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* FreudianTrio: Misako, Devlin and Larosin.
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* WriteWhatYouKnow: I was studying law when writing this series, although [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants near the final chapter]]...
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* EldritchAbomination: The Queen of Monsters
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* InferredHolocaust: [[spoiler: Chapter 21 '''seems''' to end happily for everyone, but the ''Chaos Lord'' saga is coming up]]
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* BizarreBabyBoom: This event effected the world whole world- even AfterTheEnd
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'''Officer Misako''' is a TroperWork done by the modest Tropers/{{sabrinadiamond}}, inspired by the online RPG game VideoGame/MechQuest. It is a DeconstructorFleet, combining WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld, meta-references to horror and Science fiction with a twisty ending... Sometimes shows elements of IntercontinuityCrossover at some points.
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'''Officer Misako''' is a TroperWork done by the modest Tropers/{{sabrinadiamond}}, inspired by the online RPG game VideoGame/MechQuest. It is both a DeconstructorFleet, DeconstructorFleet ''and'' a DarkFic, combining WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld, meta-references to horror and Science fiction with a twisty ending... Sometimes shows elements of IntercontinuityCrossover at some points.
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* ResetButton: ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin...
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* ResetButton: ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin...ResetButtonEnding: ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin... Which leads to chapter 21.
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* ReincarnationRomance: Turns into this in the finale.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: It's a cycle!
** ReincarnationRomance: Turns into this in the finale.
** ReincarnationRomance: Turns into this in the finale.
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** XMeetsY: TheFutureIsNoir meets ChildhoodsEnd (lite) meets [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/BraveNewWorld Brave New World]]...
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** XMeetsY: TheFutureIsNoir meets ChildhoodsEnd (lite) meets shades of [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/BraveNewWorld Brave New World]]...
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** XMeetsY: TheFutureIsNoir meets ChildhoodsEnd (lite) meets BraveNewWorld...[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/BraveNewWorld Brave New World]]...
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* LovePolygon: With a SchoolDays twist
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* LovePolygon: With a SchoolDays VisualNovel/SchoolDays twist
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** Or [[ItsBeenDone Mechas]] with mind-screw and symbolism, which {{m|elodyOfOblivion}}ay sound [[SchoolDays very weird...]]
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** Or [[ItsBeenDone Mechas]] with mind-screw and symbolism, which {{m|elodyOfOblivion}}ay sound [[SchoolDays [[VisualNovel/SchoolDays very weird...]]
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* [[spoiler: HistoryRepeats]]: Oh nooo!
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* TheMultiverse: Their world turns out to be a twisted version of this.
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* LovePolygon: With a SchoolDays twist
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** Or [[ItsBeenDone Mechas]] with mind-screw and symbolism, which {{m|elodyOfOblivion}}ay sound [[SoltyRei very weird...]]
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** Or [[ItsBeenDone Mechas]] with mind-screw and symbolism, which {{m|elodyOfOblivion}}ay sound [[SoltyRei [[SchoolDays very weird...]]
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In the year 3008, Misako and her ThreeAmigos attend the prestigious [[ElaborateUniversityHigh Soluna University]], run by a crotchety old principal named Dean Warlic. Life is normal, except for the occasional Mecha stomping past, alien invasions, werewolf bikers, [[ElementalPowers the mystical 'Force']] and the power of Rock and Roll. At the same time, two band members are preparing for [[PowerOfRock an important concert]] when a MadScientist and the disdained [[TheEvilPrince brother]] 'The Black Prince' who both [[GreyAndGrayMorality declare a technological 'warfare']] on most Solunian [[BizarreBabyBoom citizens]] all in the name of "ForScience"! The end of their structured society as the three know it is nigh - as the MadScientist converts more of the citizens against their will, into [[BodyHorror cyborgs]]...
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In the year 3008, Misako and her ThreeAmigos attend the prestigious [[ElaborateUniversityHigh Soluna University]], run by a crotchety old principal named Dean Warlic. Life is normal, except for the occasional Mecha stomping past, alien invasions, werewolf bikers, [[ElementalPowers the mystical 'Force']] and the power of Rock and Roll. At the same time, two band members are preparing for [[PowerOfRock [[ThePowerOfRock an important concert]] when a MadScientist and the disdained [[TheEvilPrince brother]] 'The Black Prince' who both [[GreyAndGrayMorality declare a technological 'warfare']] on most Solunian [[BizarreBabyBoom citizens]] all in the name of "ForScience"! The end of their structured society as the three know it is nigh - as the MadScientist converts more of the citizens against their will, into [[BodyHorror cyborgs]]...
