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* BeachEpisode: A breather they take in chapter twenty one.
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* WallAroundTheWorld: The city of Varuna is surrounded by a wall thick enough to lie comfortably on top of it. Hanna eagerly speculates what's behind it - he claims to have seen a glimpse [[spoiler: but it's a lie. He really does in the finale]].
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* IWantMyMyJetpack: The characters [[LampshadeHanging tend to notice]] just how [[UsedFuture ragged]] their world is by complaining this way.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: The Fireflies who retain their free will (most of the time), such as [[spoiler: Hanna. And Eli]].
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* [[spoiler: DisneyDeath: Oh, [[TearJerker Hanna...]]]]Hanna]], in [[PietaPlagiarism Eli's arms]], on the top of the wall, looking outside of the city for the first time...]]
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* ItIsDehumanising: Ellis [[InsistentTerminology insists]] on calling the Fireflies (and Undesirables in general, but he does this with special glee in the case of the former) "it".
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Worth:]]'s actions can be seen as this.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Worth:]]'s Worth]]'s actions can be seen as this.this, because yes, he only grew a conscience thanks to Hanna and used to be an utter prick (which is a mild and spoiler-free way of saying it).
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* CrowbarCombatant: Lamont normally prefers using his guile, but when [[LetsGetDangerous he has to fight]], he breaks out the crowbar.
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* LetMeGetThisStraight: Lamont asks to hear the group's plan one more time [[spoiler: in chapter twenty four]].
-->'''Lamont''': Can someone please explain this to me again? [[LampshadeHanging Because I really just want to be clear on how stupid this is]].
-->'''Lamont''': Can someone please explain this to me again? [[LampshadeHanging Because I really just want to be clear on how stupid this is]].
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* PistolWhipping: Eli on Adelaide, shedding some of her blood and [[spoiler: allowing for EmergencyTransformation of Conrad]].
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* PistolWhipping: Like in the source material, Eli on Adelaide, shedding some of her blood and [[spoiler: allowing for EmergencyTransformation of Conrad]].Conrad]].
* PowderKegCrowd: Which Veser (of all people) manages to channel into a full-blown revolution with a RousingSpeech.
* PowderKegCrowd: Which Veser (of all people) manages to channel into a full-blown revolution with a RousingSpeech.
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* IronicName: "Ahimsa" [[note]]a [[UsefulNotes/{{Buddhism}} buddhist]] concept of nonviolence[[/note]] being used as the name of the local StateSec.
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* TheNicknamer: Worth, and being the SirSwearsALot of an already pretty sweary group, the nicknames he gives are NotSafeForWork.
* TheNicknamer: Worth, and being the SirSwearsALot of an already pretty sweary group, the nicknames he gives are NotSafeForWork.
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* ConversationalTroping: Worth namechecks such tropes as ImperialstormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy (while ranting about the local {{mooks}} and their shooting skills) or NoHoldsBarredBeatdown. He also calls TheBigBad [[Westernanimation/DextersLaboratory Mandark]] and Eli - a [[Film/TheMatrix Matrix Reloaded]] reject.
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* BigEater: Veser (he's a growing boy!) and Hanna (whose powers [[CastFromHitPoints run on calories]], or so he says) both.
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* BigEater: Veser (he's a growing boy!) and Hanna (whose powers [[CastFromHitPoints [[CastFromCalories run on calories]], or so he says) both.
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Death'', but your [[DeadFic sequel is dead]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: This is said as an honest '''joke'''.'''[[JokeAndReceive joke]]'''. Dear gods of Plot...
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* OceanAwe: Ocean is (of course) behind a really huge wall, and Hanna eagerly speculates what's behind it. He claims to have seen a glimpse [[spoiler: but it's a lie - he really does in the finale]].
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* LaResistance: A RagtagBunchOfMisfits consisting of [[DrJerk Worth]], [[TheScrounger Lamont]], [[ThePollyanna Hanna]], [[ActionGirl Toni]] and [[MadBomber Veser]]. It is joined by [[NonActionGuy Conrad]] (who has nowhere to go) and [[DefectorFromDecadence Eli]] (technically a prisoner).
