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Read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11683926/1/Mabel-in-Butterhurst here]].
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Read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11683926/1/Mabel-in-Butterhurst here]].
here]], [[DeadFic though it hasn't been updated since 2015]].
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* ExtremeOmnisexual: Sebastian mentions his father as this in chapter 2. At first he says that his goal was to bed every ''woman'' in Butterhurst, but then changes it to "everything", remembering rumors about his father and 'a few animals'.
* TheGlomp: Naomi does this upon meeting Mabel.
* TheGlomp: Naomi does this upon meeting Mabel.
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* ExtremeOmnisexual: Sebastian mentions his father as this in chapter 2. At first he initially says that his father's goal was to bed every ''woman'' in Butterhurst, but then changes it to "everything", remembering rumors about his father and 'a few animals'.
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* IKnowKarate: Mabel thinks about using this trope when she first encounters Sebastian, not sure if she can trust him or not.
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* MagicalGirl: The main theme of the story is Mabel becoming one, as well as other girls.
* MakeAWish: Sebastian offers each of the girls 'any wish they want' in exchange for their service to Butterhurst. Rather or not these wishes will be corrupted or not is yet to be seen, as we're still early on in the story.
* MakeAWish: Sebastian offers each of the girls 'any wish they want' in exchange for their service to Butterhurst. Rather or not these wishes will be corrupted or not is yet to be seen, as we're still early on in the story.
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* ShoutOut: Ella is introduced playing a puzzle game with play coins, heavily implied to be ''VideoGame/ProfessorLayton'' (or its equivalent in Butterhurst).
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** Ella is introduced playing a puzzle game with play coins, heavily implied to be ''VideoGame/ProfessorLayton'' (or its equivalent in Butterhurst).
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* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Mabel's first reaction to Sebastian's accent.
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%% * GettingCrapPastThe Radar: Due to overwhelming and persistent misuse, GCPTR is on-page examples only until 01 June 2021. If you are reading this in the future, please check the trope page to make sure your example fits the current definition.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: During the flashback in chapter 2, Sebastian starts to tell the girls his father banned witches from Butterhurst "because they didn't give good...", but then changes it to "they weren't to his satisfaction."
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* ShoutOut: Ella is introduced playing a puzzle game with play coins, heavily implied to be ''ProfessorLayton'' (or its equivalent in Butterhurst).
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* MakeAWish: Sebastian offers each of the girls 'any wish they want' in exchange for their service to Butterhurst. Rather or not these wishes will be corrupted or not is yet to be seen, as we're still early on in the story.
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When Mabel arrives in Butterhurst, she meets three other girls - Angel, Ella, and Naomi - who have also been recruited as magical girls, and as such their journey begins.
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* BlackComedy: Sebastian cracks up while telling the story of his birth, which involves his father committing suicide right in front of him. The girls don't find it amusing.
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* ExtremeOmnisexual: Sebastian mentions his father as this in chapter 2. At first he says that his goal was to bed every ''woman'' in Butterhurst, but then changes it to "everything", remembering rumors about his father and 'a few animals'.
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: During the flashback in chapter 2, Sebastian starts to tell the girls his father banned witches from Butterhurst "because they didn't give good...", but then changes it to "they weren't to his satisfaction."
* TheGlomp: Naomi does this upon meeting Mabel.
* HomoeroticSubtext: It's mentioned that Ella's face briefly turns to 'affection' the first time she sees Mabel. She also stumbles her words and acts quite awkward around her.
* IgnoreTheFanService: Sebastian isn't entertained by Naomi's "tight-fitting dress" as a normal twelve-year-old boy would be...however, he reveals immediately afterwards he's not a normal twelve-year-old boy (see Really700YearsOld).
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: During the flashback in chapter 2, Sebastian starts to tell the girls his father banned witches from Butterhurst "because they didn't give good...", but then changes it to "they weren't to his satisfaction."
* TheGlomp: Naomi does this upon meeting Mabel.
* HomoeroticSubtext: It's mentioned that Ella's face briefly turns to 'affection' the first time she sees Mabel. She also stumbles her words and acts quite awkward around her.
* IgnoreTheFanService: Sebastian isn't entertained by Naomi's "tight-fitting dress" as a normal twelve-year-old boy would be...however, he reveals immediately afterwards he's not a normal twelve-year-old boy (see Really700YearsOld).
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* INeedToGoIronMyDog: Mabel tries to use this excuse on Sebastian in chapter 2, only for him to tell her she doesn't have a dog.
-->'''Mabel:''' ''(thinking)'' ''Darn, he really has been watching me.''
