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* InNameOnly: Frollo. If you didn't see it at first, wait until he tells Danisha that he ''doesn't believe in witchcraft''.
** Also Clopin, who, in the prequel, wants so badly to be the archdeacon that he drugs Frollo with hallucinogenics and puts an identical imposter in his place.
** Also Clopin, who, in the prequel, wants so badly to be the archdeacon that he drugs Frollo with hallucinogenics and puts an identical imposter in his place.
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* InNameOnly: Frollo. If you didn't see it at first, wait until he tells Danisha that he ''doesn't believe in witchcraft''.
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--> I looked at Frollo quizzically. "Minister Frollo, this horse is not white, he's black. Naming a black horse 'Snowball'?...That's like naming a polar bear 'Midnight'." I was certain that the good judge would slap me upside my head, but he just softly chuckled and said, "My dear, never lose that special style of humor. I will admit I am getting used to it..." He paused for a few seconds, then adding at last, "And getting used to you."
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Danisha is this in spades.
* TheKilljoy: Malus when he comes to pick up his siblings even though they haven't had ice cream yet.
* TheKilljoy: Malus when he comes to pick up his siblings even though they haven't had ice cream yet.
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* MamaBear: Danisha is supposed to come off this way to Quasimodo, but instead she comes off as a {{Yandere}}.
* ManChild: Quasimodo is portrayed as this.
--> I heard a sound from under the table. I pulled back the tablecloth and, to my surprise, stared directly into the eyes of Quasimodo. He was munching on cookies and drinking lemonade. "Quasi! What are doing here? You're going to get into trouble!" Quasi shushed me and whispered, "I heard about your party, and I wanted to come. Please don't tell my master." I thought for a few seconds, then decided not to tell Claude; after all, Quasi's my little buddy.
* ManipulativeBastard: Esmeralda is portrayed as this.
* MayDecemberRomance: Danisha and Frollo.
* ManChild: Quasimodo is portrayed as this.
--> I heard a sound from under the table. I pulled back the tablecloth and, to my surprise, stared directly into the eyes of Quasimodo. He was munching on cookies and drinking lemonade. "Quasi! What are doing here? You're going to get into trouble!" Quasi shushed me and whispered, "I heard about your party, and I wanted to come. Please don't tell my master." I thought for a few seconds, then decided not to tell Claude; after all, Quasi's my little buddy.
* ManipulativeBastard: Esmeralda is portrayed as this.
* MayDecemberRomance: Danisha and Frollo.
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--> Malus? Well, he's based on a kid that used to live in the 'hood - a real bad seed – I think he's in jail(!). Hence the name, "Malus"...that name came from the only Latin teacher in my building. Sort of fits..."Malus" means "bad".
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* OutOfCharacter: Frollo - an incredibly racist man who hates anyone with skin darker than his - falls madly in love with Danisha, a black woman. He also spends a great deal of time giggling and simpering when he's around her, and finds her tendency to speak her mind "most endearing". He also doesn't believe in witchcraft at all and has very modern and politically correct views on issues like racism and slavery.
--> Claude smiled as he immediately explained, "My love, kindly leave the superstitions to the common crowd. I'm not as close-minded as some would have you to believe."
--> Claude smiled as he immediately explained, "My love, kindly leave the superstitions to the common crowd. I'm not as close-minded as some would have you to believe."
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* OutOfCharacter: Frollo - -- an incredibly racist man who hates anyone with skin darker than his - -- falls madly in love with Danisha, a black woman. He also spends a great deal of time giggling and simpering when he's around her, and finds her tendency to speak her mind "most endearing". He also doesn't believe in witchcraft at all and has very modern and politically correct views on issues like racism and slavery.
--> Claude -->''Claude smiled as he immediately explained, "My love, kindly leave the superstitions to the common crowd. I'm not as close-minded as some would have you to believe.""''
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* SassyBlackWoman: Danisha fits this to a T.
--> I returned the smile and, feeling a little silly, replied in a mock-Southern, down-on-de-ole-plantation dialect, "Mornin', Min'ster Frollo, suh. Much 'bliged y'all kin stop by an' set a spell. I has some pow'ful tasty pecan cake in yonder. Y'all sho' is welcomed."
