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deleting because vriska does not get Demoted To Extra post act-5.
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** This ends up being Vriska and Tavros's fates post Act 5, with Vriska furiously attempting to put her self back into the spotlight, and dragging Tavros along for the ride. Unlike the other trolls, the narrative checks in with Vriska a lot more.
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** Post Cascade this happened to PM. Originally the exiles all had their own story plot running alongside the main kids. Then Cascade hit [[spoiler:three of them died, and PM attained the Guardian powers Jack has]]. While WV still appears with the Meteor Crew, PM spent much of Act 6 chasing Jack around, with the narrative very sparsely cutting back to her. It's only when she gets to the Post Scratch session that she begins to become important again, but by that point she's sharing screen time with all the Jacks.
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** Post Cascade this happened to PM. Originally Initially, the exiles all Exiles of the kids were given heavy prominence and had their own story plot plotline running alongside the main kids. Then Cascade hit [[spoiler:three [[WhamEpisode Cascade]] happened. [[spoiler:Three of them died, a barely-alive WV was transported to the Meteor and PM attained put on the Guardian powers Jack has]]. Queen's ring to avenge her friends and kill Jack.]] While WV still appears with the Meteor Crew, PM spent we never get to see from his perspective again and he's mostly a background character. PM, meanwhile, spends much of Act 6 chasing Jack [[spoiler:Jack Noir]] around, with the narrative very sparsely cutting back to her. It's only when she gets to the Post Scratch session that she begins to become important again, but by that point she's sharing screen time with all the Jacks.
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* Justin ''Webcomic/ElGoonishShive'' eventually sank in the background, seemingly existing only to be a gay male. He was at least a major focus in the "New and Old Flames" arc.
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* Justin from ''Webcomic/ElGoonishShive'' eventually sank in the background, seemingly existing only to be a gay male. He was at least a major focus in the "New and Old Flames" arc.
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* Justin and Sarah in ''Webcomic/ElGoonishShive'' have steadily sunken into the background, though Dan is trying to avert this. Specifically, Justin seems to only exist to be a gay male and Sarah as Elliot's girlfriend.
** Justin, at least, was a major focus in the "New and Old Flames" arc.
** Sarah is getting more "screen" time and more of her own role as Tedd's lab assistant in one of the current arcs relating to summer jobs.
** Justin, at least, was a major focus in the "New and Old Flames" arc.
** Sarah is getting more "screen" time and more of her own role as Tedd's lab assistant in one of the current arcs relating to summer jobs.
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* Justin and Sarah in ''Webcomic/ElGoonishShive'' have steadily sunken into eventually sank in the background, though Dan is trying to avert this. Specifically, Justin seems to seemingly existing only exist to be a gay male and Sarah as Elliot's girlfriend.
** Justin, at least,male. He was at least a major focus in the "New and Old Flames" arc.
** Sarah is getting more "screen" time and more of her own role as Tedd's lab assistant in one of the current arcs relating to summer jobs.arc.
** Justin, at least,
** Sarah is getting more "screen" time and more of her own role as Tedd's lab assistant in one of the current arcs relating to summer jobs.
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** Sollux, Nepeta, Feferi, Eridan, and Equius all move further to the back with the conclusion of Act 5 [[spoiler:because of their deaths]], and while they do appear later on for some character moments [[spoiler:or to end up fused to some sort of sprite]], they're considerably less important now that the cast has increased. The same has happened to Aradia post Act 5 as well, [[spoiler:while she isn't dead and]] she does serve more of a story importance than the other 5, she's content to stay out of the spotlight.
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** Sollux, Nepeta, Feferi, Eridan, and Equius all move further to the back with the conclusion of Act 5 [[spoiler:because of their deaths]], and while they do appear later on for some character moments [[spoiler:or to end up fused to some sort of sprite]], they're considerably less important now that the cast has increased. The same has happened to Aradia post Act 5 as well, [[spoiler:while she well; while [[spoiler:she isn't dead and]] she does serve more of a story importance than the other 5, five, she's content to stay out of the spotlight.
