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* CloningBlues: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''. [[spoiler:It's revealed in Chapter 7, that she made the copy of Al because she thought her existence was a failure.]]
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* CloningBlues: CloneAngst: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''. [[spoiler:It's revealed in Chapter 7, that she made the copy of Al because she thought her existence was a failure.]]
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* [[HasTwoMommies Has Two Daddies]]: Neither Al nor Brendan describe Sulla as their daughter, but the two men keep finding themselves talking like parents in regards to her. Besides, she ''is'' their daughter -- based on Al's initial template, and built and raised by Brendan.
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* HotMenAtWork[=/=]HotScientist: HotMenAtWork: Especially to Al. [[http://ohumanstar.com/chapter-2-page-34/ Case in point.]]
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* {{Megane}}([[{{Meganekko}} kko]]): Totally. He had plenty of endearing "glasses girl" moments, but then proved how masculine he could be as well.
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* BadassBeard: Brendan was particularly fond of this.
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* ManlyGay: Very much so, which makes Sulla's [[{{transgender}} sex change]] all the more unnerving to Al. Brendan even wondered if Al had transgender tendencies that might have surfaced if he hadn't died -- which only [[BerserkButton angered]] Al. [[spoiler:Turns out to be true.]]
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* BrainUploading[=/=]CameBackWrong: She was originally meant to be a copy of Alastair Sterling, but she was an incomplete copy, and had none of Al's memories. Through time, she started to grow up like a human child, and even requested a [[{{Transgender}} sex change]]. In the end, the fact that she CameBackWrong isn't a negative trait, as her DivergentCharacterEvolution made her a very unique character of her own. [[spoiler:Turns out the original Al is more like her than anyone knew.]]
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* BrainUploading[=/=]CameBackWrong: CameBackWrong: She was originally meant to be a copy of Alastair Sterling, but she was an incomplete copy, and had none of Al's memories. Through time, she started to grow up like a human child, and even requested a [[{{Transgender}} sex change]].change. In the end, the fact that she CameBackWrong isn't a negative trait, as her DivergentCharacterEvolution made her a very unique character of her own. [[spoiler:Turns out the original Al is more like her than anyone knew.]]
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* {{Transgender}}: Started out as a boy, but requested to become a girl when she was 13. This caused Brendan to wonder if Al would have eventually done the same thing had he lived. Both facts are unnerving to robot!Al, who remains as masculine as ever. [[spoiler:And then it turned out to be {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
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* {{Adorkable}}
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* ManlyGay: Very much so, which makes Sulla's [[{{transgender}} sex change]] all the more unnerving to Al. Brendan even wondered if Al had transgender tendencies that might have surfaced if he hadn't died -- which only [[BerserkButton angered]] Al.
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* ManlyGay: Very much so, which makes Sulla's [[{{transgender}} sex change]] all the more unnerving to Al. Brendan even wondered if Al had transgender tendencies that might have surfaced if he hadn't died -- which only [[BerserkButton angered]] Al. [[spoiler:Turns out to be true.]]
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* BrainUploading[=/=]CameBackWrong: She was originally meant to be a copy of Alastair Sterling, but she was an incomplete copy, and had none of Al's memories. Through time, she started to grow up like a human child, and even requested a [[{{Transgender}} sex change]]. In the end end, the fact that she CameBackWrong isn't a negative trait, as her DivergentCharacterEvolution made her a very unique character of her own.own. [[spoiler:Turns out the original Al is more like her than anyone knew.]]
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* {{Transgender}}: Started out as a boy, but requested to become a girl when she was 13. This caused Brendan to wonder if Al would have eventually done the same thing had he lived. Both facts are unnerving to robot!Al, who remains as masculine as ever.
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* {{Transgender}}: Started out as a boy, but requested to become a girl when she was 13. This caused Brendan to wonder if Al would have eventually done the same thing had he lived. Both facts are unnerving to robot!Al, who remains as masculine as ever. [[spoiler:And then it turned out to be {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
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* BiTheWay: Possibly, since he's tried women before and Brendan was his first time with a man. Still, considering Al's heavy {{Gayngst}}, whether he is bi or was merely gay-in-denial is not yet established. WordOfGod says that he is bisexual and he owns the [[FanserviceExtra cheesecake calenders]] in his room.