--> I returned the smile and, feeling a little silly, replied in a mock-Southern, down-on-de-ole-plantation dialect, "Mornin', Min'ster Frollo, suh. Much 'bliged y'all kin stop by an' set a spell. I has some pow'ful tasty pecan cake in yonder. Y'all sho' is welcomed."
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* TheTease: Esmeralda.
* TimeTravelRomance: The entire plot.
* TimeTravelRomance: The entire plot.
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Many {{MST}}s exist of this story. A complete MST by Midoriri of ''Blog/DasSporking'' can be found [[https://das-sporking2.dreamwidth.org/208549.html here]]. Another complete one by [=MackenzieW=] can be found [[http://s4.zetaboards.com/Refia/topic/1281069/1/ on this Refia board]] whose sporkers consist of the MST author and characters from various media. An on-going spork by FanFic/UtterTripeReviews using a similar sporking-team format can be found [[https://storygirl000.deviantart.com/gallery/65459979/Utter-Tripe-Reviews here]].
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Many {{MST}}s exist of this story. A complete MST by Midoriri of ''Blog/DasSporking'' can be found [[https://das-sporking2.dreamwidth.org/208549.html here]]. Another complete one by [=MackenzieW=] can be found [[http://s4.zetaboards.com/Refia/topic/1281069/1/ on this Refia board]] whose sporkers consist of the MST author and characters from various media. An on-going spork by FanFic/UtterTripeReviews using a similar sporking-team format can be found [[https://storygirl000.deviantart.com/gallery/65459979/Utter-Tripe-Reviews here]].
here]]. Another MST by a group of people can be found [[https://theasylumriffs.wordpress.com/category/hunchback-of-notre-dame-disney/back-to-the-frollo/ here]]/
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* BerserkButton: Danisha seems to have many, among them being mistaken for a Gypsy. When her BerserkButton is pushed, she becomes angry.
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* SaltAndPepper: Frollo and Danisha are an interracial couple. Frollo is laid-back and easygoing, and Danisha is sassy.
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* CondescendingCompassion: Danisha towards Quasimodo, who appears to have some sort of AmbiguousDisorder.
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* BreakTheHaughty: The author attempts to do this with Esmeralda, but it comes across more as BreakTheCutie. Esmeralda's only real crime is being physically attractive. Frollo threatens to kill her if she refuses him, which she does. Both the author and Danisha act as though turning Frollo down was a mortal sin and that the scene where Frollo corners Esmeralda in the cathedral and propositions her is romantic (even though he grabs her, sniffs her hair and tells her he's imagining a rope around her pretty neck).
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by [[https://crazedwriter.tripod.com/index.html Pamela R. Parker]][[note]]given on official sites as "P. R. Parker", first name given as Pamela on the author's Twitter and Facebook, which the Tripod official site bears links to[[/note]], otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by [[https://crazedwriter.tripod.com/index.html Pamela R. Parker]][[note]]given on official sites as "P. R. Parker", first name given as Pamela on the author's Twitter and Facebook, which the Tripod official site bears links to[[/note]], otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by [[https://crazedwriter.tripod.com/index.html Pamela R. Parker]], otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by [[https://crazedwriter.tripod.com/index.html Pamela R. Parker]], Parker]][[note]]given on official sites as "P. R. Parker", first name given as Pamela on the author's Twitter and Facebook, which the Tripod official site bears links to[[/note]], otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by [[https://crazedwriter.tripod.com/index.html Pamela R. Parker, Parker]], otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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* BadLiar: Possibly the author herself, who claims to be a social studies teacher, yet gets the year Columbus discovered the New World wrong, and seems to constantly forget that there were no modern stoves in Medieval France.
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* [[AngryBlackMan Angry Black Woman]]: Danisha becomes a "dissed sister" or a "sister with a 'tude" at the slightest perceived insult.
--> I really let him know how I felt and went off on him. I became a dissed sister, a raised voice full of fire and spit.
--> I really let him know how I felt and went off on him. I became a dissed sister, a raised voice full of fire and spit.
