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Those are reversed. Holly, Jotaro's mother, would be Jonathan's great-granddaughter.
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Joseph's [[TheStoic stoic]] grandson, as well as Jonathan's great-grandson. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventureJotaroKujo here]] for more details.
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Joseph's [[TheStoic stoic]] grandson, as well as Jonathan's great-grandson.great-great-grandson. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventureJotaroKujo here]] for more details.
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The friendly, outgoing son of Joseph, and the great-great-grandson of Jonathan. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventureDiamondIsUnbreakableHeroes here]] for more details.
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The friendly, outgoing son of Joseph, and the great-great-grandson great-grandson of Jonathan. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventureDiamondIsUnbreakableHeroes here]] for more details.
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* WouldntHitAGirl: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], since he was raised in 19th-century England.
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* WouldntHitAGirl: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], since he was raised in 19th-century England. Downplayed, as he soon (''very'' reluctantly) gets over his hang ups upon realising there is no other option that wouldn't put others in danger.
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* BritishStuffiness: He tries to keep a reserved, civil demeanor, but occasionally slips, such as [[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughing at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense.
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* BritishStuffiness: He tries to keep a reserved, civil civil, gentlemanly demeanor, but occasionally slips, such as [[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughing at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense.
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* BadassAdorable: A well-mannered, sincere, sweet-tempered, and kindhearted BoyNextDoor who can take on vampires, and is the strongest non-stand user in the Joestar Family.
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* BadassAdorable: A He's a well-mannered, sincere, sweet-tempered, and kindhearted sweet-tempered BoyNextDoor who can take on vampires, and is the strongest non-stand user in the Joestar Family.
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--> ''(to Jolyne)'' "You may tell me anything you wish, and I will promise not to judge you, I will only lend my ears. ''(reaches up and pulls at his ears)'' ...And believe me, they are large enough to listen to you for however long you like."
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* BritishStuffiness: He tries to keep a reserved, civil demeanor, but occasionally slips, such as[[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughing at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense, or his giddiness over Jotaro's blankets.
--> '''Jonathan:''' ''(to Jolyne)'' You may tell me anything you wish, and I will promise not to judge you, I will only lend my ears. ''(reaches up and pulls at his ears)'' ...And believe me, they are large enough to listen to you for however long you like.
--> '''Jonathan:''' ''(to Jolyne)'' You may tell me anything you wish, and I will promise not to judge you, I will only lend my ears. ''(reaches up and pulls at his ears)'' ...And believe me, they are large enough to listen to you for however long you like.
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* BritishStuffiness: He tries to keep a reserved, civil demeanor, but occasionally slips, such as[[ActuallyPrettyFunny as [[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughing at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense, or his giddiness over Jotaro's blankets.
--> '''Jonathan:'''sense.
--> ''(to Jolyne)''You "You may tell me anything you wish, and I will promise not to judge you, I will only lend my ears. ''(reaches up and pulls at his ears)'' ...And believe me, they are large enough to listen to you for however long you like."
--> '''Jonathan:'''
--> ''(to Jolyne)''
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* BritishStuffiness: Averted. He [[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughs at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense, and he's been shown to have a good sense of humor.
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* BritishStuffiness: Averted. He [[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughs tries to keep a reserved, civil demeanor, but occasionally slips, such as[[ActuallyPrettyFunny laughing at]] Jolyne's insult of high-school Jotaro's fashion sense, and he's been shown to have a good sense of humor.or his giddiness over Jotaro's blankets.
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* HumbleHero: He states that his Hamon, the ability to ''harness [[PowerOfTheSun energy from the sun]] and turn it into electricity,'' isn't that impressive.
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* HumbleHero: He states that his Hamon, the ability to ''harness [[PowerOfTheSun energy from the sun]] and [[ShockAndAwe turn it into electricity,'' electricity]],'' isn't that impressive.
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* {{Manchild}}: Downplayed. He reacts with childlike glee upon being in Japan with Jotaro, as he'd never gotten the chance to travel before.
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A kindhearted aristocrat hailing from VictorianLondon, and the main protagonist of the fic. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood here]] for more details.
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A kindhearted aristocrat [[QuintessentialBritishGentleman kindhearted]] [[SpoiledSweet aristocrat]] hailing from VictorianLondon, and the main protagonist of the fic. Click [[Characters/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood here]] for more details.
