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Plumbum The Plum and Only from Chichester, United Kingdom Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
The Plum and Only
#126: Nov 20th 2013 at 7:36:39 AM

[up][up] Wait, REDD's in this RP? Awww shit man.

Of course I page-top.

edited 20th Nov '13 7:36:58 AM by Plumbum

Curse the ill fortune that led you to me.
clawthewolf from Sweden Since: May, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#127: Nov 20th 2013 at 7:44:08 AM

I think I fixed Matthew. Removed the cold-iron and silver from his baton and the pistol. Also made him less capable in a fight

KSPAM PARTY PARTY PARTY I WANNA HAVE A PARTY from PARTY ROCK Since: Oct, 2009 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
PARTY PARTY PARTY I WANNA HAVE A PARTY
#128: Nov 20th 2013 at 7:50:49 AM

Yeah, I think street punk/kid who knows kung fu is about as trained as normal humans are allowed to be in this RP. Also, removed the Macedonian silver.

I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serial
InfiniteParagon The Warrior Monk of Coeurl from Texas Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
The Warrior Monk of Coeurl
#129: Nov 20th 2013 at 7:54:10 AM

Really like this character for the most part, though I'd prefer if he was a bit more human. It sounds like his inability to be shaken, surprised or disturbed is a bit too absolute and that kind of sounds like a big mood breaker. I can accept him taking stuff better than others and mostly not displaying many signs of his distress, but even the most unflappable should feel something specially with the reveal of magic and the dangers it presents.

Allow me to see if I can edit that around to work better...

First, almost nothing phases him initially, discounting some earth-shattering revelations. For those that aren't the exception, he'll exhibit a much more neutral reaction in terms of emotional output than he may actually possess and show naturally/choose to show. It's caused him trouble before when a particular reaction is expected and he inadvertently doesn't react with it, thus offending the other party, and has caused Jan a bit of grief at trying to understand why he does that.

I may edit this a wee bit more as i'm kinda pressed for time for a couple minutes but is this better?

"You lost, Dio. You lost for one simple reason - you were using charcoal." - Hank Hill
Taco Since: Jan, 2001
BluBeriPi done w ur shit Since: Feb, 2013
done w ur shit
#131: Nov 20th 2013 at 8:29:18 AM

About the Shop on Legs

Of course, to those outside the Masquerade, it looks like some sorta combination roadside stand/RV.

Parable State of Mind from California (4 Score & 7 Years Ago) Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
State of Mind
#132: Nov 20th 2013 at 8:34:06 AM

A food truck?

"What a century this week has been." - Seung Min Kim
BluBeriPi done w ur shit Since: Feb, 2013
done w ur shit
#134: Nov 20th 2013 at 8:44:43 AM

Parable: EXACTLY!

[up] Pffft.

Taco Since: Jan, 2001
#135: Nov 20th 2013 at 9:15:41 AM

If we're running a Dresden-esque tone it's entirely possible that there'd be people in the setting who act as attorneys specifically for the supernatural—notaries on geases, arbitrators in faery contracts, deals with the devil, or "essense-based transactions," otherwise known as selling your soul. Copyright violations, or perhaps cheapening or trivializing a symbol, not unlike the red cross or the extreme implications of wearing a cross in a warzone without being a medic, could indeed have consequences.

Either that, or it's cultural appropriation, and Baba Yaga can take pictures and complain about it on her Tumblr.

BluBeriPi done w ur shit Since: Feb, 2013
done w ur shit
#136: Nov 20th 2013 at 9:20:34 AM

I'm pretty sure if it even becomes a thing, it'll be played off for laughs.

Moerin Since: Aug, 2010
#137: Nov 20th 2013 at 9:21:41 AM

Well of course. How could Baba Yaga complaining on her Tumblr be anything but hilarious?[lol]

Taco Since: Jan, 2001
#138: Nov 20th 2013 at 9:57:06 AM

I van't help but think that her Tumblr would actually be just like anyone else's. Like,

Meeting another childnapper going after the same kid as you:

edited 20th Nov '13 9:57:29 AM by Taco

InfiniteParagon The Warrior Monk of Coeurl from Texas Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
The Warrior Monk of Coeurl
#139: Nov 20th 2013 at 10:44:02 AM

[up][up][up][up] ... That's tempting to do/work towards.