* INeverToldYouMyName: Mabel is understandably freaked out when Sebastian knows her name immediately in the first chapter.
-->'''Mabel:''' ''(thinking)'' ''Darn, he really has been watching me.''
* INeverToldYouMyName: Mabel is understandably freaked out when Sebastian knows her name immediately in the first chapter.
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* MustHaveCaffeine: When we first meet Angel, she's extremely tired, sarcastic, and irritable, and greets Mabel a bit rudely. Once she wakes up and has coffee, she's in a much better mood.
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* Really700YearsOld: Sebastian is revealed as this in chapter 2. He's actually lost count of his age.
* ShoutOut: Ella is introduced playing a puzzle game with play coins, heavily implied to be ''ProfessorLayton'' (or its equivalent in Butterhurst).
** [[Anime/KillLaKill Ella wears a 'don't lose your way' T-shirt when Mabel first meets her.]]
* VoluntaryShapeshifter: Sebastian, though he's only mastered a few forms.
* ShoutOut: Ella is introduced playing a puzzle game with play coins, heavily implied to be ''ProfessorLayton'' (or its equivalent in Butterhurst).
** [[Anime/KillLaKill Ella wears a 'don't lose your way' T-shirt when Mabel first meets her.]]
* VoluntaryShapeshifter: Sebastian, though he's only mastered a few forms.
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''Mabel in Butterhurst'' is a ''{{WesternAnimation/Gravity Falls}}'' fanfiction written by author "[=TechnoFusion=]".
One day while trying to lure customers to the Shack for Grunkle Stan, Mabel encounters a strange boy. She's never met him before, but he somehow knows her name. He continues to act weirder and weirder, and finally asks her to speak privately with him. He explains that his name is Sebastian, and that he comes from another land - another ''universe'', in fact - known as Butterhurst. Fifty years ago, the land was attacked by a rare breed of monsters, causing mass death and destruction. They ''thought'' the magical girls of fifty years past slaughtered them all...but somehow or another, more have turned up.
In their attempt to find new magical girls, the watchers of Butterhurst encountered Mabel and her amazing battles against mythical creatures with her brother on an almost daily basis. They decided that she would be a great magical girl, and as such had Sebastian make her the offer.
Read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11683926/1/Mabel-in-Butterhurst here]].
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!!''Mabel in Butterhurst'' provides examples of:
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: The first chapter opens up to Mabel in the middle of a recurring nightmare, where the walls are "painted red" and she's running from something unknown...
* IKnowKarate: Mabel thinks about using this trope when she first encounters Sebastian, not sure if she can trust him or not.
* MagicalGirl: The main theme of the story is Mabel becoming one, as well as other girls.
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Trying to lure Sebastian in as a tourist to the Mystery Shack in chapter 1, Mabel uses this line:
-->'''Mabel:''' Ever seen a sasquatch with a human crotch before? I'll give you an uncensored view!
* NoMoreForMe: In chapter 1, Mabel believes that her famous Mabel Juice might be causing her nightmares.
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Mabel's first reaction to Sebastian's accent.
One day while trying to lure customers to the Shack for Grunkle Stan, Mabel encounters a strange boy. She's never met him before, but he somehow knows her name. He continues to act weirder and weirder, and finally asks her to speak privately with him. He explains that his name is Sebastian, and that he comes from another land - another ''universe'', in fact - known as Butterhurst. Fifty years ago, the land was attacked by a rare breed of monsters, causing mass death and destruction. They ''thought'' the magical girls of fifty years past slaughtered them all...but somehow or another, more have turned up.
In their attempt to find new magical girls, the watchers of Butterhurst encountered Mabel and her amazing battles against mythical creatures with her brother on an almost daily basis. They decided that she would be a great magical girl, and as such had Sebastian make her the offer.
Read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11683926/1/Mabel-in-Butterhurst here]].
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!!''Mabel in Butterhurst'' provides examples of:
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: The first chapter opens up to Mabel in the middle of a recurring nightmare, where the walls are "painted red" and she's running from something unknown...
* IKnowKarate: Mabel thinks about using this trope when she first encounters Sebastian, not sure if she can trust him or not.
* MagicalGirl: The main theme of the story is Mabel becoming one, as well as other girls.
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: Trying to lure Sebastian in as a tourist to the Mystery Shack in chapter 1, Mabel uses this line:
-->'''Mabel:''' Ever seen a sasquatch with a human crotch before? I'll give you an uncensored view!
* NoMoreForMe: In chapter 1, Mabel believes that her famous Mabel Juice might be causing her nightmares.
* WhatTheHellIsThatAccent: Mabel's first reaction to Sebastian's accent.
