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rikalous World's Cutest Direwolf from Upscale Mordor Since: May, 2009 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
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#2551: Sep 14th 2018 at 9:43:43 PM

I feel like that last part will be Venli's job. Teach the singers what is happening, and that they can choose another way. I think I said before, but it would be poignant if this millennia-long cycle of genocide ends not with one side finally winning, but by the civilians simply refusing to participate any more. The singers have very real problems with the humans, but they can work through them with diplomacy. The Fused are the ones who won't give up because they personally remember the ancient betrayal.
Yeah, I think I've mentioned before that Odium and the Fused are really the only reason the differences between singer and human can't be ironed out in an okay-ish fashion for everybody, and I would absolutely read the books about that.

I mean, as slave revolts go the parshmen ones are pretty peaceful, even when they don't consist of formally lodging a request for fair wages. The Thaylen ones just grabbed ships and fucked off, and even with the Alethi when Kaladin was trying to figure out what the fuck, he noted that the "Voidbringers" weren't wreaking the sort of havoc he'd expected. And on the human side of things, all the countries we've got a decent look at seem to be helmed by basically reasonable people. That could easily have been otherwise (young Dalinar, for instance, would probably have just rode out and killed people until they agreed to be slaves again), but as it happens we've got a bunch of rulers who can accept that parshmen are people now and should be treated as such.

I skipped most of the discussion on Moash and his revenge, but one thing they didn't bring up was Elhokar's culpability. We never saw it from his side. Yes, he did put two old people in prison. But he did it at the advice of a friend. Did he forget about them under that same friend's advice? Did that friend intercept any messages warning Elhokar that they were wasting away? We don't know. No one has ever mentioned any of this to Elhokar onscreen. And Moash never so much as mentions Roshone. No, in his eyes, everything is Elhokar's fault.
Shit, that's a good point. And now we'll never get to hear Elhokar's side of the story.

RavenWilder Raven Wilder Since: Apr, 2009
Raven Wilder
#2552: Sep 14th 2018 at 11:03:37 PM

I think Elhokar probably wouldn't even remember the event in question.

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Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2553: Sep 15th 2018 at 8:49:51 AM

[up] I dunno... it was a fairly major event. Dalinar apparently wanted to execute Roshone for his role in things, but Elohokar begged mercy, and Dalinar wanted to encourage that trait in him, so he allowed it. I suspect Elhokar remembered it, but the question is whether he learned the right lesson from it. Like how Amaram, after being shunned for his crimes against Kaladin, decides he should never have let him live.

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#2554: Sep 19th 2018 at 9:56:44 PM

I wonder, is the knife that killed Jezrien is a hemulurgic spike now? What property would it have stored?

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2555: Sep 22nd 2018 at 8:38:31 AM

Oathbringer chapters 45-46 reread up. Moash in the singer slave camps, Skar struggling with Stormlight.

As the waves of the sea must continue to surge, so must our will continue resolute.
Alone.
Did you expect anything else from us? We need not suffer the interference of another. Rayse is contained, and we care not for his prison.

AA: So Autonomy continues to claim self-sufficiency, refusing to allow anyone to interfere with any of her worlds or personae, and refusing to care what happens to anyone else or their worlds. It seems to be in character!
Also, this seems as good a point as any to note that the multi-persona act fits pretty well with the intent of Autonomy: you create any persona you want to present for a particular world or situation, and that way you really don’t need anyone else for anything. You can even be company for yourself.

Kinda reminds me of how Shallan is using Lightweaving. "I'll just draw up a new persona whenever I need one." Though Autonomy can probably make their personalities far more permanent and independent.

"We have no proof that we squires are a step toward becoming full Radiants. We might always be your support team—and in that case, it's not individual skill that matters, but your decision. Maybe that of your spren. You choose them, they serve under you, and then they start drawing in Stormlight."

L: This is a good distinction, and an important question. Do all the squires eventually move on to become full Radiants, or do some—historically—stay squires? We know that the Knights Radiant of old HAD squires, but we don’t know if they stayed that way forever or if it was just a stop-gap, a sort of... training period. (Do we?)
AA: We don't. For that matter, we don't even know if the squire of a Windrunner can only become a Windrunner, or if he could become, say, a Stoneward. I find it mildly amusing that in context, Teft is still hiding the fact that he's bonded a spren; he's still pretending that he's just a squire like the rest of them.

The impression I got was that the squires were a bit of a convenience for the spren. They watch their Order's squires to see who would best fit the bond. So it's kind of like a foot soldier getting promoted to officer; it doesn't happen automatically, but they're in a position where it's easier for them to prove themselves.

