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-->'''Mr. Satou''': "You're [[HeyYou that girl with the burns all over her]], right? What's your story anyway? You catch the oven on fire or something? And why are you [[ShrinkingViolet so timid]]? You need to be more upfront. You're never going to meet a good man if you’re acting like a scared rabbit all the time."
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou's remarks about Hanako's burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it's a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou's remarks makes a cruel remark about Hanako's burns. If burn scars, despite him having been warned about such in advance. It's worse if you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in her scars from the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it's a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance.life]],]]. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Hisao's boss at his job tries to invoke this by getting his employees to call him “Boss”.
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Hisao's boss at his job tries to invoke this by getting his employees to call him “Boss”."Boss".
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero (probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey'', considering the mechanics). He doesn't want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.
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* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero (probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey'', considering the mechanics). He doesn't want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.RequiredSecondaryPowers.
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[[http://pastebin.com/XmFGbHzZ Lilly Epilogue (Good Ending) Family Matters]] is a ContinuationFic set a year after Lilly’s good ending in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''. Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn that Lilly’s parents are coming to visit. A clash of personalities ensues, and long-suppressed personal issues rise to the surface.
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[[http://pastebin.com/XmFGbHzZ Lilly Epilogue (Good Ending) Family Matters]] is a ContinuationFic set a year after Lilly’s Lilly's good ending in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''. ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn thatLilly’s Lilly's parents are coming to visit. A clash of personalities ensues, and long-suppressed personal issues rise to the surface.
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Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn that
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* GenkiGirl: Lilly’s mother seems to be an older version of one.
* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couch.
* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couch.
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* GenkiGirl: Lilly’s Lilly's mother seems to be an older version of one.
* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this whenthey’re they're having sex on the couch.
* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when
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* HeyYou: Mr. Satou calls Hisao “boy” and refers to Hanako as “the burn girl”. [[spoiler:He starts referring to Hisao by his first name midway through their conversation alone]].
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* HeyYou: Mr. Satou calls Hisao “boy” "boy" and refers to Hanako as “the "the burn girl”.girl". [[spoiler:He starts referring to Hisao by his first name midway through their conversation alone]].
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s remarks about Hanako’s burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
* LoveMartyr: Hisao comments on how willing Lilly is to overlook her father’s transgressions compared to Akira. [[spoiler:Subverted when she gets pushed too far and calls him out on his past and present actions]].
* LoveMartyr: Hisao comments on how willing Lilly is to overlook her father’s transgressions compared to Akira. [[spoiler:Subverted when she gets pushed too far and calls him out on his past and present actions]].
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s Satou's remarks about Hanako’s Hanako's burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s it's a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in ''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
* LoveMartyr: Hisao comments on how willing Lilly is to overlook herfather’s father's transgressions compared to Akira. [[spoiler:Subverted when she gets pushed too far and calls him out on his past and present actions]].
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* NoNameGiven: Hisao’s boss. Lilly's parents' given names are never revealed
* NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao and Hanako’s disabilities and refer to Yamaku as a "cripple school" because he has diabetes, but no one else (except possibly his wife) agrees.
* NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao and Hanako’s disabilities and refer to Yamaku as a "cripple school" because he has diabetes, but no one else (except possibly his wife) agrees.
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* NoNameGiven: Hisao’s Hisao's boss. Lilly's parents' given names are never revealed
* NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao andHanako’s Hanako's disabilities and refer to Yamaku as a "cripple school" because he has diabetes, but no one else (except possibly his wife) agrees.
* NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao and
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* OhCrap: Hisao’s reaction, with a [[PrecisionFStrike stronger expletive]], to hearing that his future in-laws are visiting.
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-->'''Hisao Narrating''': (after hearing about the Satous coming) [[OhCrap Oh fuck]].
-->'''Akira''': (after her father’s KickTheDog moment) I can’t believe that asshole!
-->'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: “[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOU BASTARD!!]]” ]]
-->'''Akira''': (after her father’s KickTheDog moment) I can’t believe that asshole!
-->'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: “[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOU BASTARD!!]]” ]]
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-->'''Hisao Narrating''': (after hearing about the Satous coming) [[OhCrap Oh fuck]].
-->'''Akira''':fuck]].\\
'''Akira''': (after herfather’s father's KickTheDog moment) I can’t can't believe that asshole!
-->'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: “[[CallingTheOldManOutasshole!\\
'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: "[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOUBASTARD!!]]” BASTARD!!]]" ]]
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'''Akira''': (after her
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'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: "[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOU
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* TemptingFate: "Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world." In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s parents coming.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero. He doesn’t want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.
** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey''.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero. He doesn’t want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.
** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey''.
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* TemptingFate: "Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world." In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s Lilly's parents coming.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortalhero. hero (probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey'', considering the mechanics). He doesn’t doesn't want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.
** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey''.RequiredSecondaryPowers.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal
** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably ''VideoGame/LostOdyssey''.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Mrs. Satou is quite happy to see her daughter again, and is quite enthusiastic in greeting Hanako and Hisao. Mr. Satou, on the other hand, refers to Hisao as "the man that single-handedly stole (his) daughter from (him)".
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Mrs. Satou is quite happy to see her daughter again, and is quite enthusiastic in greeting Hanako and Hisao. Mr. Satou, on the other hand, refers to Hisao as "the man that single-handedly stole (his) daughter from (him)".
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* InVinoVeritas: Hisao notices that Lilly is drinking slightly more than usual (she has three glasses of wine), and it makes her a bit more confident in speaking her mind to her father. [[spoiler:Especially she finally loses her temper at him]]].
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* InVinoVeritas: Hisao notices that Lilly is drinking slightly more than usual (she has three glasses of wine), and it makes her a bit more confident in speaking her mind to her father. [[spoiler:Especially she finally loses her temper at him]]].him]].
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** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably LostOdyssey.
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** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably LostOdyssey.''VideoGame/LostOdyssey''.
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s remarks about Hanako’s burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in KatawaShoujo.
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* KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s remarks about Hanako’s burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in KatawaShoujo.''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''.
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[[http://pastebin.com/XmFGbHzZ Lilly Epilogue (Good Ending) Family Matters]] is a ContinuationFic set a year after Lilly’s good ending in KatawaShoujo. Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn that Lilly’s parents are coming to visit. A clash of personalities ensues, and long-suppressed personal issues rise to the surface.
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[[http://pastebin.com/XmFGbHzZ Lilly Epilogue (Good Ending) Family Matters]] is a ContinuationFic set a year after Lilly’s good ending in KatawaShoujo.''VisualNovel/KatawaShoujo''. Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn that Lilly’s parents are coming to visit. A clash of personalities ensues, and long-suppressed personal issues rise to the surface.
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* BritishAccents: Lilly’s mother
-->"Aye, my little baby girl! It’s been so long! How have ya been, dearie?"
-->"Aye, my little baby girl! It’s been so long! How have ya been, dearie?"
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** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably LostOdyssey.
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** Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably LostOdyssey.
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** Probably a ShoutOut to LostOdyssey.
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** Probably a ShoutOut Considering it's implied to be an RPG, and the other mechanics she mentions, with the Immortals coming back after a few turns and the game ending if all players are down, it's probably LostOdyssey.
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* ObnoxiousInLaws: Mr. Satou. Well, ''future'' in-law, to be precise.
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* JerkAss: Mr. Satou, who talks down to Hisao and Hanako and actively insults their disabilities [[spoiler:although he is not without redeeming features; in the end, decides to approve of Hisao being with Lilly and apologize to Lilly]].
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* InsultFriendlyFire: Mr. Satou insults Hisao and Hanako by calling them "cripples" despite his own daughter being blind. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by [[spoiler:Lilly herself]].
* JerkAss: Mr. Satou, who talks down to Hisao and Hanako and actively insults their disabilities [[spoiler:although he is not without redeeming features; in the end, decides to approve of Hisao being with Lilly and apologize to Lilly]].
* JerkAss: Mr. Satou, who talks down to Hisao and Hanako and actively insults their disabilities [[spoiler:although he is not without redeeming features; in the end, decides to approve of Hisao being with Lilly and apologize to Lilly]].
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* CoitusUninterruptus: Hisao and Lilly, by Hanako getting up for a glass of water
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* SocialServicesDoNotExist: Averted. Hisao and Lilly, concerned about what kind of foster home Hanako might end up in if she were sent back to social services, decide to get an apartment where she can stay.
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* SocialServicesDoNotExist: RougeAnglesOfSatin: "At first, the owner was weary about hiring a blind girl to serve"
* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted. Hisao and Lilly, concerned about what kind of foster home Hanako might end up in if she were sent back to social services, decide to get an apartment where she canstay.stay.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Mrs. Satou to Lilly.
* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted. Hisao and Lilly, concerned about what kind of foster home Hanako might end up in if she were sent back to social services, decide to get an apartment where she can
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Mrs. Satou to Lilly.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Mrs. Satou is quite happy to see her daughter again, and is quite enthusiastic in greeting Hanako and Hisao. Mr. Satou, on the other hand, refers to Hisao as "the man that single-handedly stole (his) daughter from (him)".
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* FollowInMyFootsteps: Boss wants his son to take over his ramen shop, but is open-minded about his
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* FollowInMyFootsteps: Boss wants his son to take over his ramen shop, but is open-minded about hishis desire to become an artist.
* GamerChick: Hanako likes role-playing games because of their stories.
* GamerChick: Hanako likes role-playing games because of their stories.
