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* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. Nobody has picked a direct fight with them yet for a very good reason.

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* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. Nobody has picked a direct fight with When Jail' s cyborgs directly engage them, even though they manage to badly injure Chrono, only one of them yet for escapes without losing a very good reason.limb or ''having their face burned off''.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Rather than Nanoha being injured between A's and Striker S, Hayate is killed; she gives the Wolkenritter to Chrono, apparently reasoning that they needed someone to ensure they successfully finished resocializing. (Though her exact reasoning isn't clear.)


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* ChekhovsGun: The starship ''Morrigan'' is mentioned as orbiting Quagmire during ''Quirks and Jerks'' but is on her shakedown cruise and not considered combat ready; ''Arc En Ciel'' reveals that Quagmire is the Bureau's storage facility for Arc-en-Ciel equipment, and ''Morrigan'' was there to be fitted with an Arc to testing.


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* MundaneUtility: The Wolkenritter use their mental link for making snarky comments at each other or personal discussions they don't want Chrono to hear, aware that he hates connecting to it outside of combat.
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* MissionControl: The Bureau Combat Controller career path is essentially this. They're commonly referred to in-universe as the "angel on the shoulder".
** Internally to the Navy they are considered honorary members of the combat mage branch, though they are almost universally non-mages. One of the quickest ways to provoke a fight with the members of a Mage Team is to treat their combat controller(s) as a [=REMF/pogue=]: the voice on the other end of the radio saves lives.

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* MilitarySalute: The story makes a point of noting adherence, or non-adherence, to proper protocol. The Bureau appears to have different rules about "cover" from the norm, however.

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* MilitarySalute: The story makes a point of noting adherence, or non-adherence, to proper protocol. The Bureau appears to have different Bureau's own set of rules about "cover" regarding salutes are not often elaborated on in the story directly but can be picked out from the norm, however.observation.
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* MilitarySalute: The story makes a point of noting adherence, or non-adherence, to proper protocol.

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* MilitarySalute: The story makes a point of noting adherence, or non-adherence, to proper protocol. The Bureau appears to have different rules about "cover" from the norm, however.
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* MilitarySalute: The story makes a point of noting adherence, or non-adherence, to proper protocol.
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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as Arthra's combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality:
** The Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality has very little in common with that of anyone else currently alive.

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BlueAndOrangeMorality: The Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality has very little in common with that of anyone else currently alive.



** Zafira's almost-angry reaction to Due not having instantly recognized him as a Wolkenritter, instead treating him as a common familiar, may stem from the same reasons.

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** Zafira's almost-angry reaction to Due not having instantly recognized him as a Wolkenritter, instead treating him as a common familiar, may stem from the same reasons.reasons Signum treasures her universal fear.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: The Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality has very little in common with that of anyone else currently alive.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: BlueAndOrangeMorality:
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The Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality has very little in common with that of anyone else currently alive.



*** Zafira's almost-angry reaction to Due not having instantly recognized him as a Wolkenritter, instead treating him as a common familiar, may stem from the same reasons.

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*** ** Zafira's almost-angry reaction to Due not having instantly recognized him as a Wolkenritter, instead treating him as a common familiar, may stem from the same reasons.



* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require Zafira putting his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.

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Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require Zafira putting his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.



* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable and care only for the approval of their lord/lady and the efficiency with which it destroys the enemy. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not. Some appear to have very loose definitions of battlefield as well.

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The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable and care only for the approval of their lord/lady and the efficiency with which it destroys the enemy. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not. Some appear to have very loose definitions of battlefield as well.



* WorthyOpponent: Signum discusses Clyde Harlaown, Chrono's father, with a great deal of affection. Why? He beat the Wolkenritter twice, something no one else had ever done.

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* WorthyOpponent: Signum discusses Clyde Harlaown, Chrono's father, with a great deal of affection. Why? He beat the Wolkenritter twice, something no one else had ever done.done.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: It's been implied the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: It's been implied the The Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share has very much little in common with ''anyone that of anyone else currently alive''.alive.



* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not. Some appear to have very loose definitions of battlefield as well.

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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only honorable and care only for the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered.lord/lady and the efficiency with which it destroys the enemy. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not. Some appear to have very loose definitions of battlefield as well.well.
** "Honor is for nobility. Knights destroy."

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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not.
** Do not injure the master or mistress of a Knight beyond awareness, yet leave them alive. The Knights will revert to their training of no rules, no quarter, no retreat. The results are invariably much more bloody.

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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not.
** Do not injure the master or mistress
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** Do not injure the master or mistress of a Knight beyond awareness, yet leave them alive. The Knights will revert to their training; no rules, no quarter, do or die.

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** Do not injure the master or mistress of a Knight beyond awareness, yet leave them alive. The Knights will revert to their training; training of no rules, no quarter, do or die.no retreat. The results are invariably much more bloody.

