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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge for the cast of ''WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries''. It takes place six years after the canon.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge ''Film/MoulinRouge'' for the cast of ''WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries''. It takes place six years after the canon.
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-->'''Kaiba''': [[PanicAtTheDisco Haven't you ever heard of closing your goshdarned mouth?]]
** There is a definite "{{Friday}}" theme in the beginning of Chapter Eleven.
** There is a definite "{{Friday}}" theme in the beginning of Chapter Eleven.
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-->'''Kaiba''': [[PanicAtTheDisco [[Music/PanicAtTheDisco Haven't you ever heard of closing your goshdarned mouth?]]
** There is a definite"{{Friday}}" "Music/{{Friday}}" theme in the beginning of Chapter Eleven.
** There is a definite
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** From Chapter Eleven: [[{{Showgirls}} "Everybody's got TB and shit."]]
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** From Chapter Eleven: [[{{Showgirls}} [[Film/{{Showgirls}} "Everybody's got TB and shit."]]
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-->'''Bakura''': [[BlackEyedPeas Where is the love?]]
--> '''Kaiba''': [[{{Kesha}} "Don't be a little bitch."]]
--> '''Kaiba''': [[{{Kesha}} "Don't be a little bitch."]]
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-->'''Bakura''': [[BlackEyedPeas [[Music/BlackEyedPeas Where is the love?]]
--> '''Kaiba''':[[{{Kesha}} [[Music/{{Kesha}} "Don't be a little bitch."]]
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** The {{Kesha}} parody Kaiba does in Chapter Two sounds like a reference to Mega-Ultra Chicken (Winged Dragon of Ra).
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** The {{Kesha}} Music/{{Kesha}} parody Kaiba does in Chapter Two sounds like a reference to Mega-Ultra Chicken (Winged Dragon of Ra).
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** Chapter Seven: "Coyote Bakura and Doctor Duke"-A reference to CoyoteUgly, particularly, the bar-dancing scene.
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** Chapter Seven: "Coyote Bakura and Doctor Duke"-A reference to CoyoteUgly, Film/CoyoteUgly, particularly, the bar-dancing scene.
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** Chapter Six: "Defibrillating the Heart of the Cards"-An IncrediblyLamePun.
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** Chapter Six: "Defibrillating the Heart of the Cards"-An IncrediblyLamePun.PunBasedTitle.
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Step Three Profit is now Missing Steps Plan. Non-comedic examples and badly written examples are being removed.
* MissingStepsPlan: Step one: Put on play that contains propaganda about a revolution. Step Two: ??? Step Three: Profit and Revolution!
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* StepThreeProfit: Step one: Put on play that contains propaganda about a revolution. Step Two: ??? Step Three: Profit and Revolution!
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* RefugeInAudacity: The play seems to be aiming for this.
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-->'''Joey''': Let's say we could [[LadyGaga write more den just a sub-par romance.]]
-->'''Joey''': [[TheBeatles I came in thru da bathroom window.]]
-->'''Joey''': [[TheBeatles I came in thru da bathroom window.]]
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-->'''Joey''': Let's say we could [[LadyGaga [[Music/LadyGaga write more den just a sub-par romance.]]
-->'''Joey''':[[TheBeatles [[Music/TheBeatles I came in thru da bathroom window.]]
-->'''Joey''':
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: The revolution is implied to have been a success, but Joey is dead.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Kaiba and Yugi, possibly.
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* MookFaceTurn: [[spoiler: Noah.]]
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* RightfulKingReturns: Presumably, after Duke loses power, Yugi will go back to being the King of Games.
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight
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* GoOutWithASmile: [[spoiler: Joey.]]
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* RefugeInAudacity: The play seems to be aiming for this.
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* WealthyEverAfter: Implied in Chapter Thirteen.
-->'''Kaiba''': I'm back, bitch.
-->'''Kaiba''': I'm back, bitch.
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* WisdomFromTheGutter
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* TookALevelInDumbass: Quite a few characters. Most notably, Duke.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge for the cast of ''WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries''. It takes place "after the characters are well into their twenties."
