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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3832639/1/Je_Mourrais Je Mourrais]]'' (French for "I Would Die") is a {{Halo}} fanficiton written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/885998/Kavek Kavek]].
It starts out as a novalisation of the last parts of ''Halo 3''. Master Chief must rescue Cortana from the grips of the Gravemind. To be able to do that, he has to get through the corridors of High Charity, former capital city of The Covenant and now just a hive of the Flood, with millions of them ready to tear Chief apart. During his attempts to rescue Cortana, he goes into a soul-searching, mostly about his own history and his relationship with Cortana and if it's more than just partnership. After he resisted the Flood's desperate attempts to stop him, he finds Cortana but she is in a heavily bad shape. They find a way out of High Charity and, with help of the UNSC and Covenant Sepratists, go to the recreated Halo 04 in order to activate it with hopes that it will finish the Flood for good. They activate it and attempt to get of the ring before it kills them as well. As we already know, Chief and Cortana fail to get through the portal and now are in the empty space, waiting for a miracle to happen.
It starts out as a novalisation of the last parts of ''Halo 3''. Master Chief must rescue Cortana from the grips of the Gravemind. To be able to do that, he has to get through the corridors of High Charity, former capital city of The Covenant and now just a hive of the Flood, with millions of them ready to tear Chief apart. During his attempts to rescue Cortana, he goes into a soul-searching, mostly about his own history and his relationship with Cortana and if it's more than just partnership. After he resisted the Flood's desperate attempts to stop him, he finds Cortana but she is in a heavily bad shape. They find a way out of High Charity and, with help of the UNSC and Covenant Sepratists, go to the recreated Halo 04 in order to activate it with hopes that it will finish the Flood for good. They activate it and attempt to get of the ring before it kills them as well. As we already know, Chief and Cortana fail to get through the portal and now are in the empty space, waiting for a miracle to happen.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3832639/1/Je_Mourrais Je Mourrais]]'' (French for "I Would Die") is a {{Halo}} ''Franchise/{{Halo}}'' fanficiton written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/885998/Kavek Kavek]].
It starts out as anovalisation novelization of the last parts of ''Halo 3''. Master Chief must rescue Cortana from the grips of the Gravemind. To be able to do that, he has to get through the corridors of High Charity, former capital city of The Covenant and now just a hive of the Flood, with millions of them ready to tear Chief apart. During his attempts to rescue Cortana, he goes into a soul-searching, mostly about his own history and his relationship with Cortana and if it's more than just partnership. After he resisted the Flood's desperate attempts to stop him, he finds Cortana but she is in a heavily bad shape. They find a way out of High Charity and, with help of the UNSC and Covenant Sepratists, go to the recreated Halo 04 in order to activate it with hopes that it will finish the Flood for good. They activate it and attempt to get of the ring before it kills them as well. As we already know, Chief and Cortana fail to get through the portal and now are in the empty space, waiting for a miracle to happen.
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It starts out as a novalisation of the last parts of ''Halo 3''. Master Chief must rescue Cortana from the grips of the Gravemind. To be able to do that, he has to get through the corridors of High Charity, former capital city of The Covenant, now just a hive of the Flood, with millions of them ready to tear Chief apart. During his attempts to rescue Cortana, he goes into what could be a soul-searching, mostly about his own history and his relationship with Cortana and he wounder if it's more than just partnership. After had resisted the Flood's desperate attempts to stop him, he finds Cortana but she is on a heavily bad shape. They find a way out of High Charity and, with help of the UNSC and Covenant Sepratists, goes to the new recreated Halo 04 in order to activate it with hopes that it will finish the Flood for good. They activate it and attempts to get of the ring before it will kill them as well. As we already knows, Chief and Cortana fails to get through the portal and now is on the empty space, waiting for a miracle to happen.
And now the original parts of the story begin. The ship with Chief and Cortana is pulled back by the Ark's gravity and is forced to land there. On the Ark, they try to find some way to contact the UNSC with hopes that they'll send some ships to take them back to Earth. They also realize that they aren't the only ones on the Ark; some UNSC/Covenant Sepratists personnel were forgotten by the fleet during its retreat and were stranded on the Ark as well. Those who happens to be on the Ark are Sergeant Major Donald J. Kramer, Lance Corporal Jana Hook of the ODST, Private First Class Lance Briggs, [[TheMedic Medic]] Eugene Roe and Minor Domo 'Ulee Dakol. Together, they help the Chief find a way to contact the UNSC. However, they find out that Covenant Loyaltists exists on the Ark as well, a Brute Chieftain named Maximus and his loyal Ultra Grunt bodyguard Dari. They agree to help them after Cortana proves to them that the Great Journey was false. The problem is that Cortana is experiencing rampancy, created by the virus the Gravemind gave her and fueled by her own conflicting emotions.
