If you're a fan of Dad!Adrien and adorable kids, you'll definitely want to read this fic. It has enough fluffy Adrien & Emma scenes to make you squee, and while she has her moments of sugary-sweetness, Emma manages to avoid coming off as a Token Mini-Moe by being surprisingly fun. The story is well written, with only a few spots of clunky writing here and there (which is understandable considering that English is the author's third language). The only problem is that it is SO INCREDIBLY FRUSTRATING! For whatever reason, the characters are incapable of sitting down and having a frank conversation, instead dancing around topics such as Adrien being Chat Noir and very obviously Emma's father when there's literally no reason for either one to remain a secret. It got to the point that I would have to stop reading mid-chapter and do something else for a while, lest I punched a hole in my screen from sheer frustration. If you don't want to deal with Poor Communication Kills, AVOID THIS FIC. However, if you can get past that, it's well worth reading for the Adrien & Emma content alone (though the side of DjWifi and Marinette's inner conflict are big sells as well).
So Sweet, Yet So Frustrating
If you're a fan of Dad!Adrien and adorable kids, you'll definitely want to read this fic. It has enough fluffy Adrien & Emma scenes to make you squee, and while she has her moments of sugary-sweetness, Emma manages to avoid coming off as a Token Mini-Moe by being surprisingly fun. The story is well written, with only a few spots of clunky writing here and there (which is understandable considering that English is the author's third language). The only problem is that it is SO INCREDIBLY FRUSTRATING! For whatever reason, the characters are incapable of sitting down and having a frank conversation, instead dancing around topics such as Adrien being Chat Noir and very obviously Emma's father when there's literally no reason for either one to remain a secret. It got to the point that I would have to stop reading mid-chapter and do something else for a while, lest I punched a hole in my screen from sheer frustration. If you don't want to deal with Poor Communication Kills, AVOID THIS FIC. However, if you can get past that, it's well worth reading for the Adrien & Emma content alone (though the side of DjWifi and Marinette's inner conflict are big sells as well).