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A human, a DeadPanSnarker Martin and a [[FantasticRacism werewolf hating]] Police officer, TheyFightCrime... literally!
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A human, a DeadPanSnarker DeadpanSnarker Martin and a [[FantasticRacism werewolf hating]] Police officer, TheyFightCrime... literally!
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* AscendedToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: [[spoiler: Both the Lightning Mage and Vixen]]... Or is it?
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* AscendedToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: [[spoiler: Both the Lightning Mage and Vixen]]... Or is it?
* BigBad / TheChessmaster: The Queen [[spoiler: of Monsters of ''VideoGame/AdventureQuestWorlds'']]
** TheDragon: Larosin and later ''Pascha''
*** TheMole: [[spoiler: Larosin]]
** TheDragon: Larosin and later ''Pascha''
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** TakeThat: The entire 21st chapter is a fantasy-parody of [[spoiler:the Book of Revelation]]
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** TakeThat: The entire 21st chapter is a fantasy-parody of [[spoiler:the Book of Revelation]]Literature/BookOfRevelation]].
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* DepartmentOfRedundancy: Kaede Maple (full name) has the [[RuleOfFunny same effect of saying]] ''Maple-Leaf Maple'' twice.
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* DepartmentOfRedundancy: DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Kaede Maple (full name) has the [[RuleOfFunny same effect of saying]] ''Maple-Leaf Maple'' twice.
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* ElementalPowers: TheForce acts like this (no, not THAT [[StarWars Force]])
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* ElementalPowers: TheForce acts like this (no, not THAT [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Force]])
* TheEndingChangesEverything
* [[spoiler: TheEvilsOfFreeWill]]: Priestess Pascha firmly believes in this [[ReligiousHorror theory]]...
* TheFairFolk: The Black Prince himself [[spoiler: is a changeling,]] which makes him become a FatalAttractor
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* FusionDance: [[DragonballZ [[Manga/DragonBall FUU-SION, HA!]]
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* {{Industrialized Evil}}: The whole concept.
* {{Inferred Holocaust}}: [[spoiler: Chapter 21 '''seems''' to end happily for everyone, but the ''Chaos Lord'' saga is coming up]]
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** IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Misako to the Lightning Mage
*{{Industrialized Evil}}: IndustrializedEvil: The whole concept.
*{{Inferred Holocaust}}: InferredHolocaust: [[spoiler: Chapter 21 '''seems''' to end happily for everyone, but the ''Chaos Lord'' saga is coming up]]
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* TheLifestream: Most Solunians and (even humans spawn) from [[LifeEnergy the Force]] and dissolve into the essence when they [[NostalgiaHeaven end their existence]], with a few [[SelfInflictedHell exceptions]] of course...
* [[TheNothingAfterDeath The Almost Nothing Afterlife]]: Duh. That or SelfInflictedHell...
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* [[TenLittleMurderVictims Seven Little Murder Victims]]: Who-dunnit?
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* TheBigBad / TheChessMaster: The Queen [[spoiler: of Monsters of ''VideoGame/AdventureQuestWorlds'']]
** TheDragon: Larosin and later ''Pascha''
*** TheMole: [[spoiler: Larosin]]
* {{The Ending Changes Everything}}
* TheFairFolk: The Black Prince himself [[spoiler: is a changeling,]] which makes him become a FatalAttractor
* [[spoiler:ThereAreNoTherapists]]: Which then leads to the 'Dysfunction Junction' listed above, of course, the AdultsAreUseless.
* [[TheNothingAfterDeath The Almost Nothing Afterlife]]: Duh. That or SelfInflictedHell...
* [[spoiler: TheEvilsOfFreeWill]]: Priestess Pascha firmly believes in this [[ReligiousHorror theory]]...
