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--> '''Ririko''': "We've finally gotten started with the love-love moe-moe stuff that we were created for!"
--> '''Ririko''': "We've finally gotten started with the love-love moe-moe stuff that we were created for!"
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*EvilPlan: Convince Masaomi to join her and marry her.
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* WouldHitAGirl: A true {{Ubermensch}} isn't bound by silly things like societally imposed DoubleStandards [[spoiler: if it concerns Kenichi]], after all.
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* WouldHitAGirl: A true {{Ubermensch}} isn't bound by silly things like societally imposed DoubleStandards {{Double Standard}}s [[spoiler: if it concerns Kenichi]], after all.
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* BreakTheCutie: The reader is told through flashbacks the events which caused her to become the reclusive girl she is in the present. [[spoiler:After being taken into custody for allegations of sexual manipulation, she was tortured by the prison guards into "confessing" her crime. At the end of three months, she had become completely broken and mistrusting of people, which was not helped by sexual harassment by her landlord.]]
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* [[spoiler:Determinator: Nothing will stop her from finishing her painting {{Determinator}}: Her arc shows just how determined she can be once she has gotten started puts her mind into it. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, it's not enough for real. '''''Nothing'''''.her to finish her painting, and as a result, Mana is separated from her.]]
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* CatchPhrase: "I'll murder you!", as well as a weird joke involving glasses that she tells everyone. No one finds the joke funny. In a flashback, it's revealed that [[spoiler:Ririko taught her these things]].
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Kenichi's non blood related older sister, Ririko is a rather bizarre individual who in the flashbacks was extremely keen on getting young Ken to shape up and be more manly. [[spoiler:She bears the Maximum Penalty, the obligation of going unrecognized by society, meaning no one may acknowledge her existence in any way. She has been following Kenichi around the whole time he was in town and thus almost every time he appears to be breaking the fourth wall, he was actually speaking to her.]]
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Kenichi's non blood related non-blood-related older sister, Ririko is a rather bizarre individual who in the flashbacks was extremely keen on getting young Ken to shape up and be more manly. [[spoiler:She bears the Maximum Penalty, the obligation of going unrecognized by society, meaning no one may acknowledge her existence in any way. She has been following Kenichi around the whole time he was in town and thus almost every time he appears to be breaking the fourth wall, he was actually speaking to her.]]
* [[spoiler:RightUnderTheirNoses]]: At the start of the final arc, it is revealed that [[spoiler:Ririko took advantage of the fact that will ever pay attention to her (save Houzuki) and roams around freely. It's even acknowledged that this makes her the perfect spy]].
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Kenichi, the protagonist, is a teen genius coming into the town for his final exam to become a Special High Class Individual. He tends to make a lot of jokes and [[TheGadfly troll his friends]], but on the other hand appears to be covering up some self loathing and depression.
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The first of Kenichi's childhood friends, she is shy and withdrawn and extremely bad at dealing with her classmates, especially men. She has the obligation of prohibition from falling in love, meaning she may not come in contact with any men nor display any seductive behaviors in front of them. Strange that a girl who hates to deal with men would have an obligation reserved for those judged to be emotionally and sexually manipulative...
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The second of Kenichi's childhood friends, she tends to be selfish, bossy and lazy. She's also highly energetic, extremely intelligent and a talented painter. She has the obligation of reduction of free time, an obligation reserved for those who made poor use of their time. It was saddled on her when she acquired a great deal of gambling debt and has grown more and more harsh with time. She started at twenty two hours a day, declining due to her stubbornness until in the present she is down to a mere twelve hours a day to sleep, go to school and take care of herself, never mind getting rid of her obligation by actually beginning to work.
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The third and final girl whose obligation Kenichi is tasked with clearing, Touka is a pretty blatant tsundere, for which she takes a great deal of teasing. She is not particularly intelligent and has no obvious talents apart from cooking, something she has been forbidden from doing by her mother Kyouko after she was burned several years ago in the kitchen. Her obligation requires her to follow each and every order anyone recognized as her parent gives her and is occasionally referred to as the obligation to never grow up due to the lack of independence it tends to foster.