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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter, to an extent. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not.

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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter, to an extent.Wolkenritter. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not.not.
** Do not injure the master or mistress of a Knight beyond awareness, yet leave them alive. The Knights will revert to their training; no rules, no quarter, do or die.
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* TheUnfettered: The Wolkenritter, to an extent. Other Belkan-era constructs that pop up as well. From implications to outright statements, it becomes clear quickly that Belkan Knights do not have ''rules'', they have ''loyalties''. They are trained not to be concerned with whether an action on the battlefield is moral, just, or honorable. Only the approval of their lord or lady for their battlefield actions is to be considered. Off the battlefield, they may be different...or they may not.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: It's been implied the the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: It's been implied the the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.



** Signum treasures the fact she is feared by nearly everyone she meets in the same way someone might treasure universal acclaim. This is because it is the fear of those who were once her enemies, and to be universally feared by your enemies is considered one of the signs a Knight has really "made it" as a warrior.
*** Zafira's almost-angry reaction to Due not having instantly recognized him as a Wolkenritter, instead treating him as a common familiar, may stem from the same reasons.



* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require Zafira putting his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.

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* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require Zafira putting his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable. vulnerable.
** The Wolkenritter themselves to most other Bureau servicemembers, having been one of the Bureau's nightmare scenarios for nearly sixty years.

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: It's been implied the the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.
** Signum casually threatens to murder Tiida Lanster, because he's hitting on her. She apparently means it.
** Signum and Shamal are required to offer their, ah, ''services'' to Chrono, as Knights of the opposite sex from their Master and past puberty.



* MoralDissonance: It's been implied the the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.
** Signum casually threatens to murder Tiida Lanster, because he's hitting on her. She apparently means it.
** Signum and Shamal are required to offer their, ah, ''services'' to Chrono, as Knights of the opposite sex from their Master and past puberty.
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* TheConspiracy: The Bureau Council/Jail Scaligetti/Regius Gaiz teamup that [[NanohaStrikerS Striker S]] only hinted at is in full effect here, though its public face in the story so far is Auris Gaiz, who is haplessly trying to get a look at Hayate's personal possessions.

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* TheConspiracy: The Bureau Council/Jail Scaligetti/Regius Gaiz teamup team-up that [[NanohaStrikerS Striker S]] StrikerS]] only hinted at is in full effect here, though its public face in the story so far is Auris Gaiz, who is haplessly trying to get a look at Hayate's personal possessions.
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** Signum and Shamal are required to offer their, ah, ''services'' to Chrono, as Knights of the opposite sex of their Master and past puberty.

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** Signum and Shamal are required to offer their, ah, ''services'' to Chrono, as Knights of the opposite sex of from their Master and past puberty.
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** Signum and Shamal are ''required'' to offer their, ah, ''services'' to Chrono, as knights of the opposite sex of their Master and past puberty.

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* ArtificialHuman: Wolkenritter are ''very good'' copies of humans, even when copying a human this well doesn't quite make sense for what the Wolkenritter are supposed to do. But they're not actually human.

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* ArtificialHuman: Wolkenritter are ''very good'' copies of humans, even when copying a human this well doesn't quite make sense for what the Wolkenritter are supposed to do. But they're not actually human.
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* MyMasterRightOrWrong: Chrono regards the Wolkenritter's obeying this as a very big problem. He can't trust them to warn him, much less stop him, if he accidentally, thoughtlessly, or deliberately tries to abuse the near-infinite power he has over them.
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Another Nanoha story by @/{{Night}}.

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate Another Nanoha story story]] by @/{{Night}}.
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* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require putting Zafira his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.

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* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require Zafira putting Zafira his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.
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* ProperlyParanoid: The Wolkenritter have to actually think about whether it's acceptable for all of them to be asleep at the same time and one of them is always awake from midnight on since it's a classic time for a surprise attack. They will not let Chrono out of their sight in even a semi-public area either. Considering Hayate was probably assassinated, this is not just carryover from their bad old days of the Book of Darkness.
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* ContemplateOurNavels: Relatively in the story, Chrono and Zafira have a conversation about how perfect Hayate was for the Wolkenritter and why Chrono can't be a second Hayate for them.

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* ContemplateOurNavels: Relatively early in the story, Chrono and Zafira have a conversation about how perfect Hayate was for the Wolkenritter and why Chrono can't be a second Hayate for them.

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* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. Nobody has picked a direct fight with them yet for a ''very good reason''.

