his team never go to Sanctuary in ''Requiem.'' Instead, they discover Cronos Station thanks to the fact that some of the Leviathans' thralls were Cerberus sleeper agents and Leviathan was able to extract the location of the station by putting together bits of information from various agents. Because of that, the plot-important events of Sanctuary take place on Cronos, although [[OffscreenMomentOfAwesome we don't see how Miranda dealt with her father.]]



* AdaptationalBadass: Kai Leng. Who manages to shrug off [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice being impaled in the chest.]] (Which killed him in the actual game.)

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Kai Leng. Who manages to shrug off [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice being impaled in the chest.]] (Which killed him in the actual game.)) And on Cronos Station, we see that [[spoiler: he fully upgrades himself with Reaper implants, mutating into a horrific man-machine abomination that barely looks human.]]



** Cerberus Phantoms were just a bunch of EliteMooks in the game. In ''Requiem'', they make their debut very late in the story and are treated as a sort of PraetorianGuard. [[spoiler: Although a SubvertedTrope, as Kai Leng still says they're expendable and easily replaced, and Shepard and his team don't have too much trouble taking care of them despite their grand entrance.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: It is indirectly confirmed [[spoiler: by a fully-indoctrinated Kai Leng that The Illusive Man is not indoctrinated by the Reapers, and he is pursuing an agenda to take control of the Reaper fleet on his own.]]



* BattleCouple: Shepard and Tali, after their RelationshipUpgrade of course.

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* BattleCouple: Shepard and Tali, after their RelationshipUpgrade of course. [[spoiler: Garrus & Kasumi graduate to one in ''Requiem.'']]
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** [[AdamBaldwin Kal']][[{{Series/Firefly}} Reegar]] and his squad are BigDamnHeroes.

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** [[AdamBaldwin Kal']][[{{Series/Firefly}} Reegar]] [[{{Series/Firefly}} Kal'Reegar]] and his squad are BigDamnHeroes.
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* DemotedToExtra: Many of the new characters introduced in VideoGame/MassEffect3 suffer this fate in ''Requiem'', such as Cortez, Traynor, and Vega. Even Javik hasn't done much after being recruited.

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* DemotedToExtra: Many of the new characters introduced in VideoGame/MassEffect3 suffer this fate in ''Requiem'', such as Cortez, Traynor, Cortez and Vega. Traynor. Even Javik hasn't done much after being recruited.and Vega aren't fully immune to this, though they both get a bit more time in the limelight in later chapters.
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** The author has stated he will not be covering the Citadel DLC due to it not fitting the story's tone or pacing. It receives, at best, small mentions here and then.
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** [[AdamBaldwin Kal']][[{{Firefly}} Reegar]] and his squad are BigDamnHeroes.

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** [[AdamBaldwin Kal']][[{{Firefly}} Kal']][[{{Series/Firefly}} Reegar]] and his squad are BigDamnHeroes.
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* BrokenFaceplate: Played for extreme drama in the climax of ''Dark Witness'' when [[spoiler: the Shadow Broker throws a grenade that destroys Tali's helmet, putting her at death's door and also revealing her face to Liara for the first time.]]

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