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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** It's implied that Raven appeared to a young Ruby and mocked her family. A raven yells at Ruby that Summer was weak, Ruby is weak like her mother, and Summer wasn't Yang's ''real'' mother.
** Willow is depicted as a manipulative AlcoholicParent. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
** It's implied that Raven appeared to a young Ruby and mocked her family. A raven yells at Ruby that Summer was weak, Ruby is weak like her mother, and Summer wasn't Yang's ''real'' mother.
** Willow is depicted as a manipulative AlcoholicParent. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
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* AdaptationalJerkass:
** It's implied that Raven appeared to a young Ruby and mocked her family. A raven yells at Ruby that Summer was weak, Ruby is weak like her mother, and Summer wasn't Yang's ''real'' mother.
** Willow is depicted as a manipulative AlcoholicParent. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
** It's implied that Raven appeared to a young Ruby and mocked her family. A raven yells at Ruby that Summer was weak, Ruby is weak like her mother, and Summer wasn't Yang's ''real'' mother.
** Willow is depicted as a manipulative AlcoholicParent. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
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This is no longer a trope.
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* OffModel:
** Nora is drawn with a giraffe-length neck during the first chapter.
** In the second chapter Ruby and Nora are depicted at the same height as Ren and Jaune. Ruby is much shorter than Jaune.
** Chapter 5, prior to a revisioning, had Yang running around in her Haven Saga outfit rather than her Beacon Saga outfit.
** Nora is drawn with a giraffe-length neck during the first chapter.
** In the second chapter Ruby and Nora are depicted at the same height as Ren and Jaune. Ruby is much shorter than Jaune.
** Chapter 5, prior to a revisioning, had Yang running around in her Haven Saga outfit rather than her Beacon Saga outfit.
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Lady Drunk is a very specific personality type.
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** Willow is depicted as a manipulative LadyDrunk. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
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** Willow is depicted as a manipulative LadyDrunk.AlcoholicParent. In the show itself, she's a gentle-but-neglectful BrokenBird.
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Multicolored Hair is no longer a trope
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** Summer is depicted with black hair instead of very dark red hair (alternatively, [[MultiColoredHair black and red hair]]). This causes an issue since Ruby's seemingly natural red-tipped hair now makes [[HollywoodGenetics less sense]] considering her dad is blond.
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** Summer is depicted with black hair instead of very dark red hair (alternatively, [[MultiColoredHair black and red hair]]).hair). This causes an issue since Ruby's seemingly natural red-tipped hair now makes [[HollywoodGenetics less sense]] considering her dad is blond.
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Trope misuse; there's a difference between implied and ambiguous.
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* AmbiguousSituation: In issue 1, Chapter 2, a large raven mocks Summer's death in front of Ruby. While she dismisses it as a Grimm, Qrow's reaction suggests that it was actually his sister Raven doing it.
