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* ForWantOfANail: Cody's choice to come and comfort Courtney after Duncan cheated on her with Gwen causes the story to snowball into a totally different series of events.
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* PointOfDivergence: Cody's choice to come and comfort Courtney after Duncan cheated on her with Gwen causes the story to snowball into a totally different series of events.
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* CatchPhrase: Cody asking Courtney "So, wanna make out?". As you can guess, it never works. Not even after hooking up.
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** Also, after all the crap he went through, [[spoiler: Ezekiel wins the million dollars.]]
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** Also, after After all the crap he went through, [[spoiler: Ezekiel wins the million dollars.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Alien Cody, who exploded after being hugged by Sierra moments after his creation, survives and makes recurring appearances in this story.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Alien Cody, who in canon exploded after being hugged by Sierra moments after his creation, survives and makes recurring appearances in this story.
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* ActionGirl: Courtney takes this UpToEleven. Sierra also has her moments.
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* ActionGirl: Courtney takes this UpToEleven.up to eleven. Sierra also has her moments.
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* KnifeNut: [[spoiler:Alejandro in the finale with Duncan's knife]]. Emphasis on "nut".
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* TheUbermensch: Alejandro, who claims to be above good and evil in the middle of his BreakingSpeech.
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* TheUbermensch: {{Ubermensch}}: Alejandro, who claims to be above good and evil AboveGoodAndEvil in the middle of his BreakingSpeech.
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* FoeYay: Invoked when a pairings poll conducted in the show has Alejandro/Duncan as one of the more popular pairings. Duncan was really far from amused.
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* FoeYay: FoeYayShipping: Invoked when a pairings poll conducted in the show has Alejandro/Duncan as one of the more popular pairings. Duncan was really far from amused.
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** Duncan and lions. He's compared as such in-text and the Serengeti episode shows some clear parallels between his story and ''Disney/TheLionKing'', specifically [[spoiler:Simba's quest for self-redemption]].
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** Duncan and lions. He's compared as such in-text and the Serengeti episode shows some clear parallels between his story and ''Disney/TheLionKing'', ''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994'', specifically [[spoiler:Simba's quest for self-redemption]].
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* CompletedFic
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** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of ''Disney/{{Aladdin}}'', which had the Genie doing the same thing as Aladdin battled Jafar.
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** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of ''Disney/{{Aladdin}}'', ''WesternAnimation/{{Aladdin}}'', which had the Genie doing the same thing as Aladdin battled Jafar.
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Duncan delivers a truly epic one to Alejandro for all the horrible things he's done.
--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and Leshawna into falling for you! Of course, you didn't ''have'' to ''lie'' and trick others throughout the entire season just like I don't have to pound your pretty face in for trying to turn me into just as big of ''scumbag as you''! But you know what, Ale? [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I JUST WANT TO!]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and Leshawna into falling for you! Of course, you didn't ''have'' to ''lie'' and trick others throughout the entire season just like I don't have to pound your pretty face in for trying to turn me into just as big of ''scumbag as you''! But you know what, Ale? [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I JUST WANT TO!]]
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen]] is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney, and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen]] is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney, and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad TheMillstone for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: [[spoiler:When Courtney almost falls into the volcano in the final challenge, Cody chooses to stay and rescue her despite her encouragements to go on without him and beat Heather.]]
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: [[spoiler:When Courtney almost falls into the volcano in the final challenge, Cody Cody]] chooses to stay and rescue her despite her encouragements to go on without him and beat Heather.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Cody doesn't win the million dollars due to Ezekiel accidentally throwing the Heather doll into the volcano, but he and Courtney are perfectly happy since they've officially become a couple, [[ThrowTheDogABone Ezekiel gets the money and a big feast]], and all the contestants have fun at the after-show party. Duncan breaks up with Gwen after they realise their attraction was only skin-deep, but Geoff and DJ decide to take Duncan on an around-the-world trip and Gwen makes amends with Leshawna, Bridgette and Courtney]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Cody [[spoiler:Cody]] doesn't win the million dollars due to Ezekiel [[spoiler:Ezekiel accidentally throwing the Heather doll into the volcano, but he and Courtney are perfectly happy since they've officially become a couple, [[ThrowTheDogABone Ezekiel gets the money and a big feast]], and all the contestants have fun at the after-show party. Duncan breaks up with Gwen after they realise their attraction was only skin-deep, but Geoff and DJ decide to take Duncan on an around-the-world trip and Gwen makes amends with Leshawna, Bridgette and Courtney]].Courtney.]]
