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* MakeMeWannaShout: His Thunder Roar, though most of it includes shocks of electricity, could count as this.
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* PeekABangs - shy variation
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!Hemtry
* CutenessProximity: Particularly with Kailey, who is very eager to insist that Hemtry must mean no harm due to his adorable puffball appearance.
* DevilInPlainSight: Despite using a cute disguise, Hemtry acts fairly suspicious from the start as he follows Klaus around. Before long, he outright lets his guise down in front of Diane to berate her for meddling in his plans.
* CutenessProximity: Particularly with Kailey, who is very eager to insist that Hemtry must mean no harm due to his adorable puffball appearance.
* DevilInPlainSight: Despite using a cute disguise, Hemtry acts fairly suspicious from the start as he follows Klaus around. Before long, he outright lets his guise down in front of Diane to berate her for meddling in his plans.
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!"Fluffeh"
http://jnluvadarkspyro11.deviantart.com/art/He-s-So-Fluffeh-466757890 - picture
* CutenessProximity
* [[spoiler: DevilInPlainSight: In one preview [[http://jnluvadarkspyro11.deviantart.com/journal/LD-S1-Preview-2-485438266 here]]]]
http://jnluvadarkspyro11.deviantart.com/art/He-s-So-Fluffeh-466757890 - picture
* CutenessProximity
* [[spoiler: DevilInPlainSight: In one preview [[http://jnluvadarkspyro11.deviantart.com/journal/LD-S1-Preview-2-485438266 here]]]]
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[[folder: Villians of Dellville]]
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[[folder: Villians Villains of Dellville]]
!Doctor Zero
A foolish lesser-villain scientist with a vendetta of sorts against Klaus, following Dr. Zero's failure to kill him when he was a baby when Josh Sharman hired him to do so.
* DitzyGenius: Though he's smart on a technical level and has built various impressive machines, he's generally rather thick when it comes to much else.
A foolish lesser-villain scientist with a vendetta of sorts against Klaus, following Dr. Zero's failure to kill him when he was a baby when Josh Sharman hired him to do so.
* DitzyGenius: Though he's smart on a technical level and has built various impressive machines, he's generally rather thick when it comes to much else.
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!Elanor Arcson
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The currently unborn (as of typing this) baby of Arnold and Elanor Arcson, and Andy's younger sibling.
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The currently unborn (as of typing this) baby of Arnold and Elanor Eleanor Arcson, and Andy's younger sibling.
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* TeamMom
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* TeamMomTeamMom: Due to the death of Klaus’s mother, Diane serves as a maternal figure for him.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Diane can shapeshift however she pleases [[spoiler:due to being an extraterrestrial]]. She generally prefers her current human form however.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Diane can shapeshift however she pleases [[spoiler:due to being an extraterrestrial]]. She generally prefers her current human form however.
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* TheBigGuy - Is the muscle of The Clique.
* JerkJock - Presumably.
* JerkJock - Presumably.
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* TheBigGuy - TheBigGuy: Is the muscle of The Clique.
*JerkJock - JerkJock: Presumably.
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!Tenehkai “Kai”
A bird-demon who Klaus forms a bond with.
* GiantFlyer: Kai’s true appearance is that of a red/orange bird the size of a building.
!Gale and Firebolt
A sentient cloud whom Crystal Eye apprehended over a misunderstanding involving the former’s powers. He is rarely seen without his pet “dog” Firebolt.
* ElementalEmbodiment: Gale is made entirely of dark gray storm clouds, and likes to put on dazzling shows with his [[ShockAndAwe lightning mastery]]. His pet Firebolt is also one, being pure electricity.
* EyeColourChange: Gale’s eyes change color depending on his mood, with his normal eye color being purple with white pupils.
A bird-demon who Klaus forms a bond with.
* GiantFlyer: Kai’s true appearance is that of a red/orange bird the size of a building.
!Gale and Firebolt
A sentient cloud whom Crystal Eye apprehended over a misunderstanding involving the former’s powers. He is rarely seen without his pet “dog” Firebolt.
* ElementalEmbodiment: Gale is made entirely of dark gray storm clouds, and likes to put on dazzling shows with his [[ShockAndAwe lightning mastery]]. His pet Firebolt is also one, being pure electricity.
* EyeColourChange: Gale’s eyes change color depending on his mood, with his normal eye color being purple with white pupils.
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[[folder: Unrevealed characters]]
These characters have yet to appear in the story. As such, SPOILER WARNING! This section, contrary to the page disclaimer, is so Spoiler-proof, that adding tropes prior to the character's reveal is expressly forbidden without the author's permission
!"Cloud-Boy" [[spoiler: Real name is Gale]]
A boy who appears to be made of sentient cloud.
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!"Sparky"
A dog-shaped electric spark
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These characters have yet to appear in the story. As such, SPOILER WARNING! This section, contrary to the page disclaimer, is so Spoiler-proof, that adding tropes prior to the character's reveal is expressly forbidden without the author's permission
!"Cloud-Boy" [[spoiler: Real name is Gale]]
A boy who appears to be made of sentient cloud.
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!"Sparky"
A dog-shaped electric spark
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These characters have
!"Cloud-Boy" [[spoiler: Real name is Gale]]
A boy who appears to be made of sentient cloud.
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!"Sparky"
A dog-shaped electric spark
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Dewicked trope
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* AdultFear: James does honestly care about Klaus, and understandably flips out whenever he is captured.
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* SkunkStripe: Has a died blue stripe of hair.
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* AdultFear: James does honsestly care about Klaus, and understandably flips out whenever he is captured.
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* AdultFear: James does honsestly honestly care about Klaus, and understandably flips out whenever he is captured.
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More accurate.
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* PowerDyesYourHair: Lightning Dust's hair is electric yellow due to the electricity coursing through it and heating every strand to yellow-hot (similar to the filament in a light bulb-and that's around 2426 degrees Celsius, or 4400 degrees Fahrenheit), effectively turning it into ElementalHair.
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* PowerDyesYourHair: Lightning Dust's hair is electric yellow due to the electricity coursing through it and heating every strand to yellow-hot (similar to the filament in a light bulb-and that's around 2426 degrees Celsius, or 4400 degrees Fahrenheit), effectively turning it into ElementalHair.having ElementalHairComposition.
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* TheLancer: Acts as one for Lightning Dust
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: "Simply put, James is bi." - Author
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* PurpleEyes: Averted. While Arnold HAS purple eyes, they are not mentioned in-story and only appear in his character portrait (right)
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** GemstoneAssault
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** GemstoneAssaultGemstoneAssault: Crystal Eye can summon forth blue crystals from the ground and launch them at a target. He can also form them into a crystalline golem
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* SpoiledSweet: Klaus may be rich, but overall, he's a nice kid!
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** HandBlast/GemstoneAssault
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** HandBlast/GemstoneAssaultHandBlast
** GemstoneAssault
** GemstoneAssault
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%%* BrownEyes: They represent that she's one of the sanest and grounded characters
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* BrownEyes
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* BrownEyes: They represent that she's one of the sanest and grounded characters
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