Mraize also told Shallan that Nale would occasionally force burgeoning Radiants to become Skybreakers instead of any other Order. Though the fact that we only saw him straight-up murdering people implies that after a certain point the decision becomes fixed and much harder to change.

My question is if the squires are specifically Kaladin's squires or any Windrunner's squires. When Teft swore the Third Ideal and revealed his powers, did every squire in the area suddenly get access to their powers again? Or does it only work when they're near Kaladin?

Cozzer Since: Mar, 2015
#2556: Sep 22nd 2018 at 9:59:17 AM

I'm following the reread and I like it, except for the way they usually talk about Moash.

It's strange, because they do a good job of highligthing how all the other characters, heroes and villains alike, are nuanced and complicated. Moash, on the other hand, is either a Badwrong Person at fault for everything wrong with his life, or a Poor Faultless Victim Of A Badwrong Society, depending on the specific rereader.

Oh, well.

Edited by Cozzer on Sep 22nd 2018 at 6:59:21 PM

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#2557: Sep 26th 2018 at 6:24:10 PM

I don't think that Aubree considers Moash a poor faultless victim so much as she's acting as a counterweight to the other two rereaders who think he's evilbadwrong, end of story. Hell, one of the first thing she says in her introduction on the previous reread is "I wouldn’t say that Moash did nothing wrong, but I definitely think that he gets a raw deal from the fandom".

Seriously though, some of the commentary is incredibly uncomfortable. They're quite literally blaming Moash for not kowtowing to what Alethi society expects of darkeyes, and then simultaneously blaming him for letting others define him. Darkeyes are literally second-class citizens, and blaming him for not being deferrent enough to his social "superiors" is seriously messed up.

This is an actual quote from the novel:

He’d always been met with hostility, no matter where he storming went. A youth like him, too big and obviously too confident for a darkeyes black man, had been considered a threat.

Followed by their commentary:

AA: No, you can’t change your size or your eye skin color, but you don’t have to walk around glaring at everyone, either. Demeanor is something you can control, and I don’t believe for a skinny minute that Moash is the only large darkeyes black man in Alethkar.
L: He’s letting them define who he is based on their initial impressions rather than taking steps to try to show them that they’re wrong. I think this is what annoys me so much about him in these early chapters—it’s just a lot of “oh boo hoo, poor me” when it was his own poor decisions that landed him here to begin with.

This whole sequence just left me screaming. No, Moash isn't perfect, and he certainly let his hatred of lighteyes become an excuse to do bad things, but holy shit do not tell someone that it's their fault for being oppressed because they don't act meekly enough and it scares their oppressors.

Edited by NativeJovian on Sep 26th 2018 at 9:28:26 AM

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#2558: Sep 26th 2018 at 6:58:17 PM

My read on the Moash quote was that both darkeyes AND lighteyes found him intimidating and the fact that he made no moves to not be a scary big guy, again to both lighteyes AND darkeyes, was something that contributed to his being ostracized. Even darkeyes didn't want anything to do with him.

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2559: Sep 26th 2018 at 7:55:11 PM

Moash's flaws are more apparent when you compare him to Kaladin, because their plot arcs match almost step by step, but Moash is making all the wrong choices. Kaladin was the Scary Black Man who made his own life more difficult by being justifiably annoyed at everyone. This is especially apparent in WoR at the Shattered Plains and later in the chasms. Kaladin is scowling at everyone on the plains and is a dick to Adolin. Shallan's like "WTF man, he went to prison for you." Then in the chasms he blames Shallan for everything the lighteyes ever did to him. Explicitly. He says it's all her fault for being a lighteyes.

Moash does all these things too. The reason people don't forgive him is because he refuses to learn any lessons. He refuses to stop blaming everyone around him, he refuses to actually try to change anything, and he directly screws over multiple people by his own choices. Moash and the friend who brought him to the lighteyes is a good parallel for Kaladin and the sick slave. Kaladin was going to let the slave die, but tried to convince Tvlakv he could be easily saved. Moash let his friend get beaten because he couldn't be bothered to say one word in his defense.

Remember, Kaladin is still a dick a lot of the time. That hasn't really changed. He could be nicer (and Syl keeps trying to get him to smile more), but he isn't. But since he's spending all his time trying to save the world instead of wallowing in his own pity any more, we're more inclined to forgive him.

32ndfreeze from Australia Since: Mar, 2012
#2560: Sep 26th 2018 at 8:13:01 PM

I think a large part of the Moash hate is almost a meme at this point.

