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* HeroesWantRedheads: Feiwan Zhou and Tatiana Afonina.
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* AcePilot: Ensign Reika Yagami.
* ActionGirl: Feiwan Zhou.
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* CoolSpaceship: The ''Concordia''.
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* EliteArmy: The Special Forces.
* TheEmpire: The Khad Empire.
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* WaveMotionGun: A battleship laser can crack a space station, but it won't do much good against a planet, as the beam would diffract in the atmosphere.
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* WaveMotionGun: A battleship laser can crack a space station, but it won't do much good against a planet, as the beam would diffract in the atmosphere.atmosphere.
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** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheHero: Feiwan Zhou
*** TheLancer: Tom Campbell
*** TheBigGuy: Sara Goldberg
*** TheSmartGuy: Alexei Dudinsky
*** TheChick: Larissa Salko
** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheHero: Feiwan Zhou
*** TheLancer: Tom Campbell
*** TheBigGuy: Sara Goldberg
*** TheSmartGuy: Alexei Dudinsky
*** TheChick: Larissa Salko
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* CapitalCity: Moscow is the capital of Earth, the capital planet of the Solar Union (later Galactic National Republic).
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Similar to in the Russian military, servicemen wear a telnyashka (striped undershirt), and the stripe color denotes the branch of service. In the Galactic National Defence Forces, this is expanded on, and the stripe color is matched by the color of the tabs on the uniform and the band on the CommissarCap.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: ColorCodedCharacters: Similar to in the Russian military, servicemen wear a telnyashka (striped undershirt), and the stripe color denotes the branch of service. In the Galactic National Defence Forces, this is expanded on, and the stripe color is matched by the color of the tabs on the uniform and the band on the CommissarCap.
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* GoodLookingPrivates
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* HotChickWithASword: Feiwan Zhou.
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The primary setting is the Galactic National Republic, the human cosmic state created in the mid-2200s to protect the human planets from alien threats. Its main enemy, the first alien civilization that humans encountered, is the Empire of Khad, populated by humanoids whose homeworld is 1000 light-years away.
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The primary setting is the Galactic National Republic, the human cosmic state government created in the mid-2200s to protect the human planets from alien threats. Its main enemy, the first alien civilization that humans encountered, is the Empire of Khad, Khad Empire, populated by humanoids whose homeworld is 1000 light-years away.
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* MegaCorp: The banking, transport, construction, and weapon companies are usually the largest. The Fortuna Corporation, for example, has 10 million employees, owns 300 ships, and requires a 1500-foot tower to house its offices. Cosmogas owns 700 stations that extract gas from gas giants. And so forth.
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* MasterRace: The Khad Empire.
* MeaningfulRename:
** The Apollonian System. We realized the names "Sun" and "Solar System" were too generic, so we renamed the Sun "Apollo" and the Solar System the "Apollonian System" to distinguish them from all the other suns and solar systems. A good test to see where someone is from is to ask what star Earth orbits. If they say "The Sun," they are from the Apollonian System. If they say "Apollo," they are from another star system.
** Planet Ziu. It used to be Ci Yu, Chinese for "magnetic jade," a reference to its green color and strong magnetic field. But when the Khad threatened the GNR, the military moved in and began using Ci Yu as a command post and staging area for attacks on Khad worlds. Eventually, the planet became thoroughly militarized, and its name was changed to Ziu, the ancient Germanic god of war. Ci Yu and Ziu are pronounced the same way, but the spellings and meanings are different, to reflect the change in the perception of the planet.
* MegaCorp: The banking, transport, construction, and weapon companies are usually the largest. The Fortuna Corporation, for example, has10 100 million employees, owns 300 1000 ships, and requires a 1500-foot tower to house its offices. Cosmogas owns 700 stations that extract gas from gas giants. And so forth.
* MeaningfulRename:
** The Apollonian System. We realized the names "Sun" and "Solar System" were too generic, so we renamed the Sun "Apollo" and the Solar System the "Apollonian System" to distinguish them from all the other suns and solar systems. A good test to see where someone is from is to ask what star Earth orbits. If they say "The Sun," they are from the Apollonian System. If they say "Apollo," they are from another star system.
** Planet Ziu. It used to be Ci Yu, Chinese for "magnetic jade," a reference to its green color and strong magnetic field. But when the Khad threatened the GNR, the military moved in and began using Ci Yu as a command post and staging area for attacks on Khad worlds. Eventually, the planet became thoroughly militarized, and its name was changed to Ziu, the ancient Germanic god of war. Ci Yu and Ziu are pronounced the same way, but the spellings and meanings are different, to reflect the change in the perception of the planet.
* MegaCorp: The banking, transport, construction, and weapon companies are usually the largest. The Fortuna Corporation, for example, has
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Exist, and have to be registered with the government to be able to receive contracts. Cannot be used as a substitute for combat troops. Some P.M.C.s have deserted the GNR and take contracts from the Khad.
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* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Exist, and have to be registered with the government to be able to receive contracts. Cannot be used as a substitute for combat troops. Some P.M.C.s have deserted the GNR and take contracts from the Khad. Good PMC: Astro Security. Bad PMC: The "Totenkopfs."
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** Gold: General Staff
** Red: Special Forces
** Dark Green: Army
** Dark Blue: Navy
** Light Blue: Air Force, aviators, paratroopers
** Black: Space Force
** Turquoise: Medical
** Light Green: National Militia
** Purple: Civil Guard/internal forces
** Grey: Cadets
* CommissarCap: The older, less radically peaked version. Different colors on the hat band denote where the wearer is serving.
** Red: Special Forces
** Dark Green: Army
** Dark Blue: Navy
** Light Blue: Air Force, aviators, paratroopers
** Black: Space Force
** Turquoise: Medical
** Light Green: National Militia
** Purple: Civil Guard/internal forces
** Grey: Cadets
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** Dark
** Dark Blue: Navy
** Light Blue: Air Force, aviators, paratroopers
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** Sky blue: The aviation-related forces, such as [[AcePilot pilots]] and [[ItsRainingMen paratroopers]].
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* StealthInSpace: Averted. Any spaceship that wants to be worth a damn in a fight, or even move a mile, is going to have to emit a lot of radiation. The best way to avoid detection would be to drop out of hyperspace very close to a planet, which is more difficult the closer you get thanks to the strength of a planet's magnetic field.
* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize a large asteroid. One shot can also crack a space station.
* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize a large asteroid. One shot can also crack a space station.
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* StealthInSpace: Averted. Any spaceship that wants to be worth a damn in a fight, or even move a mile, is going to have to emit a lot of radiation. The best way to avoid detection would be to drop out of hyperspace very close to a planet, which is more difficult the closer you get thanks to the strength of a planet's magnetic field. \n Also, you can use a Q-ship (a warship disguised as a civilian ship), and hope you can ready your weapons fast enough.
* WaveMotionGun: Avery powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, battleship laser can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize a large asteroid. One shot can also crack a space station.station, but it won't do much good against a planet, as the beam would diffract in the atmosphere.
* WaveMotionGun: A
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* StealthInSpace: Averted. Any spaceship that wants to be worth a damn in a fight, or even move a mile, is going to have to emit a lot of radiation. The best way to avoid detection would be to drop out of hyperspace very close to a planet, which is more difficult the closer you get thanks to the strength of a planet's magnetic field.
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* TheHomeGuard: The National Militia. Derided as the "fun forces" by the regulars, but useful for planetary defence, local space patrols, and other duties the regulars are too big or busy to handle.
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* TheHomeGuard: HomeGuard: The National Militia. Derided as the "fun forces" by the regulars, but useful for planetary defence, local space patrols, and other duties the regulars are too big or busy to handle.
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*** MrFixit: Lieutenant Commander Jung, Alexei Dudinsky.
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*** TheMedic: Ensign Salko.
*** AcePilot: Collins.
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*** TheMedic: Ensign Larissa Salko.
*** AcePilot:Collins.Collins, Yagami.
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* CoolSpaceship: The ''Harmony''.
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* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Similar to in the Russian military, servicemen wear a telnyashka (striped undershirt), and the stripe color denotes the branch of service. In the Galactic National Defence Forces, this is expanded on, and the stripe color is matched by the color of the tabs on the uniform and the band on the CommissarCap.
** Gold: General Staff
** Red: Special Forces
** Dark Green: Army
** Dark Blue: Navy
** Light Blue: Air Force, aviators, paratroopers
** Black: Space Force
** Turquoise: Medical
** Light Green: National Militia
** Purple: Civil Guard/internal forces
** Grey: Cadets
* CommissarCap: The older, less radically peaked version. Different colors on the hat band denote where the wearer is serving.
* CoolSpaceship: The''Harmony''.''Concordia''.
** Gold: General Staff
** Red: Special Forces
** Dark Green: Army
** Dark Blue: Navy
** Light Blue: Air Force, aviators, paratroopers
** Black: Space Force
** Turquoise: Medical
** Light Green: National Militia
** Purple: Civil Guard/internal forces
** Grey: Cadets
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* EliteArmy: The Special Forces.
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* TheFederation: The Solar Union, though it is short-lived.
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* TheFederation: The Solar Union, though it is short-lived.short-lived and replaced by the Galactic National Republic.
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* TheHomeGuard: The National Militia. Derided as the "fun forces" by the regulars, but useful for planetary defence, local space patrols, and other duties the regulars are too big or busy to handle.
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* PraetorianGuard: The Civil Guards, the troops of the Ministry of Internal Affairs. Their uniforms are marked by purple, and they protect the government facilities and leaders, including the President and the Kremlin. They also enforce border regulations and put down riots. But they cannot be deployed very far, and they get little respect from the GNDF regulars, who call them the "soft forces" and the "museum forces." Except when there is a riot....
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Exist, and have to be registered with the government to be able to receive contracts. Cannot be used as a substitute for combat troops. Some P.M.C.s have deserted the GNR and take contracts from the Khad.
* PrivateMilitaryContractors: Exist, and have to be registered with the government to be able to receive contracts. Cannot be used as a substitute for combat troops. Some P.M.C.s have deserted the GNR and take contracts from the Khad.
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* AcePilot: Ensign Reika Yagami.
* ActionGirl: Feiwan Zhou.
* ActionGirl: Feiwan Zhou.
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* CapitalCity: Moscow is the capital of Earth, the capital planet of the Galactic National Republic.
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* CapitalCity: Moscow is the capital of Earth, the capital planet of the Solar Union (later Galactic National Republic.Republic).
* CommandRoster
** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheCaptain: Gerard Schneider
*** NumberTwo: Officially Commander Dupont, but in practice Feiwan Zhou.
*** MrFixit: Lieutenant Commander Jung, Alexei Dudinsky.
*** Communications Officer: Lieutenant Chen.
*** TheMedic: Ensign Salko.
*** AcePilot: Collins.
*** The Security Officer: Trampetti (weapons officer), Zhou (commands the troops).
* CoolSpaceship: The ''Harmony''.
* CommandRoster
** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheCaptain: Gerard Schneider
*** NumberTwo: Officially Commander Dupont, but in practice Feiwan Zhou.
*** MrFixit: Lieutenant Commander Jung, Alexei Dudinsky.
*** Communications Officer: Lieutenant Chen.
*** TheMedic: Ensign Salko.
*** AcePilot: Collins.
*** The Security Officer: Trampetti (weapons officer), Zhou (commands the troops).
* CoolSpaceship: The ''Harmony''.
* TheEmpire: The Khad Empire.
* TheFederation: The Solar Union, though it is short-lived.
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** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheHero: Feiwan Zhou
*** TheLancer: Tom Campbell
*** TheBigGuy: Sara Goldberg
*** TheSmartGuy: Alexei Dudinsky
*** TheChick: Larissa Salko
* FiveManBand
** Encounter on Saturn
*** TheHero: Feiwan Zhou
*** TheLancer: Tom Campbell
*** TheBigGuy: Sara Goldberg
*** TheSmartGuy: Alexei Dudinsky
*** TheChick: Larissa Salko
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* HumanoidAliens: The Khad are seven to eight feet tall with pale pinkish-grey skin, big eyes, and long thin fingers, but at least they have two eyes, a nose, four limbs, and five fingers on each hand. This is because their homeworld, Segh, is fairly close to Earth conditions.
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* GloryHound: Private Fred Perry, who wanted to be a hero.
* GoodLookingPrivates
* HeroesWantRedheads: Feiwan Zhou and Tatiana Afonina.
* HotChickWithASword: Feiwan Zhou.
* HumanoidAliens: The Khad are seven to eight feet tall with palepinkish-grey grey skin, big eyes, and long thin fingers, limbs, but at least they have two eyes, a nose, four limbs, and five fingers on each hand. This is because their homeworld, Segh, is fairly close to Earth conditions.
* GoodLookingPrivates
* HeroesWantRedheads: Feiwan Zhou and Tatiana Afonina.
* HotChickWithASword: Feiwan Zhou.
* HumanoidAliens: The Khad are seven to eight feet tall with pale
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** Named for Earth places: New Earth (capital New Jamestown), Scythia, Parthia, Sabunchi, Sarmatia, New Bashkiria.
** Symbolic: Fortuna, Fidelia, Arcadia.
** Symbolic: Fortuna, Fidelia, Arcadia.
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** Named for Earth places: New Earth (capital New Jamestown), Scythia, Parthia, Florida, Oreanda, Sabunchi, Sarmatia, New Bashkiria.
Sarmatia.
** Symbolic: Fortuna, Fidelia,Arcadia.Arcadia, Nova Rodinia ("new motherland").
** Symbolic: Fortuna, Fidelia,
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*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Hodr, Nerthus, Thor, Wotan, Zisa, Ziu.
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*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Hodr, Nerthus, Surt, Thor, Wotan, Zisa, Ziu.
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*** Japanese: Benten, Bishamon, Daikoku, Ebisu, Fukurokuju, Gama, Hachiman, Hotei, Kudokuten, Raiden, Susano, Uzume.
*** Marla: Poro Osh Kughu, Ilyan, Shochinava, Agavairem, Purysho, Azyren, Shudyr-Shamych, Tunya, Tul on Kughu, Surt Kughu, Saksa Kughu, Tutyra Kughu, Tylmache, Tylze, Uzhara, Tunyambal.
*** Marla: Poro Osh Kughu, Ilyan, Shochinava, Agavairem, Purysho, Azyren, Shudyr-Shamych, Tunya, Tul on Kughu, Surt Kughu, Saksa Kughu, Tutyra Kughu, Tylmache, Tylze, Uzhara, Tunyambal.
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*** Japanese: Benten, Bishamon, Daikoku, Ebisu, Fukurokuju, Gama, Hachiman, Hotei, Kudokuten, Raiden, Susano, Susanowo, Uzume.
*** Marla:Poro Osh Kughu, Poro, Ilyan, Shochinava, Agavairem, Purysho, Azyren, Shudyr-Shamych, Tunya, Tul on Kughu, Surt Kughu, Saksa Kughu, Tutyra Kughu, Tul, Tutyra, Tylmache, Tylze, Uzhara, Tunyambal.
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** Alphanumerical: P-462, P-484.
