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* [[AloneInACrowd Alone In A Crowd]]: Aidan and Mina, due to their power (and the responsibilities that come with it).
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* [[BreakTheBadass Break The Badass]]: The author had lots of fun doing that to Aidan.
* [[CaptainsLog Captain’s Log]]: The story contains a few entries of that kind, written by either Aidan or Wilhelmina.
* [[CessationOfExistence Cessation Of Existence]]: What happens to the victims of the Claricks...
* [[CoolAirship Cool Airship]]: HMS ''Edinburgh''.
* [[CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: The world in which the story is set. [Also known as Oblivion World, Otherworld, or Twin Reality.]
* [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]]: Wolfram Mc Alexander.
* [[DeathFromAbove Death From Above]]: What HMS ''Edinburgh'' brings.
* [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Event Horizon]]: Is reached gradually every time the Impeller weapon is used.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The ''Moondust''.
** Technically speaking, it is an honest product, designed for the sole aim of allowing people to dream again, since they're unable to do so by themselves. Wilhelmina, however, pretty much uses it as a drug.
*** Also, at times, she drugs her husband [[UnsuspectinglySoused without his knowing]], for them to get high together while they're asleep.
* [[FinalSolution Final Solution]]: As ordered by the King.
* [[FourStarBadass Four Star Badass]]: Aidan Clarick.
* [[CaptainsLog Captain’s Log]]: The story contains a few entries of that kind, written by either Aidan or Wilhelmina.
* [[CessationOfExistence Cessation Of Existence]]: What happens to the victims of the Claricks...
* [[CoolAirship Cool Airship]]: HMS ''Edinburgh''.
* [[CrapsackWorld Crapsack World]]: The world in which the story is set. [Also known as Oblivion World, Otherworld, or Twin Reality.]
* [[DeadpanSnarker Deadpan Snarker]]: Wolfram Mc Alexander.
* [[DeathFromAbove Death From Above]]: What HMS ''Edinburgh'' brings.
* [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Event Horizon]]: Is reached gradually every time the Impeller weapon is used.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The ''Moondust''.
** Technically speaking, it is an honest product, designed for the sole aim of allowing people to dream again, since they're unable to do so by themselves. Wilhelmina, however, pretty much uses it as a drug.
*** Also, at times, she drugs her husband [[UnsuspectinglySoused without his knowing]], for them to get high together while they're asleep.
* [[FinalSolution Final Solution]]: As ordered by the King.
* [[FourStarBadass Four Star Badass]]: Aidan Clarick.
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* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The
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* [[HeroicBSOD Heroic BSOD]]: Aidan, the first time he uses the Impeller weapon.
* [[HiveMind Hive Mind]]: Dresca and the Devourers.
* [[HiveMind Hive Mind]]: Dresca and the Devourers.
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* [[LastKiss Last Kiss]]: Mina and Aidan.
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* [[MamaBear Mama Bear]]: Wilhelmina, regarding the ''Edinburgh'' and her crew.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My God What Have I Done]]: Aidan.
* [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye Never Got To Say Goodbye]]: [[spoiler:Aidan and Mina.]]
* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Person of Mass Destruction]]: Both Aidan and Wilhelmina have that potential power.
* [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye Never Got To Say Goodbye]]: [[spoiler:Aidan and Mina.]]
* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Person of Mass Destruction]]: Both Aidan and Wilhelmina have that potential power.
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* [[SayYourPrayers Say Your Prayers]]: What everybody does when the Edinburgh strikes.
* [[SmugSnake Smug Snake]]: Malcolm Yeats.
* [[SorryThaTImDying Sorry That I'm Dying]]: [[spoiler:Mina.]]
* [[SmugSnake Smug Snake]]: Malcolm Yeats.
* [[SorryThaTImDying Sorry That I'm Dying]]: [[spoiler:Mina.]]
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* [[TogetherInDeath Together In Death]]: [[spoiler:Wolfram and Mina.]]
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* [[YouAreNotAlone You Are Not Alone]]: Wolfram and Wilhelmina.
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* [[HoYay Ho Yay]]: Wolfram's friendship with Aidan may be a little more than that.
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* [[CasualDangerDialog Casual Danger Dialog]]: Aidan Clarick does that on a regular basis, through sarcasm mostly.
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* [[InTheBlood In The Blood]]: The Claricks, literally.
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Novel-in-progress from troper {{Yzabel}}, started in November 2010 for {{NaNoWriMo}} and providing, once again, its author with enough fun to be given a chance at knowing an actual ending.
