Lost in Space
There was an earlier unclosed note tag on the article. I fixed it.
Incidentally, the English in that article is really bad and needs cleaning up.
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
I didn't notice that the English is bad. Is it from the grammar and stuff?
Mostly grammar making stuff hard to understand, yes, and some Rouge Angles of Satin here and there. If you need to stop and reread a sentence to figure out what it's saying, it's not a good sentence. (I have not retained any spoiler tags in the below examples, so if you don't want this show to be spoiled...)
Also, I don't know if this is against wiki style policies or not, but I feel like maybe the page description might benefit from a brief description of the show that doesn't rely on the reader being familiar with the show's predecessor, and which doesn't force the reader to study the description on the page for the predecessor and also try to determine how the addition of dodgeballs makes this show different.
Edited by CrystalGlacia on Jul 29th 2019 at 8:31:24 AM
"Jack, you have debauched my sloth."
Lost in Space
The page is written in broken English that looks like someone is mentally translating from Japanese. It's not good.
"It's Occam's Shuriken! If the answer is elusive, never rule out ninjas!"
Sitting down to spend time reading it and yeah, there's some parts of the article that sounds awkward, but not totally incorrect.
Trying to look at the Battle for Money (Sentōchū). I saw that the [[note]] formatting is not working somehow.