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-> The Magical Girl whose voluntary outting and attempted suicide uncovers the existence of Magical Girls to the world and other Magical Girls
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-> The Magical Girl whose voluntary outting outing and attempted suicide uncovers reveals the existence of Magical Girls to the world and other Magical Girls
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* ParentalAbandonment: The Yamaguchis thought their daughter was becoming a drug addicted delinquent, what with the unexplained injuries, missed school, being out all hours of the night etc, and basically kicked her out. It'll be interesting if they meet up again after Akiko outs herself as an MG and tries to kill herself on live TV.
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* ParentalAbandonment: The Yamaguchis thought their daughter was becoming a drug addicted drug-addicted delinquent, what with the unexplained injuries, missed school, being out all hours of the night etc, and basically kicked her out. It'll be interesting if they meet up again after Akiko outs herself as an MG and tries to kill herself on live TV.
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How To Write An Example - Don't Write Reviews
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* CombatPragmatist: How many Magical Girls can ''you'' name that use ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome cement trucks]]'' to kill a MonsterOfTheWeek? [[note]] Besides, Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica [[/note]]
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* CombatPragmatist: How many Magical Girls can ''you'' name that use ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome She used cement trucks]]'' trucks to kill a MonsterOfTheWeek? [[note]] Besides, Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica [[/note]]MonsterOfTheWeek.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Damarri [[TearJerker was killed]] five years prior to the start by Akiko's previous enemy, the [[CircusOfFear Carnival of Blood]].
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* PosthumousCharacter: Damarri [[TearJerker was killed]] killed five years prior to the start by Akiko's previous enemy, the [[CircusOfFear Carnival of Blood]].
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Clarifying, since the brevity makes it hard to tell who was doing the stomping.
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* CurbstompBattle: VS Dusty.
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* CurbstompBattle: VS Dusty.[[Literature/SailorNothing Dusty]], who easily thrashes the little rodent, even snapping his neck right at the start (not that this helps much); even after Jasper starts mutating into abominable forms to try and fight better, the old cat-familiar ''still' hands him his ass.
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* ParentsAsPeople: They tossed their daughter into a reform school, but they weren't prepared to deal with a girl who couldn't explain her bruises.
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* CombatPragmatist: How many Magical Girls can ''you'' name that use ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome cement trucks]]'' to kill a MonsterOfTheWeek?
** [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Well.....]]
* DrivenToSuicide: What starts the whole thing off.
** [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Well.....]]
* DrivenToSuicide: What starts the whole thing off.
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* CombatPragmatist: How many Magical Girls can ''you'' name that use ''[[CrowningMomentOfAwesome cement trucks]]'' to kill a MonsterOfTheWeek?
** [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Well.....]]
MonsterOfTheWeek? [[note]] Besides, Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica [[/note]]
* DrivenToSuicide: What starts the whole thingoff.off is her very public skydiving without a parachute.
** [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Well.....]]
* DrivenToSuicide: What starts the whole thing
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* PostHumousCharacter: Damarri [[TearJerker was killed]] five years prior to the start by Akiko's previous enemy, the [[CircusOfFear Carnival of Blood]].
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* PostHumousCharacter: PosthumousCharacter: Damarri [[TearJerker was killed]] five years prior to the start by Akiko's previous enemy, the [[CircusOfFear Carnival of Blood]].
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Subverted - Akiko stopped gaining powers when [[MentorMascot Damarri]] died. At the start of the story she's effectively fighting season 3/4 level enemies with only early season 2 equivilant powers.
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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Subverted - Akiko stopped gaining powers when [[MentorMascot Damarri]] died. At the start of the story she's effectively fighting season 3/4 level Season 3/4-level enemies with only early season 2 equivilant Season 2-equivalent powers.
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* ChewToy: For Jasper after his plots were defeated by the {{Sailor Nothing}} crew.
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* ChewToy: For Jasper after his plots were defeated by the {{Sailor Nothing}} Literature/SailorNothing crew.
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* EldritchLocation: The individual factories of the Nightmare Factory. Anyone that walks in will be scanned for what would make the most effect on their psychies. While the nightmares are prepped, the victims are subjected to AlienGeometries, [[EnclosedSpace Enclosed Spaces]], and various [[SinisterScrapingSound haunting]] [[HearingVoices sounds]] to keep them off edge. The only way to survive going into one is to either have already dealt with your darkest fear(s) beforehand and be able to NoSell what is given to you, or prey that the Nightmare makes a mistake in the middle of the act. The latter is how [[LyricalNanoha Vita]] [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=5723182&postcount=1232 was able to become the]] [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Magical Girl]] during [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness the botched first raid]] on the Nightmare Factory.
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* EldritchLocation: The individual factories of the Nightmare Factory. Anyone that walks in will be scanned for what would make the most effect on their psychies. While the nightmares are prepped, the victims are subjected to AlienGeometries, [[EnclosedSpace Enclosed Spaces]], and various [[SinisterScrapingSound haunting]] [[HearingVoices sounds]] to keep them off edge. The only way to survive going into one is to either have already dealt with your darkest fear(s) beforehand and be able to NoSell what is given to you, or prey that the Nightmare makes a mistake in the middle of the act. The latter is how [[LyricalNanoha [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Vita]] [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showpost.php?p=5723182&postcount=1232 was able to become the]] [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Magical Girl]] during [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness the botched first raid]] on the Nightmare Factory.
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-> Daughter of [[SailorNothing Shoutan Himei and Shoutan Seiki]]. A [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Puella Magi]] contracted by Sanbei in the original version of Arc I. Time will tell if this is maintained in the new version.
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-> Daughter of [[SailorNothing [[Literature/SailorNothing Shoutan Himei and Shoutan Seiki]]. A [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Puella Magi]] contracted by Sanbei in the original version of Arc I. Time will tell if this is maintained in the new version.
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* PragmaticVillainy: Her solution to accidentally provoking the Alliance? [[GenreSavvy Make some friends!]]
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* PragmaticVillainy: Her solution to accidentally provoking the Alliance? [[GenreSavvy Make some friends!]]
friends!
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* TripleShifter: Subverted somewhat in that her Magical Girl activities, and such triple shifting, are a key reason why Akiko's personal life and mental state went to hell.
* WillfullyWeak: When she realized that the Nightmare Factory's nightmares were just as strong as she was, Akiko began scaling back on her abilities and became more of a CombatPragmatist instead.
* WillfullyWeak: When she realized that the Nightmare Factory's nightmares were just as strong as she was, Akiko began scaling back on her abilities and became more of a CombatPragmatist instead.
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* TripleShifter: Subverted somewhat Deconstructed in that her Magical Girl activities, and such triple shifting, are a key reason why Akiko's personal life and mental state went to hell.
* WillfullyWeak: When she realized that the Nightmare Factory's nightmares [[LevelScaling were just as strong as shewas, was,]] Akiko began scaling back on her abilities and became more of a CombatPragmatist instead.
* WillfullyWeak: When she realized that the Nightmare Factory's nightmares [[LevelScaling were just as strong as she