"You lost, Dio. You lost for one simple reason - you were using charcoal." - Hank Hill
daltar The Maid from the fantasy of green. Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: All is for my lord
The Maid
#140: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:31:13 AM

@ Raineh: I accept the reasons for her to be in Volwick. However, sustaining the dead bodies should take a toll on her energies and the more she has to sustain the more she has to spend. She can probably keep around the ones she likes the most by giving them more power, but the bodies should still have a rate of decay in how long they can remain themselves before becoming unthinking zombies and then simply collapsing.

@ Tropay: I would like a few more details on the incident, it doesn't have to be something big, she could have just fallen off some stairs.

@ Plum: Hmm why would the head Priestess of a declining race of lizard people from the Amazon Forest come to Volwick to live?

@D Blades: The backstory is kind of silly, but the character itself can work.

@zzzdragon: Oh Cade, that bring back memories. Unfortunately, zzzdragon, I'm being a lot more strict this time around with the power levels involved. While last time you did not abuse the powers of Cade and acted fairly well in a neutral manner, I can't accept his power level.

@ Infinite: That's much better.

@ claw: Accepted.

@ Blue Berry: The idea is not that bad, but I'm still not warming myself towards it. Giant chicken legs seems like the kind of magic that could be worked more easily in other times.

The game may be starting this very night. I'll be opening a discussion thread immediately for people to discuss plots and make requests for plots. There I will also take note of those who made normal humans that wish to participate in the 'Welcome to the New World' plot. I do think Infinite's character is in that lot, right?

Discussion is here

edited 20th Nov '13 11:34:09 AM by daltar

If I'm sure of something it's that I'm not sure of anything.
RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
Figure of Hourai
#141: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:36:49 AM

... given how that defeats the point of a rather large part of the idea, rescinding interest. sad

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InfiniteParagon The Warrior Monk of Coeurl from Texas Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
The Warrior Monk of Coeurl
#142: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:40:11 AM

More than likely, yes.

"You lost, Dio. You lost for one simple reason - you were using charcoal." - Hank Hill
Plumbum The Plum and Only from Chichester, United Kingdom Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
The Plum and Only
#143: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:43:39 AM

@ Plum: Hmm why would the head Priestess of a declining race of lizard people from the Amazon Forest come to Volwick to live?
See, this is where the rework comes in. I'm gonna quote my own post here, kinda to prove I'm not pulling this out of my arse.

being fairly jaded with her own species
That the main reason for it, she left and turned her back on them rather than the original idea who was trying to rebuild the race, this version has already tried that and it hasn't worked.

(to the point mo'kai believe she enforces the will of their deity)
This is the other reason, she's let that get to her head though, she believes if she has turned her back on her own kind, then Ilya has too. Also, the position isn't really that ornate or anything, the most one could see of it would be a mark on her armor, she's still a hunter big style, even more so because she is said to enact Ilya's will, which includes doling out justice against the unjust.

Also, there is a meta reason, I want to do the whole "Fish out of Water" scheme.

edited 20th Nov '13 11:46:05 AM by Plumbum

Curse the ill fortune that led you to me.
daltar The Maid from the fantasy of green. Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: All is for my lord
The Maid
#144: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:43:57 AM

[up][up][up]In what ways does it defeat it? She can just get new bodies after a while.

[up] There must still be a reason to hop about 8 countries or so and settle in an unremarkable city.

edited 20th Nov '13 11:45:28 AM by daltar

If I'm sure of something it's that I'm not sure of anything.
Plumbum The Plum and Only from Chichester, United Kingdom Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: And here's to you, Mrs. Robinson
The Plum and Only
#145: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:47:10 AM

Who said she was settled? My original plan was more of a drifter, she was "just passing through" when (I'm guessing this happens) shit hits the fan, which is actually the event that makes her stay.

