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I mainly took care of some Sinkholes. I also deleted some Word Cruft, although I do agree with what it was saying lol.
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* AuthorAvatar: Is named for the author, and whenever he shows up, the narration [[SwitchingPOV shifts to his first-person perspective]] for no real reason; no other character in the series gets this treatment. [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial However, Dakari-King Mykan insists that despite sharing a name and a "voice",]] [[BlatantLies Stevens' personality is completely different from his.]] Additionally, at the end of the ''Human in United Equestria'', he receives an outfit from Grand Ruler that is heavily reminiscent of Dakari-King Mykan's cosplay.
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* AuthorAvatar: Is named for the author, and whenever he shows up, the narration [[SwitchingPOV shifts to his first-person perspective]] for no real reason; no other character in the series gets this treatment. [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial However, Dakari-King Mykan insists that despite sharing a name and a "voice",]] "voice"]], [[BlatantLies Stevens' personality is completely different from his.]] Additionally, at the end of the ''Human in United Equestria'', he receives an outfit from Grand Ruler that is heavily reminiscent of Dakari-King Mykan's cosplay.
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* AxCrazy: [[GoMadFromTheIsolation His insistence on isolating himself from the world led to him becoming dangerously unstable.]] He violently lashes out whenever someone insists on approaching him, to the point of [[WouldHurtAChild threatening harm on the Cutie Mark Crusaders]] [[DisproportionateRetribution for accidentally finding a way into his home]].
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* AxCrazy: [[GoMadFromTheIsolation His insistence on isolating himself from the world led to him becoming dangerously unstable.]] He violently lashes out whenever someone insists on approaching him, to the point of [[WouldHurtAChild threatening harm on the Cutie Mark Crusaders]] for [[DisproportionateRetribution for accidentally finding a way into his home]].
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* TheDitz: Unintentionally comes off as this. Apart from forgetting about her [[ThinkingUpPortals pow]][[SuperStrength ers]], or those of her whole species, more than once, she also tends to [[CaptainObvious state the obvious]], [[TooDumbToLive keeps entering the battlefield while risking getting separated from her kingdom again]], and at one point, [[EpicFail fell for trap so obvious, it got listed in the]] What An Idiot section.
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* TheDitz: Unintentionally comes off as this. Apart from forgetting about her [[ThinkingUpPortals pow]][[SuperStrength ers]], powers, or those of her whole species, more than once, she also tends to [[CaptainObvious state the obvious]], [[TooDumbToLive keeps entering the battlefield while risking getting separated from her kingdom again]], and at one point, [[EpicFail fell for trap so obvious, it got listed in the]] What An Idiot section.
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* OldManMarryingAChild: Implied. Krysta's around 20 when she reunites with Topaz, Topaz is old enough to have gray hair, and they were married for ten years before they reunited. This means that Krysta would have been a ''child'' while Topaz was middle-aged at youngest when they got married. [[NoYay Euugh...]]
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* OldManMarryingAChild: Implied. Krysta's around 20 when she reunites with Topaz, Topaz is old enough to have gray hair, and they were married for ten years before they reunited. This means that Krysta would have been a ''child'' while Topaz was middle-aged at youngest when they got married. [[NoYay Euugh...]]
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* SuperStrength: The narration in her introductory episode states she can lift 3,000 times her own weight. [[ForgotAboutHisPowers She rarely ever]] [[InformedAbility uses this strength]]. In ''Starfleet Humans'', she demonstrates this by dropping a huge boulder onto a hostile dragon's head.
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* SuperStrength: The narration in her introductory episode states she can lift 3,000 times her own weight. [[ForgotAboutHisPowers She rarely ever]] [[InformedAbility ever uses this strength]].strength. In ''Starfleet Humans'', she demonstrates this by dropping a huge boulder onto a hostile dragon's head.
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* OldManMarryingAChild: Implied. [[MayDecemberRomance Topaz is apparently old enough to have gray hair, while his wife is around Lightning's age, and therefore barely 20 at oldest with they reunited.]] The "Child" part comes in with the reveal that they were married ten years before the events of I. [[SincerityMode Not engaged, married.]] [[{{Squick}} Krysta would be a preteen at oldest and Topaz middle-aged at youngest at the time.]] [[NoYay Yikes...]]
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Please read this edit reason. Also used a term that matches up with Paulesqa's gender more and used a gendered redirect. In case I need to mention this, How To Write An Example reveals that's allowed.
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She was separated from her family, her father is an elf leader, and that's it.