Especially on the Cosmere reddits where people really bandwagon-ed the Moash hatetrain.

It's a bit unfortunately really, since Moash is a pretty interesting character in my opinion. Especially in how he compares to Kaladin.

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#2561: Sep 26th 2018 at 8:30:14 PM

I agree Moash is interesting, he's just not likeable, and is alike a diagram for 'how to make the worst decisions'.

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#2562: Sep 26th 2018 at 8:48:02 PM

[up][up]Pretty much this. Moash is basically the Shadow Archetype to Kaladin — he's what Kaladin could have been if he was motivated by his hatred for the lighteyes rather than his desire to help people. I don't think that Moash is right, but I don't think he's pure evil incarnate, either. Plus Moash is clearly at the start of his own arc. Whether he ends up correcting course and becomes a Radiant in his own right (probably one of the Orders we haven't seen yet) or goes full villain and starts working with Odium and using voidlight in some fashion remains to be seen, but I strongly suspect it's going to be one or the other.

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32ndfreeze from Australia Since: Mar, 2012
#2563: Sep 26th 2018 at 9:05:21 PM

I personally think Moash is probably going to be on the side of Odium for at least the next book.

I think it's likely his arc will conclude in Book 5 and then we'll see which side he'll fall on.

Or he might die, probably as a indirect result of him letting Kaladin go or aiding him in some way.

"But if that happened, Melia might actually be happy. We can't have that." - Handsome Rob
Cozzer Since: Mar, 2015
#2564: Sep 27th 2018 at 12:19:06 AM

Yeah, my problem with the reread is not that they think Moash is wrong - I mean, he clearly is -, it's that as soon as it's about him their willingness to see complexity in characters vanishes. The fact that the new one exaggerates Moash' excuses to counterbalance how the others exaggerate his badwrongness doesn't make her any less annoying, in my personal opinion.

Oh well, I'll just skim these parts of the reread. It's a pity, because Moash' situation is one of the more interesting plot threads of the series for me. I love him as a Shadow Archetype to Kaladin, especially because he makes a lot of good points while still making bad choices.

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2565: Sep 28th 2018 at 10:16:56 AM

Oathbringer reread chapters 47-48 updated. Moash meeting the parshmen Kaladin helped, and Jasnah recompiling her notes. I don't have much to say about the Moash stuff (which makes up the bulk of it), but Jasnah has some interesting parts.

Something stirred deep within her. Glimmers of memory from a dark room, screaming her voice ragged. A childhood illness nobody else seemed to remember, for all it had done to her.

L: An illness no one seems to remember? That's really, really interesting. Sounds like some odd magic is afoot here, something like Dalinar's pruning.
AA: It’s driving me crazy, frankly. Do they not remember it because it didn't seem all that significant to the adults? Just a typical childhood illness, though she reacted badly to the treatment? Something that, right or wrong, she somehow blamed on the adults? Or was it something far deeper that no one else will talk about?

It had taught her that people she loved could still hurt her.

L: The plot (and mystery) thickens further.

I suspect that it's just people won't talk about it, since the Alethi place a lot of importance on appearances. As far as everyone else is concerned, the treatment worked, and there's no need to sully her reputation by bringing it up again. Except that Alethi psychology is still crap, so it's more like she recovered despite the treatment rather than because of it.

It's also given a brief mention in one of Dalinar's flashbacks, with him asking Gavilar is Jasnah is feeling better.

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#2566: Sep 29th 2018 at 6:12:12 PM

In Oathbringer, at least, Moash was more closely a foil for Dalinar's character arc than Kaladin's.

Dalinar embraced the fact that it was his choice to do all of the evil stuff he did, and therefore also his choice to be better. Even though Moash's faults up until that point weren't anywhere near as bad as Dalinar's early life, he couldn't accept that responsibility and so he falls further into being 'evil'.

I suppose you could argue that this isn't a fair comparison, since Moash genuinely DID have adverse circumstances and prejudice that made him who he is, while Dalinar was privileged from the start.

Edited by LoniJay on Sep 29th 2018 at 11:17:54 PM

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RavenWilder Raven Wilder Since: Apr, 2009
Raven Wilder
#2567: Sep 29th 2018 at 6:28:19 PM

Eh, he was privileged, but in a system where that privilege comes with constant, violent competition with everyone else who's equally privileged. As we saw when Dalinar tried being a different kind of Highprince in Way of Kings, Alethi nobles who take the high road have a way of being backstabbed by all of the less scrupulous Alethi nobles.