** TheDragon: Larosin and later ''Pascha''
*** TheMole: [[spoiler: Larosin]]
* {{The Ending Changes Everything}}
* TheFairFolk: The Black Prince himself [[spoiler: is a changeling,]] which makes him become a FatalAttractor
* [[spoiler:ThereAreNoTherapists]]: Which then leads to the 'Dysfunction Junction' listed above, of course, the AdultsAreUseless.
* [[TheNothingAfterDeath The Almost Nothing Afterlife]]: Duh. That or SelfInflictedHell...
* [[spoiler: TheEvilsOfFreeWill]]: Priestess Pascha firmly believes in this [[ReligiousHorror theory]]...
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* TheLifestream: Most Solunians and (even humans spawn) from [[LifeEnergy the Force]] and dissolve into the essence when they [[NostalgiaHeaven end their existence]], with a few [[SelfInflictedHell exceptions]] of course...
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* WeCanRuleTogether: TheBigBad promises this fate to [[spoiler: a reincarnated Misako]]. She almost gives in then therefore TakesAThirdOption.[[TakeAThirdOption takes a third option]].
* WhyDoYouKeepChangingJobs: Pascha. [[spoiler: She's an ''informant'' keeping tabs on her brother.]]
* WhyDoYouKeepChangingJobs: Pascha. [[spoiler: She's an ''informant'' keeping tabs on her brother.]]
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* {{You Can't Fight Fate}} A major theme of the fanfic.
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* {{You Can't Fight Fate}} YouCantFightFate A major theme of the fanfic.
* [[YouHaveToBelieveMe You'll HaveTo to Believe Us]]: Frequently alluded to...
* [[YouHaveToBelieveMe You'll Have
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* ShoutOut: To ''Franchise/IndianaJones'', ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'', ''Series/{{Heroes}}'' and the [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk Hulk]].
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* ShoutOut: To ''Franchise/IndianaJones'', ''NeonGenesisEvangelion'', ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'', ''Series/{{Heroes}}'' and the [[ComicBook/IncredibleHulk Hulk]].
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* CrapsackWorld: Soluna City (prior the Reset) exposes seams of a corrupt PoliceState ultra-dependent on technology. Everyone has personal problems, and suffers through them.* TakeThat: The entire 21st chapter is a fantasy-parody of [[spoiler:Book of Revelation]]
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** TakeThat: The entire 21st chapter is a fantasy-parody of [[spoiler:Book of Revelation]]
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* DatingServiceDisaster: Vixen tries to send her email to Kayo, but ''[[TheCasanova somebody else]]'' intercepts that... It ends [[RapeIsLove badly.]]
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*** Here's a big ShoutOut: [[spoiler: 'The One']] is similar to the [[http://animorphs.wikia.com/wiki/The_One Animorphs character]].
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* {{You Can't Fight Fate}} A major theme of the fanfic.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: Numerous. Let us count the ways...
** FreudianSlipperySlope: Larosin says ''curious'' things numerous times to Koko. Real subtle ([[FoeRomanceSubtext not]]).
** WholesomeCrossDresser: Misako, but Larosin's [[LoveAtFirstPunch passive-aggressive]] behaviour ''doesn't'' help.
** DoubleEntendre: Since they're mostly (and psychologically) young teens, [[HomoEroticSubtext this]] crops up a lot...
** [[PrinciplesZealot Priestess Pascha]] acts ''really'' creepily [[FreudWasRight enthusiastic]], [[spoiler: while brainwashed by the Queen]]. Melkior points this discrepancy out. The Priestess's priceless [[AllHailTheGreatGodMickey reaction]]? Pascha tells her [[ShutUpHannibal to can it]].
** FreudianSlipperySlope: Larosin says ''curious'' things numerous times to Koko. Real subtle ([[FoeRomanceSubtext not]]).
** WholesomeCrossDresser: Misako, but Larosin's [[LoveAtFirstPunch passive-aggressive]] behaviour ''doesn't'' help.
** DoubleEntendre: Since they're mostly (and psychologically) young teens, [[HomoEroticSubtext this]] crops up a lot...
** [[PrinciplesZealot Priestess Pascha]] acts ''really'' creepily [[FreudWasRight enthusiastic]], [[spoiler: while brainwashed by the Queen]]. Melkior points this discrepancy out. The Priestess's priceless [[AllHailTheGreatGodMickey reaction]]? Pascha tells her [[ShutUpHannibal to can it]].
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