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* FixFic: The fic addresses the Courtney/Duncan/Gwen love triangle, but also fixes other things, such as toning down Alejandro's VillainSue qualities (here, he ScreamsLikeALittleGirl and AnimalsHateHim), [[ThrowTheDogABone throwing Ezekiel a bone]] and overall having a happier and more satisfying ending for everyone (except Alejandro and Heather).
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* FixFic: The fic addresses the Courtney/Duncan/Gwen love triangle, but also fixes other things, such as toning down Alejandro's VillainSue InvincibleVillain qualities (here, he ScreamsLikeALittleGirl and AnimalsHateHim), [[ThrowTheDogABone throwing Ezekiel a bone]] and overall having a happier and more satisfying ending for everyone (except Alejandro and Heather).
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* TheMentor: [[spoiler:[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Chef]], of all people, gives Duncan some much-needed advice when he realizes he's screwed up with Courtney.]]
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* TheMentor: [[spoiler:[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Chef]], of all people, gives Duncan Duncan]] some much-needed advice when he realizes he's screwed up with Courtney.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Duncan gives one to Alejandro for everything he's done throughout the season.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Duncan gives one to Alejandro Alejandro]] for everything he's done throughout the season.]]
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney, and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win]].
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen [[spoiler:Owen]] is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney, and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win]].win.
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* TranquilFury: [[spoiler:Courtney's elimination]]
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* TranquilFury: [[spoiler:Courtney's elimination]][[spoiler:Courtney's]] elimination
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** Duncan and Gwen start off as much worse than in canon due to their bitterness towards Courtney and Cody for the LoveDodecahedron, but ultimately realize the errors of their ways and reconcile with them.
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminating in him trying to MURDER Duncan during the final challenge in Hawaii. Similarly, Heather never develops into an AntiHero like in canon and remains every bit as selfish and ruthless as ever, especially during the finals.
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminating in him trying to MURDER Duncan during the final challenge in Hawaii. Similarly, Heather never develops into an AntiHero like in canon and remains every bit as selfish and ruthless as ever, especially during the finals.
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** Alejandro grows increasingly amoral, arrogant, and backstabbing as the story goes on, to the point where in the climax he tells Duncan he is AboveGoodAndEvil while attempting to ''murder'' him (even brushing off a quick moment of remorse he feels when slashes Duncan's chest and causes him to bleed). Likewise, Heather has none of her CharacterDevelopment in canon, and is reduced to simply being Alejandro's mistress.
** Duncan and Gwen start off as muchworse less pleasant than they were in canon due to their extreme bitterness towards Courtney and Cody Cody's budding romance, with both constantly claiming NeverMyFault when the rest of the cast gets mad at them for the LoveDodecahedron, but ultimately realize the errors of their ways and reconcile with them.
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminatingaffair behind Courtney's back (Gwen even tries to deflect criticism by saying everyone should be mad at her friend Bridgette instead for falling for Alejandro early in him trying to MURDER Duncan during the final challenge in Hawaii. Similarly, Heather never develops into an AntiHero like in canon and remains every bit as selfish and ruthless as ever, especially during the finals.''World Tour''). However, CharacterDevelopment helps both of them get better.
** Duncan and Gwen start off as much
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminating
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* FixFic: The fic handles the despised Courtney/Duncan/Gwen LoveTriangle much better than in canon. Also Ezekiel is treated much, much, ''much'' better here, despite still going feral.
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* FixFic: The fic handles addresses the despised Courtney/Duncan/Gwen LoveTriangle much better than in canon. Also love triangle, but also fixes other things, such as toning down Alejandro's VillainSue qualities (here, he ScreamsLikeALittleGirl and AnimalsHateHim), [[ThrowTheDogABone throwing Ezekiel is treated much, much, ''much'' better here, despite still going feral.a bone]] and overall having a happier and more satisfying ending for everyone (except Alejandro and Heather).
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Cody tells Duncan off with practically every single swearing word of the English languague, the only insult that actually offends Duncan is calling him [[spoiler:short]].
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: this trope is used intensively:
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: this trope is used intensively:
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After Cody tells Duncan off with practically every single swearing word of the English languague, language, the only insult that actually offends Duncan is calling him [[spoiler:short]].
* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy:this This trope is used intensively:
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** Bridgette and Duncan develop one towards the end, as Bridgette sympathizes with Duncan over the guilt of cheating on their special ones during the season.
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** Bridgette and Duncan develop one towards the end, as Bridgette sympathizes with Duncan over the guilt of cheating on their special ones significant other during the season.
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Originally a oneshot, it starts right after Courtney found that Duncan cheated on her with Gwen, and vents her anger and grief alone in the cargo hold. Cody pays her a visit and tries to comfort her. Soon, Cody realizes that he's developing feelings towards Courtney, but he's unsure if the CIT will return those feelings. Meanwhile, Alejandro, Duncan and Gwen are planning to have her eliminated.
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Originally a oneshot, it starts right after Courtney found that Duncan cheated on her with Gwen, and vents her anger and grief alone in the cargo hold. Cody pays her a visit and tries to comfort her. Soon, Cody realizes that he's developing feelings towards Courtney, but he's unsure if the CIT will return those feelings. Meanwhile, Alejandro, Duncan Duncan, and Gwen are planning to have her eliminated.
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* AdaptationalVillainy:
** Duncan and Gwen start off as much worse than in canon due to their bitterness towards Courtney and Cody for the LoveDodecahedron, but ultimately realize the errors of their ways and reconcile with them.
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminating in him trying to MURDER Duncan during the final challenge in Hawaii. Similarly, Heather never develops into an AntiHero like in canon and remains every bit as selfish and ruthless as ever, especially during the finals.
* AdaptedOut:The Although they still occur in-universe, the Sweden, Easter Island and Drumheller challenges are skipped over here.for the sake of storytelling.
** Duncan and Gwen start off as much worse than in canon due to their bitterness towards Courtney and Cody for the LoveDodecahedron, but ultimately realize the errors of their ways and reconcile with them.
** Alejandro's villainous nature worsens as the story goes on, culminating in him trying to MURDER Duncan during the final challenge in Hawaii. Similarly, Heather never develops into an AntiHero like in canon and remains every bit as selfish and ruthless as ever, especially during the finals.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirlAlwaysSaveTheGirl: [[spoiler:When Courtney almost falls into the volcano in the final challenge, Cody chooses to stay and rescue her despite her encouragements to go on without him and beat Heather.]]
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** Alejandro and snakes. Ezekiel refers to him as such when he told Courtney "beware the snake", and he appears as a giant snake in Duncan's nightmares.
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** Alejandro and snakes. Ezekiel refers to him as such when he told Courtney "beware the snake", and he appears as a giant snake in Duncan's nightmares. His boots are even described as being made of snake-skin.
** Duncan is also paralleled with dogs in the story, as represented by his adoption of Mohawk the Chow mutt. Ezekiel even calls him "the spiked dog" of "the snake" (Alejandro).
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Duncan]] towards the end of the story.
* BerserkButton: Just don't dare to insult Courtney in front of Cody.
* BerserkButton: Just don't dare to insult Courtney in front of Cody.
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* TheAtoner: [[spoiler:Duncan]] towards [[spoiler:Duncan and Gwen]] toward the end of the story.
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** Just don't dare to insult Courtney in front ofCody.Cody.
** Duncan hates it when people call him short.
** Blaineley is the only person who can genuinely make the peaceful and gentle Bridgette furious, to the point where she beats the snot out of her for exploiting Duncan and Courtney's drama.
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** Just don't dare to insult Courtney in front of
** Duncan hates it when people call him short.
** Blaineley is the only person who can genuinely make the peaceful and gentle Bridgette furious, to the point where she beats the snot out of her for exploiting Duncan and Courtney's drama.
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** How Cody sees his relationship with Sierra. She doesn't take it well at first. [[spoiler: But later she does.]]
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** How Cody sees his relationship with Sierra. She doesn't take it well at first. [[spoiler: But [[spoiler:But later she does.]]
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* BigBad: Alejandro.
* BigNo: Sierra after Cody and Courtney's "wedding".
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* BigBad: Alejandro.
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* BigNo: Sierra after Cody and Courtney's"wedding"."wedding" in the Niagara Falls challenge.
* BigNo: Sierra after Cody and Courtney's
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* BreakingSpeech: Alejandro gives one to [[spoiler:Duncan]] during the final challenge.
