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One of the more powerful factions in the Northern Province. It is made up of many clans and sects.
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!Situ Clan
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: They present a united front in front of allies and enemies, but there is a large factional divide in the clan that exists behind the scene.
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One of the more powerful factions in the Northern Province. It is made up of many clans and sects.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: They present a united front in front of allies and enemies, but thereis a large factional divide are numerous rivalries and alliances between the various factions in the clan Society and within the clans and sects themselves that exists exist behind the scene.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: They present a united front in front of allies and enemies, but there
!Situ Clan
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: He unconditionally loves his son Gulong, though it has resulted in spoiling him rotten.
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Zian's uncle and first mentor.
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Zian's uncle and first mentor.Mentor.
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* MoreDeadlyThanTheMale: She acts like she's more a politician than a warrior, but when her son is in danger, she reveals that [[spoiler:not only is she a capable Martial Warrior in her own right, but she drew her famed future husband's attention by beating him in spars multiple times]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: After getting some advice from Rain, [=BoShui=] goes from being a PaperTiger to a legitimate badass that earns the respect of his peers.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Acts as more of a father figure to [=BoShui=] than the latter's own father.
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That should be grandfather, which is not under that trope.
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* {{Patricide}}: It's implied he killed his own father to take control of the clan.
* DrowningMySorrows: Does this twice in the story. The first time was after he was forced to [[spoiler:kill his beloved cousin]]. The second was when he realized that his role as a PaperTiger was coming to an end, as his father's true heir is getting ready to kill him for prestige.
* TheStoryteller: After becoming devoted to Rain, he records the latter's adventures, which is spread across the Empire.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an and attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
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* PaperTiger: He was intended to be this on purpose so that one of this brothers, their father's true heir, can kill him and earn the prestige of killing the famed [=BoShui=].
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* ArmedLegs: [=BoShui=] fights in close range using his greaves and [[PowerFist gauntlets]].
* GenerationXerox: He is basically a younger version of his uncle, as both are close combat specialists who are/were estranged from their clan and give their allegiance to someone who's opposed to the Society as a whole.
* PaperTiger: He was intended to be this on purpose so that one of this brothers, their father's true heir, can kill him and earn the prestige of killing the famed[=BoShui=]. [=BoShui=].
* PowerFist: [=BoShui=] fights in close range using his gauntlets and [[ArmedLegs greaves]].
* GenerationXerox: He is basically a younger version of his uncle, as both are close combat specialists who are/were estranged from their clan and give their allegiance to someone who's opposed to the Society as a whole.
* PaperTiger: He was intended to be this on purpose so that one of this brothers, their father's true heir, can kill him and earn the prestige of killing the famed
* PowerFist: [=BoShui=] fights in close range using his gauntlets and [[ArmedLegs greaves]].
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* ArmedLegs: [=BoHai=] fights in close range using his greaves and [[PowerFist gauntlets]].
* PowerFist: [=BoHai=] fights in close range using his gauntlets and [[ArmedLegs greaves]].
* ArmedLegs: [=BoHai=] fights in close range using his greaves and [[PowerFist gauntlets]].
* PowerFist: [=BoHai=] fights in close range using his gauntlets and [[ArmedLegs greaves]].
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* BlackSheep: Nian Zu doesn't involve himself with clan affairs because he is this.
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* PaperTiger: He was intended to be this on purpose so that one of this brothers, their father's true heir, can kill him and earn the prestige of killing the famed [=BoShui=].
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Vengeful Widow and Crusading Widower merged into Crusading Widow per TRS. However, the example doesn't fit since it doesn't describe her seeking out revenge
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* VengefulWidow: She hold great hatred towards [[spoiler:Rang Min]] for the death of her husband.
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[[folder:Han BoShui]]
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[[folder:Han BoShui]][=BoShui=]]]
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[[folder:Han BoHai]]
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[[folder:Han BoHai]][=BoHai=]]]
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* MyGreatestRegret: He was dismissive of Yuzhen when he first met her, leading to a rift between himself and his secret lover and best friend, Shing Du Yi, one that never fully mended before the latter's death.
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* MyGreatestRegret: MyGreatestFailure: He was dismissive of Yuzhen when he first met her, leading to a rift between himself and his secret lover and best friend, Shing Du Yi, one that never fully mended before the latter's death.
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* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite [[spoiler:Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband]].
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* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a [[spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite [[spoiler:Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband]].
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* FirstNameBasis: He is almost always simply referred to as Nian Zu. Something that irks a few of his clansment.
