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** Primus's name is a reference to [[Theatre.RossumsUniversalRobots Rossum’s Universal Robots.]]
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** Primus's name is a reference to [[Theatre.RossumsUniversalRobots Rossum’s ''[[Theatre/{{RUR}} Rossum's Universal Robots.]]Robots]]''.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Delivered to XR in Chapter 5 after he goes too far, not only making fun of Jax's fear of space but implying she can't feel empathy. More like armor piercing punch, but same principle.
-->'''XR''': ''Jax pushes him over''. What is wrong with you?
-->'''Jax''': Me?! You couldn't have mentioned that you come apart like a ''jigsaw puzzle?!''
-->'''XR''': ''That's'' What this is about?
-->'''Jax''': I thought you died!
-->'''XR''': That's the whole reason I was built! I thought you knew!
-->'''Jax''': How could I know?!
-->'''XR''': Why are you even so upset? Worried you'll have to deal with the oh-so-scary spaceflight back to base by yourself?
-->'''Jax''': ''She punches his dome with a loud "crack".'' Go to hell.
-->'''XR''': ''Jax pushes him over''. What is wrong with you?
-->'''Jax''': Me?! You couldn't have mentioned that you come apart like a ''jigsaw puzzle?!''
-->'''XR''': ''That's'' What this is about?
-->'''Jax''': I thought you died!
-->'''XR''': That's the whole reason I was built! I thought you knew!
-->'''Jax''': How could I know?!
-->'''XR''': Why are you even so upset? Worried you'll have to deal with the oh-so-scary spaceflight back to base by yourself?
-->'''Jax''': ''She punches his dome with a loud "crack".'' Go to hell.
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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[spoiler: lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]
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* AttentionWhore, ShrinkingViolet: XR and Jax, respectively.
* [[spoiler: BackInTheSaddle: Commander Nebula, eventually.]]
* [[spoiler: BackInTheSaddle: Commander Nebula, eventually.]]
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: Discussed.
* BothSidesHaveAPoint, TakeAThirdOption: The main driving force of the comic.
* BothSidesHaveAPoint, TakeAThirdOption: The main driving force of the comic.
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* ConflictingLoyalty
* [[CrapsaccharineWorld Crapsaccharine Galaxy]]: One of the major points of the comic is to deconstruct the [[AnthropicPrinciple suspiciously]] AdventureFriendlyWorld of the original series.
* [[CrapsaccharineWorld Crapsaccharine Galaxy]]: One of the major points of the comic is to deconstruct the [[AnthropicPrinciple suspiciously]] AdventureFriendlyWorld of the original series.
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*
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* DeconstructionFic / [[spoiler:WarFic]]
* [[spoiler: DividedWeFall: The Parhelia and Star Command have a bigger enemy to face than each other, Zurg and his new army.]]
* [[spoiler: DividedWeFall: The Parhelia and Star Command have a bigger enemy to face than each other, Zurg and his new army.]]
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%%* DeconstructionFic
*DeconstructionFic / [[spoiler:WarFic]]
* [[spoiler:DividedWeFall: The Parhelia and Star Command have a bigger enemy to face than each other, Zurg and his new army.]]
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* [[spoiler:
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt
* EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce
* EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce
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* GameChanger: [[spoiler: Zurg's new plans.]]
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Jax's preferred fighting method.
* GoodTimesMontage
* GratuitousDiscoSequence
* GoodOldFisticuffs: Jax's preferred fighting method.
* GoodTimesMontage
* GratuitousDiscoSequence
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* LeParkour / CombatParkour: Jax, where applicable. (Much to the surprise of XR.)
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Natch.
* [[spoiler: LoweredRecruitingStandards]]: A major alleged roadblock for Star Command.
* MagicVersusScience / {{Magitek}}: Jax and XR's partnership, loosely.
* MildlyMilitary: Star Command. Lampshaded.
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Natch.
* [[spoiler: LoweredRecruitingStandards]]: A major alleged roadblock for Star Command.
* MagicVersusScience / {{Magitek}}: Jax and XR's partnership, loosely.
* MildlyMilitary: Star Command. Lampshaded.
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* [[spoiler: NotSoHarmlessVillain: Our very own Evil Emperor Zurg.]]
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* PersonalityPowers / WeaponOfChoice: Let's see...
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* PersonalityPowers / WeaponOfChoice: Let's see...PersonalityPowers:
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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Jax's cuts and stab wound scars on her hip.
* PlotDrivingSecret: [[spoiler: The brewing war.]]
* PlotDrivingSecret: [[spoiler: The brewing war.]]
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* RecruitingTheCriminal: The premise of the comic.
* RedOniBlueOni: Jax and Ves, respectively.
* [[spoiler: {{Robosexual}}: Natch.]]
* RunningGag: Jax casually pushing XR over with her foot, Jax CompletelyMissingThePoint when XR tries to flirt with her, them being assumed to be a couple.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight
* RedOniBlueOni: Jax and Ves, respectively.
* [[spoiler: {{Robosexual}}: Natch.]]