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* FlatCharacter: She was separated from her family, her father is an elf leader, and that's it.
Here, she solely exists to be [[DemotedToSatelliteLoveInterest Sea Green's girlfriend]] and rip off The Little Mermaid.
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* FlatCharacter: Here, she solely exists to be [[DemotedToSatelliteLoveInterest Sea Green's girlfriend]] and rip off The Little Mermaid.
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The protagonist of ''Human in United Equestria''.
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The protagonist of ''Human in United Equestria''. His intelligence is his primary character trait, he also cares about his family, and there's not much more to him. While he gets a clear agenda, wanting to unite Earth and United Equestria, he doesn't show it much.
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* FlatCharacter: His intelligence is his primary character trait, he also cares about his family, and there's not much more to him. While he gets a clear agenda, wanting to unite Earth and United Equestria, he doesn't show it much.
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* FlatCharacter: Being evil and vengeful were her only personality traits in "A Tale of Two Sunsets". After her HeelFaceTurn, [[DemotedToSatelliteLoveInterest she drops those in favor of being Artie's]] LoveInterest, [[UpToEleven making her even blander]].
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* FlatCharacter: Being a LoveGoddess is her only character trait.
* OurFairiesAreDifferent: These fairies are tiny, teleporting humanoids who live on the planet Luminous.
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The mayoress of Metro City who gets imprisoned and impersonated by an impostor.
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* FlatCharacter: Have no personalities other than being Mindia's daughters and [[SatelliteLoveInterest having crushes on Dyno and Myte]].
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* PaletteSwap: Of someon's fanart of human Fluttershy apparently.
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* PaletteSwap: Of someon's someone's fanart of human Fluttershy apparently.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Helps Starfleet beat the [=IDIOTs=] in X.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Is expecting one with Artie in X and XI.
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Too Dumb To Live involves someone dying due to their something unintelligent they did.
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* TooDumbToLive: Decides to follow a strange orb of light with the voice of the bad guy, promising her to tell her where she comes from. Unsurprisingly, it turns out to be a trap laid by the bad guy.
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* MeaningfulName: Agapi is derived from [[TheFourLoves agape, the concept of universal, unconditional love.]] [[CriticalResearchFailure However, she seems to be the goddess of romantic love, which is eros.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Agapi is derived from [[TheFourLoves agape, the concept of universal, unconditional love.]] [[CriticalResearchFailure love]]. [[SadlyMythtaken However, she seems to be the goddess of romantic love, which is eros.]]
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Stuffed In The Fridge is now a disambig/fanspeak page and should not be linked in bulleted trope lists.
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* StuffedInTheFridge: [[spoiler:[[FlatCharacter She solely exists as Dearka's]] SatelliteLoveInterest, and is consequently offed to make Dearka turn against Von Devilor.]]
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[[BreadEggsMilkSquick and]] [[invoked]] '''[[{{Squick}} bacillary white diarrhea (baili)]]'''. ''Yikes''.
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* UnfortunateNames: He's named Twink supposedly as a reference to ''Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star'', but "twink" has [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twink_(gay_slang) another meaning...]]
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* UnfortunateNames: Her name sounds close to the Chinese words for a model particle (baliao), to push lightly (bala), [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and]] [[invoked]] '''[[{{Squick}} bacillary white diarrhea (baili)]]'''. ''Yikes''.
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* FlatCharacter: His intelligence is his primary character trait, he also cares about his family, and there's not much more to him.
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* FlatCharacter: His intelligence is his primary character trait, he also cares about his family, and there's not much more to him. While he gets a clear agenda, wanting to unite Earth and United Equestria, he doesn't show it much.
* GrandTheftMe: Switches bodies with Avyanna. [[spoiler:It works in his favor, as planned by Celesto himself.]]
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Supposedly. He gets a sword and a shield powered by purity and courage. He is also more selfless than his pony counterpart in practice.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Supposedly. He gets a sword and a shield powered by purity and courage. He is also more selfless than his pony counterpart in practice.practice, as his goals aren't all about himself.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: Similarly to ''Sonichu'', Mykan has been stealing the spotlight out from under Lightning Dawn, but not (yet) to DemotedToExtra levels. Additionally, his Equestrian counterpart is being played up as a major recurring character in ''VI''.
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: Similarly to ''Sonichu'', Mykan has been stealing the spotlight out from under Lightning Dawn, but not (yet) to DemotedToExtra levels. Additionally, his Equestrian counterpart is being played up as a major recurring character in ''VI''. However, he is '''not''' a core Starfleet member, and [[spoiler:that works in Starfleet's favor as Avyanna would know too many secrets otherwise.]]
