The name is fine.
The problem is that the trope description is describing two tropes.
The first is "Virginity makes you stupid" which fits well with the name.
The second is a plot device that is common with this type of character, about her losing her virginity and being promoted in wisdom, and a bunch of other stuff about other character types and plot lines associated with the "stupid virgin" character type.
The first is a pretty clear concise and solid trope.
The second is certainly a trope that exists but it's a bit less clear or concise what with all these various mentions of other items, without defining which are optional and which are required.
I say the second trope should be cut out of this page and sent to YKTTW
to be solidly developed into a new trope.
This page then just becomes: "Virginity makes you stupid". At which point the name is fine. (Note that it already has a redirect "Virginity Makes You Stupid
" for people who don't get the pun.)
edited 3rd Sep '11 7:04:53 AM by Sackett