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Novel-in-progress from troper {{Yzabel}}, started in November 2010 for {{NaNoWriMo}} UsefulNotes/NaNoWriMo and providing, once again, its author with enough fun to be given a chance at knowing an actual ending.
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* ''Simon Yeats'': Engineer sent on board the ''Edinburgh'' to report about the Impulsion weapon.
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* ''Simon ''Malcolm Yeats'': Engineer sent on board the ''Edinburgh'' to report about the Impulsion weapon.
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* ''His son'', the Prince of Wales, Charles, Duke of Cornwall—and future King of Britannia.
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* ''His son'', the Prince of Wales, Charles, Duke of Cornwall—and Cornwall, and future King of Britannia.
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* [[HeroWithBadPublicity Hero With Bad Publicity]]: Aidan, who doesn't give a damn about public opinion, and is respected for his actions, feared for his power, and shunned for not giving said public what they want to see and hear. All the more so at the end of the story.
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* [[HeroWithBadPublicity Hero With Bad Publicity]]: Aidan, who doesn't give a damn about public opinion, and is respected for his actions, feared for his power, and shunned for not giving said public opinion what they want to see and hear. All the more so at the end of the story.
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* [[HoYay Ho Yay]]: Wolfram's friendship towards Aidan may be a little more than that.
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* [[HoYay Ho Yay]]: Wolfram's friendship towards with Aidan may be a little more than that.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My God What Have I Done]]: Aidan, at the very end.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My God What Have I Done]]: Aidan, at the very end.Aidan.
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* [[SmugSnake Smug Snake]]: Simon Yeats.
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* [[SmugSnake Smug Snake]]: Simon Malcolm Yeats.
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''Our Darker Purpose'' (written in French, though) is set in an alternate 19th century Great Britain in which steam technology works hand in hand with blood-powered magic, where the "Chosen Ones" (the mages) hold important positions and are viewed as saviours, and where the dead tend to come back, either as ghosts attached to objects or as souls put back into their own corpses. This world is also plagued by two phenomenons: the Dispersion (that causes entier parts of the world to vanish, both physically and from people's memories) and the Devourers, plants that have been taken over by corrupted ghosts and are now trying to infect soil, trees, animals, people and whatever living creature they can lay their roots on.
The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick and Wolfram Mc Alexander, their best friend, as they are put in charge of a new airship cruiser, HMS ''Edinburgh'', and of its experimental weapon, the blood Impulser, able to erase entire zones from reality. Meant to get rid of the Devourers that have infected the soil of Scotland, this weapon is nothing short of terrifying. His soul poisoned by its dark magic, Aidan does his best to prevent Mina and Wolfram from ever touching it; her mind plagued by worries, Wilhelmina keeps on acting as a buffer between her husband and the government who wants to put the Impulser to more drastic uses; and Wolfram is cast between his loyalty to his friends and his own projects. All the while, in the background, the shadow of a mysterious organization only known as 'Dresca' is looming; what might their connection to the Devourers be?
The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick and Wolfram Mc Alexander, their best friend, as they are put in charge of a new airship cruiser, HMS ''Edinburgh'', and of its experimental weapon, the blood Impulser, able to erase entire zones from reality. Meant to get rid of the Devourers that have infected the soil of Scotland, this weapon is nothing short of terrifying. His soul poisoned by its dark magic, Aidan does his best to prevent Mina and Wolfram from ever touching it; her mind plagued by worries, Wilhelmina keeps on acting as a buffer between her husband and the government who wants to put the Impulser to more drastic uses; and Wolfram is cast between his loyalty to his friends and his own projects. All the while, in the background, the shadow of a mysterious organization only known as 'Dresca' is looming; what might their connection to the Devourers be?
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''Our Darker Purpose'' (written (originally written in French, though) currently being translated in English) is set in an alternate 19th century Great Britain in which steam technology works hand in hand with blood-powered blood magic, where the "Chosen Ones" (the mages) "Enlightened" (mages) hold important positions and are viewed as saviours, and where the dead tend to come back, either as ghosts attached anchored to objects or as souls put back into their own corpses. This world is also plagued by two phenomenons: the Dispersion (that causes entier entire parts of the world to vanish, both physically and from people's memories) and the Devourers, mutant plants that have been taken over by corrupted ghosts and are now trying to infect soil, trees, animals, people and whatever living creature they can lay their roots on.