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge for the cast of ''WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries''. It takes place "after six years after the characters are well into their twenties."
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The story seems to focus more on the play and revolution than the romance aspect.
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* FixFic: In adapting the story, the author seems to have changed a few things about the plot of ''Moulin Rouge''. For one, the Duke has more of a reason for why he wants the theater to fail (more substantial than "I want the leading lady and I can't have her"). Another small detail is that Duke comes to the conclusion that the play is imitating real life all on his own (instead of having one of the others endanger their career to make a catty FreudianSlip). Another is that since Joey and Tristan knew each other before the plot, they have more of a foundation for their romance. It may not necessarily make the story better, but it might eliminate some of the questions that might have been asked if it had stuck closer to the original.
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* DancingIsSeriousBusiness: Their political revolution depends on attracting people to their shows, where they spread pro-dueling propaganda.
** At various points, Kaiba threatens to perform an AngryDance (or at least a high kick from one).
** At various points, Kaiba threatens to perform an AngryDance (or at least a high kick from one).
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* DisproportionateRetribution: [[spoiler: Duke wants to ''kill'' Tristan if the show doesn't end his way.]]
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: [[spoiler: Joey]].
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath: ImpoverishedPatrician: All three Kaiba brothers. And in a way, Yugi, since he doesn't have his "King of Games" title under the new dice-game-based government.
* IncurableCoughOfDeath / BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Joey]].
* IncurableCoughOfDeath / BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Joey]].
* MundaneLuxury: Domino City is in such bad shape, Tristan considers having his own toilet (as opposed to using the communal one on the roof) a bonus.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything: Kaiba tries this on Duke in Chapter Ten, hoping to get [[spoiler: his approval of the holographic elements in the show]]. It fails miserably.
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* SlidingScaleOfSillinessVersusSeriousness: Starting with Chapter Five, there is some serious MoodWhiplash, to the point where the author made a note that the last part of Chapter Five could be skipped, "If you want this to stay a light and fluffy parody in your mind."
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* SlidingScaleOfSillinessVersusSeriousness: Starting with Chapter Five, there is some serious MoodWhiplash, to the point where the author made a note that the last part of Chapter Five could be skipped, "If you want this to stay a light and fluffy parody in your mind."MoodWhiplash.
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* StepThreeProfit: Step one: Put on play that contains propaganda about a revolution. Step Two: ??? Step Three: Profit and Revolution!
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** Possible meta-reference: The fact that everyone gets to screw Kaiba because they have money.
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** Possible meta-reference: The fact that everyone gets to screw Kaiba because they have money.money (and he doesn't).
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-->(while trying to pay Yugi back for getting his cards back) "Please…I don't have money. Screw me."
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* BetaCouple: Kaiba and Yugi.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hints have been given that the other characters may want to watch out for Bakura (though he no longer has the Millennium Ring Spirit).
** Also, Yugi sprays ''tear gas'' in a mugger's eyes in Chapter Eleven.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hints have been given that the other characters may want to watch out for Bakura (though he no longer has the Millennium Ring Spirit).
** Also, Yugi sprays ''tear gas'' in a mugger's eyes in Chapter Eleven.
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** Also with Kaiba, Yugi, and Bandit Keith (though Bandit Keith is more of a customer than an actual love interest).
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* PressurePoint: Keith uses this on Kaiba to further his argument that [[spoiler he knows him too well]].
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* PressurePoint: Keith uses this on Kaiba to further his argument that [[spoiler he knows him too well]].well.
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* SnicketWarningLabel: In Chapter Five: "If you want this to stay a light and fluffy parody in your mind, skip this last section and go to the next chapter."
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge for the cast of ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh The Abridged Series}}''. It takes place "after the characters are well into their twenties."
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6474469/1/Decks_Fall_Everyone_Dies Decks Fall, Everyone Dies]] is a parody FanFic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/479298/Kalarin Kalarin]] that adapts the plot of MoulinRouge for the cast of ''{{Yu-Gi-Oh The Abridged Series}}''.''WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries''. It takes place "after the characters are well into their twenties."