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* CulturalPosturing: Danisha thinks very highly of her Indiana culture and likes to put it on display whenever she can in a culture and time period that isn't hers.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' ''WesternAnimation/{{The Hunchback of Notre Dame|Disney}}'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] Danisha discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself Pamela R. Parker, otherwise known as "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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* GoneSwimmingClothesStolen: While going for a swim, Frollo gets all his clothes (and his horse) stolen by a group of children led by an ex-lieutenant who wanted to get back at Frollo for firing him. [[DownplayedTrope Frollo's cape is spared, however.]]
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* GoneSwimmingClothesStolen: While going for a swim, Frollo gets all his clothes (and his horse) stolen by a group of children led by an ex-lieutenant who wanted wants to get back at Frollo for firing him. [[DownplayedTrope Frollo's cape is spared, however.]]
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* GoneSwimmingClothesStolen: While going for a swim, Frollo gets all his clothes (and his horse) stolen by a group of children led by an ex-lieutenant who wanted to get back at Frollo for firing him. Frollo's cape is spared, however.
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* OffstageVillainy: Malus apparently physically abuses his siblings, though the closest the story ever gets to showing him being abusive is him wanting to take them home early from a party Danisha's having.
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* WouldHitAGirl: Danisha in spades.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's 1480s Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Danisha introduces modern food, music, technology, and American sports (kickball and baseball) to the medieval peasants of 1480's France. She also teaches Quasimodo about early American history, including the Underground Railroad and the Civil War.
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* GivingRadioToTheRomans: Danisha introduces modern food, music, technology, and American sports (kickball and baseball) to the medieval peasants of 1480's 1480s France. She also teaches Quasimodo about early American history, including the Underground Railroad and the Civil War.
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* HomeschooledKids: Quasimodo - despite being in his 20's - is visited in the bell tower by both Frollo and Danisha for lessons. Danisha's lessons include early American history and African-American poetry.
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* ConflictBall: Characters swap the ConflictBall over and over again throughout the series. They frequently become angry with each other for no reason, like when Danisha gets mad at Malus over him being a responsible sibling even though she takes the role of a big sister figure herself multiple times. In the sequel, there's a minor subplot in which Frollo becomes irate at Quasimodo and Iggy for singing 20th-century songs in a tavern late at night, even though they had been doing similar things long before that particular scene and he had never had an issue before. Most of the conflicts are short and have very little bearing on the plot.
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* TheDitz: Phoebus, according to most of the characters (although he never does anything very ditzy; it's more of an InformedTrait.)
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secret mistresses ("FSMs.")
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secret mistresses ("FSMs.")
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* TheDitz: Phoebus, according to most of the characters (although he never does anything very ditzy; it's more of an InformedTrait.InformedAttribute.)
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secretmistresses ("FSMs.")mistresses.
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secret
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: The characters all have access to flawless and completely safe time-travel devices that somehow avoid creating paradoxes. They ''never'' remember this when they're in danger.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Danisha, even though the author insists that she is kind and patient. Frollo can alos come across as this despite the author's best intentions of portraying him as a kindhearted man.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Danisha, even though the author insists that she is kind and patient. Frollo can alos also come across as this despite the author's best intentions of portraying him as a kindhearted man.
* IdiotBall: Every time a character is in trouble or facing a time-sensitive situation, they get tossed the IdiotBall and forget that they have the ability to time-travel. Frollo gets a particularly bad IdiotBall in ''Didn't It Blow Your Mind, Claude Frollo?'' when he's trying to find out who stole a precious artifact, and he remembers that he can time travel, but it never seems to occur to him that he can use that ability to either track down the thieves or prevent the artifact from being stolen in the first place. Rather, he decides to go to the 1990s to talk to Danisha's parents. To make matters even worse, he mentions how clever and difficult-to-outsmart he is multiple times.
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* VillainBall: Esmeralda gets this pretty badly. She's characterized as a ManipulativeBastard, but most of the things she does are cruel and spiteful for no real reason, needlessly complicated, and high-effort, low-reward. None of her actions ever benefit her in any way, and she frequently inconveniences herself just for the sake of being mean. She entered a sham marriage that she kept up for weeks just to make Phoebus upset, befriended and abandoned Quasimodo for the sole purpose of pissing off Frollo, and overall constantly trades massive inconveniences for small rewards she doesn't even have a motivation for wanting. And, if that didn't seal the deal, she's also fond of yelling at people in public.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame [[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
* BoomerangBigot: Danisha slut-shames Esmeralda constantly even though she has (implied) sex with Frollo on a regular basis.