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!!Blisstonians
[[folder:In General]]
* BeliefMakesYouStupid: Exist solely to enforce this aesop... [[BrokenAesop only for it to flip on itself to sate Starfleet's ego]].
* BlindObedience: To a higher power of sorts, and it's their sole character trait, which is criticized by [[{{Hypocrite}} Starfleet of all people]].
* HumanAliens: Like most alien species, they're basically humans with technicolor skin.
* PlanetOfHats: Blind faith in a divine power and miracles is the one noteworthy thing about them.
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[[folder:Mindia]]
* DumbBlonde: Is depicted this way thanks to her blind faith in miracles.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: She has long blonde hair and is benevolent, if not very bright.
* LightIsGood: Again, she's a white-skinned blonde alien wearing white and gold robes, and a sun pendant, and she's largely benevolent, if not particularly sharp.
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[[folder:Primm and Prei]]
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Are this to Dyno and Myte.
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Mindia's the Blonde, Primm's the Brunette, and Prei has brown hair but corresponds to the Redhead.
* FlatCharacter: Have no personalities other than being Mindia's daughters and [[SatelliteLoveInterest having crushes on Dyno and Myte]].
* PunnyName: Primm is one letter from "prim", Prei sounds like "pray".
* SatelliteLoveInterest: They are largely defined by their relationships to other people, particularly their crush on Dyno and Myte.
!!Blisstonians
[[folder:In General]]
* BeliefMakesYouStupid: Exist solely to enforce this aesop... [[BrokenAesop only for it to flip on itself to sate Starfleet's ego]].
* BlindObedience: To a higher power of sorts, and it's their sole character trait, which is criticized by [[{{Hypocrite}} Starfleet of all people]].
* HumanAliens: Like most alien species, they're basically humans with technicolor skin.
* PlanetOfHats: Blind faith in a divine power and miracles is the one noteworthy thing about them.
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[[folder:Mindia]]
* DumbBlonde: Is depicted this way thanks to her blind faith in miracles.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: She has long blonde hair and is benevolent, if not very bright.
* LightIsGood: Again, she's a white-skinned blonde alien wearing white and gold robes, and a sun pendant, and she's largely benevolent, if not particularly sharp.
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[[folder:Primm and Prei]]
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Are this to Dyno and Myte.
* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Mindia's the Blonde, Primm's the Brunette, and Prei has brown hair but corresponds to the Redhead.
* FlatCharacter: Have no personalities other than being Mindia's daughters and [[SatelliteLoveInterest having crushes on Dyno and Myte]].
* PunnyName: Primm is one letter from "prim", Prei sounds like "pray".
* SatelliteLoveInterest: They are largely defined by their relationships to other people, particularly their crush on Dyno and Myte.
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!!Metros
[[folder:In General]]
* PlanetOfHats: {{Human Alien}}s who live in a large city and will blindly trust any stranger that sells them something, whether it's [[ObviouslyEvil Titan's forces]] telling them that the suspicious-looking reactor will help power their city or letting the same force they feared ten minutes ago put their outposts in their city and assimilate them into their empire because they saved them from brainwashing. Keep in mind that both Titan and Starfleet are strangers to the Metrosians.
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[[folder:Paulesqa]]
* RapunzelHair: Long black hair.
* FlatCharacter: She's the mayor of Metro City, gets imprisoned and impersonated by an impostor, and that's pretty much it.
!!Metros
[[folder:In General]]
* PlanetOfHats: {{Human Alien}}s who live in a large city and will blindly trust any stranger that sells them something, whether it's [[ObviouslyEvil Titan's forces]] telling them that the suspicious-looking reactor will help power their city or letting the same force they feared ten minutes ago put their outposts in their city and assimilate them into their empire because they saved them from brainwashing. Keep in mind that both Titan and Starfleet are strangers to the Metrosians.
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[[folder:Paulesqa]]
* RapunzelHair: Long black hair.
* FlatCharacter: She's the mayor of Metro City, gets imprisoned and impersonated by an impostor, and that's pretty much it.
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* EvilCounterpart: More like selfish and jerkish counterpart, but he is a complete self-centered person who rejects help in rude ways, and overall a far worse person than human Mykan.