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** Also, like in other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfictions, Yami has his own body, but it is explained in Chapter Eleven (unlike other fanfictions).
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** Also, like in other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfictions, Yami has his own body, but it is explained right in Chapter Eleven the first chapter (unlike other fanfictions).
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"What happens when a world based on card games falls? And what happens when the characters, tired of the tyranny of dice games, decide to literally stage a revolution?"
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* WholePlotReference
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* WholePlotReferenceWholePlotReference: Right down to the placement of some of the songs:
** Nature Boy=American Pie Parody
** Lady Marmalade=Blah Blah Blah Parody
** Diamonds are a Girl's best friend=Wannabe Parody
** Your Song=Your Song Parody
** So Exciting (The pitch)=Walk Like an Egyptian parody
** Fly Away=Numa Numa Parody
** Elephant Love Medley=Witch in the Ditch Parody
** Like a Virgin=Doctor Jones Parody
** Secret Song=Always Parody/Robot Unicorn Dance Number
** El Tango de Roxanne=Alejandro parody
** The Show Must go on=Jesse Hold On parody
** Nature Boy=American Pie Parody
** Lady Marmalade=Blah Blah Blah Parody
** Diamonds are a Girl's best friend=Wannabe Parody
** Your Song=Your Song Parody
** So Exciting (The pitch)=Walk Like an Egyptian parody
** Fly Away=Numa Numa Parody
** Elephant Love Medley=Witch in the Ditch Parody
** Like a Virgin=Doctor Jones Parody
** Secret Song=Always Parody/Robot Unicorn Dance Number
** El Tango de Roxanne=Alejandro parody
** The Show Must go on=Jesse Hold On parody
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-->'''Marik''': Sounds like someone's drug-induced fanfiction.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: The play they're planning to put on to bring dueling (and the government based on it) back is this.
* CrazyEnoughToWork: The play they're planning to put on to bring dueling (and the government based on it) back is this.
* {{Filk}}: Every song in the fic.
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* {{Filk}}: Every song in the fic.
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* GreenEyedMonster: Duke, figuratively and literally.
* GreenEyedMonster: Duke, figuratively and literally.
* PowerIsSexy: Duke's appeal.
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* PowerIsSexy: Duke's appeal.
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* AnachronismStew: The characters write a propaganda play (to revive card games as a form of government) set in ancient Egypt. The play, according to the scenes depicting the rehearsals, involves thrift shops at which the penniless duelist buys the Pharaoh's old clothes, Riverdance, and Rap music.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Because it uses the abridged series characterization. Also, in one of the musical numbers, it gives Seto and Mokuba a last name (from before they were Kaibas).
** Also, like in other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfictions, Yami has his own body (but it's hinted that this will be explained).
*** It is explained in Chapter Eleven.
** Also, like in other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfictions, Yami has his own body (but it's hinted that this will be explained).
*** It is explained in Chapter Eleven.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Because it uses the abridged series characterization. Also, in one of the musical numbers, it gives Seto and Mokuba a last name (from before they were Kaibas).
Kaibas) and it is definitely very unlikely that they would have that name.
** Also, like in other Yu-Gi-Oh fanfictions, Yami has his ownbody (but it's hinted that this will be explained).
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Tristan, regarding [[spoiler: Joey's tuberculosis]]. Duke ends up being this, but only because [[spoiler: he doesn't believe that Joey really has tuberculosis]].
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Tristan, regarding [[spoiler: Joey's tuberculosis]]. Duke ends up being this, but only because [[spoiler: he doesn't believe that [[spoiler: Joey really has tuberculosis]].
** Yugi plans to do it to build an Egyptian laser.
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* ReferenceOverdosed: There are many references to jokes used in ''Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series'', in an attempt to imitate the tone of it:
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* ReferenceOverdosed: There are many references to jokes used in ''Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series'', in an attempt to imitate capture the tone of it:
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* ShoutOut: The entire story shows the author must be a fan of ''Yu-Gi-Oh The Abridged Series''. Also:
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* ShoutOut: The entire story shows the author must be a big fan of ''Yu-Gi-Oh The Abridged Series''. Also:
