Amphibia (A cute Disney animated series about a world of frogs)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14082090/1/A-New-Beginning

This is the ladder of corruption of Amphibia (a rough draft):

Thoughts? Comments?

Edited by beneficii on May 22nd 2022 at 9:25:57 AM

I'd like to know, how would you rewrite or redo Season 3?

No Spider Sprig, introduce The Wus and Waybrights properly.

Nothing else.

why no Spider Sprig?

I wouldn't, it was fine enough as is.

Probably cause it doesn't really accomplish much in the long run. Sure Molly Jo reappears in Escape to Amphibia but given she barely does anything there, it wouldn't be that hard to cut her.

I'd be super tempted to add a flashback of Sprig and Polly's parents happily living in their house while they were alive.

As for me, there's really only 2 things I'd change about S3: a) split it into S3 and S4 (S3 being Earth and S4 being Wartwood resistance), and b) have Mr. and Mrs. Waybright and the Wu family make an appearance.

EDIT: Oh, totally forgot. There's actually a third thing I would change, and that would be make "The Hardest Thing" longer (thinking about the same length as "All In"), mostly just to make room for extra denouement scenes like the girls reuniting with their parents and Anne and Sasha saying their goodbyes to Marcy when she moves away.

Edited by MagnusForce on May 24th 2022 at 8:11:51 AM

I wouldn't take out spider sprig necessarily but I would rewrite it so Sprig is actually irresponsible so the ending feels justified or just cut out that whole shit about Sprig being supposedly just as guilty as the green-eyed doctor octopus wanna-be because it makes no sense for him being chewed out as just as guilty as the destructive villain when he was trying to stop him and prevent anyone from getting hurt including that dumb ungrateful brat, Its as non-sensical and stupid as if Spider-man suddenly decided Jameson its right about him after he criticized him and blamed him for what a supervillain did right after he saved his life.

So, who's the frog dignitary in the series finale Time Skip? We know Grime's the toad dignitary and Olivia/Yunan are newt dignitaries but what about the frog one? It isn't Hop Pop cause he's still content farming in Wartwood.

I think the dignitaries were there for the unveiling of Anne's statue in her honor and the Toad and Newt dignitaries were to have representatives for their respective factions during the ceremony. So the high ranking frog would have been Wartwood's current mayor, which was Toadie.

Isn't it Toady by virtue of being mayor?

Edited by jdeo1997 on May 24th 2022 at 8:22:31 AM

If Hardest Thing was 48 minutes, I would have wanted the scene with the girls reuniting with their families set to "Mama, I'm Coming Home" by Ozzy Osbourne.

So, I got an interesting question, do y'all think King Aldrich went through the same thing as King Andrias with having an abusive father who forced him into a tyrannical mindset with the Core? After all, Andrias did say many ancestors were world conquerors, not just one dad. Is it possible Aldrich was a good person corrupted by a dad who was controlled by the Core like Andrias?

Sure, it could absolutely be a case of chain of abuse.

This reminds me, Andrias had no children at all, which makes me wonder who was the heir to his throne.

I think Andrias didn't think of producing a heir, not until he'd ammended his mistake. He likely didn't think things through in that aspect since "redeeming" himself was his priority.

> This reminds me, Andrias had no children at all, which makes me wonder who was the heir to his throne.

No need for an heir when he can live forever thanks to The Core

Plus, with all his cybernetics, we don't know if he's even capable of producing children anymore.

For some reason I'm picturing the scene where Anakin gets is wounded fighting Obiwan but it's with Barrel and leaf

Imagine if they did introduce a hitherto unmentioned child or children of Andrias for an Amphibia sequel. Like, Andrias had them sent away to somewhere remote and then never mentioned them after being dethroned because he was afraid they'd be unfairly punished for his crimes.

Marcy: "You have kids?! How?!"

Andrias: "Well, I'll admit that it wasn't easy, considering my age and the size difference—"

Sasha: "Stop. Talking."

Edited by Trooper924 on May 25th 2022 at 4:56:58 AM

Wouldn't there be females of his species of salamander the same size?

Maybe? I dunno. For the sake of the joke, let's assume not.

They're technologically advanced enough to conquer death, have full blown cybernetics, and turned the moon into a spaceship, I doubt things like cloning, in-vitro fertilization, or artificial wombs are beyond their capabilities.

I'm curious how their society is going evolve now that the finale happened. Without the stones, they no longer have a means of travel to other worlds in order to obtain natural resources, without the Core a large body of their technological knowledge has basically been obliterated. Considering how Newtopia and the rest of Amphibia regressed in the interim 1000 years after the stones were taken and how any large scale industrialization for technological buildup was basically climate change turned up to eleven, makes you wonder if Amphibia basically becomes Pandora 2.0.

They don't seem to have given up robot technology entirely as those factories still appear to be functioning and Andrias was using a small watercan robot, perhaps they got better at recycling.