* RunningGag: Jax casually pushing XR over with her foot, Jax CompletelyMissingThePoint when XR tries to flirt with her, them being assumed to be a couple.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight
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* RunningGag: Jax casually pushing XR over with her foot, Jax
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* TagTeamTwins: Jax and Ves, back in the day.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork
* TeethClenchedTeamwork
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* TinyGuyHugeGirl
* TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot
* {{Troperiffic}}
* TravelingAtTheSpeedOfPlot
* {{Troperiffic}}
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* VillainsActHeroesReact: A major theme of the comic.
* VillainessesWantHeroes: Jax and XR, in a very understated sense.
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman / FantasticRacism
* WinYourFreedom
* WorthyOpponent: Both Ves and Zod eventually come to see Jax as this.
* WretchedHive: Trade World, where nearly all of the flashbacks take place.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre
* VillainessesWantHeroes: Jax and XR, in a very understated sense.
* WhatIsThisThingYouCallLove
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman / FantasticRacism
* WinYourFreedom
* WorthyOpponent: Both Ves and Zod eventually come to see Jax as this.
* WretchedHive: Trade World, where nearly all of the flashbacks take place.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre
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* ALighterShadeOfBlack
* BadLiar: And how.
* BloodKnight
* BrokenBird
* BruiserWithASoftCenter
* DarkActionGirl / [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]
* ICouldaBeenAContender
* InnocentFanserviceGirl
* KnightInSourArmor
* NoSocialSkills
* PlayingWithFire
* PhlebotinumGirl
* ScaryTeeth
* SmokingIsCool
* TheQuietOne
* BadLiar: And how.
* BloodKnight
* BrokenBird
* BruiserWithASoftCenter
* DarkActionGirl / [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]
* ICouldaBeenAContender
* InnocentFanserviceGirl
* KnightInSourArmor
* NoSocialSkills
* PlayingWithFire
* PhlebotinumGirl
* ScaryTeeth
* SmokingIsCool
* TheQuietOne
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Without the makeover part. (Save the removal of his Star Command insignia.)
* BrattyHalfPint: Jax thinks he is a SpoiledBrat, but really he is ThePollyanna
* CaptainOblivious
* FishOutOfWater
* HiddenDepths
* BrattyHalfPint: Jax thinks he is a SpoiledBrat, but really he is ThePollyanna
* CaptainOblivious
* FishOutOfWater
* HiddenDepths
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* LetsGetDangerous
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* TalkingYourWayOut
* TalkingYourWayOut
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* TheSoCalledCoward
* TookALevelInBadass
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* ALighterShadeOfGrey
* {{Determinator}}
* HotLibrarian
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation
* IronLady
* OddFriendship: With Jax.
* PrimandProperBun
* MarriedToTheJob
* {{Determinator}}
* HotLibrarian
* IntelligenceEqualsIsolation
* IronLady
* OddFriendship: With Jax.
* PrimandProperBun
* MarriedToTheJob
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* AloofBigBrother: He's Jax's twin, but judging by his attitude alone, you wouldn't know it.
* [[AloofDarkHairedgirl Aloof Dark Haired Boy]]
* [[ALphaBitch Alpha Bitch]]: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.
* BastardUnderstudy
* DragonWithAnAgenda
* [[spoiler: KlingonPromotion]]
* ManipulativeBastard
* NotSoStoic
* OpportunisticBastard
* SociopathicSoldier: Though he is Zod's first lieutenant.
* SoftspokenSadist
* TheAce
* [[AloofDarkHairedgirl Aloof Dark Haired Boy]]
* [[ALphaBitch Alpha Bitch]]: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.
* BastardUnderstudy
* DragonWithAnAgenda
* [[spoiler: KlingonPromotion]]
* ManipulativeBastard
* NotSoStoic
* OpportunisticBastard
* SociopathicSoldier: Though he is Zod's first lieutenant.
* SoftspokenSadist
* TheAce
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* [[ALphaBitch Alpha Bitch]]:
%%* ALphaBitch: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.
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%%* ManipulativeBastard
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* BunnyEarsLawyer
* GamerChick
* GenkiGirl: Loosely.
* GirlyBruiser
* LipstickLesbian
* GamerChick
* GenkiGirl: Loosely.
* GirlyBruiser
* LipstickLesbian
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* AVillainNamedZrg
* BigBad:
* CardCarryingVillain: Played with.
* InsectoidAliens:
* WarForFunAndProfit:
* BigBad:
* CardCarryingVillain: Played with.
* InsectoidAliens:
* WarForFunAndProfit:
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* BigBad: To Zurg's BiggerBad
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* BigBad: To Zurg's BiggerBadBigBad:
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* [[InsectoidAliens Insectoid Alien]]
* [[spoiler: WarForFunAndProfit]]
* [[spoiler: WarForFunAndProfit]]
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* [[InsectoidAliens Insectoid Alien]]
InsectoidAliens:
*[[spoiler: WarForFunAndProfit]]WarForFunAndProfit:
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here,]] [[http://linerockets.webcomic.ws/ here]] or even [[http://line-rockets.tumblr.com/ here!]]