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** Alphanumerical: P-462, P-484.P-484, W-85.
* RedShirt: Private Fred Perry.
* TheRepublic: The Galactic National Republic.
* SergeantRock: Sgt. Tom Campbell.
* SpacePirates: They exist at the edges of civilized space. One of them is Abu Sadaf.
* TheRepublic: The Galactic National Republic.
* SergeantRock: Sgt. Tom Campbell.
* SpacePirates: They exist at the edges of civilized space. One of them is Abu Sadaf.
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** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry small combat spaceplanes), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
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** Other military ships include landing descent ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry small combat spaceplanes), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
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*** Marla: Poro Osh Kughu, Ilyan, Shochinava, Agavairem, Purysho, Azyren, Shudyr-Shamych, Tunya, Tul on Kughu, Surt Kughu, Saksa Kughu, Tutyra Kughu, Tylmache, Tylze, Uzhara, Tunyambal.
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** Alphanumerical: ZL-1.
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** Alphanumerical: ZL-1.P-462, P-484.
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** Named for a person: Kantaria, Lomonosovsk, Korolevsk.
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** Named for a person: Kantaria, Lomonosovsk, Korolevsk.Oberth, Tsiolkovsk.
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** Small craft include shuttles, shunters (not tugs), interceptors, storm craft (fighter-bomber), and bombers.
** Combat ships include frigates (can take off from and land on planets, attack weak targets), destroyers (protect fleets by laying mines and attacking enemy ships), cruisers (general-purpose warship with tactical missiles, ideal for independent operations), battlecruisers (can lead groups of cruisers to attack enemy fleets), battleships (armed with strategic weapons to attack planets), and dreadnoughts (excessively armed and armored to attack heavily fortified planets or entire star systems, and invariably the flagship).
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry interceptors), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
** Combat ships include frigates (can take off from and land on planets, attack weak targets), destroyers (protect fleets by laying mines and attacking enemy ships), cruisers (general-purpose warship with tactical missiles, ideal for independent operations), battlecruisers (can lead groups of cruisers to attack enemy fleets), battleships (armed with strategic weapons to attack planets), and dreadnoughts (excessively armed and armored to attack heavily fortified planets or entire star systems, and invariably the flagship).
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry interceptors), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
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** Small craft include shuttles, shunters (not tugs), shunters/tugs, interceptors, storm craft (fighter-bomber), and bombers.
** Combat ships includefrigates (can take off from frigates, cruisers, and land on planets, attack weak targets), destroyers (protect fleets by laying mines and attacking enemy ships), cruisers (general-purpose warship with tactical missiles, ideal for independent operations), battlecruisers (can lead groups of cruisers to attack enemy fleets), battleships (armed with strategic weapons to attack planets), and dreadnoughts (excessively armed and armored to attack heavily fortified planets or entire star systems, and invariably the flagship).
battleships.
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carryinterceptors), small combat spaceplanes), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
** Combat ships include
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry
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* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize a large asteroid. One shot can also vaporize a space station.
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* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize a large asteroid. One shot can also vaporize crack a space station.
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* Humanoid Aliens: The Khad are seven to eight feet tall with pale pinkish-grey skin, big eyes, and long thin fingers, but at least they have two eyes, a nose, four limbs, and five fingers on each hand. This is because their homeworld, Segh, is fairly close to Earth conditions.
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* Humanoid Aliens: HumanoidAliens: The Khad are seven to eight feet tall with pale pinkish-grey skin, big eyes, and long thin fingers, but at least they have two eyes, a nose, four limbs, and five fingers on each hand. This is because their homeworld, Segh, is fairly close to Earth conditions.
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'''HyperFlight''' is the name {{Tropers/Rlkitterman}} has given to TheVerse in which he has imagined science fiction stories will take place. The premise is that humanity does not contact aliens until 200 years in the future, and the first contact is with an aggressive civilization, which makes humanity aggressive toward aliens in return.