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* CreepyGood: Muhammad al-Faddil, Head of Naval Counterintelligence. Chrono describes him as the sort of person who makes people check their closets and under their beds. Zafira goes beyond not turning his back on Muhammad: he refuses to stand "at ease" in Muhammad's presence. That would require putting Zafira his hands behind his back and making himself more vulnerable.
* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. Nobody has picked a direct fight with them yet for a ''very very good reason''.reason.
* FullPotentialUpgrade: Like Hayate's Device woes in the canon, Chrono is well aware that with all his newfound power he'd fry [=S2U=] pretty quickly, so he's borrowing Durandel again until [=S2U=] can be upgraded to handle what he can do now. [[spoiler: It's been hinted he might dual-wield Durandel and a post-upgrade [=S2U=] at some point.]]
* MoralDissonance: It's been implied the the Wolkenritter's Belkan Knight morality and outlook on life may not share very much in common with ''anyone else currently alive''.
** Signum casually threatens to murder Tiida Lanster, because he's hitting on her. She apparently means it.



* OhMyGods: Chrono swears by the Sankt Kaiser. It's implied that's about all the religion he's got in him.

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* NotSoStoic: At Hayate's funeral, it's Signum who completely loses it: screaming, crying, and lying face-down in the mud.
* OhMyGods: Chrono swears by the Sankt Kaiser. It's implied that's That's about all the religion he's got in him.
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MustMakeAmends: Zafira states he thinks one of the reasons Hayate gave the Wolkenritter to Chrono was that the Wolkenritter had killed Chrono's father, and any chance to make direct amends (no matter how small) means a great deal to them.

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* MustMakeAmends: Zafira states he thinks one of the reasons Hayate gave the Wolkenritter to Chrono was that the Wolkenritter had killed Chrono's father, and any chance to make direct amends (no matter how small) means a great deal to them.

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* RevealingCoverup: Altering the mission reports surrounding Hayate Yagami's death turns the incident from merely suspiciously like it was a planned attempt to kill Hayate into a note signed "The Bad Guys, PS YOU SAW NOTHING". Vita even mocks it.
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* ArtificialHuman: Wolkenritter are ''very good'' copies of humans, even when copying a human this well doesn't quite make sense for what the Wolkenritter are supposed to do. But they're not actually human.
* BigGood: Leti Lowran, mainly. Not actually the first person Chrono goes to with his information, however.
* TheConspiracy: The Bureau Council/Jail Scaligetti/Regius Gaiz teamup that [[NanohaStrikerS Striker S]] only hinted at is in full effect here, though its public face in the story so far is Auris Gaiz, who is haplessly trying to get a look at Hayate's personal possessions.
* ContemplateOurNavels: Relatively in the story, Chrono and Zafira have a conversation about how perfect Hayate was for the Wolkenritter and why Chrono can't be a second Hayate for them.
*DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. Nobody has picked a direct fight with them yet for a ''very good reason''.
MustMakeAmends: Zafira states he thinks one of the reasons Hayate gave the Wolkenritter to Chrono was that the Wolkenritter had killed Chrono's father, and any chance to make direct amends (no matter how small) means a great deal to them.
* OhMyGods: Chrono swears by the Sankt Kaiser. It's implied that's about all the religion he's got in him.
* RevealingCoverup: Altering the mission reports surrounding Hayate Yagami's death turns the incident from merely suspiciously like it was a planned attempt to kill Hayate suspicious into a note signed "The Bad Guys, PS YOU SAW NOTHING". actual proof that something very wrong has happened. Vita even mocks it.
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-->"Conspiracy amateur hour.""
* WorthyOpponent: Signum discusses Clyde Harlaown, Chrono's father, with a great deal of affection. Why? He beat the Wolkenritter twice, something no one else had ever done.
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-->"And if any of you call me master I swear I'll throw myself out an airlock." - '''Chrono Harlaown'''


Another Nanoha story by @/{{Night}}.

On a cold, snowy day, on an administrated world in AC 0068, a twelve-year-old Nanoha Takamachi was supposed to have been there, where she would be injured by a Type IV Gadget Drone.

[[AlternateUniverseFic She wasn't.]]

Hayate Yagami was there instead, and wounded far more badly. By the time help reached her, it was already too late. But her children, her Wolkenritter, still new to a life of kindness and relative freedom, would not die with her. She would not allow it. And so with her dying breath, she gave them and the Book of the Night Sky to another.

It's the most precious gift anyone will ever give Chrono Harlaown. Now he has to survive it. Along the way he'll find out things about the organization he serves that he never wanted to know, meet new and interesting people, try to survive with his dignity intact, and avoid doing anything he would regret after gaining two very attractive female servants. If he happens to accidentally bring down the Bureau government seeking justice for Hayate, once it started killing loyal and capable servants it wasn't worth keeping anyways...

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* RevealingCoverup: Altering the mission reports surrounding Hayate Yagami's death turns the incident from merely suspiciously like it was a planned attempt to kill Hayate into a note signed "The Bad Guys, PS YOU SAW NOTHING". Vita even mocks it.
-->"Conspiracy amateur hour."

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