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KSPAM PARTY PARTY PARTY I WANNA HAVE A PARTY from PARTY ROCK Since: Oct, 2009 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
PARTY PARTY PARTY I WANNA HAVE A PARTY
#1151: Sep 23rd 2013 at 7:31:34 PM

The main character showing what an idiot he is:

Rui-ling scoffed. "Fine by me. But when I win, you have to teach me everything you know."

"Alright kid, you're on. Let's make this interesting then. If I win, your life is mine to do with as I please. Deal?"

"Deal."

"Not backing out?"

"Not backing out."

"Alright then. Oh, but before we start, I'd like you to contemplate something. If you can actually manage to beat me, then what good is any training I give you gonna do?"

"..."

"Yeah, that's what I thought."

I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serial
Night The future of warfare in UC. from Jaburo Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
The future of warfare in UC.
#1152: Sep 23rd 2013 at 8:34:39 PM

"What are you? A psychopath?"

"No I'm a sociopath. There's a difference."

Ironically, there is not.

Nous restons ici.
JRPictures Since: Nov, 2010
#1153: Sep 23rd 2013 at 8:53:42 PM

[up] That's the point [lol]

Though there actually are some differences.

edited 23rd Sep '13 8:56:12 PM by JRPictures

DeviousRecital from New York Angeles Since: Nov, 2011
#1154: Sep 23rd 2013 at 9:26:50 PM

Yeah, doesn’t she hang with that dork who thinks the government is run by ghouls or something? Maybe he's using her to fight fire with fire.

~A minor peripheral character only there to show my protagonist's All of the Other Reindeer status. I kind of feel like that line is a little too good for a minor character, but eh, whatever.

I was walking down a road of flames, barefoot. I was looking for the coolest spot, naturally, trying not to let the mud on my feet dry up too fast. The coals beneath my feet seemed to stretch on for miles in all directions, but there had to be an end to it somewhere. God forbid it end up in a men’s sauna. Unless it had Leon in it. Not that there was much time to think about that since the coals were suddenly turning into ninjas, all equipped with Fifi-repellant ninja spray. I countered by giving them an innocently flirtatious pose, causing watermelon juice to rain down and dissolve all of them into platypi. Three of them rubbed against my feet and that was when I finally woke up, got dressed, and went to school.

~My idea of a proper Dream Sequence. Believe it or not, there is some actual foreshadowing in there, though even if you know the context, the metaphors are still probably a little obtuse. Even I have a hard time making the mental leap from one concept to another.

Noaqiyeum Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they) from the gentle and welcoming dark (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they)
#1155: Sep 23rd 2013 at 9:42:58 PM

[up][up][up] Psychopathy is not a term used by modern psychology. Sociopathy is sometimes used to refer to a person with antisocial or dissocial personality disorder, and is therefore slightly more 'correct' and specific.

The Revolution Will Not Be Tropeable
Night The future of warfare in UC. from Jaburo Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
The future of warfare in UC.
#1156: Sep 23rd 2013 at 9:46:40 PM

[up]and[up][up][up]

Current DSM considers the terms interchangeable, and at best a description of presented symptoms of the same underlying disorder.

edited 23rd Sep '13 9:47:14 PM by Night

Nous restons ici.
Noaqiyeum Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they) from the gentle and welcoming dark (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they)
#1157: Sep 23rd 2013 at 10:47:46 PM

[up] Is that something that changed recently, or am I just under-read still?

At any rate, neither conveys the actual traits of the disorder(s) very accurately at all.

The Revolution Will Not Be Tropeable
JRPictures Since: Nov, 2010
#1158: Sep 23rd 2013 at 10:56:15 PM

Just to finish the topic, the context of the lines this discussion came from:

"What are you? A psychopath?"

"No I'm a sociopath. There's a difference."

were in a scene not meant to be taken seriously and the character who states he's a sociopath actually has Aspergers, he just said it for jokes.

cityofmist turning and turning from Meanwhile City Since: Dec, 2010
turning and turning
#1159: Sep 24th 2013 at 1:19:31 AM

Didn't almost those exact lines appear in Sherlock?