* TheBully: Danisha comes across as this often. Most of her fights are against captives and/or victims, and the antagonists that upset her most are often literal children (e.g. Malus.)
* CondescendingCompassion: Danisha towards Quasimodo, who appears to have some sort of AmbiguousDisorder.
* CuteAndPsycho: Esmeralda is characterized as this. According to the author, her sweet personality during ''The Hunchback of Notre Dame'' was all an act cleverly designed to hide her manipulative, bitchy nature.
* {{Delinquents}}: Malus and his group of friends. It's more of an InformedAttribute, though.
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--> I put on my cloak and hat as Claude summoned the guards to take Esmeralda away to the Palace of Justice. As the soldiers put her in shackles, I walked up to her, squared my shoulders proudly, and in a firm, clear voice, said, "Baby, let me give you some advice. The next time you give a man an almost lap-dance, get him all hot and sweaty, and don't follow through...Honey, don't expect him to be too accommodating the second time." That said, the soldiers dragged the gypsy dancer away.
* DistressedDude: Frollo in most of ''What REALLY Happened''.
* DistressedDude: Frollo in most of ''What REALLY Happened''.
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--> I "I put on my cloak and hat as Claude summoned the guards to take Esmeralda away to the Palace of Justice. As the soldiers put her in shackles, I walked up to her, squared my shoulders proudly, and in a firm, clear voice, said, "Baby, let me give you some advice. The next time you give a man an almost lap-dance, get him all hot and sweaty, and don't follow through...Honey, don't expect him to be too accommodating the second time." That said, the soldiers dragged the gypsy dancer away.
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* DistressedDude: Frollo in most of ''What REALLYHappened''. Happened''.
* TheDitz: Phoebus, according to most of the characters (although he never does anything very ditzy; it's more of an InformedTrait.)
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secret mistresses ("FSMs.")
* DistressedDude: Frollo in most of ''What REALLY
* TheDitz: Phoebus, according to most of the characters (although he never does anything very ditzy; it's more of an InformedTrait.)
* EntitledToHaveYou: Frollo and Danisha act like this towards Esmeralda. Danisha beats her up in public and has her sent off to be tortured because she's so upset by the fact that Esmeralda didn't want to be one of Frollo's secret mistresses ("FSMs.")
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* HairTriggerTemper: Danisha, even though the author insists that she is kind and patient.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Danisha, even though the author insists that she is kind and patient. Frollo can alos come across as this despite the author's best intentions of portraying him as a kindhearted man.
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** Also, both he and Danisha are described as being as kind, loving, and sweet-natured people, when in reality they're sociopathic, narcissistic, and petty.
** When Esmeralda has been captured and Danisha is meant to deliver a scathing TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Frollo Freak doesn't actually bother to write it. Instead, we are given an author's note claiming that the speech was so amazingly savage, epic, and clever that it was "unprintable," coupled by the narrative and several characters expressing their astonishment at how brutal said non-existent speech was. Presumably, because Frollo Freak isn't actually a good enough writer to come up with an epic enough smackdown, [[InformedWrongness couldn't think of enough things actually wrong with Esmeralda to bring up]], or both.
** When Esmeralda has been captured and Danisha is meant to deliver a scathing TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Frollo Freak doesn't actually bother to write it. Instead, we are given an author's note claiming that the speech was so amazingly savage, epic, and clever that it was "unprintable," coupled by the narrative and several characters expressing their astonishment at how brutal said non-existent speech was. Presumably, because Frollo Freak isn't actually a good enough writer to come up with an epic enough smackdown, [[InformedWrongness couldn't think of enough things actually wrong with Esmeralda to bring up]], or both.
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** Also, both he and Danisha are described as being as kind, loving, and sweet-natured people, when in reality they're sociopathic, narcissistic, and petty.
petty. Danisha in particular is repeatedly describes as kind and patient despite having an obviousHairTriggerTemper.