The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife WilhelminaWallenstein-Clarick Wallenstein-Clarick, and Wolfram Mc Alexander, their best friend, as they are put in charge of a new airship cruiser, HMS ''Edinburgh'', and of its experimental weapon, the blood Impulser, blood-fuelled Impeller, able to erase entire zones from reality. Meant to get rid of the Devourers that have infected the soil of Scotland, this weapon is nothing short of terrifying. His soul poisoned by its dark magic, Aidan does his best to prevent Mina and Wolfram from ever touching it; her mind plagued by worries, Wilhelmina keeps on acting as a buffer between her husband and the government who wants to put the Impulser Impeller to more drastic uses; and Wolfram is cast between his loyalty to his friends and his own rebellious projects. All the while, in the background, the shadow of a mysterious organization only known as 'Dresca' is looming; what might their connection to the Devourers be?
The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife Wilhelmina
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* ''Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick'': Second-in-command on the ''Edinburgh'', and Aidan's wife.
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* ''Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick'': Second-in-command on the ''Edinburgh'', and ''Edinburgh''; Aidan's wife.
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* [[ArtifactOfDoom Artifact Of Doom]]: The Impulsion weapon does not possess a will of its own, but still has a nasty tendency to try to suck the soul of its controller through the blood s/he pours in. And you wonder why Aidan gets into [[HeroicBSOD BSOD-mode]] when he uses for the first time... or why he then doesn't want Mina to use it as well.
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* [[ArtifactOfDoom Artifact Of Doom]]: The Impulsion Impeller weapon does not possess a will of its own, but still has a nasty tendency to try to suck the soul of its controller through the blood s/he pours in. And you wonder why Aidan gets into [[HeroicBSOD BSOD-mode]] when he uses it for the first time... or why he then doesn't want Mina to use it as well.
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* [[BlingOfWar Bling Of War]]: The Chosen One's military uniforms are a deep, crimson red—so that people see them clearly. It's not like the enemy (the Devourers) have eyes to search for them anyway, so colours don't matter.
* [[BloodMagic Blood Magic]]: Blood is used to fuel a lot of spells in this world - either through traditional rituals or through blood-powered technology.
* [[BloodMagic Blood Magic]]: Blood is used to fuel a lot of spells in this world - either through traditional rituals or through blood-powered technology.
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* [[BlingOfWar Bling Of War]]: The Chosen One's Enlightened's military uniforms are a deep, crimson red—so that people see them clearly. It's not like the enemy (the Devourers) have eyes to search for them anyway, so colours don't camouflage doesn't matter.
* [[BloodMagic Blood Magic]]: Blood is used to fuel a lot of spells in thisworld - either world—either through traditional rituals or through blood-powered technology.
* [[BloodMagic Blood Magic]]: Blood is used to fuel a lot of spells in this
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* [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Event Horizon]]: Is reached gradually every time the Impulsion weapon is used.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The ''moon powder''.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The ''moon powder''.
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* [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Event Horizon]]: Is reached gradually every time the Impulsion Impeller weapon is used.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The''moon powder''.''Moondust''.
* [[FantasticDrug Fantastic Drug]]: The
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* [[HeroicBSOD Heroic BSOD]]: Aidan, the first time he uses the Impulsion weapon.
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* [[HeroicBSOD Heroic BSOD]]: Aidan, the first time he uses the Impulsion Impeller weapon.
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* [[HoYay Ho Yay]]: Let's say that Wolfram's friendship for Aidan may be a little more than just that.
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* [[HoYay Ho Yay]]: Let's say that Wolfram's friendship for towards Aidan may be a little more than just that.
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* [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye Never Got To Say Goodbye]]: Aidan and Mina.
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* [[NeverGotToSayGoodbye Never Got To Say Goodbye]]: Aidan [[spoiler:Aidan and Mina.]]
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* [[SorryThaTImDying Sorry That I'm Dying]]: Mina.[[spoiler:Mina.]]
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* [[ThousandYardStare Thousand Yard Stare]]: Aidan, usually after he uses the Impulsion weapon. Especially the first time.
* [[TogetherInDeath Together In Death]]: Wolfram and Mina.
* [[UnresolvedSexualTension Unresolved Sexual Tension]]: Wolfram/Mina, and possibly Wolfram/Aidan, too.
* [[TogetherInDeath Together In Death]]: Wolfram and Mina.
* [[UnresolvedSexualTension Unresolved Sexual Tension]]: Wolfram/Mina, and possibly Wolfram/Aidan, too.