Scepticism and doubt lead to study and investigation, and investigation is the beginning of wisdom. - Clarence Darrow
JRPictures Since: Nov, 2010
#1160: Sep 24th 2013 at 1:31:04 AM

I wouldn't know, I made them up on the spot as a joke

But if you're referring to

"I'm not a psychopath, Anderson. I'm a high-functioning sociopath. Do your research."

Then no, I got no inspiration from that exchange

edited 24th Sep '13 1:32:16 AM by JRPictures

cityofmist turning and turning from Meanwhile City Since: Dec, 2010
turning and turning
#1161: Sep 24th 2013 at 2:53:35 AM

Just an uncanny coincidence, then.

Scepticism and doubt lead to study and investigation, and investigation is the beginning of wisdom. - Clarence Darrow
DhanaRagnarok Disturbingly mustachioed. from France. COCO-FLIPPIN'-RICO. Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
Disturbingly mustachioed.
#1162: Sep 24th 2013 at 2:35:01 PM

Still working on this, but I'm pretty proud of it so far. Some feedback would help. :D

Little background: Dalton is a very large man and "the mad geezer / the old man" is his best friend (and a reformed Obliviously Evil torturer/serial killer. He's also a bit of a Manchild.). They, along with a young couple, where sent to Equestria. Dalton's bartender outfit, that he had been wearing so far, was damaged beyond repair and it's up to Rarity and the old man (who inexplicably proposed his help) to make him a new one.

Dalton whistled in appreciation, studying his reflection in the largest mirror the shop had to offer. His new suit was near identical to his old bartender one; it was however cut from a dark blue material, as the tailor mare didn't have enough black fabric left for someone of his...presence.

What surprised him the most, though, was that it fit perfectly. He never knew that the mad geezer could sew, and didn't expect the little horse to be able to make him such specific clothing. True to his usual brash behavior, he voiced his surprise.

Rarity was inspecting her aide's handiwork with no little amount of fascination. The ancient biped didn't let her anywhere his work, and she begrudgingly admitted that she couldn't have done something that perfect in so little time.

"I must say, this is quite impressive, darling. These hands of yours are certainly much better than our hooves for fine needle work..." She suddenly held up one of Dalton's arm with her magic, pretending not to hear his indignant yelp as she pointed excitedly at his armpit, "...but I can' t believe how natural that joint looks! That's incredible to think that no magic was involved in this! Oh, the possibilities...," she said star-eyed.

The old man was sheepishly ruffling his hair, taking the praise in stride. "Oh, common, it isn't all that hard you know," he said, "and it's much easier when whatever you're sewin' doesn't squirm."

His statement was followed by heavy silence.

So heavy, in fact, he couldn't help but walk to the pincushion sitting on one of the shop's desks, grab a pin and drop it to put the saying to the test. The pin met with the floor at the same time a fist - Dalton's, he guessed - met with his face. He fell to the floor, sprawled on his back. He immediately put his jaw to the test, checking for damage. Dalton, meanwhile, was standing above him and shaking his head so fast he was surprised he didn't give himself a whiplash. "Damn, I really didn't need that mental image, dumbass."

Look upon my R.O.U.S., ye mighty, and despair!
hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
#1163: Sep 25th 2013 at 8:22:40 PM

The character is talking to a really serious and formal woman who actually a vampire.

"He has my sympathies. Aaron was a bit of a scrub.”

He looked back at her confusedly. Scrub? Like the TV show?

“That isn’t a term that’s used anymore, is it?”

He shook his head.

edited 25th Sep '13 8:23:16 PM by hermiethefrog

Noaqiyeum Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they) from the gentle and welcoming dark (Time Abyss) Relationship Status: Arm chopping is not a love language!
Trans Siberian Anarchestra (it/they)
#1164: Sep 26th 2013 at 9:03:18 PM

"Are you failing miserably at disguising your heat signature, or are you just happy to see me?"

The Revolution Will Not Be Tropeable
Avenuewriter Destroyer of worlds. from On my way out of this universe Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
Destroyer of worlds.
#1165: Sep 27th 2013 at 12:05:25 PM

[up] Classic "or are you just happy to see me?" line.