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* BreakingSpeech: Alejandro gives one to [[spoiler:Duncan]] during the final challenge. It doesn't work as well as he hoped though.
* ButtMonkey: Alien Cody gets ridiculed a lot and is at the brunt of a lot of misfortune whenever he appears.
* DancePartyEnding: The epilogue ends the contestants enjoying themselves at a massive party with Courtney and the Drama Brothers performing a TriumphantReprise of "Come Fly with Us".
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** Also, after all the crap he went through, [[spoiler: Ezekiel won the million dollars.]]
* ElvisLives: And apparently, so does Music/MichaelJackson.
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** Also, after all the crap he went through, [[spoiler: Ezekiel won wins the million dollars.]]
* EasternZodiac: During the China challenge, Chris releases animals from the Chinese zodiac to make the race across the Great Wall more intense for the contestants. Notably, the animatronic monster from ''Action'' appears as the dragon.
* ElvisLives: And apparently, so does Music/MichaelJackson. And both inside the stomach of a giant crocodile.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Duncan may be a tough, mean juvenile delinquent who was unafraid of cheating on Courtney at the start of the story, but even he is enraged and disgusted by everything Alejandro did in the season when he learns the full story and as his CharacterDevelopment grows [[spoiler:after he is eliminated.]]
* EasternZodiac: During the China challenge, Chris releases animals from the Chinese zodiac to make the race across the Great Wall more intense for the contestants. Notably, the animatronic monster from ''Action'' appears as the dragon.
* ElvisLives: And apparently, so does Music/MichaelJackson. And both inside the stomach of a giant crocodile.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Duncan may be a tough, mean juvenile delinquent who was unafraid of cheating on Courtney at the start of the story, but even he is enraged and disgusted by everything Alejandro did in the season when he learns the full story and as his CharacterDevelopment grows [[spoiler:after he is eliminated.]]
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** Courtney remembered something that Chris said back in London that reveals that a contestant long time eliminated was still on the game.
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** Courtney remembered something that Chris said back in London that reveals that a contestant long time eliminated a long time ago was still on technically in the game.game and thus legible to win the million dollars.
* FanDisservice: Cody is horrified and disgusted by the sight of Owen dressed up as Courtney during the big guy and Noah's musical number. Also, Owen in a wedding dress. Both are PlayedForLaughs however.
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* FlatCharacter: Heather here is just a shallow villainess.
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* FixFic: The fic handles the despised Courtney/Duncan/Gwen LoveTriangle much better than in canon. Also Ezekiel is treated much, much, ''much'' better here, despite still going feral.
* FlatCharacter: Heather hereis has none of her character development from canon and remains just a as cruel and shallow villainess.as ever, as well as a close ally of Alejandro. She's basically demoted to Alejandro's sidekick.
* FlatCharacter: Heather here
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* ForWantOfANail
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* ForWantOfANailForWantOfANail: Cody's choice to come and comfort Courtney after Duncan cheated on her with Gwen causes the story to snowball into a totally different series of events.
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* GiveGeeksAChanceGiveGeeksAChance: Scrawny, tech-savvy nerd Cody is paired up with the pretty and competitive GoGetterGirl Courtney.
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* IdiotBall: Sure, Duncan, trust in Alejandro to see what happens.
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* HurtComfortFic: Started off as one for Courtney as Cody sympathizes with her over what Duncan and Gwen did. It soon develops into a full-on romance between the pair.
* IdiotBall:Sure, Duncan, trust Duncan makes the mistake of trusting in Alejandro to see get rid of Cody in China. It's explained here that he had no knowledge of what happens.Alejandro was really like due to quitting early and having no access t the show as he was on the run, but even in canon, Duncan is usually a lot savvier than that.
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** Still, it's {{Deconstructed}} in Cody's case: [[spoiler:he broke up with Courtney because she still had feelings for Duncan, who regretted cheating on her and seemed that he wanted a second chance, since Cody thought that he had no chance against Duncan. Later, after Duncan's tricked by Alejandro into eliminating her, Cody calls Duncan an idiot for letting such a wonderful girl like Courtney go. He then realizes that he did exactly the same thing.]]
* KnifeNut: [[spoiler:Alejandro]], emphasis on "nut".
* LampshadeHanging: During the aftermath chapter, a viewer named Philip accuses the show of being scripted.