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* BiTheWay: Still has a crush on Ty even after learning about their unique gender situation. Comes from how Al is also bisexual. [[spoiler:Oddly the main reason why she became a woman was because she developed crushes for boys, yet isn't bothered by being a woman with an attraction to other women. Maybe a byproduct of Al's specific gaynst.]]
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* HeroicAlbino: Though we don't know if he has albinism or not, he certainly has the looks. WordOfGod says that he was born with sandy blond hair that greyed in his twenties.
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* GrandpaWhatMassiveHotnessYouHave: Al thought he was [[OldMaid too old]] for men Brendan's age and that Brendan shouldn't be attracted to him. Brendan responds by invoking this trope.
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* BiTheWay: Possibly, since he's tried women before and Brendan was his first time with a man. Still, considering Al's heavy {{Gayngst}}, whether he is bi or was merely gay-in-denial is not yet established.
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* BiTheWay: Possibly, since he's tried women before and Brendan was his first time with a man. Still, considering Al's heavy {{Gayngst}}, whether he is bi or was merely gay-in-denial is not yet established. WordOfGod says that he is bisexual and he owns the [[FanserviceExtra cheesecake calenders]] in his room.
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* BiTheWay: Still has a crush on Ty even after learning about their unique gender situation. Comes from how Al is also bisexual. [[spoiler:Oddly the main reason why she became a woman was because she developed crushes for boys, yet isn't bothered by being a woman with an attraction to other women. Maybe a byproduct of Al's specific gaynst.]]
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* HeroicAlbino: Though we don't know if he has albinism or not, he certainly has the looks. WordOfGod says that he was born with sandy blond hair that greyed in his twenties.
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* MoralityPet: As weird as this sounds, he's this to Brendan. Brendan's not evil, but the majority of his sympathy revolves around his relationship with Al and Sulla.
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* MoralityPet: To Brendan, even though he's not evil. The fact that Brendan accepts her the way she is shows his good side better than anything else can.
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoilers:Gets one big crisis when he realizes he no longer a human. It didn't help that Brendan's robots had to restrain him right after he pushed Brendan away.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoilers:Gets [[spoiler:Gets one big crisis when he realizes he no longer a human. It didn't help that Brendan's robots had to restrain him right after he pushed Brendan away.]]
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* CloningBlues: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''. [[spoilers:It's revealed in Chapter 7, that she made the copy of Al because she thought her existance was a failure.]]
* FieryRedhead: PlayedWith. While she is very much like this at home with Brendan (though not in any angry way), she is actually more of a ShrinkingViolet in public, and doesn't really have friends.
* FieryRedhead: PlayedWith. While she is very much like this at home with Brendan (though not in any angry way), she is actually more of a ShrinkingViolet in public, and doesn't really have friends.
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* CloningBlues: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''. [[spoilers:It's [[spoiler:It's revealed in Chapter 7, that she made the copy of Al because she thought her existance existence was a failure.]]
* FieryRedhead: PlayedWith. While she is very much like this at home with Brendan (though not in any angry way), she is actually more of a ShrinkingViolet inpublic, public and doesn't really have friends.
* FieryRedhead: PlayedWith. While she is very much like this at home with Brendan (though not in any angry way), she is actually more of a ShrinkingViolet in
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* HeroicAlbino: Though we don't know if he has albinism or not, he certainly has the looks. Even when he was just a kid he had white hair.
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* PowerFloats: Sulla can fly and levitate. But out and about in public where she can usually pass for human, she keeps her feet on the ground so as not to appear so conspicuously synthetic.
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* PowerFloats: Sulla can fly and levitate. But out and about in public where she can usually pass for human, she keeps her feet on the ground so as not to appear so conspicuously synthetic. [[spoiler:When she flies to save Al's life in danger in public, she feels really ashamed and flies off.]]