Is not impressed.
Squeakythemaster Where there's will. There's a claim. from Somewhere in the U of K Since: Dec, 2011
Where there's will. There's a claim.
#1166: Sep 30th 2013 at 1:58:17 PM

"I fought in the 'nam"

"Yeah and who the fuck didn't?"

[down] Ta

edited 1st Oct '13 8:54:44 AM by Squeakythemaster

hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
DeviousRecital from New York Angeles Since: Nov, 2011
#1168: Sep 30th 2013 at 5:14:35 PM

Ugh, this was only the second day I’d known him and I was already walking around in what looked like a Tex Avery cartoon filled with two-dimensional space-age vehicles that looked like cuckoo clocks on wheels and buildings that roared at you. Men really were a mystery.
.

...I'm starting to worry that the more I write, the more random I'll become.

edgewalker22 Lawful neutral Since: Mar, 2013 Relationship Status: Gay for Big Boss
Lawful neutral
#1169: Sep 30th 2013 at 8:05:11 PM

I wrote this about 5 AM and can't decide if it's badass or just narmtacular: "I was a beautiful killing machine: insatiable as fire, deceptive as hope, unstoppable as time."

Matues Impossible Gender Forge Since: Sep, 2011 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
Impossible Gender Forge
#1170: Oct 1st 2013 at 10:59:12 AM

There's only room for one scheming she-devil here. That's going to be me, so crawl back into your little volcano before I drop a mountain on your head.

DrFurball Two-bit blockhead from The House of the Rising Sun Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Tongue-tied
Two-bit blockhead
#1171: Oct 2nd 2013 at 11:23:20 PM

Had to remove the line because I changed the plot, but...

"Hey, what's that?" "...Oh $#%*. We've got lawn gnomes."

This one I managed to keep, though:

"How do you spell 'give us the map if you want to see him alive again'?" "With an 'F', I think.

Weird in a Can (updated M-F)
DhanaRagnarok Disturbingly mustachioed. from France. COCO-FLIPPIN'-RICO. Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
Disturbingly mustachioed.
#1172: Oct 15th 2013 at 10:56:01 AM

"He's a special needs kid."

"That's a way to put it. Yet, I doubt 'special needs' is supposed to cover exorcism."

edited 15th Oct '13 10:56:15 AM by DhanaRagnarok

Look upon my R.O.U.S., ye mighty, and despair!
Mort08 Pirate AND writer! from Oklahoma Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Pirate AND writer!
#1173: Oct 18th 2013 at 11:42:03 PM

The opening lines to the novel I'm slowly but surely mapping out.

Grandmother tells us that babies cannot remember being born, but I believe a part of me does. The part that dreams of bloodstained snow.

Looking for some stories?
hermiethefrog Since: Jan, 2001
#1174: Oct 21st 2013 at 3:48:33 PM

"Dad hates all our neighbors. He thinks you're an arsonist and that Hayes should get a real job instead of playing the saxophone all the time and that his dog is a nuisance.”

“Why does he think I'm an arsonist?” he asked.

“Something about you and your friend burning a bra in the back yard?”

Oh. “That only happened once."

edited 21st Oct '13 3:48:41 PM by hermiethefrog

DhanaRagnarok Disturbingly mustachioed. from France. COCO-FLIPPIN'-RICO. Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: Having tea with Cthulhu
Disturbingly mustachioed.
#1175: Oct 23rd 2013 at 2:10:32 PM

"Live. Live! For the love of God, live! Fall in love, or fall in hate. Create life, create art - or destroy them. Think, feel, discover, imagine. Speak the truth or lie and deceive and cheat. Your choice, and yours alone. Life is a gift. Life is a curse. It is only as hard as you want it to be. Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Every second of it. Forget nothing, forgive everything. Forgive yourself. Breathe. And always remember: No regrets. Just enjoy the ride... I'll be seeing you on the other side."

edited 23rd Oct '13 2:11:08 PM by DhanaRagnarok

Look upon my R.O.U.S., ye mighty, and despair!

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