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'''HyperFlight''' is the name {{Tropers/Rlkitterman}} has given to TheVerse in which he has imagined science fiction stories will take place.stories. The premise is that humanity does not contact aliens until 200 years in the future, and the first contact is with an aggressive civilization, which makes humanity aggressive toward aliens in return.
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'''HyperFlight''' is the name {{Rlkitterman}} has given to TheVerse in which he has imagined science fiction stories will take place. The premise is that humanity does not contact aliens until 200 years in the future, and the first contact is with an aggressive civilization, which makes humanity aggressive toward aliens in return.
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'''HyperFlight''' is the name {{Rlkitterman}} {{Tropers/Rlkitterman}} has given to TheVerse in which he has imagined science fiction stories will take place. The premise is that humanity does not contact aliens until 200 years in the future, and the first contact is with an aggressive civilization, which makes humanity aggressive toward aliens in return.
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* DeflectorShields: One application of the electromagnetic fields that spaceships project. Deflector shields may also be used to protect planets and important cities. In the latter case, they can only be breached by a metal object on the ground.
* EnergyWeapon: Lasers, ion projectors, and plasma projectors. Lasers have the best range and power, and work by heating the target. Ion projectors are useful for disabling electronics or stunning people, and plasma projectors have very short range, so they are best for blasting doors down...or as flamethrowers.
* EnergyWeapon: Lasers, ion projectors, and plasma projectors. Lasers have the best range and power, and work by heating the target. Ion projectors are useful for disabling electronics or stunning people, and plasma projectors have very short range, so they are best for blasting doors down...or as flamethrowers.
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* CapitalCity: Moscow is the capital of Earth, the capital planet of the Galactic National Republic.
* DeflectorShields: One application of the electromagnetic fields that spaceships project. Deflector shields may also be used to protect planets and important cities. In the latter case, they can only be breached by a metal object on theground.
ground, such as a tank or armored car, making flying platforms inadvisable in these scenarios.
* EnergyWeapon: Lasers, ion projectors, and plasma projectors. Lasers have the best range and power, and work by heating the target. Ion projectors are useful for disabling electronics or stunning people, and plasma projectors have very short range, so they are best for blasting doors down...or as flamethrowers. But these weapons work best in the vacuum of space, where they are faster than shells, rockets, or missiles.
* DeflectorShields: One application of the electromagnetic fields that spaceships project. Deflector shields may also be used to protect planets and important cities. In the latter case, they can only be breached by a metal object on the
* EnergyWeapon: Lasers, ion projectors, and plasma projectors. Lasers have the best range and power, and work by heating the target. Ion projectors are useful for disabling electronics or stunning people, and plasma projectors have very short range, so they are best for blasting doors down...or as flamethrowers. But these weapons work best in the vacuum of space, where they are faster than shells, rockets, or missiles.
* KineticWeaponsAreJustBetter: For combat on planets, where soldiers need to fire over obstacles, which lasers cannot do. Each kind of combat demands a different weapon.
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** New Something: New Earth (capital New Jamestown), Scythia, Parthia, New Bashkiria.
** Symbolica: Fortuna, Fidelia, Arcadia.
** Mythology:
** Symbolica: Fortuna, Fidelia, Arcadia.
** Mythology:
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** New Something: Named for Earth places: New Earth (capital New Jamestown), Scythia, Parthia, Sabunchi, Sarmatia, New Bashkiria.
**Symbolica: Symbolic: Fortuna, Fidelia, Arcadia.
**Mythology:Mythological:
*** African: Adroa, Jengu, Loko, Mawu, Shango.
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*** African: Adroa, Jengu, Loko, Mawu, Shango.
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*** Celtic: Olyndicus, Sucellus, Dagda.
*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Thor, Wotan, Ziu.
*** Greek: Erebus, Polyphemus, Kronos.
*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Thor, Wotan, Ziu.