-->'''Philip''': Oh pleez! If this is reality television then where the hell does the music from each episode come from? And how is it possible that you guys can sing the exact same song, at the exact same time, in perfect unison without any kind of rehearsal or script involved…and WHEN YOU ARE IN DIFFERENT PLACES AS WELL? IT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
* KnifeNut: [[spoiler:Alejandro]], emphasis on "nut".
* LampshadeHanging: During the aftermath chapter, a viewer named Philip accuses the show of being scripted.
-->'''Philip''': Oh pleez! If this is reality television then where the hell does the music from each episode come from? And how is it possible that you guys can sing the exact same song, at the exact same time, in perfect unison without any kind of rehearsal or script involved…and WHEN YOU ARE IN DIFFERENT PLACES AS WELL? IT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
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** Still, it's {{Deconstructed}} in Cody's case: [[spoiler:he case. [[spoiler:He broke up with Courtney because she still had feelings for Duncan, who regretted cheating on her and seemed that he wanted a second chance, since Cody thought that he had no chance against Duncan. Later, after Duncan's tricked by Alejandro into eliminating her, Cody calls Duncan an idiot for letting such a wonderful girl like Courtney go. He then realizes that he did exactly the same thing.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: The contestants' order of elimination remains identical to canon, with the notably exceptions being Noah's return in Niagara Falls and [[spoiler:Cody replacing Alejandro as a finalist with Heather.]]
* IsItSomethingYouEat: Lindsay thinks "[=CoCo=]" (Cody/Courtney) refers to cocoa and that "Duncney" (Duncan/Courtney) is a food.
* KnifeNut:[[spoiler:Alejandro]], emphasis [[spoiler:Alejandro in the finale with Duncan's knife]]. Emphasis on "nut".
* LampshadeHanging: Of the nature of the season's musical numbers. During the aftermath chapter, a viewer named Philip accuses the show of being scripted.
-->'''Philip''': Ohpleez! please! If this is reality television then where the hell does the music from each episode come from? And how is it possible that you guys can sing the exact same song, at the exact same time, in perfect unison without any kind of rehearsal or script involved…and WHEN YOU ARE IN DIFFERENT PLACES AS WELL? IT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
* InSpiteOfANail: The contestants' order of elimination remains identical to canon, with the notably exceptions being Noah's return in Niagara Falls and [[spoiler:Cody replacing Alejandro as a finalist with Heather.]]
* IsItSomethingYouEat: Lindsay thinks "[=CoCo=]" (Cody/Courtney) refers to cocoa and that "Duncney" (Duncan/Courtney) is a food.
* KnifeNut:
* LampshadeHanging: Of the nature of the season's musical numbers. During the aftermath chapter, a viewer named Philip accuses the show of being scripted.
-->'''Philip''': Oh
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* LargeHam: Alien Cody is a shining example. Owen becomes one in the final, [[spoiler: when he is throwing the game for Cody]].
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* LargeHam: Alien Cody is a shining example. Owen becomes one in the final, [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when he is throwing the game for Cody]].
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* TheMentor: [[spoiler:[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Chef]], of all people, gives Duncan some much-needed advice.]]
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* TheMentor: [[spoiler:[[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Chef]], of all people, gives Duncan some much-needed advice.advice when he realizes he's screwed up with Courtney.]]
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** Duncan after learning the truth behind [[spoiler: Courtney's elimination]].
** Alejandro's initial reaction when [[spoiler:he hit Duncan with the knife]]. However...
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** Duncan after learning the truth behind [[spoiler: Courtney's [[spoiler:Courtney's elimination]].
** Alejandro's initial reaction when [[spoiler:hehit slashed Duncan with the knife]]. However...However, he quickly brushes it aside and continues with trying to kill him.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Duncan gives one to Alejandro for everything he's done throughout the season.]]
* NoodleIncident: How Owen and Noah survived falling out of the plane without parachutes. Noah mentions "blubber padding" and Owen brings up a giant tub of green jello, but the most we get otherwise is all the other contestants looking utterly baffled by their story.
* NeverSmileAtACrocodile: Duncan and Cody are swallowed by the real-life, semi-legendary, giant, man-eating crocodile Gustave during the Africa challenge.
* NeverMyFault: Gwen starts off this way in regards to her cheating with Duncan. [[spoiler:CharacterDevelopment ultimately helps her realize she was in the wrong.]]
** Alejandro's initial reaction when [[spoiler:he
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:Duncan gives one to Alejandro for everything he's done throughout the season.]]