* MadDoctor: Ellis fancies himself one, but while he really is ''mad'', whoever gave him a doctorate should have their eyes and brain checked.
* MadDoctor: Ellis fancies himself one, but while he really is ''mad'', whoever gave him a doctorate should have their eyes and brain checked.
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* LaResistance: A RagtagBunchOfMisfits consisting of [[DrJerk Worth]], [[TheScrounger Lamont]], [[ThePollyanna Hanna]], [[ActionGirl Toni]] and [[MadBomber Veser]]. It is joined by [[NonActionGuy Conrad]] (who has nowhere to go) and [[DefectorFromDecadence Eli]] (technically a prisoner).
prisoner). There is also the "network" of people who scrounge stuff and keep Ahimsa away from the Undesirable parts of town, but TheMainCharactersDoEverything of plotty importance.
* MadDoctor: Ellis fancies himself one, but while he really is''mad'', ''giggling mad'', whoever gave him a doctorate should have their eyes and brain checked.
* MadDoctor: Ellis fancies himself one, but while he really is
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* BrilliantButLazy: [[spoiler: Compared to Ellis and most of his peers, Worth]], but he has reasons to not do much with it. Such as being marginally [[OnlySaneMan saner]] than his peers, and practically born wearing JadeColoredGlasses.
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* BrilliantButLazy: [[spoiler: Compared to Ellis and most of his peers, Worth]], Worth]] is an utter genius, but he has reasons to not do much with it. Such as being marginally [[OnlySaneMan saner]] than his peers, and practically born wearing JadeColoredGlasses.
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* TheInsomniac: Eli's existential worries manifest in this way. [[spoiler: After joining the RagtagBunchOfMisfits, he sleeps a lot better.]]
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* BadDreams: As is to be expected with DarkAndTroubledPast, Hanna gets them.
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* CrapsackWorld: Varuna is a VastBureaucracy, where any sort of individuality and independent thought is frowned upon. Spiderman comics, toys, video cassettes, plushies, action figures and posters are apparently ''illegal''. Living flowers are banned as a ''health hazard'', trees are scarce and most neighbourhoods in the city have an allotted number of artificial ones. Especially crapsack if you happen to be werewolf, vampire, magic user or Undesirable of any other sort.
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* CrapsackWorld: Varuna is a VastBureaucracy, where any sort of individuality and independent thought is frowned upon. Spiderman comics, toys, video cassettes, plushies, action figures and posters are apparently ''illegal''.''illegal'', along with most books (Literature/{{Bible}} included) and non-state-approved art. Living flowers are banned as a ''health hazard'', trees are scarce and most neighbourhoods in the city have an allotted number of artificial ones. Especially crapsack if you happen to be werewolf, vampire, magic user or Undesirable of any other sort.
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* {{Flight}}: Hanna's powers include it. Veser has a hoverboard, which is like a skateboard, only flying.
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* {{Flight}}: Hanna's powers include it. Veser has a hoverboard, which is like a skateboard, only flying.flying - this seems a widespread technology in this world.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: This is said as an honest '''joke'''. Dear gods of Plot...
-->[[spoiler: "Maybe I'm a sleeper agent," his partner said with a smile of his own.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}: This is said as an honest '''joke'''. Dear gods of Plot...
-->[[spoiler: "Maybe I'm a sleeper agent," his partner said with a smile of his own.]]
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* ShipTease: Some Toni/Conrad Toni/Conrad.
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* TheInsomniac: Eli's existential worries manifest in this way. [spoiler: After joining the RagtagBunchOfMisfits, he sleeps a lot better.]]