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* InnocentBlueEyes: Befitting his status as a NiceGuy.
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* UnstoppableRage: Flies into this when he finds out about his parentage and nearly kills Older Joseph.
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* UnstoppableRage: Flies into this when he finds out about his parentage and nearly kills Older Joseph. It makes him rather similar to Jonathan when he flew into one regarding Dio.
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%%* BritsLoveTea: ''Obviously.''
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%%* SpotOfTea: ''Obviously.''
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* TeamDad: He's usually the one to defuse the team's various conflicts. Take this scene, for example:
-->'''Jotaro:''' Shut up, gramps.
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' G-"Gramps"?! Don't call me that, you damn ''punk!''
-->'''Jotaro:''' I said ''shut up,'' old man.
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' What, don't like being called what you ''are?'' An uncontrolled, delinquent son of a-
-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(cutting him off)'' Joseph! ''(places a hand on Young!Joseph's shoulder, and pushes him away from Jotaro)'' Now, now, we are a family. We must ''treat'' each other like one, and I do not know what a "punk" is, but if Jotaro doesn't like being called that, or a delinquent, which he most certainly is ''not,'' then please do not do so. The same goes for you too, Jotaro. Please treat your grandfather ''respectfully.''
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' B-But ''grandpa!'' He literally ''socked you in the jaw'' and you're ''taking his side?!''
-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(shakes his head)'' Joseph, he merely did what he had to do in order to calm me down. If anything, it was my ''own'' fault for acting so brash and letting my anger consume me. I am not taking anyone's side, I'm asking you both respectfully to treat each other with kindness. ''(turns to Jotaro)'' I cannot control what either of you do, even if I am your grandfather, but please refrain from calling each other names that make you both angry. Let's try to get along!
-->'''Jotaro:''' Shut up, gramps.
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' G-"Gramps"?! Don't call me that, you damn ''punk!''
-->'''Jotaro:''' I said ''shut up,'' old man.
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' What, don't like being called what you ''are?'' An uncontrolled, delinquent son of a-
-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(cutting him off)'' Joseph! ''(places a hand on Young!Joseph's shoulder, and pushes him away from Jotaro)'' Now, now, we are a family. We must ''treat'' each other like one, and I do not know what a "punk" is, but if Jotaro doesn't like being called that, or a delinquent, which he most certainly is ''not,'' then please do not do so. The same goes for you too, Jotaro. Please treat your grandfather ''respectfully.''
-->'''Young!Joseph:''' B-But ''grandpa!'' He literally ''socked you in the jaw'' and you're ''taking his side?!''
-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(shakes his head)'' Joseph, he merely did what he had to do in order to calm me down. If anything, it was my ''own'' fault for acting so brash and letting my anger consume me. I am not taking anyone's side, I'm asking you both respectfully to treat each other with kindness. ''(turns to Jotaro)'' I cannot control what either of you do, even if I am your grandfather, but please refrain from calling each other names that make you both angry. Let's try to get along!
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* TeamDad: He's usually the one to defuse the team's various conflicts. Take this scene, for example:\n-->'''Jotaro:''' Shut up, gramps.\n\n-->'''Young!Joseph:''' G-"Gramps"?! Don't call me that, you damn ''punk!''\n\n-->'''Jotaro:''' I said ''shut up,'' old man.\n\n-->'''Young!Joseph:''' What, don't like being called what you ''are?'' An uncontrolled, delinquent son of a-\n\n-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(cutting him off)'' Joseph! ''(places a hand on Young!Joseph's shoulder, and pushes him away from Jotaro)'' Now, now, we are a family. We must ''treat'' each other like one, and I do not know what a "punk" is, but if Jotaro doesn't like being called that, or a delinquent, which he most certainly is ''not,'' then please do not do so. The same goes for you too, Jotaro. Please treat your grandfather ''respectfully.''\n\n-->'''Young!Joseph:''' B-But ''grandpa!'' He literally ''socked you in the jaw'' and you're ''taking his side?!''\n\n-->'''Jonathan:''' ''(shakes his head)'' Joseph, he merely did what he had to do in order to calm me down. If anything, it was my ''own'' fault for acting so brash and letting my anger consume me. I am not taking anyone's side, I'm asking you both respectfully to treat each other with kindness. ''(turns to Jotaro)'' I cannot control what either of you do, even if I am your grandfather, but please refrain from calling each other names that make you both angry. Let's try to get along!
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Or in this case, purple.