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* FirstNameBasis: He is almost always simply referred to as Nian Zu. Something that irks a few of his clansment.clansmen.
* MyGreatestRegret: He was dismissive of Yuzhen when he first met her, leading to a rift between himself and his secret lover and best friend, Shing Du Yi, one that never fully mended before the latter's death.
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!Harmonious Unity Sect
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
!Arahant Sect
A lesser member of the Society.
[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
!Arahant Sect
A lesser member of the Society.
[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
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One
The son of the
!Arahant Sect
A lesser member
[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
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* MoralMyopia: His nephew died on a mission where he was ordered to kill what he thought would be helpless civilians, women, and children. As a result, he attempted to find the village where they called home, kill everyone there, and burn it to the ground.
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* MoralMyopia: His nephew died on a mission where he was ordered to kill what he thought would be helpless civilians, women, UndyingLoyalty: To Falling Rain, seeing him as the Mother's Chosen Son who will help defeat the Defiled and children. As perhaps even bring a result, he attempted to find the village where they called home, kill everyone there, new age of peace, prosperity, and burn it equality to the ground.Empire.
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[[folder:Ming Zhong Lang]]
One of the many people who pursued Rain and his group as there were evading the Society for getting valuable treasure as part of the Contest.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
One of the many people who pursued Rain and his group as there were evading the Society for getting valuable treasure as part of the Contest.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
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One of
A Major General and the
* UndyingLoyalty: To Nian Zu, who
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
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!Harmonious Unity Sect
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
!Arahant Sect
A lesser member of the Society.
[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
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* MoralMyopia: His nephew died on a mission where he was ordered to kill what he thought would be helpless civilians, women, and children. As a result, he attempted to find the village where they called home, kill everyone there, and burn it to the ground.
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[[folder:Ming Zhong Lang]]
One of the many people who pursued Rain and his group as there were evading the Society for getting valuable treasure as part of the Contest.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
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A lesser member of the Society.
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A lesser member of the Society.Society.
[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
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* MoralMyopia: His nephew died on a mission where he was ordered to kill what he thought would be helpless civilians, women, and children. As a result, he attempted to find the village where they called home, kill everyone there, and burn it to the ground.
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[[folder:Ming Zhong Lang]]
One of the many people who pursued Rain and his group as there were evading the Society for getting valuable treasure as part of the Contest.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
[[/folder]]
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[[folder:Ming Zhong Guan]]
A Elder of the Arahant Sect who was one of the people who collected those who lost during the Contest.
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* MoralMyopia: His nephew died on a mission where he was ordered to kill what he thought would be helpless civilians, women, and children. As a result, he attempted to find the village where they called home, kill everyone there, and burn it to the ground.
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[[folder:Ming Zhong Lang]]
One of the many people who pursued Rain and his group as there were evading the Society for getting valuable treasure as part of the Contest.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: He was a bit character that died in the only chapter that featured him. However, his death drove his uncle Ming Zhong Guan to try an attack the Village, something he died trying to achieve. Among the Elder's belongings was a notebook that had, among other things, his experiences with his Awakening, Water. Rain would use this to try and understand his own Awakening.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: He thought he could at least take a young child (Rain) with no problem. It was the last mistake he ever made.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: They present a united front in front of allies and enemies, but there is a large factional divide in the clan that exists behind the scene.
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* GreenEyedMonster: He seemed to be jealous of Nian Zu's accomplishments when he was young.
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* EvilOldFolks: He will do all that he can to get power and keep it, even if he must kill members of his own clan. [[spoiler:It is later shown that he is even willing to collaborate with the Defiled, at least so long as he is not implicated.]]
* GreenEyedMonster: He seemed to be jealous of Nian Zu's accomplishmentswhen ever since he was young.
* GreenEyedMonster: He seemed to be jealous of Nian Zu's accomplishments
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* CharacterDevelopment: He starts out as a typical arrogant young noble, except actually having the skills to back it up. However, his defeat at the hands of Rain gave him a much needed [[BreadkTheHaughty reality check]]. This leads to him re-evaluating his life and values, befriending Rain and the others, and becoming both a better warrior and a better person afterwards.
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* CharacterDevelopment: He starts out as a typical arrogant young noble, except actually having the skills to back it up. However, his defeat at the hands of Rain gave him a much needed [[BreadkTheHaughty [[BreakTheHaughty reality check]]. This leads to him re-evaluating his life and values, befriending Rain and the others, and becoming both a better warrior and a better person afterwards.afterwards.
