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"Life After Hayate" is a Franchise/LyricalNanoha ForWantOfANail story by @/{{Night}}.

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"Life ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate Life After Hayate" Hayate]]'' is a Franchise/LyricalNanoha ''Franchise/LyricalNanoha'' ForWantOfANail story by @/{{Night}}.



It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate here]].
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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as ''Arthra'''s combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.

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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The This specific phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as ''Arthra'''s [[MissionControl combat controller, controller]], while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Rather than Nanoha being injured between A's and Striker S, Hayate is killed; she gives the Wolkenritter to Chrono before she dies, though exactly ''why'' she does so is something Hayate does not have time to express to anyone. It's possible Reinforce Zwei knows, but only guesses have been voiced on the subject by the characters.

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* AlternateUniverseFic: Rather than Nanoha being injured between A's and Striker S, [=StrikerS=], Hayate is killed; she gives the Wolkenritter to Chrono before she dies, though exactly ''why'' she does so is something Hayate does not have time to express to anyone. It's possible Reinforce Zwei knows, but only guesses have been voiced on the subject by the characters.
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* PublicDomainCharacter: An unusual InUniverse {{Subver|tedTrope}}sion. The Wolkenritter's exploits from Ancient Belka's times were so infamous that they're still part of the popular culture of the Administrated Worlds, making them go-to villains in innumerable fictional works, many of them still available for purchase or in-production. Chrono realized that once the Wolkenritter became naturalized citizens of the TSAB, the unauthorized use of their likeness was now a crime and entitled them to punitive damages. Which is legalese for "a lot of people owe them some cash".

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate Another Nanoha story]] by @/{{Night}}.

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\n[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate Another Nanoha story]] "Life After Hayate" is a Franchise/LyricalNanoha ForWantOfANail story by @/{{Night}}.


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It can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8558476/1/Life-After-Hayate here]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Happens to everyone the Wolkenritter face short of another Belkan War Construct.
** Due only survives her first encounter with Zafira because he wasn't expecting to need to hit her hard enough to break her cybernetics.
** Only Tre escapes the Combat Cyborg's first clash with the Wolkenritter without crippling injuries.
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* CrazyPrepared: Naval Counterintelligence has plans for everything, up to and including dealing with an opponent capable of hacking Devices at a distance, which is supposed to be impossible.
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* RevealingCoverup: Altering the mission reports surrounding Hayate Yagami's death turns the incident from merely suspicious into actual proof that something very wrong has happened. Vita even mocks the decision.

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* RevealingCoverup: Altering the mission reports surrounding Hayate Yagami's death turns the incident from merely suspicious into actual proof that something very wrong has happened. [[LampshadeHanging Vita even mocks the decision.decision]].
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* TheConspiracy: The Bureau Council/Jail Scaligetti/Regius Gaiz team-up that [[NanohaStrikerS StrikerS]] only hinted at is in full effect here, though its public face in the story so far is Auris Gaiz, who is haplessly trying to get a look at Hayate's personal possessions.

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* TheConspiracy: The Bureau Council/Jail Scaligetti/Regius Gaiz team-up that [[NanohaStrikerS [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaStrikers StrikerS]] only hinted at is in full effect here, though its public face in the story so far is Auris Gaiz, who is haplessly trying to get a look at Hayate's personal possessions.
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* WhamEpisode: ''Arc En Ciel'' has Jail try to steal part of the titular weapon. In the process, the Combat Cyborgs have their first full-scale encounter with the Wolkenritter and lose. ''Very badly.''
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** The Carneades Protocol is one of the Bureau's list of rules of engagement. It states that any level of collateral damage necessary to complete the mission is acceptable, in effect declaring that no matter how much damage the Bureau units in the area can do a failure will be worse.
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* GodzillaThreshold: General Order #27: "The capture of or possession of dimensional flexure equipment by any non-Bureau person or group is unacceptable. Any normal rules of engagement may be suspended at the discretion of the guard force as necessary to prevent it falling into the hands of others." Leti Lowran stresses to the Wolkenritter that this is the one circumstance where they can do ''anything'' if they think they have to.
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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as '''Arthra'''s combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.

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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as '''Arthra'''s ''Arthra'''s combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Rather than Nanoha being injured between A's and Striker S, Hayate is killed; she gives the Wolkenritter to Chrono, apparently reasoning that they needed someone to ensure they successfully finished resocializing. (Though her exact reasoning isn't clear.)

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* AlternateUniverseFic: Rather than Nanoha being injured between A's and Striker S, Hayate is killed; she gives the Wolkenritter to Chrono, apparently reasoning that they needed someone Chrono before she dies, though exactly ''why'' she does so is something Hayate does not have time to ensure they successfully finished resocializing. (Though her exact reasoning isn't clear.)express to anyone. It's possible Reinforce Zwei knows, but only guesses have been voiced on the subject by the characters.

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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as Arthra's combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.

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* BattleCouple: A Harlaown family tradition, and taken deadly serious. You're not acceptable dating material for a Harlaown unless you've partnered with them in combat. The phrasing is intentional, because "fought alongside" is not necessarily required; Amy Linetta was considered acceptable for Chrono because she had been his "angel on the shoulder" as Arthra's '''Arthra'''s combat controller, while Lindy was bridge crew to Clyde.



* ChekhovsGun: The starship ''Morrigan'' is mentioned as orbiting Quagmire during ''Quirks and Jerks'' but is on her shakedown cruise and not considered combat ready; ''Arc En Ciel'' reveals that Quagmire is the Bureau's storage facility for Arc-en-Ciel equipment, and ''Morrigan'' was there to be fitted with an Arc to testing.

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* ChekhovsGun: The starship ''Morrigan'' is mentioned as orbiting Quagmire during ''Quirks and Jerks'' but is on her shakedown cruise and not considered combat ready; ''Arc En Ciel'' reveals that Quagmire is the Bureau's storage facility for Arc-en-Ciel equipment, and ''Morrigan'' was there to be fitted with an Arc to for testing.



* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. When Jail' s cyborgs directly engage them, even though they manage to badly injure Chrono, only one of them escapes without losing a limb or ''having their face burned off''.

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*** The Wolkenritter to the Combat Cyborgs: during their attack on the ''Morrigan'', the only Cyborg who succeeded in her mission was Due, and the only one who escaped the ship without severe injury was Tre. Sein has her arm broken by Vita, Due has several large chunks of her shoulders and chest torn out by Zafira, Cinque loses an arm and Quattro is burned down to her cybernetic bones on the face and arms by Signum.
* DreamTeam: We have the Wolkenritter in their prime to do the heavy lifting, and the series' resident innovative genius Chrono Harlaown to command them. When Jail' s Jail's cyborgs directly engage them, even though they manage to badly injure Chrono, only one of them escapes without losing a limb or ''having their face burned off''.
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Hayate Yagami was there instead, and wounded far more badly. By the time help reached her, it was already too late. But her children, her Wolkenritter, still new to a life of kindness and relative freedom, would not die with her. She would not allow it. And so with her dying breath, she gave them and the Book of the Night Sky to another.

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Hayate Yagami was there instead, and wounded far more badly.worse. By the time help reached her, it was already too late. But her children, her Wolkenritter, still new to a life of kindness and relative freedom, would not die with her. She would not allow it. And so with her dying breath, she gave them and the Book of the Night Sky to another.

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