Larkmarn
Since: Nov, 2010
Sep 16th 2015 at 10:04:56 AM
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Replacing "He" with "Ice Bear" seems like it's barely a step up from just changing "He" to first-person, to be honest.
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tytoman
Since: Feb, 2012
Oct 25th 2015 at 10:33:16 AM
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I agree, but I think the page could work with some rewrites. For one thing, it seems like these entries should be shortened. Try reading the "Stout Strength" entry in Ice Bear's voice, then try "Powerpuff Girl Hands." To me, at least, the second one feels better.
Re cut request: This one has a distinct speech style so its removal should be discussed here beforehand.
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