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* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couch
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* GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couchcouch.
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* LuminescentBlush: Hanako after being complimented on her throwing skills at Tanabata. Hisao and Lilly, after Hanako notices them starting to have sex.
* NoNameGiven: Hisao’s boss. Lilly's parents' given names are never revealed
* NoNameGiven: Hisao’s boss. Lilly's parents' given names are never revealed
* SocialServicesDoNotExist: Averted. Hisao and Lilly, concerned about what kind of foster home Hanako might end up in if she were sent back to social services, decide to get an apartment where she can stay.
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* TemptingFate: “Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world.” In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s parents coming.
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* TemptingFate: “Considering "Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world.” " In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s parents coming.
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[[http://pastebin.com/XmFGbHzZ Lilly Epilogue (Good Ending) Family Matters]] is a ContinuationFic set a year after Lilly’s good ending in KatawaShoujo. Hisao is living with Lilly and Hanako in an apartment as they prepare to start university, but learn that Lilly’s parents are coming to visit. A clash of personalities ensues, and long-suppressed personal issues rise to the surface.
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*BerserkButton / BewareTheNiceOnes: Lilly [[spoiler:can accept her father disagreeing with her decisions, but she will not stand for her best friend or boyfriend being insulted]].
*BritishAccents: Lilly’s mother
-->“Aye, my little baby girl! It’s been so long! How have ya been, dearie?”
*CallingTheOldManOut: Akira does this as the discussion shifts to Lilly staying in Japan or going to Scotland; when Mr. Satou brings up Lilly's difficulties in her life in Japan, Akira counters by saying he should have considered it when leaving them behind. [[spoiler:After a while, Lilly gets in on this, too]].
*DontCallMeSir: Mr. Satou says this to Hisao, although clearly not in the sense that he wishes for less formality.
*EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Hisao’s boss at his job tries to invoke this by getting his employees to call him “Boss”.
*ExtremeDoormat: Mrs. Satou defends her husband's actions when an argument breaks out. [[spoiler:Her younger daughter, however, subverts this]]
*FacePalm: Akira after her father [[KickTheDog makes an extremely insensitive reference]] to Hanako as "that girl with the burns all over her".
*FollowInMyFootsteps: Boss wants his son to take over his ramen shop, but is open-minded about his
*GenkiGirl: Lilly’s mother seems to be an older version of one.
*GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couch
*GetOut: [[spoiler:After her anger with her father reaches her peak, Lilly orders him out of the apartment]]
*HeyYou: Mr. Satou calls Hisao “boy” and refers to Hanako as “the burn girl”. [[spoiler:He starts referring to Hisao by his first name midway through their conversation alone]].
*JerkAss: Mr. Satou, who talks down to Hisao and Hanako and actively insults their disabilities [[spoiler:although he is not without redeeming features; in the end, decides to approve of Hisao being with Lilly and apologize to Lilly]].
*IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [[spoiler:Mr. Satou gives this to Hisao near the end, threatening to hunt him down if he hurts Lilly. Hisao has a hard time knowing how serious the threat is]].
*InVinoVeritas: Hisao notices that Lilly is drinking slightly more than usual (she has three glasses of wine), and it makes her a bit more confident in speaking her mind to her father. [[spoiler:Especially she finally loses her temper at him]]].
*KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s remarks about Hanako’s burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in KatawaShoujo.
*LoveMartyr: Hisao comments on how willing Lilly is to overlook her father’s transgressions compared to Akira. [[spoiler:Subverted when she gets pushed too far and calls him out on his past and present actions]].
*LoveObstructingParents: Mr. Satou [[spoiler:but he relents in the end]]. Mrs. Satou, on the other hand, likes Hisao and is glad that he survived his heart attack.
*NoNameGiven: Hisao’s boss.
*NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao and Hanako’s disabilities and refer to Yamaku as a "cripple school" because he has diabetes, but no one else (except possibly his wife) agrees.
*OhCrap: Hisao’s reaction, with a [[PrecisionFStrike stronger expletive]], to hearing that his future in-laws are visiting.
*[[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain Politically Incorrect Antagonist]]: Mr. Satou seems to hold disabled people in disdain. [[spoiler:Lilly points out that [[{{Hypocrite}} she should also]] be one of the "cripples" he's talking about, but he [[ShutUpKirk tells her not to put words in his mouth]].]]
*PrecisionFStrike: At a few points.
-->'''Hisao Narrating''': (after hearing about the Satous coming) [[OhCrap Oh fuck]].
-->'''Akira''': (after her father’s KickTheDog moment) I can’t believe that asshole!
-->'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: “[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOU BASTARD!!]]” ]]
*[[spoiler:TheyDo: Hisao and Lilly get engaged at the end]]
*TemptingFate: “Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world.” In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s parents coming.
*WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero. He doesn’t want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.
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*BerserkButton / BewareTheNiceOnes: Lilly [[spoiler:can accept her father disagreeing with her decisions, but she will not stand for her best friend or boyfriend being insulted]].
*BritishAccents: Lilly’s mother
-->“Aye, my little baby girl! It’s been so long! How have ya been, dearie?”
*CallingTheOldManOut: Akira does this as the discussion shifts to Lilly staying in Japan or going to Scotland; when Mr. Satou brings up Lilly's difficulties in her life in Japan, Akira counters by saying he should have considered it when leaving them behind. [[spoiler:After a while, Lilly gets in on this, too]].
*DontCallMeSir: Mr. Satou says this to Hisao, although clearly not in the sense that he wishes for less formality.
*EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Hisao’s boss at his job tries to invoke this by getting his employees to call him “Boss”.
*ExtremeDoormat: Mrs. Satou defends her husband's actions when an argument breaks out. [[spoiler:Her younger daughter, however, subverts this]]
*FacePalm: Akira after her father [[KickTheDog makes an extremely insensitive reference]] to Hanako as "that girl with the burns all over her".
*FollowInMyFootsteps: Boss wants his son to take over his ramen shop, but is open-minded about his
*GenkiGirl: Lilly’s mother seems to be an older version of one.
*GetARoom: At the end, Hanako asks Lilly and Hisao to do this when they’re having sex on the couch
*GetOut: [[spoiler:After her anger with her father reaches her peak, Lilly orders him out of the apartment]]
*HeyYou: Mr. Satou calls Hisao “boy” and refers to Hanako as “the burn girl”. [[spoiler:He starts referring to Hisao by his first name midway through their conversation alone]].
*JerkAss: Mr. Satou, who talks down to Hisao and Hanako and actively insults their disabilities [[spoiler:although he is not without redeeming features; in the end, decides to approve of Hisao being with Lilly and apologize to Lilly]].
*IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: [[spoiler:Mr. Satou gives this to Hisao near the end, threatening to hunt him down if he hurts Lilly. Hisao has a hard time knowing how serious the threat is]].
*InVinoVeritas: Hisao notices that Lilly is drinking slightly more than usual (she has three glasses of wine), and it makes her a bit more confident in speaking her mind to her father. [[spoiler:Especially she finally loses her temper at him]]].
*KickTheDog: Mr. Satou’s remarks about Hanako’s burns. If you know that [[spoiler:Hanako got these in the fire that killed her parents and would have died if [[MamaBear her mother had]] [[HeroicSacrifice not protected her at the cost of her own life]],]] it’s a borderline MoralEventHorizon crossing, especially considering that he was warned about it in advance. To put things into perspective, no one has done this to Hanako on-screen in KatawaShoujo.
*LoveMartyr: Hisao comments on how willing Lilly is to overlook her father’s transgressions compared to Akira. [[spoiler:Subverted when she gets pushed too far and calls him out on his past and present actions]].
*LoveObstructingParents: Mr. Satou [[spoiler:but he relents in the end]]. Mrs. Satou, on the other hand, likes Hisao and is glad that he survived his heart attack.
*NoNameGiven: Hisao’s boss.
*NWordPrivileges: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Mr. Satou seems to think he has a license to insult Hisao and Hanako’s disabilities and refer to Yamaku as a "cripple school" because he has diabetes, but no one else (except possibly his wife) agrees.
*OhCrap: Hisao’s reaction, with a [[PrecisionFStrike stronger expletive]], to hearing that his future in-laws are visiting.
*[[PoliticallyIncorrectVillain Politically Incorrect Antagonist]]: Mr. Satou seems to hold disabled people in disdain. [[spoiler:Lilly points out that [[{{Hypocrite}} she should also]] be one of the "cripples" he's talking about, but he [[ShutUpKirk tells her not to put words in his mouth]].]]
*PrecisionFStrike: At a few points.
-->'''Hisao Narrating''': (after hearing about the Satous coming) [[OhCrap Oh fuck]].
-->'''Akira''': (after her father’s KickTheDog moment) I can’t believe that asshole!
-->'''Lilly''':[[spoiler: “[[CallingTheOldManOut YOU HARDLY RAISED ME AT ALL, YOU BASTARD!!]]” ]]
*[[spoiler:TheyDo: Hisao and Lilly get engaged at the end]]
*TemptingFate: “Considering that just one year ago I probably felt like the most pathetic sap on the planet, things are definitely looking up. Everything just feels right with the world.” In the next scene, he finds out about Lilly’s parents coming.
*WhoWantsToLiveForever: Hisao has this thought as Hanako plays a video game with an immortal hero. He doesn’t want to [[MayflyDecemberRomance outlive his loved ones]], but wonders whether it would free him from worrying about his heart condition, which also discusses RequiredSecondaryPowers.