Urdnot Turax is tentatively aproved.
Nothing is directly objectable.
HOWEVER, I would like to get all the spells a mage has listed this time around, they can learn more later, I am just kinda worried about the ease at which mages can pull powers out of there ass upsetting the ramp up of this RP.
If this makese sense. >.<
So yea, you are good since I trust you, however I would like a spell book up sooner or later to keep things consistant.
I will also be adding the spellbook to the sheet as a replacment for "quick cast spells"
In case of pagewrap, this is Derail's vehicle mode◊.
Okay Chili, your accepted.
Ethers, after talking to spart and coming to realise my problem
I would like derail's explosives removed for right now.
He can know how to MAKE bombs, and do so with the equipment he can find around, but until we get an actual base, with actual supply lines, I would like to avoid infinate giant robot sized bombs if this is okay. >.<
Okay yeah, that's understandable.
@Sunny: That is fair. His bombs are gone.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:17:52 PM by Etheru
Okay, both are good then.
Actualy I am going to talk about magic and charecter sheets once the initial aproval wave is sorted.
Things wont get any worse or any better for mages, so I am not going to do this right now and add confusion to the aprovals.
We just need to get the charecter sheets re-worded is all.
Honestly, I don't think I plan on having all of my characters show up from the outset. I think that Donna, Klaatu, and Derail could probably show up later on.
Actualy, we can probaly handle this now.
Guys, help me reword the charecter sheets?
Powers should kind of cover magic, but I think the specific magic powers some one has should be noted.
Should we scrub the magic section entirely? Or keep them sepreate so magic can be more explained.... or what.
How should we handle it?
Make it depend on what type of character they are?
Like if they're human "powers" can either be filled or unfilled. If they're a mage "Magic" goes where "Powers" could be?
Powers in general should cover it fine, but anything that cannot be understood just by its name alone, encompasses a category, or is otherwise incredibly super-specific should probably be explained further.
Ex. Fireball is self-indicative
Word magic should be explained
edited 31st Jul '16 5:27:34 PM by Raidouthe21st
We Are Our Avatars Forever (Now on Discord by invitation, PM)I would think that Powers could apply to anything of that nature. You could just use extra bulletpoints to explain it. Like, someone says that their character can cast Divination magic, and then uses an extra bullet point to list the spells they can cast. Something like that.
EDIT: And also what Rai said.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:28:21 PM by Chilifro
Be kind.Edit: Got this.
Removed Spellbook as a catagory and added this to the bottom of the sheet.
If some one would like to reword that text chunk while keeping the spirit I would be much apreciated.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:38:58 PM by Imca
Seems fairly explanatory enough to me.
Also got my character sheet done.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:46:20 PM by Raidouthe21st
We Are Our Avatars Forever (Now on Discord by invitation, PM)Okay Bacon, what is a Krak grenade?
To answer your question powers are for super natural, abilities are for enhancments....
I need "Is able to learn certain things by eating people (though obviously I'll follow deathwatch rules for this one so it's not just like he's chowing down on a random mook to learn the entire enemy battle plan)" explained.
"Might be able to bench press a humvee, am-unsure." Would prefer if this is only while wearing his armor.
Beyond that your good.
Posted my sheets.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:51:49 PM by MrKirb
Rai, you are mostly good as well.
"Supposedly can take the form of other firearms, but damned if she understands how it works." I do wish to know how that works OOC, but beyond that you are good.
Good job, Etheru, I'll go over them.
edited 31st Jul '16 5:52:59 PM by Etheru
Loose the High Noon and your good Kirb.
Edit, he does remind me though, I will be considering space marine power armour a "vehicle" due to its bulk bacon, this is mostly symatics though, so I hope you dont mind.
basically in death watch, the general rule for what a space marine learns by munching down on some grey matter is usually 'how much info did he know before'. If he doesn't really know much about the overall situation, memories tend to be more like disjointed images and thoughts. He might be able to put some things together but he'll need some outside info to help. If he knows a lot, then he's more easily able to put the thoughts of his victims in place. This also depends on what the victim even knew in the first place of course.
for the humvee thing, that was mostly a joke because at the end of writing all that I wanted to scream but yeah no problem.
A krak grenade is basically like an anti-armor explosive charge. It can be used to blow a hole in bunkers or tanks, but for maximum effectiveness he needs to get up there and physically place the thing on the target. Throwing it can work but that's not as effective.
also I don't mind, though it would get hilarious if he had his assault bike with him since he'd be in a vehicle riding a vehicle
edited 31st Jul '16 5:57:30 PM by Bcom
It changes form like how the pistols Asagi started with in WAOA that were originally just a single crossbow rifle that got changed via magic bs.
Basically, she's got something akin to this, but it only has access to a single form aka its current state because she's currently far weaker than the WAOA version...and because in-game the thought her weapon can have alternate forms sounds stupid and impossible to her. >.>
edited 31st Jul '16 5:58:13 PM by Raidouthe21st
We Are Our Avatars Forever (Now on Discord by invitation, PM)Alrighty, with that information you are good to go and I am going to start making the RP.
As a note, when it is live, please do not start with script, I would like if your first post was a prose post with a couple paragraphs about what your charecter was doing and how they ended up here so we can get to know them.
You can switch to script after, just.... not intialy please.
Okay riddle, while I dont see any thing insantly rejectable, I am on the fence about having a great old one in the RP, and as such will hand this aproval over to Rai who is more knowladgable on the subject then I am.
From what I can see, this is not the great old one as his full incarnation, but a far more limited reincarnation/avatar. I suppose the only question to ask is if he has the potential to regain his status and power as an old one, under what circumstances it could be achieved, and the effects on his power and all those around him if that happens.
Other than that, seems okay to me. I'll do a double-check with the rules in the meantime to make double sure.
edited 31st Jul '16 6:47:52 PM by Raidouthe21st
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and bam, there's mine.
Be kind.