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Kenichi's mentor, Houzuki is cold, manipulative and harsh. He is the proctor of the exam and does not tolerate failure. He is an extremely wealthy, talented and politically influential man.
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Kenichi's non blood related older sister, Ririko is a rather bizarre individual who in the flashbacks was extremely keen on getting young Ken to shape up and be more manly. [[spoiler:She bears the Maximum Penalty, the obligation of going unrecognized by society, meaning no one may acknowledge her existence in any way. She has been following Kenichi around the whole time he was in town and thus almost every time he appears to be breaking the fourth wall, he was actually speaking to her.]]
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Mana is Sachi's adopted little sister and was taken in when Sachi was at a point of great frustration in her life. Before this, she was a homeless foreign girl. At approximately ten years old, she tends to do all of the housework in Sachi's home, works at the local supermarket and expresses a great desire to see Sachi paint. [[spoiler:At the end of Sachi's arc, she is taken away and absent from the rest of the story apart from Sachi's epilogue.]]
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Touka's mother and the teacher of Kenichi's class, she is quite young and attractive. She has absolute authority over Touka's behavior.
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A cadet who arrived several minutes late to the exam and was shot to death by Houzuki for it. Apparently proving quite popular for someone who only appeared for apart thirty seconds in the entire story, she possess a sidestory in the fandisc that shows the last two days of her life and why she was late for the exam. She also has a completely nonsensical sex scene that blatantly nods to the fact it was only include due to fan interest.
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Masaomi's love interest, she has been served with the obligation to have no privacy. Born to a wealthy shinto family, her mildly rebellious attitude caused her to be saddled with a nasty obligation that Masaomi is charged with clearing.
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The only other candidate to make it to the exam and not be shot down, Saburou is pretty much the polar opposite of Masaomi. He is outgoing, friendly and surprisingly calculating. He also has a knack for cleverly figuring out loopholes in the rules to giving himself an advantage.
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!Ari Ruruliant
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Because of the rap like poetry she wrote, she was placed under the obligation to forfeit all privacy, meaning she is not allowed to be displeasing to anyone at any point nor have any secrets. She cannot go to the bathroom or bathe without someone to watch her, have any hobbies or opinions and must act perfectly pleasant at all times. If someone becomes upset with her being so pleasant all the time, this is ''also'' her fault.
* FragileFlower: [[spoiler:When Masaomi starts to act cruel to her to test how well she can handle the scorn of society, she breaks almost instantly and he is unable to continue to doing so.]]
* NotSoWeak: She can't deal with attacks directed at herself at all, but can become extremely angry when others are made to suffer in her place.
* TheOjou
* TheNewRockAndRoll: Her poetry. Which is not even very good.
* RebelliousPrincess
* YamatoNadeshiko: She was raised to be one and apart from her [[TheNewRockAndRoll evil poetry]] she largely fits it.
* FragileFlower: [[spoiler:When Masaomi starts to act cruel to her to test how well she can handle the scorn of society, she breaks almost instantly and he is unable to continue to doing so.]]
* NotSoWeak: She can't deal with attacks directed at herself at all, but can become extremely angry when others are made to suffer in her place.
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* TheNewRockAndRoll: Her poetry. Which is not even very good.
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* YamatoNadeshiko: She was raised to be one and apart from her [[TheNewRockAndRoll evil poetry]] she largely fits it.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: She set up Mina and Masaomi like setting up a pulp romance novel with the highborn princess and the low, gritty commoner. However, she's unable to grasp that there's more to the relationship than this nor can she grasp the appeal of being an actual decent person, which wrecks her attempts to get Masaomi to join her. [[spoiler:But in the end it doesn't matter. While she never gets his love or actual support, it's a ForegoneConclusion that Masaomi doesn't win here.]]