When the UNSC finds out about Cortana's rampancy, they send ONI agent [[ThereIsAnother (and former SPARTAN)]] [[Series/TwentyFour Jack Bauer]] to find Cortana and terminate her before she evolves out of control. Given command of the fleet, Jack travels to the Ark to take Cortana for termination and to get Chief back to Earth. When Chief refuses to hand over Cortana, Jack and his own team begin hunting Chief and his allies across the Ark. As if things weren't bad enough, Chief and his allies hear from Mendicant Bias that the Flood had survived Halo 04's activation, which only killed some parts of the Flood, and now is growing in numbers...
This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is written in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.
And now the original parts of the story begin. The ship with Chief and Cortana is pulled back by the Ark's gravity and is forced to land there. On the Ark, they try to find some way to contact the UNSC with hopes that they'll send some ships to take them back to Earth. They also realize that they aren't the only ones on the Ark; some UNSC/Covenant Sepratists personnel were forgotten by the fleet during its retreat and were stranded on the Ark as well. Those who happens to be on the Ark are Sergeant Major Donald J. Kramer, Lance Corporal Jana Hook of the ODST, Private First Class Lance Briggs, [[TheMedic Medic]] Eugene Roe and Minor Domo 'Ulee Dakol. Together, they help the Chief find a way to contact the UNSC. However, they find out that Covenant Loyaltists exists on the Ark as well, a Brute Chieftain named Maximus and his loyal Ultra Grunt bodyguard Dari. They agree to help them after Cortana proves to them that the Great Journey was false. The problem is that Cortana is experiencing rampancy, created by the virus the Gravemind gave her and fueled by her own conflicting emotions.
When the UNSC finds out about Cortana's rampancy, they send ONI agent [[ThereIsAnother (and former SPARTAN)]] [[Series/TwentyFour Jack Bauer]] to find Cortana and terminate her before she evolves out of control. Given command of the fleet, Jack travels to the Ark to take Cortana for termination and to get Chief back to Earth. When Chief refuses to hand over Cortana, Jack and his own team begin hunting Chief and his allies across the Ark. As if things weren't bad enough, Chief and his allies hear from Mendicant Bias that the Flood had survived Halo 04's activation, which only killed some parts of the Flood, and now is growing in numbers...
This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is written in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.
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It starts out as a novalisation of the last parts of ''Halo 3''. Master Chief must rescue Cortana from the grips of the Gravemind. To be able to do that, he has to get through the corridors of High Charity, former capital city of The Covenant, Covenant and now just a hive of the Flood, with millions of them ready to tear Chief apart. During his attempts to rescue Cortana, he goes into what could be a soul-searching, mostly about his own history and his relationship with Cortana and he wounder if it's more than just partnership. After had he resisted the Flood's desperate attempts to stop him, he finds Cortana but she is on in a heavily bad shape. They find a way out of High Charity and, with help of the UNSC and Covenant Sepratists, goes go to the new recreated Halo 04 in order to activate it with hopes that it will finish the Flood for good. They activate it and attempts attempt to get of the ring before it will kill kills them as well. As we already knows, know, Chief and Cortana fails fail to get through the portal and now is on are in the empty space, waiting for a miracle to happen.
And now Now the original parts of the story begin. The ship with Chief and Cortana is pulled back by the Ark's gravity and is forced to land there. On the Ark, they try to find some way to contact the UNSC with hopes that they'll send some ships to take them back to Earth. They also realize that they aren't the only ones on the Ark; some UNSC/Covenant Sepratists personnel were forgotten by the fleet during its retreat and were stranded on the Ark as well. Those who happens to be on the Ark are Sergeant Major Donald J. Kramer, Lance Corporal Jana Hook of the ODST, Private First Class Lance Briggs, [[TheMedic Medic]] Eugene Roe and Minor Domo 'Ulee Dakol. Together, they help the Chief find a way to contact the UNSC. However, they find out that Covenant Loyaltists exists on the Ark as well, a Brute Chieftain named Maximus and his loyal Ultra Grunt bodyguard Dari. They agree to help them after Cortana proves to them that the Great Journey was false. The problem is that Cortana is experiencing rampancy, rampancy created by the virus the Gravemind gave her and fueled by her own conflicting emotions.
emotions.
When the UNSC finds out about Cortana's rampancy, they send ONI agent [[ThereIsAnother (and former SPARTAN)]] [[Series/TwentyFour Jack Bauer]] to find Cortana and terminate her before she evolves out of control. Given command of the fleet, Jack travels to the Ark to take Cortana for termination and to get Chief back to Earth. When Chief refuses to hand over Cortana, Jack and his own team begin hunting Chief and his allies across the Ark. As if things weren't bad enough, Chief and his allies hear from Mendicant Bias that the Flood had survived Halo 04'sactivation, which only killed some parts of the Flood, activation and now is growing in numbers...
