History FanFic / NerveDamage

* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler: Shinji is killed by Shirou. [[AssholeVictim He deserved it in spades.]]]]

* BoobsOfSteel: Of the four Sabers, Nero is the bustiest, and physically the strongest.
--> '''Saber Lily:''' "She's from an earlier time than us, yet we all look almost exactly the same. She may have some basis for thought."
--> '''Saber Alter:''' "But... She..."
--> '''Saber Nero:''' "ALMOST exactly. It seems you three haven't quite inherited one of my more important... hmm... assets."
--> [[{{Beat}} The three alternates paused]], [[DeathGlare then glared at Nero for the blatant insult.]] [[ACupAngst The fact that it was true rubbed salt in the wound.]]

* DrivesLikeCrazy: Apparently, Lancelot flies ''any'' airplane [[LightNovel/FateZero like he's in a dogfight]]. Luvia gets quite airsick.

* ImprovisedWeapon: Lancelot's "[[InstantExpert Knight of Honor]]" Noble Phantasm from ''LightNovel/FateZero'' returns, letting him expertly wield anything he can identify as a weapon. Hector's Noble Phantasm ability subverts the trope; anything he wields becomes a spear.

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10636447/LoneTaker LoneTaker]] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself. After many more negative reviews, the author stopped responding to reviews and declared they will eventually finish the story for their own satisfaction. On May 19, 2021, the author cancelled the fic, saying they were no longer satisfied with it. Twelve hours later, the author deleted the story. However, the chapters can be downloaded [[https://fichub.net/fic/enyu4cjc here]].

* SeriousBusiness: Shirou in [[UncannyValley God Of Cooking mode]] takes his attitude as a SupremeChef to ludicrous levels.

* AwesomeMcCoolName: Several of the Servants' full/true names. Examples: [[MsFanservice Nero Claudius Caesar Augustus Germanicus]], [[WizardClassic Merlin Ambrosius]], [[spoiler: [[TheEmperor Gaius Julius Caesar]]]].
* BadassArmy: [[spoiler: Waver Velvet possesses the combined might of Ionioi Hetairoi and the [[UsefulNotes/GenghisKhan entire Mongol Horde]].]]
*** [[spoiler: Napoleon brings out the firepower of not only La Grande Armee, but also ''the entire history of France'', against Gilgamesh. And he outpowers the ''Gate of Babylon'' with it!]]

* MeleeATrois: [[UpToEleven FAR more than just three]]. The original seven servants are now bumped up to 28, FOUR TIMES the original. And all of them TookALevelInBadass.

* UpToEleven: Again, 28 Servants. Including (besides the canon ones and the three other Sabers Shirou has):
** [[spoiler: Iskander, Genghis Khan, Fate/Apocrypha's Jack the Ripper, Napoleon, Lancelot, Merlin, Siegfried, Samson, Moses, Scathath, Lu Bu, Hector, Odysseus, Karna, Achilles, the Zealot Assassin, Simo Hayha, and finally Julius Caesar.]]

* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The expanded Master[=/=]Servant roster ensures this. See UpToEleven.

The gem of the fic is that, instead of going with the route of [[MarySue "Shirou the Broken Magus"]] whose team-up with the Sabers makes them unstoppable, it makes ''every'' Servant in the War into an absolute badass. [[UltimateShowdownOfUltimateDestiny ALL OF THEM]]. Making the original "fracas" into a [[TheJuggernaut fight]] [[MadeOfIron between]] [[{{Determinator}} Titans]] [[TheAce so epic]] that made their canon counterparts look like amateurs.

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10636447/LoneTaker LoneTaker]] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself. After many more negative reviews, the author stopped responding to reviews and declared they will eventually finish the story for their own satisfaction. On May 19, 2021, the author cancelled the fic, saying they were no longer satisfied with it. Twelve hours later, the author deleted the story.

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/10636447/LoneTaker LoneTaker]] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13165010/1/Nerve-Damage-Season-2-Sensory-Overload Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload]]''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself. After many more negative reviews, the author stopped responding to reviews and declared they will eventually finish the story for their own satisfaction. On May 19, 2021, the author cancelled the fic, saying they were no longer satisfied with it.

''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8535914/1/Nerve-Damage Nerve Damage]]'' ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/nerve-damage-fate-stay-night-fanfic.234555/ Spacebattles thread]]) is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' fanfic by [=CrossyCross=].

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [=LoneTaker=] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13165010/1/Nerve-Damage-Season-2-Sensory-Overload Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload]]''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself. After many more negative reviews, the author stopped responding to reviews and declared they will eventually finish the story for their own satisfaction. On May 19, 2021, the author cancelled the fic, saying they were no longer satisfied with it.

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [=LoneTaker=] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13165010/1/Nerve-Damage-Season-2-Sensory-Overload Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload]]''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself. After many more negative reviews, the author stopped responding to reviews and declared they will eventually finish the story for their own satisfaction.

When [=CrossyCross=] put the fic on hiatus, he allowed the story to be continued by other authors. One such author, [=LoneTaker=] took up the offer on May 2018. However, after many negative reviews, ''Nerve Damage: Season 2'' was cancelled and deleted. Then the author decided to try again and at the very end of 2018, released ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13165010/1/Nerve-Damage-Season-2-Sensory-Overload Nerve Damage: Season 2: Sensory Overload]]''. In this continuation, Angra Mainyu gets angry that despite there being 28 Servants, no one important has died. So he decides to intervene again and summons four Avengers who can function without Masters and whose only purpose is to kill as many people as possible. This action causes four Rulers to be summoned, again without Masters, who attempt to protect the people and keep the Avengers in check. Meanwhile, a detective and his assistant arrive in Fuyuki to investigate the events of ten years ago (the Great Fuyuki Fire) and discover history may be repeating itself.