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* TheDitz: Unintentionally comes off as this. Apart from forgetting about her [[ThinkingUpPortals pow]][[SuperStrength ers]], or those of her whole species, more than once, she also tends to [[CaptainObvious state the obvious]], [[TooDumbToLive keeps entering the battlefield while risking getting separated from her kingdom again]], and at one point, [[EpicFail fell for trap so obvious, it got listed in the]] What An Idiot section.
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* ForgotAboutHerPowers: This happens at times, where she doesn't realize she can get the heroes away from danger with her portals or use them to capture the villains until it's too late.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: She's supposed to be a [[DesignatedHero good person]], but in practice, she comes off as kind of a jerk instead.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: She's supposed to be a [[DesignatedHero good person]], but in practice, she comes off as kind of a jerk instead.
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* PaletteSwap: Of someon's fanart of human Fluttershy apparently.
* PinkIsFeminine: Is the only other female member of the original team and wears a pink dress and slippers, even in her royal outfit.
* PinkIsFeminine: Is the only other female member of the original team and wears a pink dress and slippers, even in her royal outfit.
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* SuicidalPacifism: They no longer wish to be warriors. Thus, they [[TooDumbToLive disband their whole army and surrender themselves to another kingdom for protection. Said kingdom has an army less competent than the Ainzulian one.]] The results are predictable.
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* TooDumbToLive: Just like Ainzul, they give up their entire military to Starfleet. Also like Ainzul, they still go through with the treaty, even after Starfleet display their incompetence by [[spoiler:failing a mission to protect a single person (Calista)]].
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* TooDumbToLive: Giving up their military so an empire which believes they are the superior species is beyond foolish, especially when said empire proves [[spoiler:incapable of containing for ten minutes a demon whom Ainzul could hold for ten thousand years. Ainzul still doesn't call off the treaty.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Giving up their military so to an empire which believes they are the superior species is beyond foolish, especially when said empire proves [[spoiler:incapable of containing for ten minutes a demon whom Ainzul could hold for ten thousand years. Ainzul still doesn't call off the treaty.]]
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* TooDumbToLive: Giving up their military so an empire which believes they are the superior species is beyond foolish, especially when said empire proves [[spoiler:incapable of containing for ten minutes a demon whom Ainzul could hold for ten thousand years. Ainzul still doesn't call off the treaty.]]
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* AssholeVictim: He would have far less trouble with Windy Bag if he didn't insist on isolating himself from everyone and blame innocents for allegedly wanting to hurt him. [[spoiler:He dies when, in a fit of rage, axes Windy Bag and her machine to near death for selfish reasons and the machine explodes.]]
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* AssholeVictim: He would have far less trouble with Windy Bag if he didn't insist on isolating himself from everyone and blame innocents for allegedly wanting to hurt him. [[spoiler:He dies when, in a fit of rage, he axes Windy Bag and her machine to near death for selfish reasons and the machine explodes.]]
* LackOfEmpathy: Has no problem attacking the CMC even though they're just kids, and when Starfleet tries to help him, he still antagonizes them.
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* AssholeVictim: He would have far less trouble with Windy Bag if he didn't insist on isolating himself from everyone and blame innocents for allegedly wanting to hurt him. [[spoiler:He dies when, in a fit of rage, axes Windy Bag and her machine to near death for selfish reasons and the machine explodes.]]
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* ItsAllAboutMe: As far as he's concerned, only ''he'' can understand his own problems. Anyone else that tries is only trying to intrude on him, take advantage of him, or both.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: As far as he's concerned, only ''he'' can understand his own problems. Anyone else that tries is only trying to intrude on him, take advantage of him, or both. Even after he charges at Windy Bag, he only does so for completely selfish reasons.
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* TookALevelInKindness: When he realizes the only one who has wronged him was Windy Bag, he focuses his wrath on her and '''apologizes to everybody else''' for his attitude. He still does not become nice, but it is an improvement.
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* GoodIsNotNice: He is pure of heart on paper, selfless for an AuthorAvatar in practice, but still very rude to strangers and people he doesn't like.
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* FlatCharacter: His intelligence is his primary character trait, and there's not much more to him.
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* IncorruptiblePurePureness: Supposedly. He gets a sword and a shield powered by purity and courage. He is also more selfless than his pony counterpart in practice.
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* TakingTheBullet: [[spoiler:Titan has cornered him and Starfleet, and Mykan threw his sword to stop the source of his power. Titan shot at the sword, but Mykan took the hit instead and the generator broke.]]