This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is written in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.numbers...
When the UNSC finds out about Cortana's rampancy, they send ONI agent [[ThereIsAnother (and former SPARTAN)]] [[Series/TwentyFour Jack Bauer]] to find Cortana and terminate her before she evolves out of control. Given command of the fleet, Jack travels to the Ark to take Cortana for termination and to get Chief back to Earth. When Chief refuses to hand over Cortana, Jack and his own team begin hunting Chief and his allies across the Ark. As if things weren't bad enough, Chief and his allies hear from Mendicant Bias that the Flood had survived Halo 04's
This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is written in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.
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* CowardlyLion: The grunt Dari No-Claw
* CulturedWarrior: Master Chief had read Aristotle, Ptolemy and C.S. Lewis, as well plays piano during his free time.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Chief, Jack, Hook and Kramer have these.
* FriendlySniper: 'Ulee Dakol.
* HannibalLecture: [[spoiler:Kramer]] ended up as the victim of [[spoiler:Cortana]]'s HannibalLecture, as she used his DarkAndTroubledPast to completly screw his mind open.
* TheMedic[=/=]CombatMedic: Eugene Roe
* MoralityPet: Jana Hook is Dari's MoralityPet. Maybe it sounds weird that a human is a morality pet for a grunt, but she'll has use of it in chapter 15, when [[spoiler:Briggs goes nuts]].
* NotSoDifferent: Maximus believes that the relationship between the Humans and the Brutes is this.
* OnlySaneMan: Maximus seems to be the only one who doesn't suffers from serious psychological trauma. Ironic since he's a Brute.
* ThePhilosopher: Chief and Maximus.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Played straight. If you have to survive in an alien world, with both the United Nations' own supercommandos and parastic monsters hunting you, cooperation is heavily importent. Without it, you'll be dead in short time.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Brute Cheiftain Maximus.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Master Cheif and Sgt. Kramer, especially Kramer.
* CulturedWarrior: Master Chief had read Aristotle, Ptolemy and C.S. Lewis, as well plays piano during his free time.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Chief, Jack, Hook and Kramer have these.
* FriendlySniper: 'Ulee Dakol.
* HannibalLecture: [[spoiler:Kramer]] ended up as the victim of [[spoiler:Cortana]]'s HannibalLecture, as she used his DarkAndTroubledPast to completly screw his mind open.
* TheMedic[=/=]CombatMedic: Eugene Roe
* MoralityPet: Jana Hook is Dari's MoralityPet. Maybe it sounds weird that a human is a morality pet for a grunt, but she'll has use of it in chapter 15, when [[spoiler:Briggs goes nuts]].
* NotSoDifferent: Maximus believes that the relationship between the Humans and the Brutes is this.
* OnlySaneMan: Maximus seems to be the only one who doesn't suffers from serious psychological trauma. Ironic since he's a Brute.
* ThePhilosopher: Chief and Maximus.
* ThePowerOfFriendship: Played straight. If you have to survive in an alien world, with both the United Nations' own supercommandos and parastic monsters hunting you, cooperation is heavily importent. Without it, you'll be dead in short time.
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The Brute Cheiftain Maximus.
* ShellShockedVeteran: Master Cheif and Sgt. Kramer, especially Kramer.
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* OnlySaneMan: Maximus
* ThePhilosopher: Chief and
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This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is writed in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.
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This is a story highly recommanded to any ''Halo'' fans. After like the first ot the second chapter, it's clear that Kavek is actually trying to make this story good, if not the best. The story is writed written in a very detailed manner and it quickly catch the intrest of anyone who is reading this. Kavek don't spare neither the action parts or the drama parts. He combines them together and makes it look good, very good infact. Not to mention how he freely use philosophic messanges in his story. The CharacterDevelopment is really good as well. It ain't just the main charcters who gets this treatment but also any OC or minor charcters. Everybody got thier shares of stories, emotions, thoughts, backgrounds...some more uglier then others, and views about how they're forced to work together, and how they slowly grows close to one other and the meanings of life and fate. None of the OC don't get to MarySue promotions and remain interesting characters you can both sympathize and empathize with. In short terms; this is a good story which everybody should read.
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When the UNSC finds out about Cortana's rampancy, they send ONI agent [[ThereIsAnother (and former SPARTAN)]] [[TwentyFour [[Series/TwentyFour Jack Bauer]] to find Cortana and terminate her before she evolves out of control. Given command of the fleet, Jack travels to the Ark to take Cortana for termination and to get Chief back to Earth. When Chief refuses to hand over Cortana, Jack and his own team begin hunting Chief and his allies across the Ark. As if things weren't bad enough, Chief and his allies hear from Mendicant Bias that the Flood had survived Halo 04's activation, which only killed some parts of the Flood, and now is growing in numbers...
