The most troubling thing about this fic is that the author seems to be taking it seriously. There is absolutely no winking at the audience to say the author knows how absurd their story is, nor is there anything to suggest they have an awareness of just how silly the grimdark or attempts at edginess actually are. If you want to read a Crack Fic written with absolute sincerity in the premise without awareness of the sheer badness of characterisation and writing on display, then this is the fic to read.
Hard to believe it isn't a parody
The most troubling thing about this fic is that the author seems to be taking it seriously. There is absolutely no winking at the audience to say the author knows how absurd their story is, nor is there anything to suggest they have an awareness of just how silly the grimdark or attempts at edginess actually are. If you want to read a Crack Fic written with absolute sincerity in the premise without awareness of the sheer badness of characterisation and writing on display, then this is the fic to read.