Hey, if you think it's shit, just say. I'll work on another idea.

Oh, also I made sense of the 8 countries bit - it really isn't a problem to relocate the Tokara Forest. That sheet I linked is only a rough idea and changes are to be made for this RP - as the previous bit should make clear.

edited 20th Nov '13 12:33:47 PM by Plumbum

Curse the ill fortune that led you to me.
RainehDaze Figure of Hourai from Scotland (Ten years in the joint) Relationship Status: Serial head-patter
Figure of Hourai
#146: Nov 20th 2013 at 11:47:53 AM

[up][up] ... because both the 'doing it from altruism' things and 'use as restaurant staff' things no longer work (because decaying corpses and decaying corpses in a kitchen or serving people), which means neither reason she had for reanimating bodies in the first place applies, which removes the character's only noteworthy ability. It basically makes the whole thing stop working.

edited 20th Nov '13 11:48:07 AM by RainehDaze

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TropayXion The i. one. from HEART Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
The i. one.
#147: Nov 20th 2013 at 12:17:28 PM

Hm... well, knowing Mikoto, she probably ran head-first into a brick wall chasing something that looked tasty. I'll try and come up with something more concrete if you want, but I hadn't really placed much importance on her past for the moment.

TroyandHawk The Blinder from Back Home. Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
The Blinder
#148: Nov 20th 2013 at 12:19:54 PM

Here's the revised occult detective version

  • Name: Laoch “Weird” O'Connell
  • Age: 29
  • Gender: Male
  • Religion: Weird is Agnostic
  • Race: Human
  • Appearance: Weird is an Irish man of standing six feet tall and weighing about 190 lbs, he has brown hair which he often haphazardly dyes pink with green and brown eyes. His shoulders and arms are covered with tattoos of Mythical Beasts, He often wears a dirty wife beater under a black hoody.
  • Personality: Weird has fully adapted to his life where most people think he's either a scam artist or insane and the other half think he's an ass. So, he's adapted by being a Sarcastic jerk, often saying what comes to mind, though in the presence of vastly powerful beings, children and paying clients he has been known to suddenly become much more amiable. Having a somewhat skewed moral compass, Weird has no problem whatsoever with lying, stealing and intimidation to get what he wants, and if pushed far enough he will not hesitate to use Torture and Murder. He often patrols the more super natural areas in Volstick
  • Bio: Hailing from Ireland, Weird is an occult detective, serving as a police consultant in the supernatural, however, He's also a bit of a vigilante, often walking around the more supernaturally active areas in Volstick, he's only moved there recently, yet already has a bit of a reputation with the fae known for being a jerk.
  • Skills: Weird is a skilled singer as well as guitarist, he is an excellent Cook, and possesses almost inhuman stamina, not to mention being a master level Traceur and is proficient with boxing and firearms. Weird is also surprisingly durable, capable of surviving wounds that would kill an ordinary man, coming out only horribly wounded.
  • Possessions and Assets: Weird owns a 2013 Honda Motorcycle and lives in an apartment, that has a potions lab, a collection of books, an armory containing a Remmington hunting rifle, and an M1911 pistol, which he often has on his person Weird also owns a pair of leather gloves and a ski mask, which he uses whenever he has to something illegal like breaking and entering.

edited 20th Nov '13 3:11:29 PM by TroyandHawk

Good to be back
Taco Since: Jan, 2001
#149: Nov 20th 2013 at 1:14:03 PM

Alright, must have mistyped Vlad's regen capabilities. Has been corrected, so I figure now I'm in the game?

TruthHurts22 That One Gal from her own little world Since: Mar, 2013 Relationship Status: Faithful to 2D
That One Gal
#150: Nov 20th 2013 at 1:43:17 PM

Oh, cool. Luck manipulation it is!

I'll make the app later.


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