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* Badass: While serving as a grunt on the Shieldwall, he was raised to the House of Valiar for exceptional bravery, making a OneManArmy raid deep into Icemen territory to save children.
** At one point, he takes a javelin in the gut. What does he do? Try to pry it out; when that doesn't work, he cuts down the shaft to make himself more comfortable, and continues giving orders and fighting until he passes out.
** At one point, he takes a javelin in the gut. What does he do? Try to pry it out; when that doesn't work, he cuts down the shaft to make himself more comfortable, and continues giving orders and fighting until he passes out.
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[[spoiler:GoodFeelsGood]]: Part of why he ends up BecomingTheMask; it's plainly obvious that Valiar Marcus, [[SergeantRock First Spear]] of the First Aleran, in a BandOfBrothers, is a ''lot'' happier than Fideliax ex Cursori.
*HeelFaceRevolvingDoorHeelFaceRevolvingDoor: Started out on the side of the Big Bad, then switched to the First Aleran, then almost to the Big Bad's dragon, before sticking to Tavi.
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* SergeantRock: Oh yes. There's a reason he's First Spear.
** OldSoldier: The most experienced legionnaire in the First Aleran. At one point, Tavi is about to give him orders, and changes his mind. "Nevermind. The First Spear knows what to do."
** OldSoldier: The most experienced legionnaire in the First Aleran. At one point, Tavi is about to give him orders, and changes his mind. "Nevermind. The First Spear knows what to do."
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* ConsummateLiar: As he said to [[LivingLieDetector Odiana]]: "Yes. No. I am seventeen years old. The sky is green. My real name is Gundred."
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* ConsummateLiar: As he said to [[LivingLieDetector Odiana]]: "Yes. No."Yes, I do. No, I don't. The sky is green. I am seventeen years old. The sky is green. My real name is Gundred."
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* GeniusBruiser: He's both one of the smartest and physically most powerful characters in the books- and considering [[GambitPileup this]] [[WorldOfBadass series]], that's saying something.
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* LivingLieDetector: She sees through ''[[MagnificentBastard Gaius]]'' at one point.
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* LivingLieDetector: She sees through ''[[MagnificentBastard Gaius]]'' Gaius Sextus]]'' at one point.
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* MeaningfulName Two! meaningful names [[spoiler: Gaius Octavian meaning both the son of Septimus and is the proper name of EmperorAugustus]]
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* MeaningfulName MeaningfulName: Two! meaningful names [[spoiler: Gaius Octavian meaning both the son of Septimus and is the proper name of EmperorAugustus]]
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** This is the man who [spoiler: made ships out of ''icebergs'' and attached runners to ships to make them work over ice]].
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** This is the man who [spoiler: made ships out of ''icebergs'' and attached runners to ships to make them work over ice]].
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That\'s not a Supporting Leader
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* TheAragorn: Almost every book involves him saving people's asses while Tavi gets to the bottom of things.
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* BlowYouAway: An [[AvatarTheLastAirbender Air Bend]]- Um. Crafter.
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* BlowYouAway: An [[AvatarTheLastAirbender [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender Air Bend]]- Um. Crafter.
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* DistressedDamsel: If there's a situation where she can be kidnapped and/or swoon, she'll take full advantage of it. Lampshaded:
-> At some point I would like a few weeks to go by in which I do not faint during a crisis.
-> At some point I would like a few weeks to go by in which I do not faint during a crisis.
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Added example: Gaius starts shooting the dog a little earlier than his demise. Maybe that explains the mass hatred?
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** When his character is introduced, takes a potshot: he cheerfully admits he is willing to sacrifice a loyal retainer to test the fidelity of another one. And he assumed the loyal one would lose the fight.
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* MagnificentBastard: He's a stylish Chessmaster with oodles of personal charisma- [[spoiler: but he's not as Magnificent as Sextus.]]
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* CrazyAwesome: I mean, good lord. He stops in the middle of a battle to sit in front of the gates and play chess with the enemy commander.
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* StoicWoobie: Araris seems to get injured a lot, and that's not even counting his [[FailureKnight motivations]] behind his alternate, ObfuscatingStupidity persona. But he really doesn't show his emotions to anyone but Isana, and that's after some serious empathic prodding.
** [[spoiler:Even as Fade, he can't catch a break; he tends to get picked on a lot, despite the fact that he seems to be pretty helpful around the house. Even Bernard is pretty curt with him.]]
** [[spoiler:Even as Fade, he can't catch a break; he tends to get picked on a lot, despite the fact that he seems to be pretty helpful around the house. Even Bernard is pretty curt with him.]]
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** Since he's a combination of Chessmaster and Manipulative Bastard, doesn't that really just make him a MagnificentBastard?
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* CompensatingForSomething: Lady Placida mentions he had a little problem bedding women back at the academy. Either he was impotent or he just was bastard.
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* MoralEventHorizon: ''Pole-vaults'' over it and keeps running. No [[CrossesTheLineTwice second crossing]].
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* EvilIsSexy: When the person who you've kidnapped and are about to rape notices how handsome you are, I believe you fufill this trope.