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* AmbiguousSituation: In the fandisc, it's not clear if [[spoiler:her sex scene really happened or was just a dream. On the one hand, it fits into the narrative really well and on the other it doesn't really make much sense on her part. It probably really didn't happen, but unlike the blatantly false Mana/Sachi scene it is at least possible.plausible.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:When Saburou points out that the love poem Miina wrote was addressed to his parents instead of him, he realizes he overreacted. He doesn't say the line, but he instantly goes to save Miina after that.]]
* RedOniBlueOni: The blue to Saburou's red, though it's played with slightly in both directions.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:When Saburou points out that the love poem Miina wrote was addressed to his parents instead of him, he realizes he overreacted. He doesn't say the line, but he instantly goes to save Miina after that.]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: She set up Mina and Masaomi like setting up a pulp romance novel with the highborn princess and the low, gritty commoner. However, she's unable to grasp that there's more to the relationship than this nor can she grasp the appeal of being an actual decent person, which wrecks her attempts to get Masaomi to join her. [[spoiler:But in the end it doesn't matter. While she never gets his love or actual support, it's a ForegoneConclusion that Masaomi doesn't win here.]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: She set up Mina and Masaomi like setting up a pulp romance novel with the highborn princess and the low, gritty commoner. However, she's unable to grasp that there's more to the relationship than this nor can she grasp the appeal of being an actual decent person, which wrecks her attempts to get Masaomi to join her. [[spoiler:But in the end it doesn't matter. While she never gets his love or actual support, it's a ForegoneConclusion that Masaomi doesn't win here.]]
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* XanatosGambit: [[spoiler:Even when Masaomi manages to trick her with something she hadn't expected (Disguising himself as a corpse) she had still accounted for the possibility of being taken captive and manages to win in the end.]]
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* GenerationXerox: [[spoiler:Masaomi ends up becoming just like her minus the evil. She pretty bluntly states that the same thing happened to her. The different difference between her and Masaomi is that she doesn't really regret what she's become.]]
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* InformedAbility: He tells us about all sorts of things he can do such as cooking, but rarely displays these talents. In the fandisc, however, we see that he really ''can'' cook quite well.
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Implied to have been abandoned by his original parents and is taken in as a baby by Saburou, Miina and Masaomi. Shortly after, Miina is sent to a concentration camp, Masaomi leaves him to become a Special High Class Individual. His father figure Saburou dies a few years later.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Implied to have been abandoned by his original parents (Miina and Masaomi) and is taken in as a baby by Saburou, Miina and Masaomi. Shortly after, Saburou. Miina is sent to a concentration camp, Masaomi leaves him to become a Special High Class Individual. His father figure Saburou dies a few years later.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: A true {{Ubermensch}} isn't bound by silly things like societally imposed DoubleStandards [[Spoiler: if it concerns Kenichi]], after all.
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* WouldHitAGirl: A true {{Ubermensch}} isn't bound by silly things like societally imposed DoubleStandards [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: if it concerns Kenichi]], after all.
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* TheUnfought: Fouzuki kills all four competitors of Kenichi to minimize threat.
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* TheUnfought: Fouzuki Houzuki kills all four competitors of Kenichi to minimize threat.
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* CakeEater: Has a crush on Kyouko.
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* LikesOlderWomen: Has a crush on Kyouko.
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* PosthumousCharacter
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Implied to have been abondoned by his original parents and is taken in as a baby by Saburou, Miina and Masaomi. Shortly after, Miina is sent to a concentration camp, Masaomi leaves him to become a Special High Class Individual. His father figure Saburou dies a few years later.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Implied to have been abondoned abandoned by his original parents and is taken in as a baby by Saburou, Miina and Masaomi. Shortly after, Miina is sent to a concentration camp, Masaomi leaves him to become a Special High Class Individual. His father figure Saburou dies a few years later.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler:Implied to have been abondoned by his original parents and is taken in as a baby by Saburou, Miina and Masaomi. Shortly after, Miina is sent to a concentration camp, Masaomi leaves him to become a Special High Class Individual. His father figure Saburou dies a few years later.]]
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* DoesNotLikeMen: Even after taking her obligation into account, she still seems unusually afraid of contact.