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* [[ThousandYardStare Thousand Yard Stare]]: Aidan, usually after he uses the Impulsion Impeller weapon. Especially the first time.
* [[TogetherInDeath Together In Death]]:Wolfram [[spoiler:Wolfram and Mina.
Mina.]]
* [[UnresolvedSexualTension Unresolved Sexual Tension]]: Wolfram/Mina, andpossibly very likely Wolfram/Aidan, too.
* [[TogetherInDeath Together In Death]]:
* [[UnresolvedSexualTension Unresolved Sexual Tension]]: Wolfram/Mina, and
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* [[MinovskyPhysics]]: The hydro-quintessence, used to fill the airships' balloons.
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* [[MinovskyPhysics]]: The hydro-quintessence, hydressence, used to fill the airships' balloons.
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* ''His son'', the Prince of Wales, Charles, Duke of Cornwall.
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* ''His son'', the Prince of Wales, Charles, Duke of Cornwall.
Cornwall—and future King of Britannia.
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* [[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Wife]]: Charles V Stuart, King of Britannia, when he tries to control Aidan by taking his family hostage.
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* [[IHaveYourWife I Have Your Wife]]: Charles V VI Stuart, new King of Britannia, when he tries to control Aidan by taking his family hostage.
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** Since Mina remains all eyes for Aidan only, in a way, it borders on [[MurderTheHypotenuse Mudering The Hypotenuse]] at some point. But Wolfram never carries this out, in spite of having had the opportunity.
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** Since Mina remains all eyes for Aidan only, in a way, it borders on [[MurderTheHypotenuse Mudering The Hypotenuse]] at some point. But Wolfram never carries this out, in spite of having had the opportunity.opportunity [[spoiler:every time Aidan was carried to the infirmary for a blood transfusion, among other things]].
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* [[MismatchedEyes Mismatched Eyes]]: The Soul Thief.
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* [[MinovskyParticle Minovsky Particles]]: The hydro-quintessence, used to fill the airships' balloons.
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* [[MinovskyParticle Minovsky Particles]]: [[MinovskyPhysics]]: The hydro-quintessence, used to fill the airships' balloons.
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The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick and Wolfram Mc Alexander, their best friend, as they are put in charge of a new airship cruiser, the HMS ''Edinburgh'', and of its experimental weapon, the blood Impulser, able to erase entire zones from reality. Meant to get rid of the Devourers that have infected the soil of Scotland, this weapon is nothing short of terrifying. His soul poisoned by its dark magic, Aidan does his best to prevent Mina and Wolfram from ever touching it; her mind plagued by worries, Wilhelmina keeps on acting as a buffer between her husband and the government who wants to put the Impulser to more drastic uses; and Wolfram is cast between his loyalty to his friends and his own projects. All the while, in the background, the shadow of a mysterious organization only known as 'Dresca' is looming; what might their connection to the Devourers be?
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The story follows Aidan Clarick, his wife Wilhelmina Wallenstein-Clarick and Wolfram Mc Alexander, their best friend, as they are put in charge of a new airship cruiser, the HMS ''Edinburgh'', and of its experimental weapon, the blood Impulser, able to erase entire zones from reality. Meant to get rid of the Devourers that have infected the soil of Scotland, this weapon is nothing short of terrifying. His soul poisoned by its dark magic, Aidan does his best to prevent Mina and Wolfram from ever touching it; her mind plagued by worries, Wilhelmina keeps on acting as a buffer between her husband and the government who wants to put the Impulser to more drastic uses; and Wolfram is cast between his loyalty to his friends and his own projects. All the while, in the background, the shadow of a mysterious organization only known as 'Dresca' is looming; what might their connection to the Devourers be?
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* [[AmplifierArtifact Amplifier Artifact]]: The HMS ''Edinburgh'''s mass-destruction weapon. It's meant to amplify the Claricks' power, not to create it out of nowhere. Yikes.
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* [[AmplifierArtifact Amplifier Artifact]]: The HMS ''Edinburgh'''s mass-destruction weapon. It's meant to amplify the Claricks' power, not to create it out of nowhere. Yikes.
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* [[CoolAirship Cool Airship]]: The HMS ''Edinburgh''.
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* [[CoolAirship Cool Airship]]: The HMS ''Edinburgh''.
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* [[DeathFromAbove Death From Above]]: What the HMS ''Edinburgh'' brings.
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* [[DeathFromAbove Death From Above]]: What the HMS ''Edinburgh'' brings.