** The mind control collar helped.
** The mind control collar helped.
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* MoralEventHorizon: His father's brainwashing technique was already NightmareFuel, but Brencis just ''had'' to use it to [[spoiler:create willing slaves for the Vord...]]
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* EvilIsSexy: Considering she looks like a [[GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe green]] Kitai.
** YourMileageMayVary: She's ''almost'' this trope, but with just enough insectile features to throw her headfirst into the UncannyValley.
** YourMileageMayVary: She's ''almost'' this trope, but with just enough insectile features to throw her headfirst into the UncannyValley.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: ''Yeeesh''.
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* UncannyValley: Her attempts to act human don't exactly work out.
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* [=~The Ugly Guy's Hot Daughter~=]: Doroga is a bit fugly, but still pretty cool.
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* [=~You Didn't Ask~=]: When Tavi goes to explain that [[spoiler:Isana is actually his mother]], Varg's response is basically, "Yes, I know. I can smell it." He then goes on to mention that [[spoiler:he knew Tavi was the First Lord's grandson since he'd first met him]]; he just figured he shouldn't say anything, because who knew what those crazy Alerans were thinking and maybe it was normal.
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* [=~You Didn't Ask~=]: YouDidntAsk: When Tavi goes to explain that [[spoiler:Isana is actually his mother]], Varg's response is basically, "Yes, I know. I can smell it." He then goes on to mention that [[spoiler:he knew Tavi was the First Lord's grandson since he'd first met him]]; he just figured he shouldn't say anything, because who knew what those crazy Alerans were thinking and maybe it was normal.
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* [[spoiler:BroughtDownToBadass: Isana's well-intentioned spell may have made him the butt of jokes everywhere, but we can't deny he was able to compensate.]]
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And now I find that when I read Magnus, he\'s portrayed in my mind by Christopher Lloyd.
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* TheyCalledMeMad: Magnus invokes this when celebrating the success of his and Tavi's furycraft-free catapult at the beginning of ''Cursor's Fury''. (Magnus isn't exactly a [[MadScientist Mad Historian]], but to be fair, the fools at the Academy ''did'' call him mad.)
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* [[HumanityIsInsane Alerans Are Insane]]: Routinely points out the irrationality of human society. Tavi generally agrees.
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* TheChessmaster: Metaphorically as well as literally.
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* TheChessmaster: Metaphorically as well as literally. Even ''the First Lord'' takes a couple of lessons from him.
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* SuperStrength: As a result of his chala being a gargant. Most clearly demonstrated in the first book, where he picks up a ''coffin-sized boulder and throws it''. And even manages to hit his target.
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* TheCaligula: Equally, one can't deny that this guy is a few ''legionares'' short of an army, IfYouKnowWhatIMean...
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* TheSwordmaster: Widely renowned as the single greatest swordsman in Alera.
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* TheSwordmaster: Widely renowned as the single greatest swordsman in Alera.
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** Gets even better: This may, in fact, be a house-name granted to him for services, as Valiar is a house-name granted for being valiant. One person jokes that Valiar could be in House Faithful...
*** It isn't. The house-name for the House of the Faithful is Fidelar.
*** It isn't. The house-name for the House of the Faithful is Fidelar.
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* LightningBruiser: Swords barely scratch her, she's as fast as a Windcrafter and as strong as an Earthcrafter.
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* LightningBruiser: Swords barely scratch her, she's as fast as a Windcrafter and as strong as an Earthcrafter. And that's ''before'' she learns how to furycraft.
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Probably the greatest and most powerful fury in existence, and effectively the incarnation of the entire country.continent. She's taken a fondness to the house of Gaius, acting as a SpiritAdvisor to them and causing effects on a massive scale when they ask and it suits her. However, she will not directly aid one side over another; using her power effectively relies on setting up situations where some outside influence helps your side more than the other.
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The other main candidate (besides Aquitainus) as the First Lord's successor. The province of Kalere is one of the few where slavery is still rampant, and Kalerus has taken the twisted furycrafting of slave collars and weaponised it.
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The other main candidate (besides Aquitainus) as the First Lord's successor. The province of Kalere Kalare is one of the few where slavery is still rampant, and Kalerus Kalarus has taken the twisted furycrafting of slave collars and weaponised it.
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Son of Lord Kalerus and classmate of Tavi's at the Academy - where he was a vicous bully. Hasn't improved since.
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Son of Lord Kalerus Kalarus and classmate of Tavi's at the Academy - where he was a vicous bully. Hasn't improved since.
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*** It isn't. The house-name for the House of the Faithful is Fidelar.
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Pettanko is not a trope. It is a fanspeak definition page. Small chests are not a trope. Please do not link it as a trope. The actual tropes are A Cup Angst and Petite Pride.
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* {{Pettanko}}: Tavi [[SamusIsAGirl thought she was male when they first met]]. Of course, they were both barely pubescent at that point; she [[SheIsAllGrownUp gradually fills out]].
* ACupAngst: She was always a little peeved that her body looked more like that of a young girl than that of a full-grown woman. This, in fact, made her think that she'd never attract a[[spoiler: nother]] man.
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* {{Pettanko}}: She was always a little peeved that her body looked more like that of a young girl than that of a full-grown woman. This, in fact, made her think that she'd never attract a[[spoiler: nother]] man.