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand [[WesternAnimation/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here,]] [[http://linerockets.webcomic.ws/ here]] or even [[http://line-rockets.tumblr.com/ here!]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than BuzzLightyearofStarCommand, which is a major goal of the comic.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Than BuzzLightyearofStarCommand, WesternAnimation/BuzzLightyearofStarCommand, which is a major goal of the comic.
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* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of a depressed and chronically unlucky ex-con, and Team Lightyear's very own ChewToy.
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* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's WesternAnimation/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of a depressed and chronically unlucky ex-con, and Team Lightyear's very own ChewToy.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic adds ([[YMMV/{{HomePage}} much-needed]]) female characters to the original [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand BLoSC]] cast.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic adds ([[YMMV/{{HomePage}} much-needed]]) female characters to the original [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand [[WesternAnimation/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand BLoSC]] cast.
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'''XR''', Star Command's only robotic Space Ranger. Up until this point he has worked exclusively with Team Lightyear. If you need to read this character page to know who XR is, chances are you're not going to understand a big portion of the comic. He has [[Characters/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand his own character page]] on the [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear Of Star Command page]], but since he plays a very different role in the comic from the cartoon he has some new tropes of his own for this page as well.
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'''XR''', Star Command's only robotic Space Ranger. Up until this point he has worked exclusively with Team Lightyear. If you need to read this character page to know who XR is, chances are you're not going to understand a big portion of the comic. He has [[Characters/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand his own character page]] on the [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand [[WesternAnimation/BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear Of Star Command page]], but since he plays a very different role in the comic from the cartoon he has some new tropes of his own for this page as well.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy
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* ObnoxiousSnarker: Natch.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic ads ([[YMMV/{{HomePage}} much-needed]]) female characters to the original [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand BLoSC]] cast.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic ads adds ([[YMMV/{{HomePage}} much-needed]]) female characters to the original [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand BLoSC]] cast.
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'''"Primus"''', Formerly known as Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.
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'''"Primus"''', Formerly known as Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice. Primus has been a part of the Parhelia for over five years, and is head of security. However, recently there has been an extreme amount of strain between he and his superiors. [[spoiler: Zurg's new army includes ''intelligent'' hornets, which he sends to attack the Parhelia almost daily with the war on their heels, and the Parhelia shoots them down like they would any other intruder. Primus obviously has some very strong reasons for fighting against this. They're sentient robots, and so is he. He can't shoot down his own kind! And asking him to do so is madness.]] Of course, the Parhelia would kill any intruders, organic or otherwise, sentient or non-sentient, but Primus never really thought about the moral implications until it started to affect him, personally.
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* rueLoveIsExceptional: XR doesn't believe Jax is "girlfriend material", because she's a violent, crude and unfeminine bad girl. [[spoiler: he ends up ''proposing'' to her.]]
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* rueLoveIsExceptional: TrueLoveIsExceptional: XR doesn't believe Jax is "girlfriend material", because she's a violent, crude and unfeminine bad girl. [[spoiler: he ends up ''proposing'' to her.]]
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* rueLoveIsExceptional: XR doesn't believe Jax is "girlfriend material", because she's a violent, crude and unfeminine bad girl. [[spoiler: he ends up ''proposing'' to her.]]
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* ActionGirl / [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]
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* DarkActionGirl / [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]
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* AsYouKnow: Enif starts to do this in Chapter 4 while talking to Ves, but he cuts her off, reminding her that he's the one who gave her the information in the first place.
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* OneRiotOneRangerOneRiotOneRanger: XR underestimates himself. Luckily, his team doesn't.
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* LeParkour / CombatParkour: Jax, where applicable. (Much to the surprise of XR.)
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic ads (much-needed) female characters to the original BLoSC cast.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic ads (much-needed) ([[YMMV/{{HomePage}} much-needed]]) female characters to the original BLoSC [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand BLoSC]] cast.
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* DoesNotKnowHowToSayThanks: XR has never before experienced the kind of respect Jax shows him. It takes him a while to realize that's whats happening, and even longer to talk to her about it.
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* TheFriendNobodylikes: The comic takes a turn for the meta when XR explains to Jax that he knows nobody respects him, and that's why he acts so ridiculously sometimes.
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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Jax and XR's [[SlapSlapKiss high-tension]] sparring match in Chapter 7.
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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Jax and XR's [[SlapSlapKiss high-tension]] [[http://linerockets.webcomic.ws/comics/53/ sparring match in Chapter 7.7]].
* MissedHimByThatMuch: XR and Booster in the spaceport.
* NeckLift: Jax does this to Penumbra after they beat the crap out of each other.
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** Jax is no-nonsense and hot-blooded. She uses fire-powered-fisticuffs.
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** Jax is no-nonsense no-nonsense, hot-blooded and hot-blooded. violent by nature. She uses fire-powered-fisticuffs.fire-powered-fisticuffs.
** XR is the most animated cast member, accustomed to being used and believing he personally doesn't stand for anything in particular has an immense array of weapons and gadgets.
** XR is the most animated cast member, accustomed to being used and believing he personally doesn't stand for anything in particular has an immense array of weapons and gadgets.