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* CrapsackWorld: Varuna is a VastBureaucracy, where any sort of individuality and independent thought is frowned upon. Spiderman comics, toys, video cassettes, plushies, action figures and posters are apparently "illegal''. Living flowers are banned as a ''health hazard'', trees are scarce and most neighbourhoods in the city have an allotted number of artificial ones. Especially crapsack if you happen to be werewolf, vampire, magic user or Undesirable of any other sort.
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* CrapsackWorld: Varuna is a VastBureaucracy, where any sort of individuality and independent thought is frowned upon. Spiderman comics, toys, video cassettes, plushies, action figures and posters are apparently "illegal''.''illegal''. Living flowers are banned as a ''health hazard'', trees are scarce and most neighbourhoods in the city have an allotted number of artificial ones. Especially crapsack if you happen to be werewolf, vampire, magic user or Undesirable of any other sort.
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After a variety of terrible plagues and wars, mankind has finally united into several city-states. One of these is the City of Varuna. Sprawling thousands of miles and surrounded by unmovable walls, the City of Varuna lives in isolation from the outside world, taught only what the government wants them to hear. People are under constant watch and surveillance under the name of protection. Technology has advanced beyond our wildest dreams. The only issue now is Undesirables. Paranormal creatures, vampires and werewolves, remnants of an ancient and dying world. These creatures are expected to register with the government and are seen as second class citizens, living in oppression so as to avoid tainting the other citizens and ruining their quality of life. These creatures are hunted down by a special section of the police force, the Ahimsa.
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After a variety of terrible plagues and wars, mankind has finally united into several city-states. One of these is the City of Varuna. Sprawling thousands of miles and surrounded by unmovable walls, the City of Varuna lives in isolation from the outside world, taught only what the government wants them to hear. People are under constant watch and surveillance under the name of protection. Technology has advanced beyond our wildest dreams. The only issue now is Undesirables. Paranormal creatures, vampires and werewolves, remnants of an ancient and dying world. These creatures are expected to register with the government and are seen as second class citizens, living in oppression so as to avoid tainting the other citizens and ruining their quality of life. These creatures are hunted down by a special section of the police force, the Ahimsa.
[[IronicName Ahimsa]].
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Hanna's bracers let him control [[spoiler: a magic crystal inside him which is the source of his powers]]. Haphazardly.
* CastFromHitPoints: Hanna's [[spoiler: so, also Eli's]] powers can be draining. He tends to overtax himself into full PowerStrainBlackout due to the ChronicHeroSyndrome or just lack of thought.
* CrapsackWorld: Varuna is a VastBureaucracy, where any sort of individuality and independent thought is frowned upon. Spiderman comics, toys, video cassettes, plushies, action figures and posters are apparently "illegal''. Living flowers are banned as a ''health hazard'', trees are scarce and most neighbourhoods in the city have an allotted number of artificial ones. Especially crapsack if you happen to be werewolf, vampire, magic user or Undesirable of any other sort.
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* TheInsomniac: Eli's existential worries manifest in this way. [spoiler: After joining the RagtagBunchOfMisfits, he sleeps a lot better.]]
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* CoolestClubEver: The one where Toni sings ''looks'' shabby at a first glance; it's really how Eli feels there that counts.
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* CoolestClubEver: The one where Toni [[TheChanteuse Toni]] sings ''looks'' shabby at a first glance; it's really how Eli feels there that counts.
* EveryonesBabySister: [[TheCutie Hanna]], for the LaResistance, very, very much.
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* LaResistance: A RagtagBunchOfMisfits consisting of [[DrJerk Worth]], [[TheScrounger Lamont]], [[ThePollyanna Hanna]], Toni [[ActionGirl Toni]] and Veser. [[MadBomber Veser]]. It is joined by Conrad [[NonActionGuy Conrad]] (who has nowhere to go) and Eli [[DefectorFromDecadence Eli]] (technically a prisoner).
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: One person in the [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits merry band of rebels]] always fills that position, usually Conrad, [[NonActionGuy Conrad]], partly because EverythingIsOnline and they need a hacker backing them up.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Ellis attempts this on Worth, but forgets that Worth is a masochist.