* NoodleIncident: How Owen and Noah survived falling out of the plane without parachutes. Noah mentions "blubber padding" and Owen brings up a giant tub of green jello, but the most we get otherwise is all the other contestants looking utterly baffled by their story.
* NeverSmileAtACrocodile: Duncan and Cody are swallowed by the real-life, semi-legendary, giant, man-eating crocodile Gustave during the Africa challenge.
* NeverMyFault: Gwen starts off this way in regards to her cheating with Duncan. [[spoiler:CharacterDevelopment ultimately helps her realize she was in the wrong.]]
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** Bridgette and Duncan towards the end, as they're the cheaters of the season.
** Courtney and Ezekiel.
** Courtney and Ezekiel.
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** Bridgette and Duncan develop one towards the end, as they're Bridgette sympathizes with Duncan over the cheaters guilt of cheating on their special ones during the season.
** Courtney andEzekiel.Ezekiel form one, as Courtney spends time in the cargo hold with only the feral Ezekiel as company while she grieves over Duncan's infidelity.
** Noah and Owen carry this on from canon, especially during the Niagara Falls challenge.
** Courtney and
** Noah and Owen carry this on from canon, especially during the Niagara Falls challenge.
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* SanitySlippage: Alejandro during the final challenge while fighting [[spoiler:Duncan]].
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* SealedWithAKiss: Subverted.
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* ShipTease: Noah and Sierra get a little bit of this at the end of the story.
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** Owen, Noah, Ezekiel and [[spoiler:Sierra]] support Cody/Courtney, while DJ and Geoff support Duncan/Courtney. Nobody seems to like Duncan/Gwen, thought this is mostly due to the authoress' hatred of the pairing.
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** Owen, Noah, Ezekiel and [[spoiler:Sierra]] support Cody/Courtney, while DJ and Geoff support Duncan/Courtney. Nobody seems to like Duncan/Gwen, thought this is mostly Duncan/Gwen due to the authoress' circumstances behind its establishment (which also reflects the author's hatred of the pairing.pairing).
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** "So, if you're an alien [[Anime/DragonBallZ your hair turns blond and spiky]] [[SuperMode when you get angry?]]
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** When Owen meets Alien Cody, he says, "So, if you're an alien [[Anime/DragonBallZ your hair turns blond and spiky]] [[SuperMode when you get angry?]]angry?]]"
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** Courtney's favorite pony is [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]].
** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of ''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''.
** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of ''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''.
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** Sierra says that Courtney's favorite pony is [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle]].
** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of''Disney/{{Aladdin}}''.''Disney/{{Aladdin}}'', which had the Genie doing the same thing as Aladdin battled Jafar.
** During the fight between [[spoiler: Alejandro and Duncan]] in the final challenge, Owen starts cheering for the latter. When the former reminded Owen that he should be cheering for him instead, Owen starts cheering with FlatJoy. This is a reference to the climax of
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Noah becomes a ''massive'' one for Alejandro and Duncan.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Noah becomes and Owen become a ''massive'' one for Alejandro and Duncan.Duncan during the former's brief return in Niagara Falls.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win]].
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* TokenGoodTeammate: [[spoiler:Owen is forced into joining Heather's team along with Alejandro for the volcano challenge against Cody, Courtney Courtney, and Duncan. Despite this, he's perfectly happy to act as TheLoad for Heather in the hopes of helping Cody win]].
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* TriumphantReprise: "Come Fly With Us," and what a reprise it is.
* UnholyMatrimony: Alejandro/Heather.
* UnholyMatrimony: Alejandro/Heather.
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* TriumphantReprise: "Come Fly With Us," Us", done by Courtney and the Drama Brothers. And what a reprise it is.
* UnholyMatrimony:Alejandro/Heather.Alejandro and Heather carry this on from canon, but their rivalry is downplayed and they are much more loyal to each other.
* UnholyMatrimony:
* VillainousBreakdown: Alejandro during the final challenge while fighting [[spoiler:Duncan]].
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Blaineley vanishes after the Aftermath chapter and is never seen or mentioned throughout the finale in Hawaii.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Blaineley vanishes after the Aftermath chapter and is never seen or mentioned throughout the finale in Hawaii.