* DualWielding: Wields two sabers, which he does to honor his deceased father.
* HeelFaceTurn: He goes from one of Rain's hated enemies to one of his closest friends.
* MommasBoy: He deeply loves his beloved mother.
* DualWielding: Wields two sabers, which he does to honor his deceased father.
* HeelFaceTurn: He goes from one of Rain's hated enemies to one of his closest friends.
* MommasBoy: He deeply loves his beloved mother.
* CharacterDevelopment: Similar to his nephew, he starts out arrogant, but his experiences in the battles against the Defiled and the Bekhai helped him see that there is more to life than attaining status and prestige.
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* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband.
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* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite Situ [[spoiler:Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband.husband]].
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* VengefulWidow: She hold great hatred towards [[spoiler:Rang Min]] for the death of her husband.
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* ActionMom: [[spoiler:She surprises her son when she reveals that she is a capable Martial Warrior.]]
* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband.
* ActionPolitician: In addition to being a mother and [spoiler:a powerful Martial Warrior]], she is also a capable politician, which has allowed her to become a Magistrate and keep herself and her son alive despite Situ Rang Min being the one to kill her husband.
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* StacysMom: She's noted to be very youthful looking and beautiful despite having a son.
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* CarryABigStick: His Spiritual Weapon is a large mace.
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* ManlyGay: He's a ferocious fighter and a loyal soldier, but he is also a romantic who loves Shing Du Yi with all his heart.
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[[folder:Situ Jia Zian]]
A rising young talent of the Situ Clan.
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* CharacterDevelopment: He starts out as a typical arrogant young noble, except actually having the skills to back it up. However, his defeat at the hands of Rain gave him a much needed [[BreadkTheHaughty reality check]]. This leads to him re-evaluating his life and values, befriending Rain and the others, and becoming both a better warrior and a better person afterwards.
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[[folder:Situ Jia Yang]]
Zian's uncle and first mentor.
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* SmugSnake: He honestly believed that he could have become the leader of both his clan and the Society.
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[[folder:Situ Jia Ying]]
Zian's mother and the Magistrate of Shen Yun.
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* MamaBear: She will do anything to protect her son.
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[[folder:Situ Nian Zu]]
The Colonel General of the Northern Province.
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* BlackSheep: Nian Zu doesn't involve himself with clan affairs because he is this.
* FirstNameBasis: He is almost always simply referred to as Nian Zu. Something that irks a few of his clansment.
* LivingLegend: He is highly regarded by many in the Northern Province and is seen as its greatest protector.
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A rising young talent of the Situ Clan.
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* CharacterDevelopment: He starts out as a typical arrogant young noble, except actually having the skills to back it up. However, his defeat at the hands of Rain gave him a much needed [[BreadkTheHaughty reality check]]. This leads to him re-evaluating his life and values, befriending Rain and the others, and becoming both a better warrior and a better person afterwards.
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[[folder:Situ Jia Yang]]
Zian's uncle and first mentor.
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* SmugSnake: He honestly believed that he could have become the leader of both his clan and the Society.
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[[folder:Situ Jia Ying]]
Zian's mother and the Magistrate of Shen Yun.
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* MamaBear: She will do anything to protect her son.
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[[folder:Situ Nian Zu]]
The Colonel General of the Northern Province.
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* BlackSheep: Nian Zu doesn't involve himself with clan affairs because he is this.
* FirstNameBasis: He is almost always simply referred to as Nian Zu. Something that irks a few of his clansment.
* LivingLegend: He is highly regarded by many in the Northern Province and is seen as its greatest protector.
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A lesser member of the Society.
A lesser member of the Society.
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One of the more powerful groups in the Society.
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One of the more powerful three leading groups in the Society.
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!Han Clan
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
!Harmonious Unity Sect
One of the three leading groups in the Society.
!Arahant Sect
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[[folder:Situ Rang Min]]
The current Patriarch of the Situ Clan.
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* GreenEyedMonster: He seemed to be jealous of Nian Zu's accomplishments when he was young.
* {{Patricide}}: It's implied he killed his own father to take control of the clan.
[[folder:Situ Rang Min]]
The current Patriarch of the Situ Clan.
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* GreenEyedMonster: He seemed to be jealous of Nian Zu's accomplishments when he was young.
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One of the more powerful factions in the Northern Province. It is made up of many clans and sects.
!Situ Clan
One of the more powerful groups in the Society.
[[folder:In General]]
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!Situ Clan
One of the more powerful groups in the Society.
[[folder:In General]]
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