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* BookEnds: [[spoiler: "He was pretty sure it was Tuesday."]]
* BrilliantButLazy: [[spoiler: Compared to Ellis and most of his peers, Worth]], but he has reasons to not do much with it. Such as being marginally [[OnlySaneMan saner]] than his peers, and practically born wearing JadeColoredGlasses.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Ellis attempts this on Worth, but forgets that Worth is amasochist.[[NoSell masochist]].
* BookEnds: [[spoiler: "He was pretty sure it was Tuesday."]]
* BrilliantButLazy: [[spoiler: Compared to Ellis and most of his peers, Worth]], but he has reasons to not do much with it. Such as being marginally [[OnlySaneMan saner]] than his peers, and practically born wearing JadeColoredGlasses.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Ellis attempts this on Worth, but forgets that Worth is a
* CoolestClubEver: The one where Toni sings ''looks'' shabby at a first glance; it's really how Eli feels there that counts.
* {{Dystopia}}: Of a CyberPunk flavour, with FascistsBedTime and HappinessIsMandatory, to some extent. Also, [[IndividualityIsIllegal individuality is seen as suspicious]], for some reason, and the PropagandaMachine is working non-stop.
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* EvilTowerOfOminousness: Slap-bang in the middle of the city, inhabited by Ellis's "[[MadScientistLaboratory scientific]]" institution. [[spoiler: An elaborate ExecutiveSuiteFight takes place there in the finale.]]
* IconOfRebellion: Hanna.
* EvilTowerOfOminousness: Slap-bang in the middle of the city, inhabited by Ellis's "[[MadScientistLaboratory scientific]]" institution. [[spoiler: An elaborate ExecutiveSuiteFight takes place there in the finale.]]
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* IndustrialGhetto: Our heroes' HomeBase used to be carpet factory.
* LaResistance:Of course
A RagtagBunchOfMisfits consisting of [[DrJerk Worth]], [[TheScrounger Lamont]], [[ThePollyanna Hanna]], Toni and Veser. It is joined by Conrad (who has nowhere to go) and Eli (technically a prisoner).
* MadDoctor: Ellisprobably counts. fancies himself one, but while he really is ''mad'', whoever gave him a doctorate should have their eyes and brain checked.
* LaResistance:
* MadDoctor: Ellis
* SafetyInIndifference: Deep down, [[spoiler: good old Worth]]. Way deep down under the JerkassFacade.
* StrappedToAnOperatingTable: Several people who Ellis gets into his grubby little hands. [[spoiler: Including Hanna (twice) and Conrad.]]
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* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: One person in the [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits merry band of rebels]] always fills that position, usually Conrad, partly because EverythingIsOnline and they need a hacker backing them up.
* UsedFuture: Depends on where you are in the {{Dystopia}}, but even the relatively shiny upper city is a bit bleak.
* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: One person in the [[RagtagBunchOfMisfits merry band of rebels]] always fills that position, usually Conrad, partly because EverythingIsOnline and they need a hacker backing them up.
* UsedFuture: Depends on where you are in the {{Dystopia}}, but even the relatively shiny upper city is a bit bleak.
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''Lightwaves'' is a HannaIsNotABoysName AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/992245/EmptyHeart EmptyHeart]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/316314/Digitaldreamer DigitalDreamer]]
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''Lightwaves'' is a HannaIsNotABoysName ''Webcomic/HannaIsNotABoysName'' AlternateUniverseFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/992245/EmptyHeart EmptyHeart]] and [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/316314/Digitaldreamer DigitalDreamer]]
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* DeadFic: The authors confirmed, on their DeviantArt, Website/DeviantArt, that Father of Death would be left unfinished due to lack of inspiration. They did post [[http://hinabn-lightwaves.deviantart.com/art/It-All-Ends-257910134 several]] [[http://hinabn-lightwaves.deviantart.com/art/The-Last-of-It-257911750 sketches]] of planned plot points, as well as a summary of how the rest of the fic would have gone.
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