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech:
--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and [=LeShawna=] into falling for you! Of course, you didn't ''have'' to ''lie'' and trick others throughout the entire season just like I don'thave to pound your pretty face in for trying to turn me into just as big of ''scumbag as you''! But you know what, Ale? [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I JUST WANT TO!]]
--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and [=LeShawna=] into falling for you! Of course, you didn't ''have'' to ''lie'' and trick others throughout the entire season just like I don'thave to pound your pretty face in for trying to turn me into just as big of ''scumbag as you''! But you know what, Ale? [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I JUST WANT TO!]]
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech:
WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Duncan delivers a truly epic one to Alejandro for all the horrible things he's done.
--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and[=LeShawna=] Leshawna into falling for you! Of course, you didn't ''have'' to ''lie'' and trick others throughout the entire season just like I don'thave don't have to pound your pretty face in for trying to turn me into just as big of ''scumbag as you''! But you know what, Ale? [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I JUST WANT TO!]]TO!]]
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--> '''[[spoiler:Duncan]]''': You're right… I didn't have to believe you and Heather. Just like you didn't have to tell the lies in the first place! Or how you didn't have to convince Harold to vote himself off in Japan! And you didn't have to trick both Bridgette and
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: While Ezekiel's still feral in the fic, he actually retains some degree of sapience this time around - enough to actually speak and outright rhyme - while in canon he was little more than a feral animal who pointedly ''couldn't'' speak.
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** Alejandro and snakes. Ezekiel refers him when he told Courtney "beware the snake", and he appears as a giant snake in Duncan's nightmares.
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** Alejandro and snakes. Ezekiel refers to him as such when he told Courtney "beware the snake", and he appears as a giant snake in Duncan's nightmares.
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** Also, Courtney kissing an upside-down Cody may be a reference to the ''Film/{{Spiderman}}'' movies.
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** Also, Courtney kissing an upside-down Cody may be a reference to the ''Film/{{Spiderman}}'' movies.''Film/SpiderMan1''.
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The one-shot (aka the first chapter) had an unfinished sequel - [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6625000/1/The_Lawyer_the_Snoop_and_the_Scandal The Lawyer, The Snoop, and the Scandal]] - [[spoiler:taking place in after an undisclosed TimeSkip and covering Cody and Courtney's adventures as a married couple]], but the events of Candy's subsequent chapters [[spoiler:(specifically, Gwen and Duncan's redeeming themselves)]] have technically placed this story in a separate continuity entirely.
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The one-shot (aka the first chapter) had an unfinished sequel - [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6625000/1/The_Lawyer_the_Snoop_and_the_Scandal The Lawyer, The Snoop, and the Scandal]] - [[spoiler:taking place in after an undisclosed TimeSkip and covering Cody and Courtney's adventures as a married couple]], but the events of Candy's subsequent chapters [[spoiler:(specifically, Gwen and Duncan's redeeming themselves)]] have technically placed this story in a separate continuity entirely.
Scandal]].
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6219608/1/Candy_For_Your_Thoughts Candy For Your Thoughts?]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland'' fanfiction written by Strix Moonwing.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6219608/1/Candy_For_Your_Thoughts Candy For Your Thoughts?]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland'' ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction written by Strix Moonwing.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6219608/1/Candy_For_Your_Thoughts Candy For Your Thoughts]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland'' fanfiction written by Strix Moonwing.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6219608/1/Candy_For_Your_Thoughts Candy For Your Thoughts]]'' Thoughts?]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland'' fanfiction written by Strix Moonwing.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Cody doesn't win the million dollars due to Ezekiel accidentally throwing the Heather doll into the volcano, but he and Courtney are perfectly happy since they've officially become a couple, [[ThrowTheDogABone Ezekiel gets the money and a big feast]], and all the contestants have fun at the after-show party. Duncan breaks up with Gwen after they realise their attraction was only skin-deep, but Geoff and DJ promise to take Duncan on an around-the-world trip and Gwen makes amends with Leshawna, Bridgette and Courtney]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Cody doesn't win the million dollars due to Ezekiel accidentally throwing the Heather doll into the volcano, but he and Courtney are perfectly happy since they've officially become a couple, [[ThrowTheDogABone Ezekiel gets the money and a big feast]], and all the contestants have fun at the after-show party. Duncan breaks up with Gwen after they realise their attraction was only skin-deep, but Geoff and DJ promise decide to take Duncan on an around-the-world trip and Gwen makes amends with Leshawna, Bridgette and Courtney]].