** Many of the antagonistic characters get this, too; Esmeralda is described as being borderline pathologically manipulative even though her only real crime was not wanting to have sex with Frollo, Malus is described as a gang leader and a hooligan even though he acts like a responsible older brother who doesn't want his little siblings accepting food from adult strangers, and Phoebus is described as amazingly, worryingly dimwitted even though he never does anything particularly stupid.
** When Esmeralda has been captured and Danisha is meant to deliver a scathing TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Frollo Freak doesn't actually bother to write it. Instead, we are given an author's note claiming that the speech was so amazingly savage, epic, and clever that it was "unprintable," coupled by the narrative and several characters expressing their astonishment at how brutal said non-existent speech was. Presumably, this is because Frollo Freak isn't actually a good enough writer to come up with an epic enough smackdown, [[InformedWrongness couldn't think of enough things actually wrong with Esmeralda to bring up]], or both.
** Many of the antagonistic characters get this, too; Esmeralda is described as being borderline pathologically manipulative even though her only real crime was not wanting to have sex with Frollo, Malus is described as a gang leader and a hooligan even though he acts like a responsible older brother who doesn't want his little siblings accepting food from adult strangers, and Phoebus is described as amazingly, worryingly dimwitted even though he never does anything particularly stupid.
** When Esmeralda has been captured and Danisha is meant to deliver a scathing TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Frollo Freak doesn't actually bother to write it. Instead, we are given an author's note claiming that the speech was so amazingly savage, epic, and clever that it was "unprintable," coupled by the narrative and several characters expressing their astonishment at how brutal said non-existent speech was. Presumably, this is because Frollo Freak isn't actually a good enough writer to come up with an epic enough smackdown, [[InformedWrongness couldn't think of enough things actually wrong with Esmeralda to bring up]], or both.
** Also Clopin, who, in the prequel, wants so badly to be the archdeacon that he drugs Frollo with hallucinogenics and puts an identical imposter in his place.
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' ''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.
* TheKilljoy: Malus when he comes to pick up his siblings even though they haven't had ice cream yet.
* ManipulativeBastard: Esmeralda is portrayed as this.
* MealTicket: Danisha and Frollo's romance can come across as this. Danisha owns a lot of luxuries that a rural schoolteacher would never be able to buy on her own, and her family isn't particularly wealthy. It's implied that a lot of her belongings are expensive gifts from Frollo. He even offers to buy her a very large house at one point, and in the sequel, he gifts her an ancient box that once belonged to a sixth-century Byzantine empress.
** Esmeralda is characterized as a scheming seductress who gets off on manipulating men into falling for her and marrying people out of pity. ''Back to the Frollo's'' version of Esmeralda openly dislikes both Quasimodo and Phoebus, and doesn't seem at all concerned about marginalized people.
** In ''Back to the Frollo'' and many of its sequels, Phoebus is portrayed as a very dimwitted "dumb jock" type (though this is more of an InformedAttribute, as characters constantly remark on how dull he is, but he never seems to do anything genuinely stupid.)
** In ''Back to the Frollo'' and many of its sequels, Phoebus is portrayed as a very dimwitted "dumb jock" type (though this is more of an InformedAttribute, as characters constantly remark on how dull he is, but he never seems to do anything genuinely stupid.)
* ReallyGetsAround: Frollo. Danisha is his *fourteenth* mistress. He even has rabid fangirls pursuing him in the streets.
* SupportingHarem: Frollo has over a dozen other mistresses aside from Danisha (even though very few of them are plot relevant.)
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* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Frollo adores Danisha's pecan pies, and pecans in general
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* WouldHitAGirl: Danisha in spades.
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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''Back to the Frollo'' is a piece of fanfiction reviewed by WebVideo/TheFanFictionCritic. It was written by a woman calling herself "Crazed Writer" and "Creator/FrolloFreak". It's the [[SarcasmMode sweeping, romantic]] tale of how a SassyBlackWoman named [[MarySue Danisha]] discovered a [[Franchise/BackToTheFuture time-traveling Chevy]], traveled to 1480's Paris, met [[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame [[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Judge Claude Frollo]], and fell madly in love with him. It can be read [[http://crazedwriter.tripod.com/fanfiction1.html here]].
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** According to the director's of the Disney version of ''Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' ''WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame'' Frollo's horse was nicknamed "Snowball" by the animators.