Surprisingly well written, a bit of artistic license on anatomy though
drunk bunny
I suppose it could have been worse.
Except it totally couldn't have.
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Mae
Plenty of folks wanna make life hard for people
I don't think it's that bad other then the fact that my shapeshfiting ability is used As a sexual device within the story over all 8 fedoras out of ten
No one else was in the room where it happened
Goddess of Nature
...Why am I portrayed as a Yandere again? I can be more of a Tsundere.
You know, I have to wonder why Pit is obsessed with this site. It’s gonna ruin his life!
...why was this written in the style of My Immortal?
Hmm... so in this fic, we kiss and f-
...
Yeah, I can see why this won't work!
I now go by Graf von Tirol.
Plenty of folks wanna make life hard for people
This reminds me of really bad erotica and my shapeshfiting is used for things other than that
No one else was in the room where it happened
The Scarlet Witch
It's too incomprehensible due to the awful grammar and spelling.
"Thanks for the lesson. But I don't need you to tell me who I am."
The Mistress
What was up with the motifs and lines that paralleled her with Princess Isabel?
I am not sure I want to see what the author does with the War of Triple Aliance...
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!
Back after a long hiatus
It's... good, I guess, but it's like the author took a pledge to never use punctuation. No periods, commas, capital letters, anything. Just one giant run-on sentence that doesn't even have a period at the end.
“Not a promise, not an oath, or a malediction or a curse. Inevitable." - Taylor Hebert
drunk bunny
Oh dear god This wasnt half bad
It was whole bad
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Mae
DEFINITELY NON CANON
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.
Why did they have to draw the sex scenes?!
I'm about to ask the same question, really.
I now go by Graf von Tirol.
Aaand the whole thing is written in Russian.
"Just as planned."
And now I'm wondering why it's written as if it's a medieval drama.
edited 28th May '15 4:46:58 AM by RatherRandomRachel
"Did you expect somebody else?"
The Mistress
This one is in french.
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!
This one appears to have suffered the Vietnamese Crystal Translation problem.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.
I wish this tasteless piece of writing was written in a language I could not read, unfortunately I can read it and the author seems quite capable at writing obscene stories such as this one.
edited 28th May '15 4:52:31 AM by Laithelryn
The Mistress
You know, I liked the scene in which I asked for him to teach me how to talk more formally.
It's actually a pretty nice idea, and one I'd love to come up with.
"Please crush me with your heels Esdeath-sama!
drunk bunny
if we ignore all of the dialogue about roses, it just comes down to a fan fic that is entirely lust with no substance
so its god awful
"There's not a girl alive who wouldn't be happy being called cute." ~Tamamo-no-Mae
Tief girl with eartude
This is just a build-up for a lame Mutiny On The Bounty pun....
TV Tropes's No. 1 bread themed lesbian. she/her, fae/faer
Student of Story
Wow. I'm genuinely surprised, for once we have an author who isn't making assumptions about bodies or flanderizing personalities, and is content with writing a plausible friendship fic where I'm in England for a short trip and Bisected and I have a little time to meet up and bond. I see there are sequels though, hopefully the author doesn't ruin things by trying to insert drama and going all Strangled by the Red String and such.
Also, some things were a little too accurate for comfort, like when the author has me refer to Villabate
Alba. Either the author is someone I know or a fellow Brooklynite with excellent taste.
Goddess of Nature
...I liked the part where we watch the finale to Avatar: The Last Airbender, but did I have to have an UNACCEPTABLE WARDROBE MALFUNCTION?
You know, I have to wonder why Pit is obsessed with this site. It’s gonna ruin his life!
Hey, take my pet Metal Gear REX along with you. Trust me, I have a reason for sending him over.
The fact that only 140 characters are allowed here is honestly so disappointing to me.