*** Greek: Erebus, Polyphemus, Kronos.
to:
*** Babylonian: Marduk, Nibiru.
*** Celtic: Icovellauna, Olyndicus, Sucellus,Dagda.
Dagda, Laha, Taranis.
*** Chinese: Bazha, Guanyin, Henge, Mazu, Nuewa, Suiren, Taiyi, Xihe.
*** Georgian: Lamara, Morige.
*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Hodr, Nerthus, Thor, Wotan, Zisa, Ziu.
***Greek: Greco-Roman: Erebus, Polyphemus, Kronos.Kronos, Momus, Morpheus, Hemera.
*** Celtic: Icovellauna, Olyndicus, Sucellus,
*** Chinese: Bazha, Guanyin, Henge, Mazu, Nuewa, Suiren, Taiyi, Xihe.
*** Georgian: Lamara, Morige.
*** Germanic/Norse: Freya, Hodr, Nerthus, Thor, Wotan, Zisa, Ziu.
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* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize an asteroid.
to:
*** Japanese: Benten, Bishamon, Daikoku, Ebisu, Fukurokuju, Gama, Hachiman, Hotei, Kudokuten, Raiden, Susano, Uzume.
*** Mayan: Backlum, Chac, Gukumatz, Itzamna, Yaluk.
*** Slavic: Berstuk, Perun, Svarog, Yarilo.
** Alphanumerical: ZL-1.
** Named for the star: Zeta Leporis Planetoid.
** Named for a person: Kantaria, Lomonosovsk, Korolevsk.
* StandardSciFiFleet: Mostly compliant.
** Small craft include shuttles, shunters (not tugs), interceptors, storm craft (fighter-bomber), and bombers.
** Combat ships include frigates (can take off from and land on planets, attack weak targets), destroyers (protect fleets by laying mines and attacking enemy ships), cruisers (general-purpose warship with tactical missiles, ideal for independent operations), battlecruisers (can lead groups of cruisers to attack enemy fleets), battleships (armed with strategic weapons to attack planets), and dreadnoughts (excessively armed and armored to attack heavily fortified planets or entire star systems, and invariably the flagship).
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry interceptors), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
** Civilians may have personal shuttles, yachts, passenger liners, cargo ships, or small utility craft.
** The Khad ships are able to operate in planetary atmospheres.
* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporizean asteroid.a large asteroid. One shot can also vaporize a space station.
*** Mayan: Backlum, Chac, Gukumatz, Itzamna, Yaluk.
*** Slavic: Berstuk, Perun, Svarog, Yarilo.
** Alphanumerical: ZL-1.
** Named for the star: Zeta Leporis Planetoid.
** Named for a person: Kantaria, Lomonosovsk, Korolevsk.
* StandardSciFiFleet: Mostly compliant.
** Small craft include shuttles, shunters (not tugs), interceptors, storm craft (fighter-bomber), and bombers.
** Combat ships include frigates (can take off from and land on planets, attack weak targets), destroyers (protect fleets by laying mines and attacking enemy ships), cruisers (general-purpose warship with tactical missiles, ideal for independent operations), battlecruisers (can lead groups of cruisers to attack enemy fleets), battleships (armed with strategic weapons to attack planets), and dreadnoughts (excessively armed and armored to attack heavily fortified planets or entire star systems, and invariably the flagship).
** Other military ships include landing ships (carry regiments or brigades between planets for surface combat), aviation ships (carry interceptors), electronic combat ships (project electromagnetic fields around fleets, intercept enemy communications), hospital ships, repair ships, and various transporters.
** Civilians may have personal shuttles, yachts, passenger liners, cargo ships, or small utility craft.
** The Khad ships are able to operate in planetary atmospheres.
* WaveMotionGun: A very powerful laser, like the kinds mounted on the largest spaceships, can burn a hole straight through the crust of a planet, or vaporize