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* FlatCharacter: She's Lightning's FairyCompanion and later the queen of fairies, and that's basically all the characterization she gets as she lacks actual character. She has an arc of trying to find her home, does get some competence, but after that she plays the trope straight.
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* FlatCharacter: She's Lightning's FairyCompanion and later the queen of fairies, and that's basically all the characterization she gets as she lacks actual character. She has an arc of trying to find her home, does get some competence, but after that that, she plays the trope straight.
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* GratituousGreek: Possibly. Agapi ("Αγάπη") means "Love" in Greek.
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* GratituousGreek: GratuitousGreek: Possibly. Agapi ("Αγάπη") means "Love" in Greek.
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* TheParanoiac: He thinks the entire world is apathetic to him at best and out to get him at worst, resulting in him holing himself up in his family home with numerous deterrents to keep outsiders away.
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* TheParanoiac: He thinks the entire world is apathetic to him at best and out to get him at worst, resulting in him holing himself up in his family home with numerous deterrents to keep outsiders away. [[spoiler:He realizes he is wrong and nobody but Windy Bag is out to get him. He focuses his malice on her.]]
* GratituousGreek: Possibly. Agapi ("Αγάπη") means "Love" in Greek.
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* PintSizedPowerhouse: They can teleport and they supposedly also have super strength.
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* PintSizedPowerhouse: They can teleport and they supposedly also have super strength.strength, at least for their tiny size.
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* FlatCharacter: She's Lightning's FairyCompanion and later the queen of fairies, and that's basically all the characterization she gets as she lacks actual character.
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* FlatCharacter: She's Lightning's FairyCompanion and later the queen of fairies, and that's basically all the characterization she gets as she lacks actual character. She has an arc of trying to find her home, does get some competence, but after that she plays the trope straight.
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* ActionGirl: She proves to be even stronger than Starfleet, [[spoiler:killing Von Devilor personally.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: When he realizes the only one who has wronged him was Windy Bag, he focuses his wrath on her and '''apologizes to everybody else''' for his attitude.
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* UngratefulBastard: ''So much''. Even though Starfleet attempts to help him, he never responds favorably and tries his level best to get them off his back.
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* UngratefulBastard: ''So much''. Even though Starfleet attempts to help him, he never responds favorably and tries his level best to get them off his back. Except when it turns out [[spoiler:Celestia, the Elements and Starfleet never wronged him and it was all Windy Bag. Then [[ItsPersonal he charges at her in the front lines.]]]]
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* {{Expy}}: Is named after the main character of Ferngully and appearance-wise is pretty much Fluttershy with her mane and coat color swapped, and in human form.
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* {{Expy}}: Is named after the main character of Ferngully and appearance-wise is pretty much Fluttershy with her mane and coat color swapped, and in human form. She also resembles Navi from Zelda a lot in her first appearance.
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* LetsGetDangerous: After getting kidnapped or otherwise being a [[TheLoad load]] for an entire season, she [[spoiler:saves all heroes in the final battle by cleverly using portals to reflect the Uniforce at Titan, in one of the best moments of anyone in the series.]]
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--> “You a warping fairy, from the planet Luminous, just like me. We warping fairies, although small possess extraordinary powers. Not only are we able to lift very heavy things-- up to three-thousand times our own weight-- we possess the ability to do just as our class suggests. We warp the energy around us for offense and defense, and we also have the power to create instant portals that can teleport us and any parties to any location within range, even way out in space.”
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* TeleportersAndTransporters: When she reclaims her position among the fairies, Krysta learns to use the teleportation magic inherent to her species.
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* TeleportersAndTransporters: ThinkingUpPortals: When she reclaims her position among the fairies, Krysta learns to use the teleportation magic inherent to her species.species. As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/373378/19/my-brave-pony-starfleet-magic-season-i/episode-18-queen-of-the-fairies Season 1, Chapter 18]]:
--> “You a warping fairy, from the planet Luminous, just like me. We warping fairies, although small possess extraordinary powers. Not only are we able to lift very heavy things-- up to three-thousand times our own weight-- we possess the ability to do just as our class suggests. We warp the energy around us for offense and defense, and we also have the power to create instant portals that can teleport us and any parties to any location within range, even way out in space.”
--> “You a warping fairy, from the planet Luminous, just like me. We warping fairies, although small possess extraordinary powers. Not only are we able to lift very heavy things-- up to three-thousand times our own weight-- we possess the ability to do just as our class suggests. We warp the energy around us for offense and defense, and we also have the power to create instant portals that can teleport us and any parties to any location within range, even way out in space.”