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* StealthPun: She's an android who received a sex change when she was younger and whose capabilities exceed those of a human. She's both trans''wo''man and a trans''hu''man.
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* BrainUploading: Which raises lots of questions -- if Brendan Pinksy, the world's leading expert on BrainUploading (next to Al himself, of course) could only copy an inadequate template of Al when Al was dying (this template of course became Sulla), then who made this absolutely spot-on copy of Al -- and when?
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* BrainUploading: Which raises lots of questions -- if Brendan Pinksy, the world's leading expert on BrainUploading (next to Al himself, of course) could only copy an inadequate template of Al when Al was dying (this template template, of course course, became Sulla), then who made this absolutely spot-on copy of Al -- and when? [[spoiler:well...]]
* CloningBlues: He's not really happy being a robot made from the code of his original self.
* CloningBlues: He's not really happy being a robot made from the code of his original self.
* JadeColoredGlasses: Al's death really did a number on him mentally. He's far more bitter and grumpy when he meets robot!Al.
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* CloningBlues: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''.
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* CloningBlues: Quite evident in ''[[http://bluedelliquanti.blogspot.com/2011/11/new-short-comic-oh-maker.html Oh, Maker]]''. [[spoilers:It's revealed in Chapter 7, that she made the copy of Al because she thought her existance was a failure.]]
* TheReveal: [[spoiler:She was the one responsible for the resurrection of Al.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Gayngst}}: There's no mistaking that Al loves Brendan and loves being around, frolicking with and being intimate with Brendan. But while Brendan is confident with himself and who he is, Al is a lot more concerned with what other people will think. Brendan wants to be Al's ClosetKey, but Al has never consented to it.]]
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* [[spoiler:{{Gayngst}}: {{Gayngst}}: [[spoiler: There's no mistaking that Al loves Brendan and loves being around, frolicking with and being intimate with Brendan. But while Brendan is confident with himself and who he is, Al is a lot more concerned with what other people will think. Brendan wants to be Al's ClosetKey, but Al has never consented to it.]]
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* [[spoiler:FishOutOfTemporalWater: FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler: Having pioneered most of the technology that is ubiquitous by 2021, Al thinks he can handle seeing what the world has become. Brendan thinks he isn't. Brendan was right.]]
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* [[spoiler:ClosetKey: ClosetKey: [[spoiler: {{Averted|Trope}}. Brendan ''wants'' to be this for Al, but Al never feels ready for everyone to know. It's still a secret by the time Al dies, and remains so when he's resurrected as a synthetic. Brendan hasn't told ''anyone''.]]
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* BiTheWay: He's Possibly, since he's tried women before. before and Brendan was his first time with a man. Still, considering Al's heavy {{Gayngst}}, whether he is bi or was merely gay-in-denial is not yet established.
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* [[GoodParents Good Father]]: A good father to Sulla, full of love, support, and guidance. Particularly, he loves her as her own person, and [[ReplacementGoldfish not just an extension of Al.]]
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* [[GoodParents Good Father]]: A good father to Sulla, full of love, support, and guidance.as "O Maker" amply demonstrates. Particularly, he loves her as her own person, and [[ReplacementGoldfish not just an extension of Al.]] He also effectively homeschools her.
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* SuperStrength: Has been seen swinging around tables and couches with ease -- and in flight.
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* HotMenAtWork[=/=]HotScientist: Especially to Al.
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* HotMenAtWork[=/=]HotScientist: Especially to Al. [[http://ohumanstar.com/chapter-2-page-34/ Case in point.]]
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* [[GoodParents Good Father]]: A good father to Sulla, full of love, support, and guidance. Particularly, he loves her as her own person, and [[ReplacementGoldfish not just an extension of Al.]]
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* BrainUploadingBrainUploading: Which raises lots of questions -- if Brendan Pinksy, the world's leading expert on BrainUploading (next to Al himself, of course) could only copy an inadequate template of Al when Al was dying (this template of course became Sulla), then who made this absolutely spot-on copy of Al -- and when?
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