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* WhatTheHellHero: Ruby's reaction to Alcatraz [[spoiler:[[KillEmAll killing every White Fang member]] [[IDidWhatIHadToDo he came across]] while sneaking in to rescue team RWBY from being executed]], especially since he didn't even ''try'' to spare any of them. While Alcatraz tells her that [[IDidWhatIHadToDo he did what was necessary]], as just [[TapOnTheHead knocking them out]] wouldn't guarantee that they wouldn't wake up and raise the alarm, and that [[spoiler: everyone he killed deserved to die for kidnapping teenagers, he actually starts to question himself, wondering if he ''could'' have done a low-casualty mission, and wonders how much of his actions were him and how much was what SECOND wanted him to do]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: Ruby's reaction to Alcatraz [[spoiler:[[KillEmAll killing [[spoiler:killing every White Fang member]] member [[IDidWhatIHadToDo he came across]] while sneaking in to rescue team RWBY from being executed]], especially since he didn't even ''try'' to spare any of them. While Alcatraz tells her that [[IDidWhatIHadToDo he did what was necessary]], as just [[TapOnTheHead knocking them out]] wouldn't guarantee that they wouldn't wake up and raise the alarm, and that [[spoiler: everyone he killed deserved to die for kidnapping teenagers, he actually starts to question himself, wondering if he ''could'' have done a low-casualty mission, and wonders how much of his actions were him and how much was what SECOND wanted him to do]].
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.Nanosuits And Soul Magic to Fanfic.Nanosuits And Soul Magic. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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* KiAttacks: Aura, as per ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' standard. Alcatraz frequently curses it as bullshit soul magic.
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* KiAttacks: KiManipulation: Aura, as per ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' standard. Alcatraz frequently curses it as bullshit soul magic.
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** Not entirely. He's still vastly more powerful than any normal human and many of the low tier Aura users. He was even able to off an Ursa in melee and kills Beowulfs by the dozens. Mostly only some named characters are able to match or surpass him.
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** Not entirely. He's still vastly more powerful than any normal human and many of the low tier Aura users. He [[spoiler:He was even able to off an Ursa in melee and kills Beowulfs by the dozens. Mostly only some named characters are able to match or surpass him.]]
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Alcatraz is too powerful to be tiny fish in normal pond. Added adnotation.
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* GoodParents: Dr. Polendina, whose response to suddenly realising that he had just created a new life form and having it ask if he's its father was to say yes.
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* GoodParents: Dr. Polendina, whose response to suddenly realising realizing that he had just created a new life form and having it ask if he's its father was to say yes.
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**Not entirely. He's still vastly more powerful than any normal human and many of the low tier Aura users. He was even able to off an Ursa in melee and kills Beowulfs by the dozens. Mostly only some named characters are able to match or surpass him.