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#2568: Oct 2nd 2018 at 9:31:04 PM

L: Spren culture/society fascinates me. I find it amusing how all the others seem to hate honorspren so much, when the one that we’ve seen and gotten to know is so sweet and charming.
Maybe there's a reason she left the place that was filled with honorspren, hmm? Compare, in the same chapter, the inkspren who started calling himself Ivory because fuck you every other inkspren.

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2569: Oct 3rd 2018 at 9:37:02 PM

I like the To Be Lawful or Good thing the honorspren have got going on. One of Jasnah's chapters mentioned that all the other spren were convinced the Windrunners were gone for good, because the honorspren had sworn never to bond humans again. Then Syl happened.

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#2570: Oct 4th 2018 at 5:53:27 AM

Well, if *Highspren* would make a law making binding Humans illegal, that'd be more binding ^^

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#2571: Oct 7th 2018 at 5:25:02 PM

[up][up]Which makes sense, since Syl was unconscious and non-participatory when they made that oath.

Discar Since: Jun, 2009
#2572: Oct 9th 2018 at 1:52:24 PM

Oathbringer reread chapter 49 came out a few days ago. I don't have a lot to say about it.

"Do you ever wonder about the time when this kingdom was truly great, Dalinar?" Gavilar asked. "When people looked to the Alethi. When kings sought their advice. When we were... Radiant."
"Traitors," Dalinar said.
"Does the act of a single generation negate many generations of domination? We revere the Sunmaker when his reign lasted but the blink of an eye—yet we ignore the centuries the Radiants led. How many Desolations did they defend mankind?"

A: So... wow. I find it disturbing that Gavilar only thinks about the time of the Radiants and the related Alethi status in terms of world domination, though I suppose given modern Vorin belief it makes sense. But the first paragraph? He's not wrong. There was a time, according to Dalinar's visions, when the Alethi were a great kingdom. They were the ones the world looked to, the ones whose advice was sought. Their task between Desolations was to maintain the arts and skills needed to be prepared for the next attack, so naturally people looked to them for information and training. Alethela was great because they protected, not because they dominated.
What I find really sad is that the attitude represented by Gavilar here is the one that causes the most problem with Dalinar's attempts to return to the original responsibility of the Alethi. Dalinar, like the old Radiants, wants nothing more than to unite the world, using whatever resources they have, to defend humanity against the Voidbringers. Those resources necessarily include the primary Alethi strength: warfare. Unfortunately, until they actually have to fight, the rest of the world leaders cannot help but see the way the Alethi have behaved in recent millennia: just like Gavilar.

I swear every time we learn more about Gavilar he becomes worse—not least because everything is in the context of a man clearly trying to do the right thing. He's like Amaram except vastly more competent. If he had lived, would he have given the entire kingdom to Odium when he learned the secret behind the Recreance?

RavenWilder Raven Wilder Since: Apr, 2009
Raven Wilder
#2573: Oct 9th 2018 at 4:55:30 PM

You know, designating a particular specialty to each country may, in hindsight, not have been such a great idea. Especially when it includes a whole country whose specialty is killing people.

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#2574: Oct 10th 2018 at 3:32:57 PM

“It’s your daughter,” Dalinar guessed. “Her lunacy.”

“Jasnah is fine, and recovering. It’s not that.”

A: Given what we know of the Alethi approach to madness, it seems like a pretty good assumption that Jasnah’s “lunacy” referred to here is related to her memory from last week, of a dark room and her own screams. She would be eleven years old at this point, poor child.

L: Yeah, I am desperately curious to find out what happened here.

This was mentioned briefly last week, but honestly I don't really remember this subplot (or these hints as a subplot, at least) from reading the book itself at all. I suppose it got lost in the shuffle of everything else that was going on. Question is, do you think this whatever-it-was that happened to Jasnah was the thing that "broke" her and made it possible to bond a spren, or is a result of the spren bond and Jasnah is reacting (badly) to having a strange creature that only she can see talking to her?

Gavilar had settled upon a black iron circlet. The more Gavilar’s hair greyed, the easier the crown was to see.

L: I’ve got to wonder if there’s some symbolism at play here, either on Gavilar’s part or Sanderson’s.

Black iron is a symbol of strength — raw, unsubtle, unrefined strength — rather than a more traditional crown being made of precious metals as a symbol of wealth and prosperity. The crown becoming more visible as Gavilar gets older strikes me as symbolic of the fact that the longer he holds the kingdom together without being overthrown by a rival or broken up by rebellion, the more clear his power is.

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#2575: Oct 10th 2018 at 5:02:26 PM

The REAL Kholin family motto: FUCK Subtle.


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